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Post by Fisi on Jul 20, 2009 9:49:28 GMT -5
Chapter : 7
When Vanessa finally got up and free from that weasel she introduced herself.
"Ok now that we got a place to stay Let's start over let and introduced myself my name is Vanessa and this is my friend Jaurez,''said Vanessa while pointing to her best friend.
"My names Smartguy and Im the leader of the gang so you better watch it,"said Smartguy.
Vanessa rolled her eyes like trapping them was the best idea ever.
"And these are my comrades Greasy ,Wheezy,Phyco,and Stupid and they will do whatever I said,"said Smartguy.
So when the girls stayed for the night it was'nt the best idea.The good news is they both got a placed to stay yet the bad news is that Smartguy keeps on yelling at Phyco for annoying him ,Jaurez have to listen to Greasy so called "Smoth Talk" while ,Wheezy have to tie Stupids shoe again.
"Come on bonita why wont you want to talk to me,"said Greasy trying to catch up at her.
She finall stopped and said right in frontof his face.
"Cause youre a sick pervert,"said Jaurez.
Like anyone would want to hang out with a pervert .Vanessa rolled her eyes while Wheezy said.
"Burned,"said Wheezy.
Greasy was narrowing his eyes at Wheezy for saying that while Jaurez got the chance to come to Vanessa.
"Maybe this wasn't the best idea,"said Jaurez.
"Dont worry we just have to stay here for one night then we can leave them tomorow and look for the sheeted paper ad print to bring them back to life,"said Vanessa.
Night time came and Vanessa put little lights on Jaurez helped.
"By the way where's Smartguy ?,''said Jaurez.
"I dont know he said mind my own buisness and flew off to somewhere,"said Vanessa
Jaurez left Vanessa and started looking for Smartguy which was'nt easy .
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Post by Fisi on Jul 20, 2009 14:39:32 GMT -5
Chapter : 6
Jaurez been looking for Smartguy everywhere including some places that she wish she did'nt.When she found Smartguy on the box looking at a the ground.She walk up o them .
"You ok,"said Jaurez who was curious about him.
"Hold on aren't you supposed to be with Vanessa?,"Smartguy said .
"Well I want to be with you for now,"she said.
Smartguy blushed a little.
"Listen doll you should'nt be here,"he said.
"But i wanted to be here with,Wait did you just call me doll?,"she said with her eyes burning flames.
"Yeah I did , you got a problem with it Doll,"said Smartguy.
In a minute she pushed Smartguy who just fell on a couple of gags.She came down and put her fingers on his chine looked at him in his eyes and said.
"Dont ever call me doll again,"Jaurez said then she left.
Meanwhile Vanessa was still annoyed about everything of whats happeing here.Then she saw Jaurez.
"So did you find him and how did it go?,"said Vanessa.
"Yeah I did and it was all good for a minute,"Jaurez said as she was about to sleep with Vanessa .
Vanessa and Jaurez both went to sleep and did the whole ghost for they were about to prepared themselves for tommorow.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Jul 20, 2009 15:50:55 GMT -5
Cool. Sorry I can't write a good reply. Not my computer. >_<
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Post by Fisi on Jul 20, 2009 18:51:13 GMT -5
Its ok I understand so what do you think about Jaurez?
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Post by Fisi on Jul 20, 2009 19:19:06 GMT -5
Sorry guys i meant to put chapter 7
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Post by Fisi on Jul 20, 2009 20:14:20 GMT -5
Chapter : 8
It was 7:00 am in the morning and someone just put a bucket of water and pour it down to Vanessa.
"What you want ?,"Vanessa screamed.
"You gotta wake up kid your late,"Smartguy said.
"Late for what?,"she said rubbing her eye.
"For SCHOOL you dumb brat !,"he said.
"Im not a dumb brat and did'nt Jaurez told you,"she said.
"About what,"Smartguy said who was looking at her with a concern look on his face.
Vanessa made a quick sigh and stand up while her clothing was still wet.
"I dont go to school because I dont wanna besides I think school is lame , I am always learning in the streets, telivision ,and from every day people problem plus the news paper,"Vanessa said.
"Besides it's not me you should be worring about,''she said.
"Then who,"he said almost finnishing his sentence until suddenly Jaurez woke up.
"Oh my goodness Im late for work,"she said.
Jaurez was about to dress up until Greasy was there watching her.
"Go on don't mind me ,'' Greasy said givving a wide grin on his face.
Jaurez had no time for this so then she spinned herself in a tooney like to change and finally changed her outfit .
"Im going to work Vanessa watch yourself,''she said preparing herself.
She was about to head out to the finally unlocked door until the whole entire weasels came.
''What about our deal sweetie,''Smartguy said while he was looking at her like they weren't really gonna do it.
''Duh yeah you promised,''Stupid said with a disappointment in his face.
''Look you guys let her go besides I got the stuff from my bag which is in the guitar case,''Vanessa said trying to calm them down.
They understood and let her go.As soon as she was gone they faced Vanessa for the stuff.
"So are you gonna do it or not,"said Smartguy who was waiting for an answer.
"Follow me,"Vanessa said leading them to her guitar.
She opened the case and there was the paint and the printer.Thank goodness shes good at painting.When she was done she showed to the weasels and they made a satisfied look.
''Good work Vanessa beauty and brains,''Greasy said while looking at himself.
"Dont you like Jaurez?,"said Vanessa
Greasy grumbled something in spanish.
"Alright guys get in the paint and stay there until you guy feel burned.
The weasels look at eachother for a moment then thought about it and it was at least better thane nothing.So they went inside of the picture of themselves and Vanessa put them to the printer for three minutes and when three minutes past the weasels started jumping out of there picture landed into the floor and they were no longer ghost anymore.
'' AHH OH MY GOD," they all said together.
They calmed themselves down for a moment.
"We are ALIVE YEAH,"Phyco said while dancing around hugging himself.
"Yeah I guess we are hey kid you know where your friend works at,"Smartguy said.
"Yeah in the Ink & Paint Club with her boss Duke Malloy c'mon i'll show you where she is ,she said leading the weasels to outside world.Finally they were out but what have changed and what have been going on now ?
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btw Jaurez works at the ink and paint club as a waitress but also an entertainer.
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Post by Eternity on Jul 20, 2009 20:20:14 GMT -5
lol, you copied my fanfic!  |
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Post by Fisi on Jul 20, 2009 20:24:48 GMT -5
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Post by Eternity on Jul 20, 2009 20:26:11 GMT -5
Wait, before you go deleting anything, tell me: did you read my story "Greatest Joy on Earth"?
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Post by cooper on Jul 20, 2009 20:27:44 GMT -5
I, unfortunately, agree with Eternty. This sounds a lot like Eternity's story, this I think it's a bit copyrighted and unoriginal. It's nice to read, I just find it repetitive.
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Post by Fisi on Jul 20, 2009 20:32:27 GMT -5
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Post by cooper on Jul 20, 2009 20:34:06 GMT -5
Well, don't feel bad, we experience it some time one way or another.
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Post by Fisi on Jul 20, 2009 20:41:41 GMT -5
really.WoW i must i have been the only one.Like I promised to Eternity I changed some of it so pleased tell me if im coping or not and please forgive me Eternity.
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Post by Eternity on Jul 20, 2009 20:46:15 GMT -5
I forgive you lol, but you swear you didn't read my story prior to writing this?
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Post by Fisi on Jul 20, 2009 20:57:44 GMT -5
No I swear cross my heart and hope to die I dreamt it .It was in my head so then I started to do this fic but i did'nt know that you wrote greatest joy on earth .the dream it was really long and i woke up in 12:00 PM.But i did'nt plan to have that dream though but i still wondered how ?  |
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