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Post by Syrup on Apr 11, 2010 21:07:39 GMT -5
XD Omg, that what my mom always say whenever I have a crush on someone. HAHA! I'm kinda scared now, lol. XD |
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Post by greasyslady29 on Apr 12, 2010 0:02:43 GMT -5
Hey there,
Wow, this was some chapter. So Greasy has a crush on Penelope for real this time. This is gonna be very interesting. I know I'm gonna love whatever happens next.
I can't wait for the next chapter to come up. Gotta see what happens next.
Please write back
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Post by Fisi on Apr 12, 2010 17:18:35 GMT -5
Glad you liked it. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Apr 12, 2010 20:09:25 GMT -5
Chapter: 6
To where the kits are, the leprechaun did not show up. Clyde was using his nail to pick something off his teeth, Bonnie was playing with the grass while Kenny was walking in circles. "C'mon guys, he ain't gonna come."
They both moaned and did as they were told. It was disappointing, but hopefully they will find again. Walking to the bridge, they stopped when the leprechaun popped out of nowhere. He was sort of friendly looking at first. Red cheeks, bright blue eyes, and happy smile. It then faded into wrinkles, dull eyes, and fangs were coming out.The kits were confused.
"I thought leprechauns are supposed to be...happy looking." Kenny whispered.
Clyde and Bonnie shrugged.
"Think again." he said, then formed into a clown with a yellow suit, puffballs as buttons, and red hair. The looks on him didn't change though.
The kits began to scream and ran around the bridge instead. As soon as they see Roger standing there calling them out, they ran towards him and hugged his legs. "Jeepers, what the matter with you?" he asked.
"Can we please go now." said Clyde.
"Yes, please." Bonnie agreed.
Roger shrugged and called for Benny. The toon cab came, almost crashing to the other car. "So, you called a cab or what?" Roger and the kits sat at the seats. Benny noticed that the kits were shaking and chattering their teeths. He cocked a brow and looked at the rabbit.
"Uh, what up with them?" Benny asked.
"I don't know, but whatever it was it scared them to death."
As the kits looked back, they see that the clown was right at the playground laughing at them. The kits began screaming again.
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I know, it short, I've been busy with school since I got back.
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Post by greasyslady29 on Apr 13, 2010 0:05:10 GMT -5
Hey there...
Ya know... I was just thinking. Bonnie and Clyde are Greasy's kids, right? I wonder how they would react to their dad having a crush on the new Secretary. Hmmmm... I can't wait to see what happens next there with everyone.
That sounds scary about the clown. I like that though. Sounds great.
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Post by Fisi on Apr 13, 2010 18:40:36 GMT -5
Rachael: ^_^.
Spikey: Yup, he's actually the clown from the movie "Steven Kings It".
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Post by greasyslady29 on Apr 13, 2010 23:24:11 GMT -5
Hey there...
I knew he sounded familiar. I love Stephen King's IT. That movie is so scary but so great at the same time. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
More with Greasy and Penelope.... I hope. I also want to see more with the kids.
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Post by Fisi on Apr 14, 2010 16:56:29 GMT -5
IKR!!!
The first time I see it was when I was 11, I was into watching scary movies and scary clown movies even though I was scared of them. When I saw this movie, I was so scared of the batheroom 'cause I thought he might be there. But that movie wasn't as the scary clown movie as "Killer Klowns From Outspace"
I still am into those kinds of movies but I'm not scared of it.
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Post by Fisi on Apr 15, 2010 18:07:03 GMT -5
Chapter: 7
At Montanna, Juarez and Juan was just out for a walk. Still, he is trying to block the sun's beam. Juarez giggled at her father's reaction to outside. "It's been long since you came out here," Juarez in her sarcastic tone."I can already tell you like it."
Juan rolled his eyes at her tone. "I would like it, if you quit the sarcasticness."
She ignored the comment, and looked at his fur. The once light brown fur that always shined from the sun is now dull. Juarez can already tell he was different. Well, sort of. She sighed and sucked in the air and let it out. Her father stared. He looked like that he never breathed air before. Since he did left the entire smoke in the house when she entered. Her father took out another cigarrette. Juarez took it away from him and lay her hand on his shoulder.
"Just breathe the air, papi, it's good for you.Just suck it by your nose and let it out with your mouth." she said.
Juan sighed. He began to suck it in with his nose, but as he tried to let it out, he coughed louder thane before. This made her worried. Her father bent his knee. She did the same. Juan looked at her with sadness in his eyes.
"Your going to be ok, papi, I promise. When you feel better, you and I are going to L.A, where you can meet my friends, my husband, and my kit."
"No, munica, I'm not. Last night before you came, Dodger's father saw that I wasn't ok, so he sent me to the doctor, the doctor said I am not going to live. I'll be dead." said Juan.
Juarez shook her head. She hugged her father tightily as she cried over his shoulder. Juan hugged her back and tried to calm her down. Meanwhile at the Toon Patrol, Vanessa told Penelope there was "something" she have to get and told Greasy to go to the store and buy a toonish looking hammer. The rest was at the attic for the annoucement from her. Wheezy turned his chair around to sit on it. "What's the big deal?" Wheezy asked. "Did you finally destroyed the school yet?"
"No, I was going to, though. Anyway, I just discovered that Greasy have a thing for Penelope." said Vanessa, showing a proud expression on her face.
"WOOOOO!!!" Psycho and Bluebell teased.
"But, here's the problem. I'm guessing that he's being himself around her, and you guys don't want your butts to be sue." she said.
"I know that she likes her back while we were talking. I was trying to change the subject but she kept going, and going, and going about Greasy." said Bluebell.
"Well, I can help Greasy become more of a gentleman thane a perv." said Smartguy.
"Good."
"I can help him control himself." said Wheezy.
"I don't know if it's the samething with Smartguy but whatever. Bluebell can help Penelope choose something for them, Stupid will write a letter-"
"Stupid doesn't write good, you know that?" Smartguy asked.
"I know. For some reason, it just looks adorable to other girls. No clue why. Me and Psycho will try to be hired as waiters, to spy on him." said Vanessa.
They nodded their heads. The plan was simply understood. Stupid raised his hand. "Yeah? What?" she asked.
"Can your repeat the plan again?" Stupid asked.
"You know what Stupid? Asked either Wheezy or Smartguy because I'm going to have to hit you with your own baseball bat."
"Geesh, it would be better if you just said "no"."
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Post by Syrup on Apr 16, 2010 1:47:45 GMT -5
Ch 6: Heh heh... clows 0_0... I hate clowns. I think everyone does =\
Ch 7: Poor Juan... so sad)=
Teehee, I agree with Psycho and Bluebell, WOO! ;D
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Post by Fisi on Apr 16, 2010 15:21:25 GMT -5
Thanx Syrup. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Apr 17, 2010 18:56:42 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Apr 20, 2010 18:33:24 GMT -5
Short chappie.
Chapter: 8
Juan and Juarez returned home. She is getting more nervous then before. He have been coughing all the way through home. Her father lied down on the couch, still coughing. Juarez sat down beside him. "Maybe you should go to the hospital." said Juarez, grabbing his hand.
"WHAT?!? NO WAY!!! I RATHER BE DIEING THEN BEING IN THE HOSPITAL!!!" Juan hissed.
Juarez giggled nervously. "I though you might say that."
A swine doctor burst opened the door.
"No, need. I'm here." the swine doctor said, walking towards her father.
Juarez smirked as he glared at her. The doctor did some checks. After he checked, he sadly shook his head putting his hoofs on her shoulder. "I'm sorry." She then began to cry beside him. Juan, with some strengh, rubbed her hair. Juarez looked up at him. Juarez never wanted him to see her cry. She would think that she's weak.
"Papi, ItriedbutIfailedIdontknowwhatto-"
"You really are a coffeeatic. Juarez...I'll be ok. If I die now, I just want you to know that I'm sorry and that I love you. You have the most beautiful weasel just like your mother. Before she died, she told me that she hopes her daughter is strong, beautiful, smart, independent, and willing too. And do me a favor, tell my son-in-law that he is a lucky man and to my grandson..." Juan passed his hat to her.
To her guess, she wanted Kenny to wear it to treasure it. Juan gasped, then he faited. Juarez press her ear to his chest. He's dead. She cried on his chest, whispering that he wasn't died.
"HEY GUYS, WHO WANTS TO SEE A DEAD BODY!!!" the doctor yelled from outside.
Juarez gave him a death glare, showing her sharp teeth at him. The pig looked at her nervously.
"Uh, never mind."
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Post by greasyslady29 on Apr 21, 2010 12:16:34 GMT -5
Hey there.
Just thought you should know that you skipped Chapter 8...lol. It's okay You lost count. I like the Chapter 9 though.
Still can't wait to see what Chapter 8 would've been. Also Can't wait to see Chapter 10.
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Post by Syrup on Apr 21, 2010 18:36:27 GMT -5
Aww... poor Juarez. That's so sad... That doctor was a bit of a jerk, ya?  |
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