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Post by Fisi on Apr 21, 2010 19:03:30 GMT -5
Thanx guys. <3.
Rachael: Oh, man. I should have looked at the previous. X3.
Syrup: Like, ya! He was all "Who wanna see a dead body?" and Juarez was all "Say, what?!?" X3. I need to stop talkin' like that.
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Post by greasyslady29 on Apr 22, 2010 12:30:56 GMT -5
It's okay babe... Just hook everyone up with Chapter 8, and then Chapter 10. Problem solved...lol Nobody's perfect...I've made that mistake too before. Just write more soon... Can't wait to see Vanessa's plan to get Greasy and Penelope together...lol. That'll be cool. Please write back
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Post by Fisi on Apr 22, 2010 17:31:17 GMT -5
Thanx guys. <3.
Rachael: Thanx.*ghetto Spanish accent* I'm sooooooooo *week now later* ooooooo tired. I'm going to make the next chappie after I'm done with the competition.
Spikey: Ikr, I hate it when people ruined momments like my bro for example. When I get all happy, he have to be a buzzkilington.
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Post by Syrup on Apr 23, 2010 0:22:27 GMT -5
I now officially like the word "buzzkillington".
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Post by Fisi on Apr 24, 2010 20:02:28 GMT -5
<3.
Chapter: 9
It was already nighttime and Greasy was walking in the streets searching for the ToonTown's fancy restuarant called "ToonTown's Fancy Eat's". How creative. Greasy didn't questioned why, what he know was that Smartguy told him to be there. Once he found the place, he was surprised that Penelope was there. She looked amazing in her pink sparkling dress with a rose on her head. Shaking the thoughts, he walked towards her. "What are you doing here?" Greasy asked, trying to sound in his regular Spanish accent. "I thought you was doing secretary stuff."
"Well...Bluebell said I was supposed to be here." Penelope answered.
It was just then a girl in waitress clothes came outside with a red napking on her arm as her black hair was picked up in bun, leaving a bang on her left side of her face.
"Hey, are you two gonna come in or not?"
The look, it wasn't familiar, but her tone was. Greasy was sure that it was Vanessa. He was still puzzled though. "What the heck are you doing here?" She ignored him and pulled them both inside. At first, the room was dark. When the lights turned on, the place looked fancy. Glass cups was shining, waltz music was heard, and the crystal hanger was shining from the ceiling. They were so distracted by how it looked, they didn't notice Vanessa tapping her foot impatiently waiting. Greasy looked at the people playing the waltz. Bluebell was there playing the violin.
"What are you waiting for? It isn't hard to pick a table."
Greasy shrugged and found a seat by where the musicians are playing. Psycho in his waiter suit ran to their table. "HI!" he shouted. "Can I take your orderrrr?"
"Yeah, do you guys have spahgetti and meatballs?" Greasy asked, looking at the menu.
"Same here." said Penelope.
"Ok, would you like to drink some wine, it makes ya feel better." he said.
"Uh, yes?" she said.
Psycho giggled. He grabbed the menu's and ran to the kitchen. Vanessa followed him. She then took a peek at it. She dropped her mouth as she saw the disaster. Smartguy and Wheezy, who were supposed to be cheifs, were trying to clear out the fire from stove that was burning. "YOU IDIOTS! WHAT DID YOU DO?!?" Vanessa coughed from the smoke.
"WE DON'T KNOW! I WAS JUST CHOPPIN' TH' CARROTS, THEN ALL OF A SUDDEN TH' STOCE WAS BURNIN'" Smartguy yelled.
"AND YOU, WHEEZY?!?"!
"You know my cigarrettes are flamable, right?" Wheezy asked.
Vanessa groaned and ran out the kitchen as Psycho laughed maniacly. She thought everything was ok when Stupid was there laughing. To her guess, it was from the worst comedian. Then, a blue weasel (the same fur color as Wheezy's) with big curly blonde hair and light brown eyes came and took Stupid away from the table. Thank God Stupid's girlfriend, Lizzie, came. Who knew he did had one. Greasy and Penelope were silent.
"Uh, so, how's life?" he asked.
"Good." she said.
"You look sexy with that dress your wearing." said Greasy, looking at her up and down.
NO, NO, NO, GREASY! YOUR GOING TO GET SLAP IF YOU MAKE ANOTHER MOVE! Wait, this might prove her point. Vanessa let her self be entertained and watch. Meanwhile, Kenny turned his lamp on and went to Clyde. "What?" he asked, rubbing his eye.
"I can't sleep. I keep seeing him." said Kenny.
"So, what you want me to do?" he asked.
"Get Bonnie to wake up, we're huntin' for a clown."
"WHAT?!?"
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Post by Syrup on Apr 24, 2010 21:13:33 GMT -5
Good chapter. :] Funny. "You know my cigarettes are flammable, right?" Oh, Wheezy.
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Post by greasyslady29 on Apr 25, 2010 0:43:14 GMT -5
Hey there, Oh wow, did I like this Chapter...YES! It was hilarious. Everyone was in on Greasy and Penelope's date. That's cool. Poor Wheezy and Smartass...trying to cook and the whole thing explodes in their faces Vanessa seems to be enjoying this little game of Matchmaker she cooked up with the others. Now the kids are going Clown Hunting? Since you kinda made it clear that the clown in this story is Pennywise from Stephen King's IT... I don't think the kids are doing a very smart thing. I can't wait to see what happens. Where will the night take Greasy and Penelope? Will the kids be sucessful with their clown hunt? Can't wait to read more. Please write back
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Post by Fisi on Apr 25, 2010 7:32:09 GMT -5
Thanx guys. . Syrup: I told someone that one time, I forgot what happened. Rachael: They got it from their father. They don't think with their brains. X3.
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Post by Fisi on Apr 25, 2010 14:01:42 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey. <3.
Chapter: 10
Meanwhile after her father's funeral, she locked the door to her once father's home and kept the key. Juarez slightly touched the door. "Juarez?" a country accent was heard. She turned around and saw an orange cat that has a buck tooth, bowler hat, and red vest.
"Juarez Doll Copperfield?" saying her full name, just to be clear.
She rolled her eyes at her middle name. It was clear enough that the cat began laughing as he slapped his knee. "Oh, boy," the cat said. "I knew it t'was you. Did ya finally became a singar?"
"No, Messy." Juarez shook her head.
"Oh, then what were ya doing the whole entire time?" Messy asked. Someone should have told him that curiousity kills the cat. But, that's just full of patsy.
"Have you heard of the Toon Patrol?"
"THEM! OH- OH, JUAREZ, YOUR A TOON PATROL?!?" he asked leaning forward, like a curious kid.
Juarez nodded and then she walked away from him. Messy catched up with her. "Where ya going?"
"Back to L.A. I promised my husband that I would be back." said Juarez.
"Why, your parents would have been proud."
After thinking, she let our a smile. Her father and mother would be proud. Juarez then saw Messy begging his knees.
"*sigh* Would you like to-"
"YEEEHA!!! WOULD I EVER! NOW C'MON WE GOT A PLANE TO CATCH!!!"
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Post by Syrup on Apr 25, 2010 15:06:46 GMT -5
Good chapteh. Heh. Copperfield. Reminds me of David Copperfield. x)
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Post by Fisi on Apr 25, 2010 18:21:49 GMT -5
Thanx Syrup. <3. I like the last name. .
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Post by Fisi on Apr 26, 2010 16:55:54 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey. <3.
It's ok, do you get what happened in this chappie?
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Post by Fisi on Apr 28, 2010 16:13:52 GMT -5
Oh, ok.
Just in case any of guys didn't get, please tell me so I will do over the chappie.
Chapter: 11
"Kenny...I'm scared." Bonnie choked.
The kits are already at the same spot that they have met the evil clown. Bonnie was next to her brother, grabbing his sleeves. Clyde took out a switchblade, "I'm not afraid," said Clyde. "That clown is going to be long gone."
Kenny cocked his head to the side before he asked, "Um, where did you get that?"
"Greasy said I'ma big little guy." he raised his head up high.
"My dad wouldn't let me get anyone of those without...you took it did you?" he asked.
"What? You said bring a weapon and besides that what our parents get for hiring Vanessa as the babysitter."
They grabbed eachother hands. Whispering sounds were heard through the trees as the wind blew. "Heh, came back, huh? I knew that you would come back."
"COME OUT YA SCUM!!!" Kenny yelled.
Looking at Clyde, then Bonnie, then the clown. WAIT! OH NO!!! As the clown laughed evilly at Bonnie, she tried to get his hand away. He grabbed the kit and held her up high.
"It's dinner time." said the clown.
Clyde gasped and quickly threw his switchblade at him. It hit threw his hand making him drop his hand and free Bonnie. She ran towards her brother. The hand grew back. Kenny saw Bonnie's slingshot dropped on the floor. Taking the slingshot and his lucky stone. "Hope this works." he said then aimed at the clowns head.
He screamed in pain as the light was shown from his head. The clown then ran through the forest still screaming. As the he got further, he was then never heard. Clyde walked towards his father's switchblade and shooked it as green slime was on it.
Sticking his tongue out in disgust, Clyde asked,"Gross, who leaves green slime?"
Kenny giggled at his reaction, but it was then over after he saw that Bonnie was just standing there with fear in her eyes.
"Bonnie, you ok?" Kenny asked.
"Yeah, *patting his head* thanks Kenny." said Bonnie.
Meanwhile, Vanessa was already bored. So far, Penelope hasn't slapped him for doing anything seductive. He been getting real close to her, rubbing her leg, and nuzzling her neck. "Man, what is wrong with this chick?" Vanessa asked herself. Could they really be? Nah, Greasy and his ex's have done this before. Maybe once he get to her maybe he'll decide not to want her. Vanessa thoughts were then gone as she squint her eyes to see that Greasy's heart, was pounding? This is new.
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Post by Syrup on Apr 29, 2010 0:55:37 GMT -5
Heh, green slime. Greasy's likes her. Oooh. Good chapter.
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Post by Fisi on Apr 29, 2010 15:16:36 GMT -5
Syrup: Heehe, slime.
Spikey: It's a mystery.
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