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Post by Fisi on Apr 9, 2010 11:56:46 GMT -5
Thanx guys.
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Post by Fisi on Apr 9, 2010 17:21:56 GMT -5
Chapter: 4
At the headquarters, after Vanessa post it up some flyers they waited in the living room for a call or a knock on the door. It has been one hour since and no call or at least a knock. Smartguy narrowed his eyes at her. She cocked her brow, "What?"
"I thought ya said you post up the flyers?" Smartguy asked.
"I DID! MAYBE PEOPLE DONT WANNA READ! AND I WANT MY CHILI!!!" Vanessa yelled.
A knock was then heard from the door. Bluebell began jumping happily. "OH BOY, OH BOY!!!" she said running towards the door and opened it. As she opened it, a female weasel with black fur and brown markings. She had black hair with pink streaks and wearing a yellow crop up top with a pink vest.
"Hi, I want to-" she began, but Bluebell grabbed her hand and pulled her in.
She began shaking her hand real fast.
"HI I'M BLUEBELL, I'M SO HAPPY THAT YOUR OUR NEW SEC-"
Vanessa placed her hand on her mouth. When she was quiet, she took it away but then shaked it as if she had a disease. Bluebellnarrowed her brow at her. "Sorry, about that. She's very, er, crazy."
"Well, excuse-me, for being the only one."
"Anyway, I'm here for the job." she said, having a Britain accent.
"Oh, good, then let me introduced ya, I'm Smartguy, the one that just scared ya was Bluebell, over there on the floor is Psycho." said Smartguy, pointing to him.
"Heehe, hiiii." said Psycho.
"On the corner by that window is Wheezy."
Wheezy breathed in, then let out a smoke. "*wheezed* Hey..."
"On the left side of the couch is Stupid."
"Duh, hi." said Stupid, waving his hand.
"The human girl is Vanessa."
"And you was about to doubt me." she said, giving Smartguy a smirk.
"Dont worry, I always doubted you anyway, so you won't feel bad." said Smartguy, giving her the same look.
"Typical." Vanessa muttered.
"And the right side of the-" he began, but Greasy just ran to her and took her hand.
"Greasy, senorita. And what do they call you?" Greasy asked, moving his head towards her, looking at her dark blue eyes.
"Penelope."
"The name fits you." he said, giving her a kiss on the hand.
Penelope looked away and blushed. Vanessa made a vomiting sound causing Greasy to look angry at her. She walked towards them and pushed him aside. "Listen, if you get the job, theirs a lot of things you need to know, starting with him." said Vanessa, pointing to him.
"Come to my office, we'll talk." said Smartguy.
She nodded and followed him going upstairs. They first watch her, then looked at eachother.
"Smooth move, Greasy." Wheezy teased.
"EH! IT'S NOT MY FAULT, VANESSA HAD TO RUINED IT!!!"
"Greasy, Greasy, Greasy, I was only trying to save you from getting rejected." said Vanessa.
"Calate, devil niƱa."
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Post by greasyslady29 on Apr 9, 2010 17:29:13 GMT -5
Hey there,
Great opening for Penelope. I kinda like how Vanessa jumped in on Greasy.
I love that last line... Greasy said "Shut up, Devil child " to Vanessa...lmao. That was hilarious. Can't wait to see what else happens.
Don't worry... I know that Greasy is gonna end up with Penelope. He took a liking to her right away.
Great job.
Please write back
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Post by Fisi on Apr 9, 2010 17:31:19 GMT -5
Thanx Rachael. <3.
The last part was funny.
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Post by Fisi on Apr 10, 2010 9:34:43 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey. . Yaay for conflicts!!!
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Post by greasyslady29 on Apr 10, 2010 12:15:57 GMT -5
Hey there, I am loving this story too... This is so awesome. Oh the mighty confict between Greasy and Vanessa. This is so cool. I would just like to tell you that I should have specified that Penelope is actually British not Swedish. Oh well...great going anyway. I don't mind that you changed her nationality.
I love this. I totally can't wait to see what happens next.
Please Write back
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Post by Fisi on Apr 10, 2010 12:45:05 GMT -5
My bad, I'll change it to Britain, if you want.
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Post by greasyslady29 on Apr 10, 2010 12:50:04 GMT -5
Hey there,
It's okay girl... You can change her to British. It was my bad...I did not specify that she was British.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Can't wait to see what happens between Greasy and Penelope some more.
Please write back
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Post by Fisi on Apr 10, 2010 14:33:16 GMT -5
^_^.
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Post by Syrup on Apr 10, 2010 16:04:44 GMT -5
HAHA. Smooth Greasy. Good chapter, funny. XD
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Post by Fisi on Apr 10, 2010 17:01:18 GMT -5
Thanx Syrup. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Apr 10, 2010 17:33:35 GMT -5
Chapter: 5
At Juan's house, it wasn't easy for him to deal with Juarez helping him, but she was only trying to help. After telling her father what happened, there was so many question on his mind. "Juarez, you have had a worst life, but you made some good out of it."
"Well, papi, I do want you to visit us sometimes, but..." Juarez stopped at that sentence and tried not to cry.
"What happened back then, I actually regret." he said, then coughed harder.
She didn't want to say more, she gave her father some medicine and then left him sleeping. Meanwhile, Smartguy and Penelope came back downstairs. "Ok, ya mugs, and Vanessa and Bluebell, guess who's are new secretary."
Bluebell cheered and ran to Penelope giving her a hug. "OH THIS IS SO GREAT!!!"
"Bluebell, stop trying to damage our secretaries brain." said Vanessa, leaning on the wall (which was next to the stairs).
She stuck her tongue out like a little immature kid at her. Bluebell took Penelope hand and took her upstairs.
"Where ya taking her?" Smartguy asked.
"We're gonna have a girl chat." she said, then left them.
Greasy began walking to the kitchen. Vanessa decided to follow. He took out a beer from the fridge and drank it. "So, are you going to try?"
"Try what?" Greasy asked, who stopped.
"You know."
"No, I don't."
"*sighed* LIKE YOU ALWAYS DO! TRY TO BE A WOMANIZER AROUND HER!!!" Vanessa yelled.
"Listen, you may not believe me, but I do got...some feelings for her." he said.
She didn't say anything, but looked at the corner of her eye, like he was crazy. Greasy, was confused.
"Well?"
"What?"
"Arent you going to ask for proof?" Greasy asked.
"You blushing is all the proof." said Vanessa.
"WHAT?!? I'M NOT BLUSHING!!!" he yelled.
"Hi, Penelope..."
"WHERE?!?" he asked, trying to hide his blushing face by lowering his hat infront of his face.
"That's what I thought."
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Post by Syrup on Apr 10, 2010 22:37:06 GMT -5
Hehehe... ooh la la. Li'l Greasy's got a crush, how cute! *^_^*
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Post by Fisi on Apr 11, 2010 10:09:25 GMT -5
XD Omg, that what my mom always say whenever I have a crush on someone.
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Post by Fisi on Apr 11, 2010 15:57:18 GMT -5
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