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Post by psychojr on May 3, 2010 7:36:30 GMT -5
good chapter
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Post by Fisi on May 3, 2010 18:46:09 GMT -5
Thanx Psychojr. <3.
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Post by psychojr on May 3, 2010 19:11:26 GMT -5
yor most certenly welocome.
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Post by Fisi on May 8, 2010 19:19:10 GMT -5
Chapter: 12
The kits were walking down the side of the streets, when they stop and heard Benny beeping the horn behind them. "WHAT'CHA KIDS DOING IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT?!?"
The kits looked at eachother. They were tired to even explained so they look back at the cab.
"Can you take us to our dad. We hear that he's at the fancy restuarant." said Kenny.
"Sure thing. Hop in."
As they got in, Benny began to drive. Meanwhile, Juarez and Messy, who made it, were waiting to cross the street. The cat looked at her. "Ah, ya still sad 'bout your father?" he asked. She looked at him and gave him a shrink smile.
"Yes, but I'll be ok. I don't know how my kit is going to handle it though." said Juarez.
"Your son is the father of the great sergant Smartguy. He'll get over it."
She didn't wanted to talk about it anymore so she just nodded. As soon as the light turned green, they began to cross. They stopped when they heard Benny screaming, "LOOK OUT!!!" Juarez squint her eyes and she couldn't believe it.
"Kenny?"
Messy and Juarez jumped in the air and landed on the back seat where Kenny was. The kit looked up at his mom with a nervous smile. "Kenny Landers, what were you doing?"
"Uh, walking." was all he could say.
Before she was about to tell him that he's in trouble, her eyes widen as they were about to crash to the restuarant. They began to scream. Benny crashed in the place almost breaking every glass there was. He stopped, making the kits, Messy, and Juarez jump off the seats. Juarez and Kenny landed on Smartguy when he was standing next to the musicians, Clyde and Bonnie landed on both Penelope and Greasy, and Messy landed...on his feet. After watching this, Vanessa wanted to laugh but instead slapped her forehead. Penelope was silent at first. "My, what cute little kits they are," she rubbed her nose against Clyde's. "Who does these kits belong too."
Greasy scratched his head as he said, "Their mines."
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Post by Syrup on May 8, 2010 21:53:19 GMT -5
YAY NEW CHAPTER! Good chapter. Those children handled that nicely.  |
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Post by psychojr on May 9, 2010 9:55:16 GMT -5
too good this time it got me thinking man i wish i was there now.
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Post by Fisi on May 9, 2010 10:36:43 GMT -5
Thanx guys. <3.
Syrup: Hehee, their busted.
Spikey: The owner is shocked now. Mwahaha.
Psychojr: Trust me, Psychojr, after that crash I don't think you want too. X3.
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Post by Fisi on May 22, 2010 13:48:00 GMT -5
Chapter: 13
"Kenny, Smartguy, what's been happening since I was gone?" Juarez asked.
Smartguy gave her a nervous giggle before he answered, "Uh, yeah. But, what are you doin' with Kenny and why are you back with that guy?"
She looked back at the cat. Messy eyes widen at the glass champain cup, the only cup that hasn't breaker yet. Bluebell ran towards the cat and gave him a hug. Juarez then looked back at him. "This is Messy. A friend. And I found Kenny and the other kits with Benny."
Benny gave her a cheeky grin before he got his chance to get away. Clyde and Bonnie looked at Penelope puzzled, and them at Greasy.
"Hey, dad, who's the hot babe?"
"Aw, what a charmer." said Penelope.
"What's going on?" Greasy asked, then narrowed his eyes at Vanessa when she tried walking quietly away.
She sighed. "I had this plan where you and Penelope can...you know date."
"Was, until you guys came in and trashed my restaurant." said Lizzie.
"Duh, sorry." said Stupid.
She didnt liked it when she see her boyfriend sad, so she just shrugged it off and gave him a kiss on the cheek. Greasy and Penelope exchange glances. Clyde and Bonnie did the same, but they looked happy about it. Think about it, they will finally have a mom.
"Well, I don't know, do you have any feelings for me, Greasy?" she asked.
"Yeah...you?"
"Yes."
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Post by Syrup on May 22, 2010 16:31:37 GMT -5
Aw, cute. <3
Good chapter.
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Post by Fisi on May 22, 2010 16:37:58 GMT -5
Thanx Syrup. ^_^.
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Post by greasyslady29 on May 23, 2010 1:18:42 GMT -5
Hey there girl, Sorry I haven't written in a while... been super busy job hunting. Just read the new chapter, and I must say that everything is awesome. I love how Greasy and Penelope finally got together and she met his kids....Imagine if she became their new mom? Can you say "AWESOME"?  Write back soon |
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Post by Fisi on May 23, 2010 5:49:39 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey and Rachael. ^_^.
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Post by psychojr on May 23, 2010 16:37:03 GMT -5
yeah nice chapter.
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Post by Fisi on May 23, 2010 19:47:01 GMT -5
Thanx Psychojr. ^_^.
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on May 29, 2010 15:18:26 GMT -5
Clap Clap Clap!!! Bravo Fisi! It is really good. Greasy Lady didn't lie! Not that I thought she did. i'm just saying she was so right....plase don't send ninja to kill me....
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