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Post by Fisi on Apr 6, 2010 15:32:52 GMT -5
Chapter: 1
Morning arrived, and everything was quiet in ToonTown. This, is what Smartguy liked, but he wonder to himself as he is sleeping, "What in God name happened?". Yawning, he got up and started stretching his back, then his neck. Juarez was still asleep. A peck on the door then caught his attention. As he lift up the window, it was Eva, with an envelope on the side of her bag. "Top of the morning, Smartguy, I see that-" Eva began, but Smartguy interrupted her by shushing.
"Juarez is still asleep." he said.
"Oopsies, well, when she gets up, tell her I have a mail for her. See ya." Eva said, then flew off.
"People get their mail in the mailbox or a mailman, instead we get mail from the window from a mailbird." said Smartguy, opening then envelope.
Reading it, he then had a worried expression on his face. "AH, MAN!!!"
"What is it?" Juarez asked, who just waked up.
He put the note behind his back and tried to give her a normal look, but instead it was more of a nervous smile. "Nothing."
Juarez stood up and put on her robe.
"Give it." she said, taking her hand out.
"What ya mean, I don't know wha' ya talkin' 'bout."
She shrugged and head towards her drawers. "Looks like she's going to slip this one" he guessed, but when she turned around to face him, he was wrong. Juarez then ran towards Smartguy and jumped on him. He don't know why, but he had a seductive smile on.
"Looks like somebody, wanna take advantage of the boss." he said.
As she finally took the note away from him, she began to read it.
Dear Juarez,
I'm sorry it's been long talking to you, but I have a terrible fever and since I am all alone in here, I figure that you wouldn't mind taking good care of me. Tu padre (your father), Juan Copperfield.
Juarez gasped at this. She quickly changed her clothes and took out her suitcase to start packing. Smartguy went next to her. "Ya really not gonna go, are ya, babe?" he asked.
"Just when he get's better."
Before he could speak, she gave him a quick kiss on the lips. "Dont worry, I be back before you say, dang it Vanessa."
Juarez began running in Kenny's room. She gave him a quick kiss on a cheek and then ran downstairs, where the others are. "Iliketosaygoodmorningguys,butIgottagonow, SO BYE!!!" said Juarez, then left.
Silence occured the room. Everyone's eyes cocked to the side, questioning themselves what happened.
"Somebody drank to much coffeeee." said Bluebell, breaking it.
"HEEEHE, GOOD ONE." said Psycho.
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Post by Syrup on Apr 6, 2010 21:18:12 GMT -5
Ooh new story(= Good start. COFFEECOFFEECOFFEE!! XD
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Post by greasyslady29 on Apr 7, 2010 0:40:35 GMT -5
Hey,
Okay I love this already... LOL about Bluebell saying that Juarez had too much coffee. That was funny.
Can't wait to see more of it. This is so gonna totally rock. Next chapter please.
You Rock girl.
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Post by Fisi on Apr 7, 2010 10:21:36 GMT -5
Thanx guys. ;D.
Juarez is a coffeeholic, that's probably why she said that.
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Post by Fisi on Apr 7, 2010 15:47:08 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey. ;D.
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Post by Fisi on Apr 7, 2010 16:42:54 GMT -5
Chapter: 2
Kenny woke up, startling. Gasping, he ran out of his room and tried to look for his father. As soon as he sees Smartguy in the hallways, he hugged his leg. "DAD! HE COMI' TO GET ME!!!" Kenny screamed. Smartguy bent down and try to calm him down.
"Kenny, take a deep breath, now tell me, who?" Smartguy asked.
"The clown, he coming."
"What? Kenny, didn't your mother an' I just told you?" he asked, crossing his arms.
"YEAH! But-"
"No but's, ya go hurry up an' eat, ya wanna go to the park, huh?"
Kenny nodded and ran towards his room in a toonish way. Smartguy shook his head. Kids. Where do they get these ideas? He'll just forget about it. Kenny is already a kid. He shouldn't be believing this kind of stuff. Smartguy walked downstairs. He then stopped when Kenny ran past him. Kenny is wearing a red shirt with a blue jeans jacket. Cocking a brow at him after he came back, Smartguy crossed his arms again.
"What?" Kenny asked.
"Aren't cha gonna ask 'bout ya mom?" he asked.
"Where's mom?"
"Visiting granpa."
"OkIgottagobye." he said, then ran outside.
"Sometimes, Kenny just confuses me." said Smartguy.
Meanwhile at Juarez home in Montanna, she knocked on the door. She made a gulped. What he going to say after she has been gone? What is he going to do to her? The door slowly opened. Her father, Juan, gasped. Rubbing his eyes, a smile slowly was acrossed his face. Juan was the same weasel, a green newsboy hat and his dark blue and red sweater. He took a cigarrette out of his mouth. "*coughed* Munica, is that you?" Juan asked.
Juarez nodded. He bring her close and gave her a hug. She can feel his tears coming which made her do the same. "Perdones, papi." said Juarez (sorry, dad).
Juan was about to say something, but his terrible coughing made Juarez pat his back. Bringing him inside, she raised her brow as she sees that lots of cigarrettes on the ground as smoke was in the air of the house. She waved the smoke away from her.
"No wonder your sick."
"Listen, munica, I miss you, but what I don't miss is your sarcasticness."
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Post by Syrup on Apr 7, 2010 19:38:35 GMT -5
Haha, sarcasticness. Good chapter, can't wait!
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Post by greasyslady29 on Apr 7, 2010 23:38:47 GMT -5
Hey there...
Okay so I like this chapter too. Juarez and her dad are pretty estranged huh? Now she has to take care of him.
I can't wait for Penelope to show up in the story soon. By the way, How old is Kenny in this story? Just wondering.
Please write more... I am loving this.
Please write back.
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Post by Fisi on Apr 8, 2010 5:59:49 GMT -5
Thanx guys. ^_^.
Yup, they never eachother after she ran away from home. Kenny is 3 years old.
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Post by Fisi on Apr 8, 2010 11:25:55 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Apr 8, 2010 13:46:01 GMT -5
Chapter: 3
Juarez helped Juan sit down at his couch. Then, she walked towards the door and let all the smoke out of the room. Once it became cleared, she could tell he didn't tidy up the place when she left. After she closed it, she walked towards the window and opened the curtains. As the sun's light entered the room, Juan began to hiss. Juarez eyes widen as she saw red eyes.
"So, how did you got sick?" Juarez asked.
"I don't know, munica." Juan replied, taking out a cigarrette.
But then Juarez slapped it away from his mouth. "Papi, now that I'm back, this time, you have to stop smoking."
"How bieno." he said it sarcastically, rolling his eyes.
Back at the headquarters, things have been busy. Since Juarez was gone, there was slot of cases about missing children. In the office of Smartguy's, they was looking over some of them. "Sheesh, don't anybody at least take responsibility for their kid?" Smartguy asked.
"Caramba, some kids missing these days." said Greasy.
"Not to mention the bills we have to pay 'cause of Vanessa." said Wheezy having a bill on his hand.
Smartguy groaned, and banging his forehead on his desk. "Things were much bettah with Juarez 'round."
"Duh, maybe we should hire a buisness lady." said Stupid
"YEAH! A SECRETARY!!!" Bluebell agreed, throwing papers in the air.
Smartguy stopped banging and thought for a second. Maybe a secretary isn't that bad; it will give Juarez a chance to relax when she get's back and lot's of cases would be in order. He grabbed the phone and started to dial the number. "Hello?..."
"Yeah, I like to speak with Vanessa." he said.
"WHAT I DO NOW?!?" Vanessa asked.
"Nothin-Wait, how can ya tell me what you did?" Smartguy asked.
"I don't know, I forget."
"Listen, you don't mind if you could post some papers up, do you? It's for hiring a secretary."
"Juarez is gone is she?" Vanessa asked.
"Yeah." he said, confused.
"No wonder, I know something bad or crazy is going to happened." she said.
"In case ya haven't notice, THINGS ARE ALREADY CRAZY!!!"
"Fine, but what's the catch?" she asked.
"How about we'll buy ya chili...hello?"
Smartguy then realized that Vanessa hung up the phone after he made that offer. At the sametime the kits were at the park looking at Roger sleeping on the bench. "You think he's asleep?" Bonnie asked.
"Well, DUH-"
Kenny placed his hand on his mouth shushing him. Nodding, they began walking away from the playground and went to where the bridge is. Lots plants are blocking the other side, but it didn't matter.
"I hope the leprechauns here, because I didn't had a good decent meal." said Clyde.
"I don't get you two, you two get along and never fight. How did you do that?" Kenny asked.
"*shrugs* There was one time when me and her fought, I wonder about what?" Clyde asked.
As they were out of there a meadow was there. They then began to set their traps on the trees, rocks, and ground floor. They then heard someone coming from the trees.
"HE'S HERE!!!" Bonnie exclaimed.
They quickly hide, getting their nets ready. When they heard their traps already caught something, they ran towards it. But, to their disappointments is the three guys that keep bullying them. One was a bear named Chulk wearing a black shirt with a skull on it and black pants. The other is a wolverine named Skit, wearing the samething. And the leader is a pink poodle named Prince wearing the samething but has a white leather jacket and a spikey collar. Kenny took out his scissors and set them free.
"What are you twirps doing here?" Prince asked.
"We're here to look for the leprechaun." said Clyde.
"YEAH!!!" Bonnie agreed.
There was a minute of silence, but then laughter was spread. "How rich, there's no such thing."
"Yes there is, and we'll prove it." said Kenny.
"Yeah, ok, whatever. Oh, and when you get back home, tell your hot mom that she can come to my house, anytime." he said, then left while the others were laughing.
Clyde and Bonnie looked at him with their eyes glaring. She then patted Kenny's.
"I hate that guys."
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Post by greasyslady29 on Apr 8, 2010 14:41:39 GMT -5
Hey there, YAyyyyyyy.....They'e gonna hire a secretary. Time for Penelope to show up. I can't wait to see how your version of her is. This story is cool.
So the 3 kids are looking for a leprechaun? That's pretty cool. Please write more.
Great job so far.
Please write back
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Post by Syrup on Apr 8, 2010 15:05:43 GMT -5
Cool, secretaries. Hehe, leprechauns... New chapter must come soon.. but anticipation is fun.. but it destroys me! GAH! I'll be quiet now.
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Post by Fisi on Apr 8, 2010 16:56:17 GMT -5
Thanx guys. ^_^.
This is part of Chapter: 3, just short.
"Since when did you two found a leprechaun?" Kenny asked.
"We were out yesterday and found a little guy in a green suit. Plus, we skipped breakfeast this morning." said Clyde.
"Can't you ask your father, Greasy, if he can buy somethin'?"
"But, Kenny, that will take all the fun away, espicially chasing a little a guy that's wearing green." said Bonnie.
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Post by Syrup on Apr 8, 2010 20:40:59 GMT -5
Hehe. A little guy wearing green.
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