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Post by Fisi on Nov 2, 2009 20:01:01 GMT -5
Gracias. ^_^.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Nov 2, 2009 20:03:04 GMT -5
bienvenido
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Post by Fisi on Nov 4, 2009 18:37:05 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 5, 2009 13:23:53 GMT -5
Chapter: 7
They began searching at the Kenyan beach, where they saw a rowboat. Shelbi came to the rowboat and saw Meg's paw on Killer's tail while Tails smirked.
"I say Meg, you should do this more often with Killer." said Tails.
"I'm just doing this cause I was bored." said Meg.
Meg let go of Killer, making him roll and fall on his back. Vidia, was doing nothing but smoking a cigarette. Shelbi shook her head, but then she looks at Maria, who face was puzzled.
"Odd, why would a pirate ship be here?" Maria asked.
"What pirate ship?'' Shelbi asked.
"I don't know, but it says "Scythes'' on it.'' said Maria. "C'mon, we better go back." said Shelbi.
"But why?" Maria asked.
"LETS GO, QUICK!!!" Shelbi yelled.
They did as they were told and ran back. Vidia, Meg, and Tails followed. As they ran back to Maria's treehut, Shelbi began locking the door. She took out the green metal cube, she whispered something to it, and it began to transform into a telescope. When she looked out of the window her eyes widen, realizing what pirate ship was.
"Scythes'' Shelbi said under her breath.
"Shelbi, whats wrong?" Maria asked, walking towards Shelbi while her eyes worried.
"We have to keep low for now." said Shelbi.
Maria was confused, she walked up to the window and gasped as she saw that the pirates began setting the grassy meadow on fire.
"OH NO, I GOTTA DO SOMETHING!!!" Maria yelled.
"Maria, I understand you have to, but right now we have to stay here, we're outnumbered." said Shelbi.
Shelbi was right, even if her friends helped, they would still be outnumbered. Maria watched at the ground as a pirate is gonna try to bomb the treehut. She gasped and kept her head down. As he was about to a Wild dog came and attacked him. Every single Wild dog came and attacked one of the pirates making them run away. After they all ran away, Maria opened the door and puzzled.
"What the heck was that all about?" Maria asked.
"I don't know, but who ever chased them away we should thank them." said Jeff.
They went down and saw the Wild dog form back into a human, which was Logan.
"Is everyone ok?" Logan asked.
"Yeah, we are...didn't you say that you were exile from here?" Shelbi asked.
"Yeah, we decided to help you guy's." said Logan.
"Who is he?" Banzai asked.
"Thats the guy who can form into a Wild dog." said Shelbi.
Banzai began to growl until Shenzi stopped him. Simba came running to them. When he saw Logan he growled underneath his breath.
"Why are you here?" Simba asked.
"I'm here cause me and my pack just saved their lives from the pirates, I know what me and my pack mates did was wrong in the past but forgive us at least." said Logan.
"*sighed* Well, you did save the Pridelands and the Serengeti as well and it wouldn't be fair if we didn't give you a chance since we gave the hyenas a second chance, so I guess you can stay." said Simba.
He then left, Maria walked up to Logan.
"Uh, thanks for saving me and my friends." said Maria while she rubs her arm.
"Your welcome." said Logan.
Logan looked up at the treehut, then he looked back at her.
"Is that your treehouse?" Logan asked.
"Yeah, it's her's, you wanna come in?" Shelbi asked.
"*shrugs* Why not." said Logan.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Nov 5, 2009 13:53:14 GMT -5
Nice Chapter LoL! its great that Logan and his pack mates helped them out before it got bad I am seeing love later on in a chapter with Maria and Logan
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Post by Fisi on Nov 5, 2009 14:06:04 GMT -5
Thanx Smartguy. ^_^.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Nov 5, 2009 17:42:24 GMT -5
Yes, as everyone has said, good chapter. ^^
Spikey: um, Spikey, if it wouldn't be much trouble, could you read Shelbi's side of the story? "Dead Men Tells No Tells?" I wrote it. You see, me and Maria are both working on this FanFiction. She writes Maria's POV and I write Shelbi's POV.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 5, 2009 17:57:02 GMT -5
Thanx guy's. ^_^.
Yup, me and Shelbi are working on our Pov's.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 5, 2009 23:01:45 GMT -5
Chapter: 8
"It's a good thing you came, if you haven't, we would have been bombed by that pirate." said Jeff.
"I didn't know about the pirates until Fatso came." said Logan.
Everyone stared at him weirdly. At first Logan didn't understand why, until he realized what he just said.
"Fatso is the fat Wild dog that attacked Maria, the others were Fleabag and Stretch." said Logan.
"Oh." Maria and Shelbi said in unison.
They entered the treehut, Logan went inside and looked.
"You did all this?" Logan asked.
Maria nodded to his question. She then turned and looked at Shelbi.
"By the way, where did you get that green metal cube that can form into a telescope?" Maria asked.
"It isn't really a telescope, it's one of my friends." said Shelbi.
She took out the cube and then it formed into a small green metal robot.
"This is Screech, he's one of my friends, he helps me in battles and other pirate stuff." said Shelbi.
"Greetings, you must be Maria." said Screech.
"*giggling* He's kinda cute for a small robot." said Maria, then shook his metal hand.
Vidia sat next to Jeff and began to smoke. Jeff coughed a little, after he smelled the smoke. Shenzi came and slapped the cigarrette out of Vidia's hand.
" 'EY!!!" Vidia yelled.
"Don't hey me, you can't smoke here." said Shenzi, then left.
"Pfft, I can smoke whenever I want." Vidia muttered.
Maria watch as Logan was searching. She came to him and puzzled.
"What are you doing?" Maria asked.
"I'm looking for my silver rock." said Logan.
"Rock?" Maria asked.
"Yeah, it's a special kind of rock that is valueble, I carry it with me sometimes." said Logan.
"So, how did you lost it?" Maria asked.
"I don't know, all I know is Shelbi came to- ." Logan began.
He stopped and looked at Shelbi who was whistleling.
"What?" Shelbi asked.
"Give it." said Logan.
She handed out the silver rock and gave it to him while she muttered. Maria then tries to whistle but was spitting.
"Man, I can't whistle." said Maria.
"You can't?" Logan asked.
Maria shook her head.
"Well, I can teach you, just perch your lips." said Logan.
"Like this." Maria said, then perched her lips.
"Good, now blow." said Logan.
Maria then whistled, well more like blowing.
"Dont worry, you'll get it." said Logan, then winked and left to sit next to Jeff.
Shelbi smirked at Maria. Maria gave her a serious face.
"What?" Maria asked.
"*snickered* Nothing." said Shelbi.
"Why did you stole a silver rock?" Maria asked.
"What can I say, I like anything valueble, Im a pirate and I like treasure." said Shelbi.
"Still, a rock, really?" Maria asked.
Shelbi shrugged and Maria giggled.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Nov 5, 2009 23:16:05 GMT -5
good chapter LoL I thought that logan was going to form into a wild dog and attack Shelbi for the rock its good that he did not it sounds like he was by him self
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Post by Fisi on Nov 6, 2009 6:51:07 GMT -5
Thanx guy's. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Nov 7, 2009 15:36:22 GMT -5
Chapter: 9
Zazu flew inside and fell on the floor. Tails stared at the hornbill. Zazu stood up and dusted himself off.
"It better be a good reason why I should-." Zazu began, but stopped when he heard a meow.
Zazu turned and saw Tails in his pouncing position. Tails began chasing him around the living room. Zazu flew to Maria's shoulder and hold on to her neck while he looks at Tails. She crossed her arms at him while she gave him a serious look on her face.
"And you wondered why Killer chases you." said Maria.
"Can't help it if I'm hungry, besides that mutt does it for fun." Tails said, then walked to Shelbi, jumped on her lap, and sat down.
"You ok Zazu?" Maria asked.
"I am, but I am sent to you by Rafiki, he wants to talk to you." said Zazu.
She knew it gotta be something important that Rafiki would want to tell her. She sighed then turns to the hyenas.
"You guy's wanna come and wait for me?" Maria asked.
"Yeah, we'll come." said Shenzi.
"Us too." said Jeff.
"Vidia and Meg can wait for you too." said Shelbi.
"WHAT?!?" Meg and Vidia asked, not actually believing she said that.
"You heard me, your going to wait for her as well." said Shelbi.
"But, aren't you gonna wait for her too?" Meg asked.
"I have to do something." said Shelbi.
"But what are you gonna do?" Maria asked.
"Something important, Tails and Screech are coming with me." said Shelbi.
"Why am I'm not surprise." said Vidia.
Shelbi glared, then left with Screech and Tails. Maria and the others walked to the baboa tree.
"Good luck." said Banzai.
She gave him a little smile, then she entered. When she did, Rafiki stood there.
"Maria, thank goodness your here, I am sensing great danger." said Rafiki.
"Danger?" Maria asked.
"Yes, the pirates were just the beginning, you and your friends most get out of here so you can stop it." said Rafiki.
"But, where?" Maria asked.
"I don't know, but you must look for it." said Rafiki.
Maria looked down. Rafiki walked to her and puts his hand on her shoulder.
"I know it's hard, but you and guardians of Africa must." said Rafiki.
"Guardians?" Maria asked.
"I heard you found them, so that is what you and the others are called." said Rafiki.
Maria thanked Rafiki then left. They saw Maria come out and rushed to her.
"So, what happened?" Jeff asked.
"We have to get out of here, so we can look for something that was supposed to be "danger" to us." said Maria.
"Danger? WHAT DANGER?!?" Logan asked.
"WELL I DONT KNOW LOGAN!!! But we have to go and look for it." said Maria.
They then heard a whistle. They rush to where it came from. When they stopped at the shoreline, Maria was shocked when she saw the same pirate ship, but this time Shelbi was in it.
"SHELBI?!?" Maria yelled.
Shelbi, unnoticed, saw Maria and stopped the ship.
"Hey guy's." said Shelbi.
"Shelbi, what in the-." Maria began.
"Surprised, huh?" Shelbi asked.
"Uh, Shelbi, can we come to the ship?" Maria asked.
"Yeah, but where?" Shelbi asked.
"Anywhere." said Maria.
They then walked to the ship. Shelbi then began to start ship, and sailed off.
"Hey Logan, what about your pack?" Maria asked.
"Dont worry, I left another Wild dog name Macavaty in charge, so he'll be the leader until I get back." said Logan.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Nov 7, 2009 15:46:06 GMT -5
Nice Chapter its not cool they have to go away I hope they can come back
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Post by Fisi on Nov 7, 2009 16:28:32 GMT -5
Thanx Smartguy. ^_^.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Nov 7, 2009 16:40:15 GMT -5
Your Welcome LoL
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