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Post by Fisi on Feb 22, 2010 18:56:23 GMT -5
Chapter: 1
"ALRIGHT YOU BRATZ LISTEN UP!!!'' Miss.Oga, the principle. yelled.
Everyone was at the auditurium moaning.
Vanessa rolled her eyes while holding her electric guitar."This oughta be important.''
"Now," she said."Let me introduced you to one of our new students, who is Acme's neice, Zive Zach. So, YOU LITTLE BRATZ BETTER SHOW RESPECT.''
The girl next to her was a really dark brunette with her ponytail to the side as her other piece of hair was on her left side of her head, her eyes are dark blue.
"Uh, hi.'' she said.
"Wow, ain't she the social butterfly.'' said Vanessa.
It made everyone laugh and made Zive blush a little.
Miss. Oga walked up to Vanessa, grabbed her arm, and made her stand up as she said,"Remember Vanessa, you used to be new here, so be nice. And maybe you should play something for her.''
Vanessa shrugged. As she carried her electric guitar, she began to play the notes very quickly, making everyone laugh.
"Welcome, happy?'' she asked.
"Will talk about this tommorow.''
As the last bell rang, everybody cheered and walked back home. Noah, Gary, and Curly walked up to Vanessa. "Don't you think that was a little harsh? She's new.'' said Curly.
"Relax, Curly, I'm sure her father or mother probably will buy her something to cheer her up.''
They nodded their heads and left. When Vanessa was about to walk back home, someone tap her shoulder. She turned around and it was Zive. Oh great.
Zive looked down and said,"Uh, hey.''
Vanessa rolled her eyes."Hey,'' she said."Bye.''
"Wait, I'm sorry.''
"For what?''
"For not being so social.''
Vanessa widened her eyes. Why would she ever apologize? She didn't do anything.
"Well, apology accepted?'' Vanessa said.
At what she said made Zive smile. "Can I come with you? At this time, my parents aren't at home.''
"Ok, sure why not.'' ********************************************************* Thanx Spikey for helping me.
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Post by Syrup on Feb 22, 2010 20:34:52 GMT -5
Sounds like an interesting story for a start, cute. =P
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Post by Fisi on Feb 23, 2010 17:43:59 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey. ^_^.
Chapter: 2
When they both made it to the headquarters, Vanessa opened the door and entered. The rest of the Toon Patrol, except for the kits, was at the living room.
"Hey, where's the kits?'' Vanessa asked.
"Roger is babysitting them.'' said Juarez.
Vanessa nodded and then lied down on the floor. All eyes were on Zive. "Vanessa,'' Wheezy said. "What's Acme's neice doing here.''
"She wanted to come with me since her parents aren't home from work yet.'' she replied.
Zive grabbed her bookbag and took the glasses case out. She put on the round glasses on them.
"Much better.'' said Zive.
"Uh, Zive, what the heck?'' Vanessa asked.
"You can call me ZigZag if you like, and don't you know I wear glasses?'' ZigZag asked.
"You weren't wearing them when I saw you.''
"It's a secret.''
Vanessa rolled her eyes and then looked back at the t.v. Meanwhile, Scar was walking around in circles, waiting. "C'mon,'' he said to himself."What is taking them so long?''
"So your the buddy who is doing this meeting?'' a voice was heard.
Scar turned around and saw Don Karnage, Jafar, Shere Khan, Quint, and Trader Moe.
"Sorry we're late. Ain't you that lion that got eaten by hyenas?'' Trader Moe asked.
"Yes, lucky for me, Karlata bring me back to life.'' he said.
They were all puzzled. Scar began to sighed.
"The reason why I called this meeting is to team up to destroy those Toon Patrols and Zive.''
"You mean the young girl who's neice of Acme?'' Don Karnage asked.
"LISTEN, DO YOU WANT THEM DESTROY OR NOT?!?''
All of them nodded as a respond.
"I say we go to the waltz their having tommorow night.'' said Jafar.
"I agree, Don Karnage, Jafar, and Trader Moe go inside while me and you coyuld wait for the signal to attack one of the Toon Patrol.'' said Shere Khan.
Scar chuckled and had he an evil look. So, they began to explain most of their plan.
At the sametime when it was 5:00, Vanessa stood up nd grabbed her bag.
ZigZag looked up at her and asked, "Where are you going?''
"Home. Aren't your parents home yet?'' she asked.
She began to bit her bottom lip. "Yeah,'' she said."I really should go.''
ZigZag quickly ran out. Everyone cocked their brow.
"What was that about?'' Smartguy asked.
"I don't know, but maybe a good chance that she's weird like BlueBell.''
"AH! Oh, sorry, had some scary thoughts.'' said BlueBell.
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Post by Syrup on Feb 23, 2010 22:37:29 GMT -5
Scary thoughts are frightening. Good chaptah(:
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Post by Fisi on Feb 24, 2010 14:35:27 GMT -5
Thanx guys. ^_^.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Feb 25, 2010 0:55:29 GMT -5
Awesome~
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Post by Fisi on Feb 25, 2010 7:52:10 GMT -5
Thanx SunnyD. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Feb 25, 2010 17:36:31 GMT -5
Chapter: 3
"I don't know what to say to her, Quince.'' said ZigZag to her friend, who's a dreadlock dog toon.
ZigZag was at he room, looking up at the ceiling. Quince has lime olored eyes, his fur is brown, and has dreads infront of his face.
He sat on her bed. "Don't sweat it, man, she'll understand.''
"I'm glad, my parents made you.''
"I'm glad to be your friend. Now go to sleep, you have to wake up for school, not to mention have to get ready for tommorow night.'' he said, then turned the lights off.
When morning arrived and school has already started, Psycho was looking at the mailbox.
"Bills, bills, bills, HEY LOOKIE!!!'' Psycho shouted.
He ran back inside, starting to jump on the couch. "HEY GUYS,'' he shouted."LOOK WAHT CAME INTO THE MAIL!!!''
Everyone came in the living room and looked at Psycho, who was stilling jumping.
"PSYCHO! STOP JUMPING AND LET US SEE!!!'' Smartguy yelled.
Before he stopped, he said, "Ok.''
The letter said.
"Come all toon and humans to the waltz tommorow night, celebrating for Zive, neice of Aceme's arrival. Come at the bakerstreet at the mansion.''
"Wow, sounds pretty fancy.'' said Stupid.
"Yes, and suspicious too.'' said Juarez.
"What do you mean?'' Smartguy asked.
"ZigZag could be a victim if anyone tries to hurt her.''
Smartguy thought for a minute. His wife is right. ZigZag is a big deal around in ToonTown. She could be killed on that same night. Smartguy sighed.
"So, what should we do then?''
"We should keep a look out for ZigZag, making sure she doesn't leave neither one of us side.''
"AH MAN! WE CAN'T ENJOY OURSELVES?!? WHAT BUZZKILL, MAN!!!'' BlueBell yelled, then crossed her arms.
"I have to agree with this crazy muchacha, I actually expect to enjoy myself.'' said Greasy.
"Look ya mugs, will still have a good time, just while we're working.'' said Smartguy.
They began to moan at the disappointment. Smartguy growled making them stop.
"I'm sorry if I'm saying this, but another job at a another break.'' said Psycho.
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Post by Syrup on Feb 26, 2010 1:14:07 GMT -5
Hehe buzzkill. =P Good chapter. Gasp suspicion, but safety is better than being sorry!!
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Post by Fisi on Feb 26, 2010 17:20:26 GMT -5
Thanx guys. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Feb 26, 2010 19:33:14 GMT -5
Chapter: 4
Afternoon arrived, Vanessa arrived at the headquarters, but wasn't wearing her school uniform.
"What gives? I thought you kids are supposed to wear uniforms.'' said Smartguy.
"We do. I just changed quick before I came here.'' Vanessa replied.
"Where's your friend?'' Juarez asked.
"Oh, ZiZag? She had to go home.''
Vanessa grabbed the remote and turned on the t.v again, as usual. But, Greasy walked by it and turned it off. "Hey," she said."I'm watching something.''
Greasy came by Vanessa and took the remote away from her. "We have soemthing to tell you.''
Vanessa crossed her arms and legs glaring at Greasy. Then at Smartguy.
"So, what's so important.'' she asked.
"Don't start with me, Vanessa. It's the invite.'' said Smartguy.
Wheezy walked towards her as he passed the invite to her. Vanessa began to read the note.
She looked back to them as she asked,"So?''
"Juarez have suspicious that maybe someone is after Zive. I never thought I would say this, but we need your help.''
"How am I going to help?''
"You can sneak in, your good at that, you can start socializing with these people, tell us everything you hear so far.'' said Smartguy.
"And, what are you guys gonna do?'' Vanessa asked.
"Some of us are going to spy on ZigZag. Any more questions?'' he asked her.
Vanessa thought about it. She shooked her head. The plan was clear to her now. Meanwhile, at bakerstreet where the mansion was, ZigZag was in her white dress that was up to her knees. "Quince?'' she asked."What's that funny feeling in your stomach?''
"You must have butterfly in your stomach, man, it means your nervous.'' said Quince.
"Oh.''
Night time came, and the Toon Patrol dodge was parked outside of the mansion. Everyone came out. "Cool,'' said Psycho."I like niiiice, heehe.''
"You are already nice, Psycho.'' said BlueBell, wearing her light blue dress.
Juarez, was wearing a no sleeves purple dress with a collar bow on her neck and a green belt around her waist.
"Still beautiful as evah.'' said Smartguy.
Juarez walked towards him and kissed him on the cheek. "Same for you.''
Vanessa pulled up her black boots and crossed her arms at them. She was wearing that same dark purple half sleeves dress that she wore on that prom and the burglar hat.
"C'mon, the sooner the better to see if they have chili.'' said Vanessa.
They entered the mansion. They look at how amzaing the inside look. Everything ws made out of glass, the dinner table looked great with all of those delicious desserts, and not to mention the jazz music was great.
'Wow, not bad.'' said Vanessa.
'Yeah, now everyone knows the plan right?'' Smartguy asked.
"Uh-'' Stupid began.
"Forget just move it.''
Vanessa walked to the first toon. She was a violet hippo. She couldn't help but trae at how big she is, but she had to snap out of it and continue with the plan.
"Enjoying the party?'' she asked.
'Oh, yes, everything here is so marvelous.'' the hippo said.
"Yeah, I can see that.''
Juarez was at the punch table, drinnking. As she doesn't know, Don Karnage spotted her and came rushing towards her.
"Everything in here might be beautiful, but I'm seeing something much more beautiful as I can see.'' said Don Karnage.
"Hmph, excuse me while I go ry not to barf.'' said Juarez.
Quince was outside of the party. He notice that Scar was there.
Quince walked towards him and said,"Hey, man, no big dangerous cats allowed, now go skit skat.''
Scar had an evil look on his face. Quince was confused of why the lion was like this. But befoe he could speak, Scar pounced on him.
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Post by Fisi on Feb 27, 2010 12:00:15 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey. ^_^.
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Post by Syrup on Feb 27, 2010 14:23:37 GMT -5
Bumm bumm bumm........ good chapter.[:
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Post by Fisi on Feb 27, 2010 14:29:22 GMT -5
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Post by Fisi on Mar 3, 2010 19:19:53 GMT -5
Chapter: 5...I think.
Quince pushed Scar off of him and grabbed a nearby stick with him. "Alright,'' he said."Stay back or else.''
"Or else what?'' a sudden voice was heard.
Shere Khan stepped forward. The dreadlock toon dog was beginning to sweat on his forehead. What the heck were they doing here in the first place? Shere Khan and both Scar pounced on Quince. At the sametime, ZigZag was waiting for him as the waltz music began.
'Where is he?'' she asked to herself.
Suddenly, she heard Quince scream in pain.
She widen her eyes and asked,"Quince?''
As she was about to run, Smartguy grabbed her arm."LET GO!!!'' she yelled.
"No, we have to protect ya.'' said Smartguy.
Juarez saw that her husband cannot hold her much longer. She was about to walk towards them when Don Karnage came by and blocked her way.
"Uh, 'cuse you.'' said Juarez.
But, he didn't move. Instead he made a seductive purr at her making her mad.
"I SAID MOVE!!!''
He took both her arms and began to press her lips to hiss. Smartguy looked at Juarez and was shocked. His own wife, cheating on her. Smartguy let go of ZigZags arm and kept staring at them both. ZigZag quickly ran as fast as she could. When Don Karnage let go, Juarez growled and slapped him right acrossed the face.
"Woah, feisty.''
"YOU PERV, I'M A MARRIED WO-'' Juarez began, but saw that Smartguy was staring at them.
She wanted to finish Don Karnage off, but she ran to him instead.She took his hand. "Smartguy,'' she continued."It's not what you think...''
He didn't say anything. He moved her hand away from his and just left. To Juarez he's mad at her. Smartguy wasn't though. When he went out infront of the mansion, he let out a tear. Meanwhile, ZigZag finally came outside, but to her surprised, Quince was lying on the ground with blood scratches across his chest.
"My god.'' she whispered.
"Shh, I'm ok.'' said Quince.
"No, your not. We have to go to a hospital.''
Quince groaned. ZigZag helped him up. "Who did this to you?'' she asked. As he was about to answer, he screamed at the pain.
"C'mon, let's take you there.'' she said.
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