Detective S.W. and the Weasel case

[Sewer Weasel]

My first fan fic

[netske]

And where is the fic?

[Sewer Weasel]

I was walking into the airport. Flying ta L.A. Natalie came running up to me...
"Where the *bleep* are the others?!" Natalie screams at me.
"Uh, Nat, how much coffee didja have today?" I asked.
"What coffee?"
"*sigh* Never mind. Raichu and the little lazy nut should be here in a few minutes. And Sydia shall be here.. Well, she actually should of been here, like, 20 minutes ago."
Natalie goes and sits on a chair. I stand around, waiting for my gang. My gang is something unusual. 2 Toons, 2 humans, not including me. The Toon's names are Raichu, of which if I am correct means 'Thunder-Idiot', and Vaporeon, a real lazy aquatic-cat thing. Raichu is 2 feet 4 inches tall, and Vapor is 1 foot 3 inches. Raichu is orange with yellow, round cheecks, and Vapor has blue scales and webbed feet. Raichu can run super fast, although when she runs too fast, she hurts herself. Vapor is a terrific swimmer, but not able to breathe underwater. She may hold her breath up to two hours tops. The humans are Natalie, sometimes refered to as Chitterchatter, or just plain Chatter. She wears a navy-blue sweatshirt, like joggers wear, jeans, and black and white sneakers. She is the most talkitive and likes to laugh. Alot. She has black hair, and is portereacan. Sydia, known to as Sqeacky because she makes everyone crackup to her little line, "Sqeack, sqeack, eeeeeeeh! Oops, lost my sqeacker!", and talks very fast. She is a rapper, and can make up funny little jokes all the time. She wears a white sweater, the arms so long you can't see her hands most of the time. She also wear a gold modallian on her neck. Her pants are black, with little plastic silver gemstones around the pockets. Chesnut hair, freckles, and almost always smiling, like after four years of only clothes at christmas, ya finally got what you wanted. I am known as S.W., and I am leader. I wear a black, silkey top with a silver skull on it. I wear faded jeans, and black and red sneakers. I like my hair cut short, almost like a boy's. My hair is chesnut/honey, and, sadly, I have freckles. I make alot of smart remarks, But I am a bit slow. I am determined to do any thing.
The others finally arive.
"You're late. I dunno bout you, but I'M getting on the plane BEFORE it takes off." I said, walking towards the tunnel leading to flight 92, L.A. "Who's with me?"
"Meeeeeee!" Natalie screamed, running in the tunnel-thing.
"NATALIE!!!!!" I yelled into the tunnel. "GET YOUR BUTT BACK OVER HERE!!!!"
Sydia glances at Raichu, who is staring blankly, head tilted to one side, at me. Vaporeon yawns. Without anouther word, we get on the plane that takes us to our destination.

[Sewer Weasel]

Sorry, i type slow

[netske]

Well, its an interesting start. Dont worry about typing slow.

[Sewer Weasel]

And thanks

[Sewer Weasel]

also, Natalie and Sydia are my real friends

[netske]

Really! Cool!

[Sewer Weasel]

Chapter 2


We are in L.A., after a two-hour plane ride from Chicago.
"Guys, the main reason we are here is to pick up some clues about Doom and The Weasels. Chatter, no goofing off. Same for you, Raichu. Sydia, pair up with Raichu. Natalie, you are with Vapor. I'm alone. Got it?" Everybody nods. "Good. Sydia, Raichu, check the places Doom has been. Like, the factory, that bank in Toontown, ect. Chatter, Vapor, check out Toontown-"
"Awwwwwwwwwwww, I wanna go to Toontown! Pleeeeeeeeaaaase?" Raichu complained.
"Fine. But I'm warning you, NO GOOFING OFF. So Natalie, I guess you'll just check the Doom spots, O.K.? I, on the other hand, am gonna search the factory for a weasel hair or somethin' that could help us fugure this out. O.K., Mark-" What I was gonna say was, 'Mark your spots before you go', but it didn't really work out that way...
"Set-" Sydia said quickly.
"Bye, bye!" Raichu marches off with Sydia, and Nat with Vapor head toward the downtown area. I start out to the factory. I think, 'This is gonna be one long day.'

Sorry this is so short! I hope you like it!

[Sewer Weasel]

I wonder what I should type next.. This is harder then I thought.

[netske]

And the 2nd chapter is cool. Dont worry what its short. I sometimes write shorter.

[Sewer Weasel]

I take out my map of L.A. I got from an airport manager. "Aw, no. The factory is miles from here! I can't walk that far!" I say.
A yellow toon cab apparently heard me, because it wheels up to me and says, "You need a lift?"
I get on, tell him my destination, and we speed off. We arrive at the old factory. On top of the doorway, it said, 'Acme Warehouse'.
I pay the cab and start looking. It looked like they put the walls back up, but they havent cleaned up Doom yet. Doom's puddle, I mean. The place was covered with cobwebs. I notice that in a corner, behind some boxes, somebody hid Greasy's body...

TO BE CONTINUED

[netske]

Well, its interesting to know what did you done when you saw Grease's body.

[Eternity]

Not bad, keep going.

[Sewer Weasel]

Meanwhile.......

RAICHU'S POV

"Hmmmm.... And THEN-" Sydia was interupted by a half-hearted snore.
"This is BORING. When are we gonna do something fun, like beat up someone?"
"YOU WANNA BEATUP A INNOCENT VICTIM???!!!"
"NO!!! I meant badguys," Replied Raichu.
"Oh........."
"How longer is Tunatown?" Asked Raichu.
"I think we's almost there. And it's 'Toon Town', not 'Tunatown."
"Oh."
They came upon a dark tunnel. Above it, they could see a witch flying around a very annoyed-looking moon, going "HEEEEHEEHEEHEEEEHE!!!". A cloud pulled out what looked like a lightning bolt, and threw it at the witch, who tumbled off her broom. The moon started to snore, but a yellow hand reached up and pulled on what looked like one of those blind handels, old-fasioned, and the night sky came curling up, revealing a light blue, daytime sky, with the smiling sun. The sun yawned and pulled out a alarm clock, twisted it, making it ring loudly, and pulled it down so as to wake up everyone.
Sydia and Raichu started thru the tunnel.


TO BE CONTINUED.