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Post by Fisi on Mar 14, 2010 10:58:07 GMT -5
Thanx guys. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Mar 17, 2010 13:20:19 GMT -5
Chapter: 11
Smartguy was puzzled after what happened. What jus happened? And where's Vanessa? Kenny came downstairs looking at his father with worried hazel eyes. He ran towards Smattguy and tugged on his suit. "I know, Kenny." said Smartguy. "We gotte do something."
The door slammed, and Psycho and Bluebell ran towards inside.
"WE'RE HO-WOAH, WHAT HAPPENED?!?" yelled Psycho.
Stupid, Greasy, and Wheezy rubbed on their head as they moaned. "Boss, what happened?" asked Greasy.
Before Smartguy could answer, Dance found Vanessa's hat and and began running towards the door. "Duh, boss, I think she wants us to follow her." said Stupid. Smartguy nodded, and opened the door. The ferret ran out and tthey began to follow it.
"Can we really trust this ferret?" asked Wheezy.
"Oh, just because she keeps biting you doesn't mean we can't trust her." said Psycho.
Meanwhile, at the abadoned hotel, Vanessa kept kicking the door just to think of some ideas. "CAN YOU STOP?!?" ZigZag asked. "She's right, you can't think of anything like that." said Juarez.
"At least I'm thinking." said Vanessa.
"CAN YOU STOP THAT KICKING, OR I WILL PUT YOU ON BARBECUE SAUCE AND FEED YOU TO THE SHARKS!!!" said Karnage, opening the door and glared at Vanessa.
She kept kicking on the door harder and harder. Juarez bgan to have a lightbulb on her head meaning she had an idea.
"Oh, Karnage?" she said in her calm voice while fluttering her eyes lashes.
"Huh?"
Vanessa stopped kicking. ZigZag and her looked at eachtother with their eyebrows cocked. Juarez stood up and lean against him. Putting her hand on his chest and putting another on his cheeks.
"What's a guy like you doing in a place like this?"
"Oh, god." said Vanessa.
"You say it like she never done this before." said ZigZag.
"That's 'cause she didn't."
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Post by Fisi on Mar 17, 2010 16:54:12 GMT -5
Thanx. ^_^.
Juarez and Vanessa are going to regret it.
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Post by Fisi on Mar 18, 2010 15:31:40 GMT -5
Chapter: 12
"I never realized how *feelings his biceps* strong you are." said Juarez.
At what she said, Vanessa just wanted to puke and ZigZag giggled. Karnage didn't notice them two, he was patention to Juarez. "Why of course I am," he said." I've been, how you say? Working out."
Juarez grinned. "Oo, not to mention I just adore men with accents." she added the purr in adore. While she flirting with Karnage, she made some weird signs with her fingers behind her back.
ZigZag stared puzzled at her then she asked, "What is she doing?"
"It's a signal, I'll let ya know." Vanessa whispered.
Juarez traced her finger on his neck. Then she put her leg around Karnage. As she did her last sign, they both slowly went around them. Karnage leaned her down and puts his lips to Juarez. But, he didn't notice that Vanessa was right behind him with a skateboard. She smacked it behind his head. Karnage fell down atop of Juarez unconcious.
"YOU PERV, I'MA MARRIED JILL!!!"
She pushed him aside and grabbed the keys from his jacket pocket. ZigZag cocked her head to the side.
"Where did you get that skateboard?" she asked.
"I "borrowed" it."
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Post by Fisi on Mar 19, 2010 13:32:02 GMT -5
Thank you Spikey. ^_^.
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Post by Syrup on Mar 19, 2010 22:55:00 GMT -5
Bahahaha. Yay for Juarez. Hehe "borrowed"
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Post by Fisi on Mar 20, 2010 8:56:49 GMT -5
Thanks Syrup. ^_^.
Heehe "borrowed" I missed that.
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Post by Fisi on Mar 26, 2010 20:48:41 GMT -5
Chapter: 13
"Now, you two go and try getting out of here.'' said Juarez, as she unlocked the door with the keys.
The two nodded and did as they were told. Vanessa paused, she looked back at her. "What about you?'' she asked. "I'll try to stop them myself.'' said Juarez. She quickly ran out. At the sound of someone moaning, Juarez quickly looked around.
"Rezzie?''
Why did Karnage just call her that? And didn't she made him forget before. He tried as he could to stand up. Rubbing his head, he looked at her with widen eyes. "Is that you?''
She didn't wanted to answer, but she nodded anyway."You remeber now, don't ya?''
"Yes, that hit you gave me really, how you say, knock me out, yes no?''
Wow, after all these years, he just need to get hit again just to remember her.
"Rezzie? Why did you leave us?'' Karnage asked.
"BECAUSE, I WANTED TOO!!!''
"It's not because of what happened was it?''
Kind of think of it, she began remembering that day when she too used to be a pirate. She had a belt buckle around her waist while wearing a sleeveless purple ripped on the bottom shirt. Juarez was just walking through some palm trees. She stopped when she heard moaning sounds. She began running pass them until she stopped. Juarez was shocked, she saw a vixen pressing her lips against his. To him, he wants the vixen off, but to Juarez, he liked it. Tears were falling down hrough her cheeks, then she left them there. Juarez shooked her head as she tried to get back to reality.
"Look, Karnage, I don't wanna come back.'' said Juarez looking the other way.
Karnage walked towards her and grabbed both her hands. "Please, Juarez,'' he begged."Since you been gone, that vixen left me with our kid.''
Juarez widen her eyes and looked at him. A kid? Well, what a shock. Who in the world would ever leave their kid?
"I can't, I have my own, and the fact I can't leave mi amor and my kit, I have to leave, sorry.'' said Juarez.
She took his hands off of hers and ran off to the door.
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Post by Fisi on Mar 27, 2010 8:53:05 GMT -5
Thankies. <3.
When I have the chance, I'll try making a backstory about her.
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Post by Syrup on Mar 27, 2010 12:26:00 GMT -5
Gaspers, they knew each other in the past. Good chapter.(:
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Post by Fisi on Mar 27, 2010 13:02:40 GMT -5
;D.
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greasyslady29
Recruit
"Looks like they gave us the slip, huh Boss?"
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Post by greasyslady29 on Mar 30, 2010 20:35:01 GMT -5
Hey there,
I actually have read this before. I like this story too. I love how you put most of the villians in here. It makes the story more interesting.
Thanks and write back.
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Post by Fisi on Apr 1, 2010 8:23:32 GMT -5
Thanx. .
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Post by Fisi on Apr 1, 2010 13:14:44 GMT -5
Chapter: 14
The Toon Patrol have finally arrived. Stupid gulped at how the house is. "Jeez, this house is sure scary."
"Dont worry, Stupid, when we're done with them, they'll regret messing with me." said Smartguy.
"Don't you mean us, boss?" Greasy asked.
Back where the villains are, they set up a huge laser pointing to the ground. They began drinking champain as they celebrated their success. "Once this laser hits to the ground," said Scar."A portal will summon Karlata in the Underworld and we will finally take over ToonTown, or yet the WORLD!!!"
They all began laughing.
Scar: Impossible, for a stupid yellow pumpkin to become a golden carraige. Impossible, that no one will stop us when this laser shoot it's ray And the Toon Patrol will never get in our way.
(In the Underworld) Slaughter: Such fodderal and fiddle dedee, of course is.
Karlata: IMPOSSIBLE!!!
Everyone in the Underworld: IMPOSSIBLE!!!
Lace: For those people are such zanies and fools.
Bows: Who will believe in sensible rules. And do believe what sensible people say.
Karlata: And because does daft and dewey eyed dopes, get ready to believe their no hope. Impossible, nothing can stand in my way. Impossible.
Scar: Impossible.
ShereKhan: Impossible.
Jafar: Impossible.
Quint: Impossible.
Trader Moe: Impossible.
Everyone: IMPOSSIBLE!!!
Meanwhile, Vanessa and ZigZag was looking for a way out. ZigZag saw a window. She quickly ran to it and opened it. "Look, Vanessa, there's a way out." she said.
"Why? When we can stop them ourselves." said Vanessa.
"Huh? But, that's impossible." said ZigZag.
"Only if you believe it is."
Vanessa: It's possible, for a plain yellow pumpkin to become a golden carraige. It's possible, for us to stop those bad guys from taking over ToonTown. And no matter what they say, will stop them from turning this town or the world all grey. ZigZag: Such folderol and fiddle dedee, of course is.
Both: QUIT POSSIBLE!!!
Vanessa: For those villains are such zanies and fools.
ZigZag: Who don't believe sensible rules.
Vanessa: And won't believe what sensible people say.
Juarez: And because those daft and dewey eyed dopes keep building up impossible hopes. It's possible, things are happen' everyday. It's possible.
Smartguy: It's possible.
Bluebell and Psycho: IT'S POSSIBLE!!!
The rest of the Toon Patrol: It's possible.
ZigZag: It's possible.
Vanessa: It's possible.
Vanessa and ZigZag: IT'S POSSIBLE!!!
The Toon Patrol bashed the door opened and aimed their weapons. "ALRIGHT, NOBODY MOVES, NOBODY GET'S HURTS!!!" Smartguy yelled.
The door shut closed behind them. Then, a red beam hit them and made them float up.
"WEE!! WE'RE FLYING!!!" said Psycho.
The villains stepped towards them. "Enough of this." said Scar.
"Shouldnt have saw that coming, huh?" said Smartguy, giving them a nervous chuckle and look.
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Post by Fisi on Apr 1, 2010 13:27:37 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey. ;D.
This song "Impossible" was from Cinderella in Rogers and Hamerstein movie.I made it in the villains and Toon Patrol version of the song of it.
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