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Post by netske on Nov 15, 2007 7:02:16 GMT -5
WHERE IS THE CONTUNING?
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Post by netske on Nov 15, 2007 9:04:18 GMT -5
Ooops! Im sorry. Probably, its stupid of me.
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Post by weaselsrock on Nov 16, 2007 23:01:10 GMT -5
Sorry for updating after a month!!
Chapter 14
The Amazonian weasels and chihuahuas hugged the time travelers as they climbed into the Time Top.Zoe stopped Smartguy before he got on.
"You and your friends opened my eyes and stopped me from destroying my brother and friends.....I must know you're real name, so I can name my First-born son after you." said Zoe.Smartguy smiled.
"My name is David Samuel Sanders, my sister calls me Sam." Smartguy said, hugging Zoe one last time, as he closed the top.(A/N, Name is from Silver Nansy, I used it because it fits him, and I think flamecharmander used the first name before)After Smartguy climbed in, Greasy tapped his shoulder.
"Weren't you named after one of your ancestors from the Amazon?" asked Greasy.Smartguy nodded, grinning as he noticed the connection.
PRESENT TIME: FEARSOME FIVE WAREHOUSE
The Fearsome Five had everyon still captured, but Negaduck had Bailey, Rose, Sarah, Ginger, and Kira tied with a rope above a tank of water supplied by Liquidator, and Megavolt stood a considerable distance away, aiming an electric gun of his at the water.
"You girls will be lowered and-" Negaduck started, before he was interrupted by Rose.
"We can tell what will happen, Negaduck.We aren't stupid.We get dropped in the water, Ratface shocks us, we die.The Toon Patrol will save us and they will bring help." Rose said angrily.Negaduck growled as he started to lower the rope.The girls were an inch from the water, when the warehouses door fell open.Smartguy, Stupid, Psycho, Greasy, Wheezy, Ben, Nega-Quackerjack, Nega-Liquidator, and Nega-Bushroot stood in the doorway.Rose turned to Negaduck's shocked and angry face with a smirk.
"Told ya so, Nega-doofus." she said gloatfully.
(A/N another cliffhanger, I am evil!! next chapter WILL be on here next week though, probably the 23.)
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Post by netske on Nov 17, 2007 3:22:33 GMT -5
Wow, its becoming more and more interesting! Its becoming good for girls.
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Post by weaselsrock on Nov 23, 2007 20:02:03 GMT -5
Chapter 15
After getting over his shock, Negaduck growled in anger.
"GET THEM YOU NIMCOMPOOPS!!!!!!" Negaduck yelled to the rest of the Fearsome 5.Smartguy snarled as he was entrapped in Bushroot's vines.
"Benny, Nega-Quackerjack, get the nerds!!!Nega-Liquidator, Nega-Bushroot, free the girls!!Toon Patrol, get these frickin' plants off me!!!!!!" Smartguy yelled.Greasy smirked as he got his switchblade out and began to cut at Bushroot's vines.Bushroot immediately let Smartguy go, as he backed away from Greasy.
"D-d-d-d-don't cut me!! That blade is too sharp!!" Bushroot whimpered as he quivered.Psycho was about to tackle Liquidator, who was about to drench Wheezy, when Quackerjack launched a spring-a-ling on him.Psycho snarled as he was constricted in the spring-a-ling.Quackerjack laughed insanely.
"Looks like it is just us psychos to fight together!!" Quackerjack snickered cruelly.He took out Mr. Banana Brain.
"Us crazies have to stick together!!" 'said' Mr. Banana Brain.Quackerjack laughed until he saw the evil glare Psycho was giving him.
"Dont.Call.Me.CRAZY!!!!!!!!!" Psycho yelled with fury as he ripped the spring-a-ling off of him.He took out his razor blade as he glared at the jester duck in front of him.The jester shook as he took out the banana doll.
"HE SAID IT NOT ME!!!!!" Quackerjack yelled, throwing the doll at Psycho.Liquidator watterlogged Wheezy, who was in the middle of smoking 3 cigarettes.Wheezy stared at the ruined cigarettes and cigar pack, before turning to Liquidator, aiming his gun at the water dog. . "DDDDDDDIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Wheezy yelled, firing at Liquidator.The bullets went through Liquidator harmlessly.
"The LIQUIDATOR is guarenteed to survive bullets, or your money back!!" he laughed gloatfully.Wheezy grinned with insanity as he dumped his now ruined cigarettes and cigars into Liquidator's body of water, polluting the water.Liquidator coughed, as he reduced himself into a puddle.After being freed of Bushroot's vines, Smartguy and Negaduck were neck and neck in a fist fight.Stupid hid as Megavolt shot electricity at Stupid.Stupid hid until Megavolt came near him, and hit him with the blunt end of his bat, knocking him out.
"Nighty night, rat!!" Stupid said.Nega-Quackerjack took out his fake teeth, as they chomped through the ropes the nerds were bound with.Vile ran up to Benny, hugging him tightly.Nega-Liquidator stood guard, as Nega-Bushroot used his vines to grab the rope holding the girls.He carried them to safety, as he and Nega-LIquidator untied them.Immediately, the girls joined the fight.Rose snuck behind Negaduck, while he was fighting Smartguy.She watched him intently, before jumping out of the shadows, and gripping his neck.
"What are you doing?" asked Negaduck.Rose laughed nervously, embarrassed.
"The sleeper hold." said Rose.Negaduck smiled.
"Oh, that is all wrong.The right spot is right here." said Negaduck, as he moved he hand, falling over unconscious.Smartguy smirked.
"That was very stupid of him." He said, bemused.
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Post by netske on Nov 24, 2007 3:04:17 GMT -5
Haaaaaa! I liked Psycho's reaction at calling him crazy! Nice chapter!
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Post by weaselsrock on Dec 13, 2007 21:00:37 GMT -5
You're right Spikey!! On to the last chapter!!
Chapter 16
With all of the villians defeated, the female weasels embraced their boyfriends.Reva and Tito walked in the warehouse, leading the police officers to the criminals.They dragged the unconscious villians into the cop cars, ready to send them to jail.One of the cops, one who looked like he ate too many donuts, came over and shook Smartguy's hand.
"Thanks for your help, Toon Patrol.I guess you guys have really become good, huh?" the cop said with a smile.Smartguy smirked.
"It was no problem.You can count on us for anything!!" Smartguy said happily.After the police were gone, Tito and Reva grinned at each other and jumped in Benny.
"We have to show you guys something!It is really important!" Tito said with a happy grin, as Reva nuzzled his neck.Shrugging, all the weasels went into Benny, as they drove back to the house.In the basement, was an exhausted stork, and in front of them were two little bundles.Excited, the weasels watched as Tito and Reva began to open the bundles, before the stork stopped them.He looked like he was about to say something, before Vile took out a lead pipe and hit the stork with it repeatedly.
"NO SINGING!!!!" Vile yelled, as she hit the poor stork.Finally, it flew away, and Reva unwrapped the first bundle.In it was a small boy chihuahua, with tannish-blond fur, blue eyes, and red hair.Reva smiled, as she got out a blue bandana.
"I think we should name him Hiladino, what do you think Tito?" asked Reva.Tito smiled.
"I think it is the perfect name for him." Tito said, as he nuzzled his son's head.Hiladino smiled, and snuggled between his mother and father, looking at the other bundle curiously.Tito unwrapped the bundle and in it was another small boy chihuahua, with tannish-blond fur darker than his twin brother's, blue eyes, and red hair.Tito put a yellow bandana on the little pup and grinned.
"I think his name should be Elijah." Tito said.Reva smiled and kissed Tito.
"I agree." she said, smiling as Elijah snuggled with his brother Hiladino.Elijah stepped on Hiladino's paw accidently, causing him to yelp with pain.Eljah growled at his brother, and they began to tackle and bite each other.Tito grimaced.
"I don't know about you gus, but I foresee sibling rivalry!!" Tito said, as the weasels nodded.Reva shrugged.
"They will probably grow out of it." she said, moving her paw, as they tackled each other and almost landed on her paw.
THE END!!!!
Hope you guys enjoyed it, and there might be a sequel, butI have no sequel ideas.
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Post by netske on Dec 14, 2007 6:43:58 GMT -5
Aaaaah, its a very sweet end with birth of 2 chihuahuas.) Great job at this fic.
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