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Post by Fisi on Nov 8, 2009 18:18:06 GMT -5
THANX GUYS!!!
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Cobrawolf
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This is why you Never Work with Family
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Post by Cobrawolf on Nov 11, 2009 18:21:24 GMT -5
Nice Fic
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Post by Fisi on Nov 11, 2009 19:45:03 GMT -5
Thanx Cobrawolf. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 11, 2009 19:47:07 GMT -5
Chapter: 13
" 'EYAH GUYS, I SPOT LAND!!!" Vidia yelled.
"Thats good, we should stop there for food and supplies." said Maria.
As soon as the ship stopped at the shoreline, they began looking around.
"Not bad, we should stop here for awhile." said Shelbi.
"Exactly, where are we?" Jeff asked.
Vidia began to lick the sand, she stopped and think for a minute.
"India." said Vidia.
"Huh?" everyone said, cocking their heads to the side.
"We're in India mates." said Vidia.
"But, how do you know?" Jeff asked.
"Easy, she just licks the land she's standing on. But I could never understand why though." said Shelbi.
"It's a gift." Vidia said, before she shrugs.
"We should go, I'm starving." said Maria.
"But, wait, what about the hyenas?" Logan asked.
"What about them?" Shelbi asked.
"Whats gonna happen if people see them?" Logan asked.
Maria gasped, then looked at the hyenas. She can never want to imagine bad things happening to the hyenas.
"Then, they can wait at the ship with Zazu." said Shelbi.
"WHAT?!? DO YOU KNOW WHATS GONNA HAPPEN IF I STAY WITH THEM, IT'S HORNBILL FOR BREAKFEAST!!!" Zazu yelled.
"Mmm, hornbill..thats tastey." Banzai said, before he licks his chops.
"I agree." said Tails, then looks up at Shelbi.
"Look, the hyenas are not gonna eat you, sure they'll try, but I promise you, they won't." said Maria.
She then looked to the hyenas.
"Will you guy's promise me, not to eat Zazu?" Maria asked.
"Yeah, sure, we won't." said Shenzi.
"Thats good, they'll guard the ship, now c'mon, I wanna eat already." said Shelbi.
They nodded their heads and began walking to a near by place to eat. After when they all finish eating, Maria was holding a bag full of chicken and bones, and for Zazu, birdseeds.
"Man, I'm full." said Techna.
"*burped* You can say that again." said Killer, then licked his paws.
"Well, now that we eaten, I say we should split up and get some supplies." said Shelbi.
"I'm gonna go back to the ship." said Vidia.
"Great, can you bring these to them?" Maria asked.
"Sure, why not." said Vidia, then took the bag and left.
"Ok, I'll go with Maria, Tails goes with Meg, and Jeff, Killer, and Wild dog boy can go together." said Shelbi.
Logan narrowed his eyes at her. Shelbi smirked at him. They all began looking around for the supplies they need. It was hard for them cause of all the markets.
"Hello there, would you like to buy this beautiful necklace?" a market lady asked.
"No thank you." said Maria.
They stopped and saw a tree, full of some sort of red necklace or ribbons on the tree. The two teenage girls saw an old man, playing a flute.
"Uh, excuse me sir, what are you selling?" Maria asked.
He stopped playing the flute, and looked at the girls.
"Anything, rope, barrels, fruits, rootbeer, and these wishing red ribbons." said the old man.
"Well take the rope, fruits, and some rootbeer." said Shelbi.
"Excuse me, but what do they do?" Maria asked.
"They grant a wish you make, but it is only one wish. You whisper to the ribbon your wish and wait for it to come true." said the old man, while he passed the supplies to Shelbi.
She nodded, and took some money out of her back pocket. The old man reached for the nearest tree branch, grab the red ribbon, and gave it to Maria. Maria paid and put the ribbon on her back pocket, then Shelbi paid the old man. An elephant then appear behind him.
"This is Rajaa." said the old man.
"Thanks, we better go." said Shelbi.
"Did you hear about the parade?" the old man asked.
They stopped and cocked a brow at him.
"What parade?" Maria asked.
"Theres a parade at the streets." said the old man.
"Uh, thanks, we'll check it out." said Shelbi.
The two teenage girl left. While they were walking Maria was drinking rootbeer, and threw it at the trash.
"We should go and look for the guy's already." said Maria.
"Yeah, but let's check the parade first, it sounds fun." said Shelbi.
Maria nodded. When they were walking to the streets, they saw the parade passing by.
"Wow, the old man wasn't kidding." said Shelbi.
Maria wasn't listening. She looked at Maria.
"Are you ok?" Shelbi asked.
"I found Jeff and Logan." said Maria.
Shelbi looked at Maria's direction and saw Jeff and Logan too, but with a female Indian dancer with golden robes around her body.
"Dont worry about it, she's just a dancer, she is only doing that for the parade." said Shelbi.
The dancer then began dancing around Logan, bringing him close to her. Maria was mad, she know what exactly to do, scare the dancer and yelled at Logan for not moving her away from her, but she knew it was just a thought. Maria quickly ran as fast as she could to where the old man was.
"Excuse me sir, can I use Rajaa for minute." said Maria.
"Yes, but make sure you bring him back." said the old man.
"Dont worry I will." Maria said, then got on the elephants back.
She whispered something to the elephants ear. Rajaa nodded, and began running to the streets. As the elephant was running towards the people of the streets where the parade was, they began to scream and ran. Shelbi looked at the elephant, then notice who was ontop of it.
"MARIA?!?" Shelbi asked.
"No time, Shelbi, gotta teach someone a lesson." said Maria.
Rajaa ran to where the guy's and the dancer was. She yelled and ran away, while Jeff and Logan looked up. Logan made an innocent smile.
"Not cool." said Maria, then they left.
"She's right, you should have back her away from you, not cool, man, not cool." said Shelbi, before she walked to them then crossed her arms.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Nov 12, 2009 0:33:07 GMT -5
Nice chapter LoL! Maria was wrong to do what she did but Logan sould have not done what he did Maria is going to let Logan have it. keep up the good work
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Post by Fisi on Nov 12, 2009 6:55:21 GMT -5
Thanx Smartguy. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 12, 2009 15:53:50 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 13, 2009 16:09:27 GMT -5
Chapter: 14
"I'm really sorry I have to use you for this, I never done this before." said Maria.
"It's ok, you were just mad." said Rajaa, who has an Indian accent.
As Rajaa stops at the tree with ribbons he puts her down. She waved goodbye and left. As she was walking, she heard laughing. Maria quickly began running to where it came from. She walked to the shoreline and into the boat and saw Vidia laughing at Zazu, as he was being chased by Shenzi, Banzai, and Ed. Shenzi eat Zazu. She glared at Vidia, who crossed her arms and muttered "not my fault".
"Shenzi, drop him." said Maria.
"Impecable timing, Maria." said Zazu, his beak out of Shenzi's mouth.
She spit him out. Zazu fell, and had his feathers covered in drool. She sighed and headed inside, leaving the hyenas, Zazu, and Vidia puzzled.
"Hey, whats wrong with her?" Shenzi asked.
"*shrugs* It ain't my problem." said Vidia, taking another cigarette from her hat.
Shenzi ignored what she said, and scratched the door.
"Go away." said Maria.
"Now, Maria, let me in." said Shenzi.
She opened the door a little wide. Shenzi entered, her ears flatten when she sees Maria crying on her pillow.
"Listen, if it's about the whole "us chasing that bird", then we're sorry, we were just having a little fun, we already eat." said Shenzi.
"Thats not why." said Maria.
"Then, why?" Shenzi.
"Cause, I just saw Logan and..." said Maria, as she cried some more.
Shenzi came and puts her paw on her leg.
"Look, maybe, I don't know, theres a reason he might have did." said Shenzi.
Maria sat up and wiped some tears away from her eyes. She patted Shenzi's head and then came out. When she did, she saw Shelbi and the others.
"MARIA! THANK GOODNESS, WE WERE LOOKING FOR YOU!." Shelbi yelled.
"I was at the ship, I was tired." said Maria.
Logan came to Maria, he puts his hand on her shoulder. She tried looking away.
"I'm sorry, what happened back there was nothing, I was about to push her away, I'm just trying to say I'm sorry." said Logan, looking at her sad eyes.
Maria gave her a warm smile and hugged him.
"It's ok, I'm sorry about the-." Maria began.
"Forget about it, I understand." said Logan.
"CAN WE LEAVE?!?" Vidia asked.
Everyone looked at her.
"WHAT?!? I WANNA LEAVE I'M BORED, YOU CANT BLAME ME!!!" Vidia yelled.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 13, 2009 17:03:14 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 13, 2009 18:28:10 GMT -5
Chapter: 15
"She's right, we should go." said Jeff.
"WAIT?!?" someone yelled.
All heads were turned to the sky, as they watch a guy, an alien to their guess, with black wings flying down to land on the ship. He has purple cat like ears, his face is cat like which is also purple, he has lizard like tongue that snaked out of his mouth, and has icy blue eyes, wearing ripped up baggy jeans with a lose silver belt.
"Who are you?" Techna asked, cocking her head to the side.
"My name is Martin Torres I'm was working at that restuarant you guy's were eating." said Martin.
"COOOL! DOES YOUR PLANET EAT BRAINS, ARE YOU HERE TO DESTROY OUR PLANET?!?" Killer asked.
"KILLER!!!" Shenzi yelled.
"WHAT?!? HE LOOKS SO COOL, AND THIS IS MY FIRST TIME MEETING AN ALIEN!!!" said Killer.
"It's ok, and no, I only came here cause I wanna, and no, people like me don't eat brains." said Martin.
"Oh...DO YOU HAVE A FLYING SAUSER?!?" Killer asked.
"Ok, thats enough questions for now." said Maria.
"Why are you here?" Shelbi asked.
"Cause, I wanna join you guy's, I'm bored staying here, so can I come with you guy's?" Martin asked.
"Sure." said Shelbi.
"Thanks, and what are their names ." said Martin.
"This is Maria, Tails, Meg, Shenzi, Banzai, Ed, Techna, Vidia, Zazu, Jeff, and Wild dog boy ." said Shelbi.
"Ignore the Wild dog boy thing, I'm Logan." said Logan.
Martin nodded, Maria snickered a little when she saw Shelbi began looking at his icy blue eyes.
"What?" Shelbi asked, noticing Maria was watching her.
"*snickered* Nothing. Let's just go before Vidia gets angry." said Maria.
Shelbi nodded, even though Maria was watching her looking at his eyes. So they began to sail off.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Nov 13, 2009 18:50:10 GMT -5
Cool. ^^
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Post by Fisi on Nov 13, 2009 18:55:58 GMT -5
Thanx Sunraye. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 14, 2009 13:10:35 GMT -5
Chapter: 16
As the they sail across the sea, Maria didn't do anything but stare at the clouds. Shelbi, who was next to her, did the same thing.
"Hey, Shelbi, have you ever get the feeling when you did something your not supposed to?" Maria asked.
Shelbi, didn't say anything, she put her head down, then stare at the ocean.
"You ok?" Maria asked.
"Yeah, I'm ok, just bored." said Shelbi.
"Me too." said Maria.
"Why, did you do something like that?" Shelbi asked.
"I did, I ran away from home, took my fathers credit card, and took an airplane to Africa." said Maria.
"That sounds a little bit like what Vanessa would do." said Shelbi.
"I know, the guilt kills me, she warned me not to go and well...I did anyway." said Maria.
"You aren't ussually like this." said Shelbi.
"I know, but when I return, they'll probably yell at me." said Maria, then she looked at the sea.
"Your parents wouldn't do that, they'll probably tell you how much they miss you or how worry they are." said Shelbi.
"Yeah, I guess so." said Maria.
She quickly sighed and walk to the hyenas, and patted on their heads. She didn't do anything but smile and said nothing.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Nov 14, 2009 19:16:26 GMT -5
Nice work LoL the chapter are going well for you I see
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Post by Fisi on Nov 14, 2009 19:19:48 GMT -5
Thanx Guys. ^_^.
Ok, I will rename the chappie.
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