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Post by Fisi on Jul 20, 2009 21:00:32 GMT -5
And Eternity you are a awsome friend thank you for fogivving me. :)I am glad about you being my friend and i am glad about everyone to .but i am glad you forgive me. ;D  ;D ;D I am givving you karma to this. |
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Post by Fisi on Jul 20, 2009 21:52:21 GMT -5
Um how do you give someone a karma?
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Jul 20, 2009 22:23:05 GMT -5
XD. You click "exhalt". Simple as that. I'm sure Eternity would love a karma from you. ;D
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Post by Fisi on Jul 20, 2009 22:29:04 GMT -5
Thanx lynx oh come to home and press made up rule please.
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Post by Fisi on Jul 20, 2009 22:32:37 GMT -5
I have to give eternity a karma tommorow this iPod touch won't let me.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Jul 20, 2009 22:35:05 GMT -5
I did.
...You can get this on our iPod? Sweet.
I don't really like an iPod. Sure, I'll listen to friends, but I actually like a CD better. Reason is because I could just change the battery... XD
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Post by Fisi on Jul 20, 2009 22:43:07 GMT -5
Well the next chapter no copy is when smartguy got a crush on Jaurez tommorow but what do you think about her.
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Post by Fisi on Jul 20, 2009 22:49:19 GMT -5
I did it I gave Eternity a karma.Oh please answer the following question above pleaze.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Jul 20, 2009 23:11:52 GMT -5
She seems nice and, by the way you write her, is a pretty weasel. Um, I just want to tell you that Psycho is spelled Psycho. I just thought you might also like to know that there is a spell check. That way, you could put words that you might not know how to spell. I do that a lot. Just click spell check and it'll give you a list of words to use. Don't always rely on it, though. I usually only use it in FanFic's, but I found out it counts Wheezy's (and some other words) wrong when they are right. Ex:
Wheezy's cigarette fell to the ground.
It is correct because Wheezy is his name. The reason spell check claims it is wrong is becuase, to it, wheezy is just a type of noise.
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Post by Fisi on Jul 21, 2009 21:54:21 GMT -5
Sorry I meant tommorow cause my laptop won't let me put the next chapter on.
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Post by Greasy on Jul 22, 2009 5:30:49 GMT -5
Ohh, Smart guy and Jaurez?
Nice idea.
But what´s with Greasy, wouldn´t he be angry about that?
Thought he would like her!?
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Post by Fisi on Jul 22, 2009 11:45:00 GMT -5
Well actually Greasy does really like her he is just being himself around Jaurez and she does'nt like it but still likes her.Cause in the chapter 11 turns out Greasy has an ex girlfriend but has not know about his kids .  |
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Post by Fisi on Jul 22, 2009 13:45:34 GMT -5
Chapter : 9
Vanessa and the others went to the alley to look for the Ink & Paint club.They found the place and when they did they saw a huge gorilla which everyone call's him Bongo.
"Got the password,"said Bongo in his really low voice.
"Well,Walt sent me,"sadi Vanessa.
Bongo open the door they tried to get in but Bongo stopped them by closing it.
"Who are these chumps?,"said Bongo.
"These "chumps" are with me and dont call em chump you chimp,"said Vanessa.
Bongo opened the door again and was mumbling something.Smartguy walk next to Vanessa when they got in.
"How did you know kid?,"said Smartguy confused about what happened.
"Like i said school are for losers besides how much you want a bet that i know that he was the one who made a huge hole in the wall,"she said.
They got inside and opened the door .What they saw was a bunch of penguin servants and Donald and Daffy Duck playing the piano once again.Smartguy got a cigar and put it in his mouth but then a stranger walked by and bumped his cigar to the floor Smartguy just growl while glaring picks it up and put it back in his mouth.
"Maybe we should grab a table for six,"said Vanessa pointing to the table.
Vanessa sa down and tried to relax so did the weasel's sat down but once they did they dropped their mouth on the table so did Smartguy who dropped his cigar on the floor again.For some reason it scared her.But when she turned around she found Jaurez wearing a leather sleeveless Jacket and she was next to their table with a bunch of guy's.Jaurez got a way from them but still got pinched in the behind.
"Ow stupid guy's,"said Jaurez while rubbing her behind.
When she went to the next table she saw Vanessa and was shocked thatthe weasel's are here and alive.Jaurez was embarressed and started to blushed.
"What a women,"said Greasy whistling at her looking up and down.
She couldn't stand it she walked away from them and went behind the curtains to go to her room.
"What's wrong with her?,''said Psycho looking at her with concerned.
"I don't know but one of you guy's better go over there and apoligized to her now !,"Vanessa said who looked like she was angry at them.
"And why should one of us do it youre her friend,"said Smartguy.
"Cause im not the one who looked at her ,dropped my mouth on the table ,and dropped my pick uped cigar,"she said who was getting furious with him.
He understood so he decided he should go over there and apoligized but first he threw his cigar away just in case.
Once he found her room he heard crying.Smartguy opened the door to make sure she was there sitting in her couch crying her eye's out while putting her hand's in her face.
"You ok dollface,"said Smartguy who just got in.
Jaurez looked at him then turned back where she was.
"Look im sorry me and my boy's treated different around you,"said Smartguy rubbing his head.
"That's not why,"said Jaurez finally looking at him.
"Im tired of being treated like a hussy I don't want my life to be in this way and the reason why I have to wear theese stupid cloth's is because I did'nt came back yesterday and came late now im was fired and became a servant,"said Jaurez still crying.
Smartguy heart sank deeper and came andsat next to her all he could ever do was to pull her and hug her tightly in his arm's.
"Shhh, it's ok ,it's ok youre beautiful anyway,"he said still hugging her.
Jaurez stopped crying and looked at him.
"Really?,"said Jaurez .
"Really,"said Smartguy who looked at her.
The two weasels looked at eachother for a minute then they starteed kissing eachother in the mouth and still hugging.
Meanwhile at the table the weaseel's look at the time and Vanessa just broke the silent.
"How long does it take for someone to apologized?,"Vanessa screamed.
"Maybe they need time let's just enjoy here,"said Greasy.
Now what the gang could do now was to wait and enjoy at the sametime.
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Post by Fisi on Jul 23, 2009 15:49:31 GMT -5
Chapter : 10
Vanessa was bored nothing to do except watch the performers have fun and for the others don't wanna know.Betty came along with cigars in her hand she notice Vanessa before.
"Vanessa is that you,"said Betty who just came to their table.
"Hey Betty,"said Vanessa.
Betty turned her head around to see the others who were next to her.She had an expression on her face like she knew them before.
"Oh no call someone it's the Toon Patrol their alive,"she said running the other way around the other people did'nt saw them cause Vanessa pulled the weasel's or as Betty calls them Toon Patrol under the table.She picked them up when everyone's head turned the other way.
"Man was that close,so you do have a group name let me guess Toon Patrol right,"said Vanessa.
"Duh yup,"Stupid said.
"WoW you know you guy's I think she know's you guy's before have you guy's met her some how?,"she asked .
The guy's started sweating all over there body as if they did and had a secret.
"Nope never met her before,"said Greasy.
"Yeah,"said Wheezy.
"Never seeeeen her,"said Psycho.
"Duh nope,"said Stupid turning his head side to side.
"Ok weired,"said Vanessa.
Finally they saw Smartguy and Jaurez who just came out.
"Finally exactly how long did it take for him to apoligized,"Vanessa said who wanted an answer.
"Hmm I don't know maybe fifteen minutes,"said Smartguy.
"Wow you actually been counting,"Jaurez asked.
"Not often,"said Smartguy.
The gang and Vanessa were surprised at what they are seeing right now.Smartguy pulling out a seat for Jaurez and Smartguy seating down but looking at her in her eye's.
"Oh my gosh tell me what happened,"said Vanessa who looked confused.
"Nothing happened Smartguy said some sweet thing aboutme and well made me feel better,"Jaurez said.
In a minute something opened the door by itself and a robin came out of the door while managing to escape from Bongo's hands.
"You can't catch me,"said Eva of course who would have guessed said sticking out her tongue.
Bongo gave up and fell down the floor exhausted from catching a bird.The bird flew threw Vanessa's table and looked exhausted as well.
"Vanessa , Jaurez youre both alive but how,"said Eva the toon bird panting.
"Does'nt matter what are you doing here?,"said Vanessa looking at her.
"Well I was about to look for you guy's after what happened but when I heard about you guy's and a lady saying something about that they came back and I guessed that the police are after you guy's,"said Eva.
"What lady ?,"said Vanessa.
"A women who is black and white,"she said.
"So she wasn't kidding,"said Vanessa.
"Who wasn't kidding?,"said Smartguy.
"Uhh Betty,"she said putting her head down at the table.
At a moment the police came.Betty came out behind them and pointed.
''There they are Officer's in table six,"said Betty.
"We better scram,"said Vanessa.
They stood up and ran for there lives the police were right behind them they had to losed them some how so they can come out of the Ink & Paint club.But then Smartguy thought of an idea.
"Hey kid you know what's best about school?,"said Smartguy.
"What?,"said Vanessa who stopped.
Smartguy stand on the table grabed someone lunch and yell out.
"FOOD FIGHT !!!,"Smartguy screamed throwing food at the police.
The gang got the message and started throwing food at the police's.The police man got all knocked out from the hard food they threw only the hard one's though and managed to escaped.
"Thank's Eva,"said Vanessa.
"No mention it anything you liked to send a messaged to?,''she asked.
"Yeah tell my friend's im all right,"said Vanessa.
Eva flew off into the night sky.Vanessa who finished waving good bye looked at Smartguy.
"You know maybe school is'nt that bad after all,"said Vanessa.
"You know they do have consequences,"Smartguy said.
"It doesn't matter whatever it is I'll survive it just like how I survive backed there,"said Vanessa pointing and giggling at the same time.
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btw the toon robin baby chick was from jungledyret hugo the movie star that's was a movie I saw.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Jul 23, 2009 22:22:02 GMT -5
Pretty good. Sorry I just replied. I was on a walkabout with my nephew and got home today. I've been...uh, relaxing with a pack and cherry limeade from Sonic. -_-'
Sorry.
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