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Post by KrazyRandomness on Oct 30, 2009 23:42:33 GMT -5
^_^
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Post by Fisi on Oct 31, 2009 5:19:10 GMT -5
Thanx Sunraye. ^_^.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Oct 31, 2009 16:14:56 GMT -5
Chapter: 3 Getting good now Maria hopes nothing is over on the darkside of the Pridelands. I don't no there is always somthing there can not be nothing nice work keep it up Your Weasel Friend, SmartGuy
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Post by Fisi on Oct 31, 2009 16:36:49 GMT -5
Thanx Smartguy. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Oct 31, 2009 17:13:29 GMT -5
Chapter: 4
Maria and Shelbi came to the darkside of the Pridelands. It had bones all over the place, cracks, and dead trees.
"Man, this place look creepy." said Shelbi.
"Yeah, even worser thane the elephant graveyard." said Maria.
They heard growling. They turned around, but nothing was there.
"What was that?" Maria asked.
"I don't know, but let's keep searching." said Shelbi.
Maria nodded and continued searching. But then, three Wild dogs came, one was fat, one had fleas, while the other was in the middle.
"Lookie here, some trespassers." said the one in the middle.
"Yeah." said the fat one, licking his chops.
"Oh great, Wild dogs." Maria said, while she rolled her eyes.
"And you know what's even greater? You two for DINNER!!!" said the one in the middle, then he ran towards them.
Maria transformed into a black wolf and began to pounce at him. Two of them came to Shelbi. She took her sword out from the side.
"STAY BACK!!!" Shelbi yelled.
More and more came, Maria and Shelbi were both surrounded. The fat one came towards Maria, he tried to scratch her, but miss. Then he pounced at her, she couldn't get him off at the strengh he's pushing her down.
"STOP!!!" someone yelled.
All heads were turned to one Wild dog. He came and pushed the fat one away from her.
"Who are they?" the leader, to Maria and Shelbi's guess, asked.
"Their trespassers, their probably here to destroy us." said the one with fleas.
"*rolled his eyes* Thats what you always say when someone comes here." said the leader, then turned to Maria and Shelbi.
"You ok?" the leader asked.
"OK? OK? WE ALMOST GOT ATTACK BY WILD DOGS AND YOU ASK US IF WE'RE OK?" Shelbi asked.
He shrugged, then he trnasformed into a human teenage boy. He had black hair, amber eyes, tan skin, and wearing a black shirt, red skinny jeans, black and red hightops, and a piercing on his left ear which earring was a red lightning bolt. They both looked at eachother then at him. Maria transformed back into herself. At first, his eyes widen as he saw her form into herself, but then smirked.
"So, your one too?" the leader asked.
Maria nodded, as an answer to his question.
"Names Logan Alpha, I'm the leader of the pack." said Logan.
"My named Maria Isabel Valiant." said Maria.
"Smith." muttered Shelbi.
"What you guy's came here for?" Logan asked.
"We came here to-." Maria began.
"We came here to ask you if you would like to come to her treehouse." said Shelbi.
"Sorry, can't, I'm excile." said Logan.
"You mean, your an outsider?" Maria asked.
He nodded to her question.
"Well, we better go." said Maria.
They left, leaving Logan standing there. He gotta admit, Maria don't look too bad, he wish he could, but can't since he's excile from the Pridelands, so he walked back to his pack.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Oct 31, 2009 18:51:08 GMT -5
WOW! that was almost a close one if logan had not come to them it would of been dinner time for da dogs vere nice chapter.
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Post by Fisi on Oct 31, 2009 20:02:10 GMT -5
Thanx Smartguy. ^_^.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Oct 31, 2009 21:30:14 GMT -5
I see you added some stuff. Cool.
Smartguy: Could you read "Dead Men Tell No Tells"?
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Post by Fisi on Nov 1, 2009 7:18:02 GMT -5
Thanx Sunraye. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 1, 2009 14:19:41 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 1, 2009 16:57:22 GMT -5
Chapter: 5
"Why did you ask him that?" Maria asked.
"Cause I saw the way he looked at you, besides didn't you say that you wanted a guy to understand your problems?" Shelbi asked.
"Yeah, but he's with the Wild dogs." said Maria.
"Whats wrong with Wild dogs?" Shelbi asked.
Maria turned and showed Shelbi her left arm of a scratch mark.
"The last time I was with a Wild dog, it scratched me on my left arm when I was just rescueing from a crocodile." said Maria.
"Wow, you must have been mad." said Shelbi.
"Well, not mad, but at least it's almost gone." said Maria.
When they entered Maria's treehouse, the hyenas looked at Maria worried.
"Where have you been?" Shenzi asked.
"I was out to ask Rafiki, met Shelbi, went to the darkside-." Maria began.
"YOU MEAN WHERE THOSE WILD DOGS ARE?!?" Banzai asked.
"Yeah, and I met someone who can transform into an animal." said Maria.
"YOU KNOW VERY WELL NOT TO GO TO THAT PLACE, THEY WOULD HAVE KILLED YOU!!!" Shenzi yelled.
Ed laughed a little and nodded.
"But I didn't , Logan saved me and Shelbi." said Maria.
Banzai's eyes widen.
"And who's Logan?" Banzai asked.
"A boy Maria just met who probably got an interest to her." said Shelbi.
"Sissy." Killer muttered.
Banzai was about to say something but Shenzi stopped him.
"Maybe you should go out and get us something to eat, it's your turn you know." said Shenzi.
Banzai groaned and left. Shenzi turned to Maria with her arms crossed, but didn't look mad.
"It's great you found someone like you and he saved you from those Wild dogs but next time at least tell us where your going." said Shenzi.
"Ok." said Maria.
"Whats wrong with Banzai?" Shelbi asked.
*shrugged* I don't know, maybe all that worry made him act like your father or something." said Shenzi.
Shelbi nodded and sat at the couch, Maria stood there with a smile across her face.
"Shenzi are you pregnant?" Maria asked.
"You could say that...and Techna's pregnant too." said Shenzi.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Nov 1, 2009 17:17:40 GMT -5
Nice Chapter
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Post by Fisi on Nov 1, 2009 18:46:28 GMT -5
Thanx Smartguy. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 2, 2009 18:37:02 GMT -5
Chapter: 6
Maria suddenly heard screaming, then heard scratching from the door. She opened it, and it was Banzai.
"So soon?" Maria asked.
"HE'S GONNA EAT ME!!!" Banzai yelled, then went inside.
Puzzled, she looked at him first then looked down. She saw the same white lion from her dream, it was probably the same boy from her dream. Maria went down and looks at the white lion.
"Can you transform into an animal too?" Maria asked.
The white lion eyes widen.
"How did you-." the white lion began.
"It was a guess." Maria said, knowing it wasn't.
The white lion form into the same boy from her dream. Shelbi came down, and had her face puzzled.
"Who the heck is he?" Shelbi asked.
"Sorry, my names Jeff Reagen." said Jeff.
"Can he form into a-." Shelbi began.
Maria nodded, as an answer to her question. Jeff stayed silent.
"Uh, do you wanna come inside?" Maria asked.
"Sure." said Jeff.
They went inside, everyone stared at Jeff, but Banzai pounced on Jeff and growled.
"YOU BETTER GIVE ME A GOOD REASON FOR ME NOT TO KILL YOU, YOU WILD DOG BOY!!!" Banzai yelled.
"Uh, Banzai, thats not the guy that can form into a Wild dog." said Shelbi.
Banzai muttered something, then got off of him.
"Anyway, why did you chase him?" Maria asked.
"I was hungry, sorry." said Jeff.
Maria turned and looked at Shelbi.
"Who's with you?" Maria asked.
"Some friends of mine and some other friends of mine that isn't suppose to come." said Shelbi.
"Please tell me Tails isn't here." said Maria.
Shelbi nodded. When the girls turned to see Killer, he wasn't there.
"Oh great, Killer is probably searching for Tails just to get a good run right now." said Shelbi.
"We should go, just in case." said Maria.
The two teenage girls, the hyenas, Techna, and Jeff, who was confused, went out.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Nov 2, 2009 19:59:51 GMT -5
Very well done hats off to you LoL so this dream has come ture
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