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Post by Sewer Weasel on Dec 1, 2007 16:58:14 GMT -5
has anyone read Raichu's POV yet???
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Post by Sewer Weasel on Dec 4, 2007 11:48:30 GMT -5
No one is reading what I wrote, are they???
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Post by netske on Dec 4, 2007 12:05:34 GMT -5
Very interesting chapter.
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Post by latias on Dec 7, 2007 21:08:05 GMT -5
Cool!! You used Raichu from Pokemon!!
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Post by Sewer Weasel on Dec 12, 2007 12:23:51 GMT -5
Yeah, uh, I'm a pokemon lover, too
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Post by Sewer Weasel on Jan 4, 2008 17:03:02 GMT -5
VAPOREON'S POV
"*SIIIIIIIIGH* Okay, let's go, there's nothing here. Come, come on!" Vaporeon told Natalie. Natalie was looking thru some old folders. Doom's picture was on a few of the papers inside.
"Chillax, will you? If Boss says to find a clue, I don't waste time."
"Yes, I can see that." Vaporeon gave Natalie a annoyed look. "Well, we looked thru almost everything here. Isn't that enough?"
"NO!!! We looked thru ALMOST everything."
"I know.." Said Vapor, not catching the drift.
"SOOOO I'm gonna look thru everything, and I'll stop when there's nothing left." Natalie flashed Vapor a look. "And shutup, I'm TRYING to read."
"How bout YOU do that next time I'm trying to read," Came the reply, but she shutup.
Natalie continued into the folders. Then something caught her eye. "Hey, hey, lookie here. I think Doom might of had a buisiness partner."
"Besides the Weasels??"
"Yeah."
Vaporeon takes a look at a man in his late 20's, early thirty's. The man had glasses almost identical to Doom's, and had a small mustache and a beard. He had pale 'skin' like Doom's, and unrealistic blue eyes. He was wearing a dark blue, over-sized sweater. Underneath there was a cream-colored shirt, collar and cuffs of the arms sticking out. The nose was much bigger than Doom's, however. Long and pointed, it had zits all over it.
"That's one dang ugly dude."
"That's only half of it. The guy has commited several crimes. Also a super-genius. I'm looking him up on my mini-laptop," Natalie told Vaporeon. She did so, and after 5 minutes of more reading, she said randomly, "His whereabouts are unknown. Dang it."
"Well, you can't expect it to say exactly where a secret lair could be, now can ya?"
"No, but it'd be really helpfull if this thing could actually pin-point a badguy once in a while."
"We should really tell S.W." Said Vaporeon.
"Duuuuh."
Vaporeon stuck out her tongue.
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Post by Sewer Weasel on Jan 4, 2008 17:34:14 GMT -5
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Post by Sewer Weasel on Jan 4, 2008 17:37:31 GMT -5
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Post by julayla on Jan 8, 2008 23:13:57 GMT -5
Looks good so far. Continue on.
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Post by Sewer Weasel on Jan 9, 2008 12:04:56 GMT -5
"Oooooooooooh," Raichu said, awed by the sight.
"Oh, snap."
Sydia and Raichu were standing in the just outside of Toon Town, in the toon world. The tunnel was behind them. On a nearby tree a bird seemed to have gotten tired of singing zipidee-doo-da, and is now singing the song, "Jailhouse Rock". Large buildings with faces were not far off. A few Toons were singing Smile, Darn Ya Smile. The witch was a couple yards away, bells above her head (Toons can get more than birds and stars) Sydia looked to her right. A brown mouse was chasing a cat with a mousetrap on its tail. Tom and Jerry of course. Sydia looked ahead of her, and saw Raichu making way to Toon Town Central.
"Hey, Dude, wait up!" Sydia called, running to catch up.
"It's pretty."
"Pretty crazy," Sydia remarked.
"Uh, yeah, that, too," Replied Raichu.
"Where are we going, shrimp?"
"I dunno, I never came here before. And don't call me shrimp."
"If you don't know where we are or where we're going, maybe we should get a tour guide."
"Yeah, RIGHT. Like that'll happen."
"Oh, so now YOU'RE the serious one. That just isn't right," Sydia told Raichu, who blinked and and murmured something about Sydia being grumpy.
"Don't we know where Roger lives? Maybe he can help."
"Yeah, when pigs fly." remarked Raichu. Then right in front of them, a pig with wings flew with three little piglets. Raichu blinked and gave out a sheepish look.
"What wrong with asking Roger, besides the fact we've never met him?"
"Uh, we are here to bring the weasels to justice. The WEASELS. You know, the guys that tried to kill him?"
Sydia laughed. "Well, yeah, that's a good point. We could, say, LIE to him."
"Well, I guess," Raichu said unsurely. Sydia sensed this, and tried to do the impossible: Get Raichu to trust her.
"He'll fall for it, no worries. Rabbits are stupid."
"Okay."
"Wait, you beleive me, just like that?"
"Just like what?"
Sydia snapped her fingers. "Like that."
"Uh, I guess?"
"You're weird."
"You're weird-ER."
"You're the weird-EST."
"Aw, man," Raichu said.
They came to a door on gingerbread lane. On the welcome matt said, "Here lives Roger R.".
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Cherubi
Recruit
Reddened by the sun
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Post by Cherubi on Jan 10, 2008 11:53:45 GMT -5
Really good! Keep going! And Hi. xD
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Post by Sewer Weasel on Jan 10, 2008 12:19:47 GMT -5
Thanks. And Hi. xD
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Post by Sewer Weasel on Jan 10, 2008 12:22:22 GMT -5
Holy......
SWEET ABRHAM LINCOLN'S MOTHER!!!
I JUST realized something.
(I'll tell you when somebody says 'What?')
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Post by Sewer Weasel on Jan 11, 2008 22:05:41 GMT -5
FINE, never mind. I just realized i'm a 'experienced member'.
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Post by Sewer Weasel on Jan 11, 2008 23:15:12 GMT -5
Walking to the Ink & Paint club, Sydia and Raichu went to find somewhere to cool off.
"Password?" A gorilla asks.
"Walt sent me? Or did it change?" A voice behind them said.
"Grrrrrrrrrrrrr.... come in..." The gorilla growled.
A group of teenagers rushed passed them. Sydia grinned at Raichu and started thru the door, only for the gorilla to stop them by starting to close the door. A mexican girl from the teen group, who looked about 13, grabbed the handel. Then she mumbled something to the ape, who growled again and opened the door wide for Sydia and Raichu. Then the girl smiled and ran off. Sydia glanced at Raichu, who winked, and with superspeed, ran inside. Sydia just shrugged, but after a few moments, walked thru, too. She started to follow suit, but then turned around and looked the gorilla up and down.
"Nice monkey suit."
"Wise ass," The gorilla grumbled.
Sydia snickered and walked quickly to Raichu, who was leaning against a large, wooden door, yawning.
"Man, you're slow," She teased.
"Yeah, and you've gots speed instead of brains. I actually THINK I'm lucky," Sydia commented. Raichu blinked few times and opened the door with amazing strength. I mean, the door was BIG. B-I-G. Anywho, music filled the air. This is was what was going on:
"Yeah, thi' the place ta be: Chipmunks on the M.I.C.! WITCH DOCTUH! Everybody can they do it?"
Sexy women started singing:
"Caaaan they do it??"
Bow Wow:
"Come on people let's get to it!"
Sexy women:
"Leeet's get to it!"
Bow Wow:
"Come on shake, come on roll! Everybody hit the flowa! Come on shake, come roll! Everybody hit the floor! HERE'S THE CHIPMUNKS, HERE WE GO!!!"
Sexy women:
"Heeere weee goooowooooo!!"
Alvin:
" I told the witch doctuh that I was in love with you! I went to the witch doctuh and she told meh what ta do! She said, "Ooh chickabee oohahahah walla walla bingbang"! She said, "Ooh chickabee oohahahah walla walla bingbang"! Ooh chickabee oohahahah walla walla bingbang! Ooh chickabee oohahahah walla walla bingbaaaang! YO DJ PUMP THIS PARTY!!!"
Bow Wow:
"Can they do it?"
Sexy women:
"Caaaan they doooo it?"
Bow Wow:
"Come on people let's get to it!"
Sexy women:
"Leeeet's get toooo it!"
Bow Wow:
"Come on shake, come on roll! Everybody hit the flowa! Come on shake, come roll! Everybody hit the floor! HERE WE GO!!!"
Sexy women:
"Heeeere we gooooowoooooo!"
Sydia and Raichu looked at each other , both clueless to what was happening. A penguin waiter came waddling up to them and showed them a empty table. Sydia and Raichu sat down at the empty table. The penguin then handed them a menu. Sydia handed the menu back.
"Er, we don't want anything," Sydia told the penguin. At that, it waddled away.
The song with the Chipmunks ended, and Music from Girlfreind by Avril Lavigne started play. The same mexican girl started singing: "HEY HEY! YOU YOU! I DON'T LIKE YOUR GIRLFRIEND! NO WAY, NO WAY, THINK YOU NEED A NEW ONE! HEY HEY! YOU YOU! I COULD BE YOUR GIRLFRIEND!"
A guy started playing the guitar, hard.
"HEY HEY! YOU YOU! I KNOW THAT YOU LIKE ME! YOU KNOW IT'S NOT A SECRET! HEY HEY! YOU YOU! I WANT TO BE YOUR GIRLFRIEND!"
The guy played the guitar hard again.
"You know what I used to find so delcious! I think about you all the time- You're so addictive! Don'tcha know what I can do to make ya feel alright?!............ Don't think that I'm so precious! OH, YEAH! OH, YEAAAAH! I'm the motherfuckin' princess!! I can tell you like me, too, and you know I'm right! SHE'S LIKE, SO WHATEVER! YOU COULD DO, SO MUCH BETTER! I THINK WE SHOULD GET TOGETHER NOOWOOW! AND THAT'S WHAT EVERYONE'S TALKING ABOUT!!!!!!!! HEY HEY! YOU YOU! I DON'T LIKE YOUR GIRLFRIEND! NO WAY, NO WAY, THINK YOU NEED A NEW ONE! HEY HEY! YOU YOU! I COULD BE YOUR GIRLFRIEND!"
The guy plays it hard again.
After the show, Sydia and Raichu agree she's really good, and both want to compliment her. They decide to go to her room. Sydia go up to a penguin waiter.
"Who's that girl that sang that?"
"I know her last name is Culpernit."
That was all Sydia needed to know. They snuck backstage and into a hall, and looked for a room that had "Culpernit" on it.
"Let's see..... Culsher, Culpernickel... Here, Culpernit!" Raichu said, pointing to a doorway. Indeed, there was a golden star with "Culpernit" imprinted on it.
This is special because the gang will get one more member...
TO BE CONTINUED
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