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Post by Fisi on Mar 4, 2010 19:22:59 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey. ^_^.
Chapter: 6
At the hospital, Quince lied their on the bed with ZigZag on his side. She held his hand real tight, not letting it go. A toon nurse who's a pink bird came in. "Miss ZigZag,'' she said."You have guest.''
As the nurse stepped aside, Vanessa entered the room. ZigZag wanted to smile, but she frowned, thinking it was her fault.
"THERE YOU ARE! DO YOU KNOW I GOT WORRIED?!?'' she asked.
"Oh, shut up. You know this all your fault.'' ZigZag said.
Vanessa's eyebrow's lifted. "My fault, how is this my fault?''
"You and your weasel friends were probably planning this. You've guys killed my uncle. The only family member that ever made me laugh.''
"First of all, I wasn't there at that year, second, we were trying to protect you, third, you have a long grudge on them.'' said Vanessa.
"JUST GET OUT!!!''
"ZigZag-'' Quince began.
"FINE!!!''
She grabbed the door knob then slammed it closed. At the Toon Patrol headquarters, the kits were there at the living room. The Toon Patrol came back. "Hey,'' said Greasy.''Where's Roger?''
Bonnie pass the note to Greasy saying that he too was invited with his wife.
"Oh.''
Juarez started begging Smarguy to forgive her, but still Smartguy didn't say anything. Juarez grabbed his arm.
"Why won't you believe me, you trust me don't you?'' Juarez asked.
'I used ta.'' Smartguy yanked his arm away from her.
Kenny, who had no idea what happened, looked at his father. Smartguy looked at him.
'Amazing, he has your eyes and he seems to be growing your hair.'' he hissed.
Kenny let out some tears.
'Oh look, he's sensitive.''
"THAT'S ENOUGH!!!''
"YOU CHEATED ON ME!!!''
"Me?'' she protested."You didn't see him? He was all over me. And I saw you stare, and you didn't do nothing.''
Smartguy narrowed his brow at her and went upstairs. Juarez, sat on the couch with her hands on her face as she began to cry. BlueBell walked towards her to tall her everything is ok. But it isn't.
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Post by Syrup on Mar 5, 2010 1:17:46 GMT -5
Aww, poor Juarez. Good chapters. And Shere Kahn, "Jungle Book", right?
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Post by Fisi on Mar 5, 2010 16:22:01 GMT -5
Thanx guys. ^_^.
Spikey: Same here, I almost cried.
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Post by Fisi on Mar 5, 2010 19:09:49 GMT -5
Chapter: 7
"Hey, guys.'' said Vanessa, as she entered.
They looked at her funny, never she came here in Saturdays unles it's something that she wants or that she is par of a mission.
"What you doing here?'' Wheezy asked.
Vanessa shrugged. Dance jumpe off from her sleees and lied down at the carpet. His eyes widen, hoping that she didn't plan on anything involving that ferret and him. "Relax,'' she said."I told Dance not to hurt you.''
This was new. Not much, but new. Greasy came from the kitchen with his clothes messed up.
''DAAAAANG, WHAT'S A MATTER WITH YOU?!?'' she asked, shocked to even see him like this.
"I tried talking to boss, he almost strangled me and I tried to talk to Juarez, she almost killed me.'' said Greasy.
"From the looks of it, they did a good job.'' said Wheezy.
"Man, I wish he would just forgive her. They used to be so wonderful together.'' said Greasy.
After that momment they had a sudden flash back. It was the time when Juarez and Smartguy was about to get married. Even if she was still pregnant wit h Kenny, she was still pretty. After some speeches, Foghorn Leghorn looked at them.
"Now, do you take her as your bride?'' he asked.
He looked at Juarez, with a grin he said,"Yeah.''
The rest of the Toon Patrol cried.
"Juarez, I say I say, Juarez, do you take him as your husband?''
"YES, BY ALL MEANS YES!!!'' said Juarez.
"I pronounced hsuband and wife you-'' Foghorn began, but they already pressed their lips to eachother already.
Vanessa looking away as her sister patted her back, cried. Eddie ksised Dolores on the lips, as the res tof the Toon Patrol cried harder.
"THIS IS SO NOT LIKE, IT'S LOOOVE!!!'' they said, then went back crying.
They all sighed as their flashback was soon done. Wheezy blinkly looked t Vanessa.
'Hey, Vanessa, *wheezed* were'nt you the flower girl?'' he asked.
"OH GOD, NOT THIS AGAIN! WHY COULDN;T BONNIE DO THAT, I MEAN REALLY!!!''
SHe remember a certain piece of that flashback. Before it began, Vanessa was throwing flower petals everywhere. Litarally. "There, flower petals, all pretty looking.'' She groaned at that flashback when it was over.
"Still wish they hadn't chose me.''
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Post by Syrup on Mar 6, 2010 3:30:54 GMT -5
Aww. Dis be so sad)= At first they were happy, now it's all gone downhill. True fact: The leading cause of divorce is marriage.
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Post by Fisi on Mar 6, 2010 13:26:40 GMT -5
Thanx guys.
Chapter: 8
At the abadoned hotel, all of the villains were at the table, celebrating with a glass of champaigns for their success. "Nicely done, Shere Khan,'' said Scar. "And the same to you Don Karnage.''
"It was nothing, the dame is pretty good looking.'' said Don Karnage.
"I do believe you did an excellent job as well, Scar.'' said Shere Khan.
"Now that is done, Quint and Trader Moe will capture Zive, now that he's away, Jafar, since Vanessa's ferret is a much rather...violent, I want you to hympnotize both of them.''
"And what about taht Juarez?''
"You, Don Karnage, will capture her as well. As soon as they come for them, they'll be already in our little trap.''
Meanwhile, Vanessa watch as Juarez took her purse and opened the front door."Hey,'' she said."Where are you going?''
Juarez turned and look at her."I'm going to the coffee store.''
"Oh gosh *rolling his eyes*.At least answer this question, where's Kenny?'' Greasy asked.
'He's upstair sleeping.'' she said to him, then left.
Vanessa looked at Greasy, Wheezy, and Stupid; all of them knew this is really going badly and if they don't do anything about it, it might be over between the two of them. Wheezy let out a puff of smoke, and thought for a minute.
"Vanessa, go upstairs to boss.'' said Wheezy.
"Excuse me?'' she asked.
"You know waht I said, Smartguy might listen to you, since you both are rude.''
Vanessasighednand began walking straight upstairs. As she was walking to the halls and stopped at his room, she peeked inside and saw him looking outside of the window with sadness through his eyes. Vanessa entered the room and walked up to a nearby seat.
"I hope you don't mind,'' Vanessa said."But, I need to tell you something.''
"Go away, girlie.'' said Smartguy.
What he said made her mad. Never ever have someone called her that and get's away with it. No one at all.
"Listen, Smartypants, I know that you know that she never would cheat on you for another guy, she only loves you and only you. And I know you love her too. Through your anger, your not angry. You don't really want to end this to endwith you and Juarez, do you?'' she asked.
Smartguy thought about it for a minute. With her, she is the best thing he ever had. They never had an argument and always had good times. He turned around and faced Vanessa. Smartguy began straighting up his suit and fixing his hat.
"Your right. I'll go to her.''
"Finally, you realized, and don't call me girlie.'' said Vanessa, punching his shoulders.
"I also realized something. Where's Psycho and BlueBell?'' he asked.
Back to Juarez, she was walking to where she was supposed to be going to the coffee store. She couldn't resist not thinking about him. The way he talks to her and how he treats her, he's the best thing she ever had. What would Kenny think if they were divorced? Juarez wished that this never happened. As she was walking, she didn't notice someone grabbing her arm. "HEY, LET GO!!!'' Juarez yelled. She looked back and to he surprised, it was Don Karnage, the same jerk that kissed her.
"What's a matter, I thought we were becoming very, very, close.'' he said, as he gave her a seductive grin.
"LET GO OF ME!!!''
He grabbed both her arms and brought her closer to him. "Sorry, I can't do that.'' he said, then looked at her up and down, then carried her s she screamed for help.
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Post by Syrup on Mar 7, 2010 1:43:58 GMT -5
To Spikey: I dunno if you were talking to me, but I'll answer anyways. =P I would hope they wouldn't divorce But that was also a random "silly" fact. For the chapter: And poor Juarez, freaky jackal. What a player. Good chapter though. You seem tired, Fisi, with all yer typos and stuff, heh heh.
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Post by Fisi on Mar 7, 2010 10:36:20 GMT -5
Thanx guys. ^_^.
Syrup: Nah, I'm not really tire, with my gummiebearz, I'm energize. Yeah, I'm scared of Don Karnage now. 0_0.
Spikey: Hope they save her.
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Post by Syrup on Mar 7, 2010 16:07:39 GMT -5
Spikey: Ohh okay gotcha. Fisi: Haha gummy bears! I'd kick Don Karnage. =P
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Post by Fisi on Mar 8, 2010 19:25:57 GMT -5
Chapter: 9
Where ZigZag was at her home, she was sleeping in her room, crying that now that Quince is gone, she is alone. She hears someone coming from downstairs. ZigZag jumped off her bed and ran down the stairs with a happy expression on her face. "OH QUINCE,'' she said."I'm so glad that your-''
She stopped when she saw that Quint and Trader Moe was there. ZigZag slowly walked back-wards and then she ran as fast as she could. Quint grabbed her and threw her in the sack bag. Kicking and yelling, Trader Moe passed it to him.
"I thought she was easy, but isn't she a worm.'' said Trader Moe.
At the same-time, Smartguy and Vanessa went downstairs. But to their shock, they were all remain consciousness.
Vanessa eyes widen. "Oh...my...god.''
As Smartguy tried to figure out what happened, Dance pounced on Smartguy's back and started to scratch. Her eyes widen even more when her ferret had foam on her mouth.
"Ok, I know that we already check if you had rabies.'' said Vanessa.
'Well, I guess now she does. GET HER OFF!!!'' Smartguy yelled.
'Stop, please, stop, bad ferret.'' she said sarcastically.
"I MEAN IT!!!''
Vanessa sighed. As she stepped towards Smartguy, Jafar covered her mouth and put her in a sack bag. He didn't notice that since he is being attacked. Smaruy try getting her off, but Dance kept scratching him and then bit his neck making him yell in pain. As he grabbed his cane, he began to disappear. Dance suddenly stopped. Meanwhile, Don Karnage was the first one back at the abadoned hotel. They were both at a room. "Why do I always end up at a room whenever something bad happens to me?'' she asked herself.
"You know, Juarez,'' he said."You are going to be lucky to be with me. When this is over, you and me are going to find lots of treasure and some adventures, if you know what I mean.''
"Ha, you must really wanna make me laugh myself to death, 'cause being with you would be worse than getting ran over by a taxi cab.'' Juarez snapped.
Don Karnage ignored her, he was too busy looking at her seductively.
"No matter, Smartguy will be out of the way and maybe if Scar would say yes, so will Kenny.''
"NO! DON'T!!!'' she yelled bursting out some tears.
He then pushes her aaginst the wall. "Then, my dear, you have to be a goodie to me.''
"Oh, this is so not good.''
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Post by Syrup on Mar 10, 2010 1:33:25 GMT -5
Stupid Don Karnage..... I agree. He's sunk very low.
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Post by Fisi on Mar 10, 2010 17:43:47 GMT -5
Thankies.
Yes, he sunk very, very, low. Shawty got low, low, low, low, low. Sorry, a song I remembered.
My brother: XD Dance having rabies.
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Post by Syrup on Mar 11, 2010 3:46:47 GMT -5
Bahahaha I know that song! =P
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Post by Fisi on Mar 13, 2010 18:39:11 GMT -5
Chapter: 10
"You know, after that kiss yesterday, I seem to be wanting another." said Don Karnage.
Juarez gulped and began sweating in her forehead. Like things haven't been any worse. Just then, Jafar entered. "Stop flirting with our bait." said Jafar.
"What? It's not my fault she's that attractive."
"Oh jeez."
Jafar rolled his eyes at him and let go of the bag. Juarez gasped as she saw that Vanessa was also captured. "Juarez?" Vanessa asked."You too?"
"I wish I wasn't." she said.
"Any room for one more?" Trader Moe asked.
He let go of the bag and to their guest, so was she. "YOU?!? WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?!?"
"Oh my, YOU HAD TO CAPTURE HER!!!" Vanessa yelled.
They began to argue making the villains puzzled. An outburst roar was heard making ZigZag and Vanessa stop. They stepped aside when Scar entered. Looking at them with an evil grin, he began to circle them.
"Well, I thought this day would never come." said Scar.
"Wait, aren't you that dude that just got killed by my sister hyena friends?"
"SILENCE!!!"
Scar was about to pounce, but Shere Khan stopped him. "Control yourself," he said."It's best if I explained."
"Explained what?" ZigZag asked.
"Explained this. You see, as you guys are here now, the Toon Patrol will come and try to rescue you. But, there's one thing. As soon as they come they will be falling into our trap. So, when we capture all of you we will summon Karlata and then we will destroy ToonTown and maybe who knows she might get the chance to be queen."
"YOU WON'T GET AWAY WITH THIS!!!" Juarez yelled.
"Don't worry, doll, we will." said Trader Moe.
Juarez eyes began to turn red and was full of rage. Vanessa and ZigZag held her back. All of the villains laughed and then left leaving then door lock. Now, they are trapped in a abadoned room with cracked floors, ceilings, a spider webs and dust everywhere. Vanessa ran towards the window to opened, but it was lock.
"Great, they locked the windows too."
"So, what should we do?" ZigZag asked.
Juarez closed her eyes as she sat on the bed."We pray."
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Post by Syrup on Mar 13, 2010 23:49:02 GMT -5
Oh no They took Vanessa too...I hope they be okay. D=
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