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Post by Syrup on Apr 1, 2010 22:44:06 GMT -5
OH BOY A SONG! And flying Psychos. ^_^
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greasyslady29
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"Looks like they gave us the slip, huh Boss?"
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Post by greasyslady29 on Apr 2, 2010 0:33:20 GMT -5
Hey there, Good god, this was a great story. I love the version of that song from Cinderella. That was incredibly cool. My story "Twisted" is doing well too... As I predicted, there is some Human/Toon flirtation going on.... oh the drama! LOL.
This story was great though. Keep up the great work.
Write back please.
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Post by Fisi on Apr 2, 2010 7:02:52 GMT -5
;D.
Oh, no, Drama.
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Post by Fisi on Apr 5, 2010 14:29:56 GMT -5
*sighed* Flying Psycho.
Chapter: 15
"Now, I'm going to-"
"SURPRISED!!!"
Jafar turned around and his eyes widen when he saw Vanessa riding a skateboard and ride passed him. He didn't notice that his sorcer has been taken. "How does this thing work?" Vanessa asked.
"HEY, GIVE THAT BACK!!!" Jafar yelled.
She gasped, then shooked the object. The red beam then hit the Toon Patrol making them get off the air. Psycho took out his razor and swinged it at the villains.
"IT'S FUN-TIME!!!" Psycho screamed, running towards Trader Moe.
Trader Moe kept dodging from his razor, he then tried to throw a punch at him, but Psycho was too quick for him. Psycho jumped ontop of him and began shaking him as he grabbed his collar suit. "I AM PSYCHO, HEAR ME ROAR!!!" "GO PSYCHY!!! Oh, a nickname." said BlueBell.
Trader Moe looked at Quint. "Aren't you gonna get him off of me?" he asked.
"I just remembered, I have a meeting with-" Quint began, but Greasy grabbed his hands and put them in handcuffs.
"Justice, eh?" Greasy asked.
Shere Khan was chasing Kenny. He then tripped. Looking back, Kenny sees with his paw in the air with his claws.
"Any last words?" Shere Khan asked, waiting.
The terror on his face soon became an evil grin. "*nodded* Toodles." said Kenny. He cocked his head to the side. Smartguy jumped on the tiger's back. Shere Khan roared, trying to shake him off. He grabbed his paw on him and threw Smartguy to the ground. As he began to charge at Smartguy, he took out his switchblade. "Cover your eyes, Kenny." said Smartguy. Kenny did as he was told.
"Bad kitteh." Throwing his switchblade at Khan, hitting at the tiger in the neck. At the sametime, ZigZag was dealing with Scar. Scar was throwing his claws at her, but it kept missing her. ZigZag bravely jumped on the lion and started choking him. But, Scar pushed her to the side, and this time he was ontop of her. ZigZag was closing her eyes shut as she see his teeth. Scar then yelped. Looking at his tail, he sees Dance was biting his tail. Dance pounced on Scar's face, scratching it. Jafar was trying to pull his sorcer away from her.
"LET GO!!!"
"NEVER!!!"
Juarez was also helping Vanessa pulling it back. Jafar, finally got it back, and then swung it at Vanessa. "VANESSA!!!" Juarez screamed. He then swung it at the back of her head.
"JUAREZ!!!" Smartguy yelled.
He ran towards her. Trying to wake Juarez up, Jafar stood infront of them. "Now, I'm going to finish you guys."
"NO, I WILL FINISH YOU!!!"
Jafar looked back and saw Don Karnage swinging his sword at him. Jafar used the sorcer to block his sword. Don Karnage then swung his sword, making his sorcer flew away from his hand. With some recovery, Vanessa put her hand on it and stood. "This is the end, for you." said Vanessa, then aimed the beam at the laser which exploded. She then shoot the beam at Scar. Dance jumped off before the beam hit him making him disappeared. Wheezy and Stupid handcuffed Jafar.
"ANYBODY ELSE?!?" she asked.
Everyone then quickly shook their heads. Kenny walked towards his mom and dad. They then heard her moaning, which meant that she was ok. Juarez looked at Don Karnage.
"Thank you, Karnage." said Juarez.
"I know you guys needed my fantastic self help." said Don Karnage.
"Oh great, he has a great big ego." said Smartguy.
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Post by Syrup on Apr 5, 2010 14:43:23 GMT -5
GAH. Dramatic scene. And big egos. Nice. ;D
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Post by Fisi on Apr 5, 2010 15:58:01 GMT -5
THANX GUYS!!! ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Apr 6, 2010 11:42:04 GMT -5
Chapter: 15
"Dont worry, we'll take care of them." said a toon cop who is a Shetland sheepdog.
One by one the villains went into the police car. Smartguy looked at Juarez with a worried expression on his face. "What's the matt'r?" Smartguy asked. "I thought you would be happy."
"Well, would it be fair if we let Karnage go?" Juarez asked, as they both then looked at him with his hands cuffed.
Smartguy groaned. "Let 'im go, he already learned 'is lesson."
The policeman nodded and took the handcuffs off of him. Don Karnage looked at them puzzled. Smartguy rolled his eyes.
"You did learned your lesson, did ya?"
He nodded. Juarez walked towards him.
"And I hope she more smarter thane you." she said, then giving him a hug.
The Toon Patrol and the girls looked at her with their eyebrows cocked. What did she meant by that? After he nodded, he soon walked away. Smartguy, who was still puzzled, looked at his wife. "What did ya mean by that?" Smartguy asked. Without answering his question, she moved towards him and pressed her lips to his. Once she let go, Smartguy heart was beating quickly as his eyes became hearts.
"What were we talkin' 'bout?"
Vanessa made a quick fake vomit sound making ZigZag laugh. "Vanessa, I'm sorry about what happened before." ZigZag said, after she stopped. "Hey don't worry about it." said Vanessa."Hey, why don't we go back to the headquarters, I hear Juarez has some ice cream there."
ZigZag smiled. Suddenly, a waltzing music was heard out of nowhere and they began to run inside. As they went in, they saw Psycho and Bluebell dancing (more like jumping in circles) to the music as so did Dance. Psycho stopped and blushed.
"What? It's good music." said Psycho.
Bluebell went towards to his cheeks and began kissing it. Psycho's body then became red which made them laugh. Eerything went ok with everybody, Juarez and Smartguy are back together and Vanessa and ZigZag are now friends. It was a good day for them.
The End.
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Post by Syrup on Apr 6, 2010 14:52:52 GMT -5
Hehe poor Psycho, how embarrassing. ^_^" Great story
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Post by Fisi on Apr 6, 2010 15:06:47 GMT -5
Thanx Syrrrruup. ;D.
I rolled the "r", *giggled*.
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Post by Syrup on Apr 6, 2010 21:06:34 GMT -5
Hehe I like rolling my r's, too. XD
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Post by Fisi on Apr 7, 2010 10:18:46 GMT -5
Thank you Spikey. ^_^.
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