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Post by Fisi on Nov 7, 2009 19:27:48 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 7, 2009 20:07:26 GMT -5
Chapter: 10
As the ship sails, Killer, who was standing on Banzai's head, was watching the water, flowing by.
"Cool, look how big the waves are." said Killer.
"Uh, Killer, can you get off of my head now?" Banzai asked.
"Oh c'mon, I mean,look how big it is, lots of fishes must been there, or maybe even better a SHARK!!!" said Killer.
"Whoah, whoah, whoah, hold on a minute, fishes is one thing, but I don't think sharks are cool." said Banzai.
"I hope we'll meet one." said Killer, then got off of Banzai's head.
Vidia, who was stearing the ship, stopped a second for a quick smoke. She looks up to the sky and sighed.
"VIDIA! THIS IS NO TIME FOR SIGHTSEEING!!!" Shelbi yelled.
"WELL SOOORRY, I WAS BORED!!!" said Vidia.
Shelbi glared, but stopped when she saw Ed's face turning green, as if he was sick.
"What's wrong with you?" Shelbi asked.
Maria came to Ed and puts her hand on his forehead.
"He's ok, but I don't know what could have been-." Maria began, but stopped when Ed began to barf.
"Um...is he sea sick?" Shelbi asked.
"By the look of it, I think soo." said Maria.
Shelbi snickered a little. Ed began too barf once more, Techna came and licked his cheek.
"I'll stay with you Ed and so is our kids too." said Techna.
Ed's eyes widen, and then he looked up at Maria. Maria and Shelbi looked at eachother, then at Ed.
"Uh, didn't Shenzi or Techna tell you?" Maria asked.
"Tell him about what?" Banzai asked.
"You mean, you two don't know?" Shelbi asked.
They shooked their heads.
"Well...Shenzi and Techna...their preganat." said Maria.
Ed dropped his mouth, then fated. Banzai stares at Ed, then looks at them.
"You guy's aren't kidding, right?" Banzai asked.
"Nope, their not, I am really pregnant, and so is Techna." Shenzi said, before she came and sat next to Banzai.
Banzai fated. Killer, who heard what happened, jumped in joy.
"YAAAAAYY, FINALLY, SOMEBODY TO PLAY WITH!!!" said Killer.
"NOOOOO!!!" a scream, came out of nowhere.
They looked up to the sky and saw Zazu flying. He landed on Maria's shoulder.
"Please tell me their not gonna have hyena cubs." said Zazu.
Maria nodded. Zazu groaned and Killer still jumped in joy.
"What are you doing here?" Shelbi asked.
"I'm here too help you guy's on this trip." said Zazu.
"Well, I don't need any help." said Shelbi, then left.
"Zazu, maybe you can help me, you know just in case for anything up in the sky." said Maria.
"Alright, as long as the cat, the hyenas, and Killer doesn't try anything." said Zazu.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Nov 7, 2009 22:00:10 GMT -5
Very nice chapter will good for Ed he will have kids I think he will make a good father I don't no I know Ed was never right in the head in the lionking
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Post by Fisi on Nov 7, 2009 22:19:08 GMT -5
Thanx Smartguy.
Ed and Banzai are going to be fathers. But for now Banzai is the father of Killer.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Nov 7, 2009 22:43:20 GMT -5
Your welcome LoL
Did I miss somthing in your story I did not no that Banzai is the father of Killer.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 7, 2009 22:45:19 GMT -5
It's ok, you didn't know.
Right now I can imagine Banzai and Ed being fathers.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Nov 7, 2009 22:48:24 GMT -5
I never thought I would see the day they would become fathers. Its nice to meet somone who's willing to write about it keep up the good work LoL
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Nov 8, 2009 0:16:30 GMT -5
Your welcome LoL Did I miss somthing in your story I did not no that Banzai is the father of Killer. Is was in her first story with Maria. Banzai is Killer's foster father. Killer sees Banzai as a father and Banzai sees Killer as a son. |
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Nov 8, 2009 0:37:21 GMT -5
Ya I saw that in there thanks. So many chapters can not remeber what gose on all the time. Heck I can not remeber my own story half the time.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 8, 2009 9:05:43 GMT -5
Chapter: 11
Tails came out of Shelbi's bag. He saw Zazu jump off of Maria's shoulder. It was perfect for Tails. He was about to get ready to pounce until a bark was heard behind him. Killer started chasing Tails again. Shelbi saw him and began to groan. Meg saw Killer and puts her paw on his tail.
"LET GO!!!" Killer yelled.
"Ok." said Meg, then let go.
Killer rolled and landed on his back. Zazu came to Tails and began pecking him on the head, making him run back to Shelbi. She bent down and gave Tails a rub on the back, after what happened. At least Meg was there too stop Killer. Night time came, and almost everyone was asleep. Maria looks at the stars. Her hand was then felt by someone else's. She turns and saw Logan there. She quickly snatches her hand away.
"Oh, hey." said Maria.
"Hey." said Logan.
"What are you doing here?" Maria asked.
"*shrugs* Nothing much, just wanna to come out. What about you?" Logan asked.
"Same thing, but except, I'm thinking about something." said Maria.
"Thinking about Africa, huh?" Logan asked.
"Well, yes, no, I mean, I'm thinking of something else." said Maria.
"Like what?" Logan asked.
"My parents...their probably missing me right now." said Maria.
"Oh, your lucky." Logan asked.
"What you mean?" Maria asked.
"Mines...are dead, I have to live with the Wild dogs, they weren't much of a '"family" but what choice do I have." said Logan.
Maria didn't imagine that his life was so hard. Without saying a word, she looked up at the crisent moon.
"The moons beautiful." said Maria.
"Yeah, beautiful." Logan said, while he was looking at Maria.
She turned to him and glances at his amber eyes. Maria blinked a little.
"I know this sounds kinda crazy but...you ever found someone, you know, who likes you?" Logan asked.
Maria's eyes widen, she cocked her brow at him.
"Uh, not really." said Maria.
"I'm surprised, someone attractive as you should all ready be with a guy by now." said Logan.
She ignored his comment and looked away.
"Hey, Maria?" Logan asked.
Maria turned and looked at him. He began pressing his lips on hers. Maria began closing her eyes and did the same thing.Logan place his hand back ontop of Maria's soft hand, but this time, she didn't snatch it away.They stopped for a sec, and stared at eachother.
"Uh, I gotta go." Logan said, before he grabs her hand and kissed it.
As soon as he headed to the door, he take one more last look at her.
"Te amo." Logan said, then went inside.
Maria was surprised, first he kissed her then he told her "I love you" in spanish. That was the first time she ever heard someone saying that. She shook her head, now more confused then ever. She decided to go inside as well. Shenzi and Banzai, who was hiding in the barrel, got out.
"Man, if he does that one more time, I'm gonna-." Banzai began.
"C'mon, leave him alone, he already has a hard time in his life already." said Shenzi.
"Yeah, but he shouldn't be doing that to Maria." said Banzai.
"Look, Banzai, just let them be, it's obvious that they both seem to love eachother, and we can't just get in the way of that. Even if she's confused, she will understand what's going on." said Shenzi.
Banzai nodded, he then lied down on the floor with Shenzi on his side. Then fell asleep.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Nov 8, 2009 11:23:33 GMT -5
Very good chapter LoL! So I see the love has started somewhat between Maria and Logan. And thats great you even put a little spanish in the story as well.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 8, 2009 11:37:04 GMT -5
Thanx Smartguy. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 8, 2009 13:29:16 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 8, 2009 15:50:16 GMT -5
Chapter: 12
Morning arrived, Maria was looking at the waves flowing by.
"You ok?" someone asked.
Maria looked at the side, and it was Shelbi, with worry eyes. She didn't say anything, but sighed and nodded.
"You sure?" Shelbi asked.
Maria nodded. Shelbi pat on her back, then left. Shenzi came to her and looked at her.
"I know what you and Logan did last night." said Shenzi.
"It's just soo....confusing." Maria said, before she groaned.
"I know it is, but you just can't do anything about it." said Shenzi.
"Shenzi, when Banzai told you that he likes you, weren't you surprised?" Maria asked.
"Well, yes, I was. I thought no one liked me cause of the way I am, but when he told me that, I just didn't know what to say, but I loved him as well." said Shenzi.
Shenzi moaned in pain. Maria looks at her.
"Dont worry, I'm ok, it's just the hyena cubs kicking, man, they are such kickers." Shenzi said, while she rubbed her stomach.
"Maybe you should be with Banzai." said Maria.
Shenzi nodded, and headed to Banzai. She closed her eyes. She then felt someone's hand on hers. Maria looks to the side, and saw Logan.
"Hey..." said Logan.
Maria looks away, and puts her hand on arm. Logan bring her closer to him, and gave her a hug.
"I'm sorry." Logan whispered.
He then gave her a kiss on the cheek, then left. Killer came and cocked an eyebrow at him.
"That's sissy stuff." said Killer.
"I think it's sweet." said Maria, then smiled.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Nov 8, 2009 17:53:50 GMT -5
Well done LoL on chapter 12 its turning into a love story for now
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