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Post by Fisi on Jul 24, 2009 11:46:51 GMT -5
Thanx lynx . Don't worry about it Lynx you're the best.
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Post by Fisi on Jul 26, 2009 19:50:22 GMT -5
Chapter : 11
The gang were out following Jaurez to where there supposed to live but no one has no clue where in the fact there going.They made it to the house there supposed to be.Jaurez rang the doorbell cause she knows that she can't knock for some reason.
What came out was two cute little pinked nose kits.One was tan yellow furred with green pants and a green hat with a button up white shirt like Jaurez but she has a black vest.And the other one is a darked brown furred wearing a green t shirt with balck pants and hat but has a green stripe.
"Jaurez you came we thought you were dead,"said the tan yellow one said.
"Dead what do you mean dead?,''Jaurez said.
The tan one was about to answer but let them in first but let them in first then the one next to him was hiding behind there back's.
"Don't worry there with me,"she said making them calm down.
They both understood and once they did they started introducing themselves.
"Hi my name is Clyde and this is my sister Bonnie,"he said pointing to his sister.
Jaurez was about to introduced them but when they had amazement she guessed they knew them.
"Oh my gosh we know you,"said Clyde pointing to Greasy.
"Your one of those Toon Patrol,"he said.
"Toon Patrol?,"said Jaurez.
"Yeah that's like there group name,"Vanessa said.
"We are your biggest fans,"they both said in unison.
"Well did you know I got almost ten girls on a date this entire weekend,"Greasy said.
"Nope,"They both said it in unison.
Vanessa rolled her eye's like that was a complete lie.
As soon as they introduced themselves they started to Greasy the entire tour of their house while the others were going to their new room's upstair's. Greasy cause I think we all know what he does in his spare time has his own room and so those Smartguy.But Stupid has to share with Wheezy and so does Vanessa and Psycho.Meanwhile Smartguy and Jaurez were talking in the kitchen sitting on the kitchen seats and having only few laughs.
"So those two their are their your kid's?,''said Smartguy.
"Nah I babysit them just to pay the rent or bills,''said Jaurez.
"Won't their mother be mad?,''he asked.
"She won't she will be happy to besides Winnie has a heart of gold,"Jaurez said.
Smartguy thought for a moment at what happened back at the Ink & Paint club when they both were in the room.
"Uh hey do you want to go out tonight,"he said trying to be calm.
"Wait ou mean on a date?,''she said.
"Yeah,"Smartguy said.
"Sure I'de love to,"Jaurez said.
"Um hey don't take this the wrong way but wear something seductive for tonight for wear we are going if it's ok with you,''said Smartguy.
"It's ok I will,"she said.
She walked out and when she did Smartguy did a sigh then thought about it then he had a smile on his face he knew was the start of a beautiful relationship but he did'nt knew how long since he guessed that she did'nt know about the accident.
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Post by Greasy on Jul 27, 2009 4:37:18 GMT -5
Nice fic so far, intresting, I love the little kids in the house.
Are this Jaure´z children?
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Post by Fisi on Jul 27, 2009 6:50:30 GMT -5
Actually no those are Greasy's kid's but he doesn't know it so does the little kits they don't know that either.In the fic says that Jaurez babysits them for rent or bills cause her boss don't give her much money.And thanx for the comment btw the little kids name are Clyde and Bonnie.Oh can I use Candy for next chap.
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Post by Greasy on Jul 28, 2009 5:44:00 GMT -5
Yes, sure.
But when Greasy is the father, who is the mother?
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Post by Fisi on Jul 28, 2009 6:21:21 GMT -5
Don't worry about it me amigo I'll give you a hint she is an enemy to jessica rabbit and she has the hugest lips guess who she is.
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Post by Fisi on Jul 28, 2009 7:40:04 GMT -5
Chapter : 12
Everyone in the house in the afternoon was doing nothing except looking at the news.Until someone came and open the door.A femal weasel with blonde hair in a pink dress and not to mention the hugest lips.Clyde and Bonnie started hugging their mother but when she started to look at Greasy she had a mad face.She grab a hammer from her purse and started swinging at Greasy.Jaurez stopped her she whispered something in her ear but then she put the hammer down and whispered back at Jaurez.
"So what she said,''Vanessa said.
"Im sorry her name is Winnie the Weasel she sorta got crazy when she saw Greasy cause he used to be her boyfriend until she talked about marriege so he left her she also said that we can only stay here for the night,''Jaurez said.
"Oh real smooth Greasy,''Vanessa said with her arm's crossed.
"Daaaaaaaaaaadyyyyyyyyyyyyyy"they ran on top of Greasy still hugging him.
Greasy did a great big groan and as for some laugh but except Vanessa she was wondering how it will feel like to find her paren't if they were out there somewhere.
Late at night everyone was in bed except for Smartguy but he did'ntwant anyone to know so he grabbed the rose quickly and ran downstairs as fast as he can but quietly but all of a sudden Vanessa was there.She came up to Smartguy gave him a quick advice.He went off when she was done.
Smartguy was holding the direction's to her house he know he was near.He rang the door bell and waited.He saw her in a black loli dress with white gloves but still got her hat on but it didn't matter cause she was beautiful.
"So this is seductive enough for you,"she said.
Smartguy was still staring with his eye's widen but then he tried to look calm.
"Yeah,"he said then handing her the rosed.
She smiled at the rose then let him inside.Smartguy was holding a blind fold for her not to look.It took him 10 minutes to release it.She opened her eye's with amazement cause he put whine on the table with popcorn and the movie was on.Jaurez kissed Smartguy on the cheeks.The whole time they've been watching a movie and talked at the same time.When the movie was over.Jaurez looked at him.
"Wanna come to my room with me,"she said.
Smartguy was shocked then he looed at the whine but he knew she was'nt drunk.He gave a quick nod and went upstairs.They went to her room .She started locking the door and Smartguy was closing the window shields.They both started making out in Jaurez bed but then it became more when Jaurez strap's were down and it gave him a signal.
Meanwhile Vanessa was still sleeping dreaming about a family.But she woke up and was shocked when she saw Psycho on top of her still kissing her in the mouth ontop of her in so many wrong level's.She gave a quick growl.And he ran for his life.Vanessa did ind but she went on the roof and saw a wishing star.
"Oh wishing star I wish I find my family but everyone keep calling me a valiant but if it's true show me any sign,"Vanessa wished.
She went down and came back to bed.
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Post by Fisi on Jul 28, 2009 7:42:29 GMT -5
Sorry for what happened sometime they all can be real class.
Vanessa:Hey Psycho was on top of me and you think that's classy!
Smartguy:Hey I was in a romantic mood.
(Rolling my eye's)
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Jul 30, 2009 7:44:40 GMT -5
Oh, Psycho, you little devil. XD
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Post by Fisi on Jul 30, 2009 8:46:43 GMT -5
XD funny
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Post by Fisi on Jul 30, 2009 16:00:36 GMT -5
Chapter : 13
Morning arrived and everyone well almost everyone was in the kitchen since there was no more seats everyone was in the living room they were all watching something.Psycho came next to Vanessa.
"Uh heey he he I'm sorry for what i did last night,''Psycho said rubbing his back.
Vanessa tried not to look at his guilt but she knew he was sorry.
"Well I forgive you , you probably were dreaming,"Vanessa said.
Psycho led out a nervous giggle.While still rubbing his back head and blushed.
"You didn't dream about making out or anything to me were you?,''she asked.
He giggled again shaking his head no.Vanessa growled again.She chased Psycho all the way around the living room.
"PSSYCCHOO you are dead if something happened to me,"Vanessa yelled still chasing him.
Then she remembered Smartguy went out to date Jaurez she gave him some advice especially liking children someday and he haven't came back since.
"Wait a minute how long does it take for one date?,''she asked herself.
In the last minute she found Smartguy and Jaurez coming to the door who was giggling alot.
"Jaurez where were you?,''she asked in front of the "lovely" couple.
"We were out to see a movie in my house nothing else,"Jaurez said.
"Yeah when people go out for a movie as a date in someone's house they don't come back 7:00 in the morning,''Vanessa said.
Vanessa saw the whole point of why they came back early in the morning.
"If you did something to Jaurez last night I will swear ,"She said almost screaming the finishing sentence to Smartguy until Jaurez blocking Smartguy.
"Look Vanessa he did nothing to me and it's nothing of you to know about what happened last night besides we just looked at a movie and talked about our lives and our friends,''Jaurez screamed back.
Vanessa frozed at that sentence then looked back at the guy's in the living room then back at Jaurez.
"You told him about me didn't you,"Vanessa asked.
"Well yeah,"Jaurez said.
"Why did you told him he has no business about my life,"Vanessa said.
Then all of a sudden they heard a loud high laughing voice.Then saw a shadow of a Jack in the box.
"(cough)What was that?,''Wheezy said.
"Joker,''She said.
"And who is he,''Smartguy said.
"He is the minion of the devil cat named Gato devil that mean Devil Cat,''Jaurez explained.
"Gato devil is one of the evil Toon devil's ever he tried to reborn himself in another person body but he couldn't do it,"Vanessa said.
"And whatever you do don't go out alone,''Clyde said with Bonnie behind him.
"Well we should probably go back at the Factory and must stop him before he found someone to control,''Vanessa said.
The Toon Patrol looked at eachother for a minute and then said .
"No Way,''They said.
"We are not going back there you know how long we just got free,''Smartguy said.
"But Smartguy please do it for me and Vanessa,''Jaurez pleaded.
"No way not even for her,''He pointed to Vanessa.
"But you said,''Jaurez almost finishing her sentence.
"But nothing I outta here,"he said leaving himself out.
"Your not the Toon I loved and you said you liked kids,''Jaurez argued.
"Well Jaurez have you seen me with kids before,''Smartguy said almost letting himself out.
"But Smartguy I'm pregnant,"she said full with tears covering her eye's.
Smartguy frozed and Vanessa to and everyone did not believed it.
"You pig headed JERK,''Vanessa yelled chasing him .
But he got away when he was gone Winnie demanded The entire Toon Patrol to leave.Winnie and Vanessa were still hugging Jaurez and as for Smartguy cried himself alittle when he was alone.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Jul 30, 2009 23:34:55 GMT -5
Shock. 0.0
It was good.
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Post by Fisi on Jul 31, 2009 6:35:03 GMT -5
Thanx yes it is a shocker I wish Smartguy would knew before he said that.
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Post by Fisi on Jul 31, 2009 17:50:01 GMT -5
Chapter:13
Things been rough ever since they got out of the house.The Toon Patrol had tried to get their job back after what hapened forget about it.But Vanessa and her friends did'nt know what to do with Jauurez but they finally decided to go to the Factory with her but with company.Roger came with Jaurez just in case she give's birth to the baby already.
"Man it's all my fault now Jaurez gonna meet that Gato whatever and he is probably gonna destroy her and the baby,''Smartguy said.
"Boss don't be so hard on yourself besides why did you like her and care about her anyway?,''Greasy asked.
"Cause I loved her,''he said looking up.
Back at the Factory with Roger along Vanessa was behind the boxes talking to them.
"Ok so you guy's go make sure that those Joker's don't come out and I'll distract Gato devil and if anything happens tell me with these,''Vanessa said passing them the walkie talkies.
When Vanessa left Jaurez looked at the picture of Smartguy.
"Hey why do you have a picture of him I thought you hated him after the you know,''Roger asked looking at photo.
"Cause I love him no matter what sure he is a pain in my behind when he keep's calling me doll but he is still my corazon,''Jaurez said looking up.
"Man never knew you said a spanish word what does "corazon" mean?,''He asked.
"It mean my heart,"she said grabbing the picture and kissing it before putting it away.
Jaurez and Roger was about to fight those Joker's but then Gato devil found them first.He was the scariest Toon ever.He was a red furred Panther with green eye's not to mention those fangs and his claws are super large.
"Ahh nice of you to drop by let me show you the place may I ,"he said throwing Roger at the bricks that once came to his head.
"Hey look star's I still got it,"Roger said faited.
Jaurez try to escape but he got her with grip.
"Oh come on now sweetie there is no need and look your already pregnant look's like all I need to do is wait until 12:00 to crawl all up on you so I can take over your baby's body and reborn myself,"Gato devil said.
"NEVER,''Jaurez yelled.
"Then let the game's began.
Jaurez yelled which mad Vanessa worried she tried to contact Roger and Jaurez but no answer that's when she decided she needed the Toon Patrol for this one.
Meanwhile As they were about to gave up they saw Vanessa running to them.
"You guy's gotta help Jaurez is in trouble,''she said.
"Well why should we she is the reason why we are here,"Greasy said folding his arm's and looking away.
"Cause she love's Smartguy and she forgave him and she also said for the first time hearing her in spanish her corazon and I over heard her with the walkie talkies,''Vanessa said.
Smartguy looked at her for a minute he never felt this way before that's when he walked straight to the Factory.
"Duh boss where are you going,''Stupid said being concern.
"I am going to save her and the baby and if you guy's are coming follow me,''He said leading the way.
"Um the Acme Factory is this way,''She pointed the other way.
Smartguy blushed going the other way then he muttered something so that's when they followed going back to where they have been.
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Post by Fisi on Jul 31, 2009 20:06:32 GMT -5
WOW nice way to know your street's Smartguy.  Smartguy:Shadduupp!! Vanessa:Ha Ha Ha Ha !! ;D Omg I'm a trainee Omg Omg Omg Thank ya(Dancing and singing the cocaracha song). Everyone:Shutup(but Jaurez and Vaness also Stupid plus Psycho) Ok geeez in a great mood man. |
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