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Post by netske on Aug 21, 2007 2:14:31 GMT -5
Nice chapter. Thank you for contuning. I hope weasels will turn to their time and rescue their lovers.
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Post by weaselsrock on Aug 23, 2007 17:44:25 GMT -5
Chapter 9
Troy picked Jose up and climbed down the treehouse and the Toon patrol watched, confused.Jose looked up at the timetravelers and smirked.
"Are you coming down or not?It's not like there is a metal box pulled by a rope that will bring you down." Jose said.Smartguy picked Tito up and started down and the others followed.After everyone was on the ground, Smartguy turned to Troy.
"So what are we doing?" Smartguy asked confused.Troy smiled.
"We have to stop my sister, or I will be forced to give you back to my sister." Troy said."Now come on."Warily, the others followed.
Meanwhile, back at the Amazon Village
Reva sighed sadly as the other girls combed her hair, clipped her nails, and pitied her for being trapped with the 'savage men'.The only one not talking was the other chihuahua who looked a bit like Tito named Kara.Reva had figured out her name when the crazy weasel named Amber intruduced her and told her story of being 'brainwashed' by her ex boyfriend.She was sitting on a fluffy pink pillow in the fluffiest, pinkest room she ever saw.The leader weasel, Zoe , charged in the door.
"The prisoners have escaped!!!Hurry, we must find Troy!!" Zoe yelled.
"Duh, why do we have to find your little brother?" asked Hannah.Zoe smacked her on the head.
"Because, idiot, he was probably the one who freed them!!!Now come!!" Zoe said, running out the door.The others followed, except Kara.She pulled Reva closer to her and looked around quickly before talking.
"That boy chihuahua you were with, he was your lover, right?" asked Kara.Reva nodded sadly.
"Si, he was my bueno boyfriend.But why do you care?Unless, you still like Jose?!" Reva said excitedly, eager to have an ally.
"Si, but we must vamanos before Zoe and the rest of the Amazons come back." Kara said, as she and Reva walked out of the hut and into the woods, unknowingly heading in the same direction as the Toon patrol, Troy, and Jose.
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Post by julayla on Aug 26, 2007 11:02:35 GMT -5
Good chapter so far. Thing's are getting more interesting by the minute.
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Post by netske on Aug 26, 2007 11:21:42 GMT -5
I liked this chapter very much.
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Post by netske on Sept 8, 2007 2:55:10 GMT -5
Well, weaselsrock left the fic again.=(
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Post by weaselsrock on Sept 9, 2007 2:56:20 GMT -5
I didn't leave.I have a really big project in Psychology, plus I was building the forebodingness.(is that a word?)
Chapter 10
Reva and Kara crept silently in the jungle, before their heads collided with something their size.Kara looked up and growled angrily.
"WATCH WHERE YOU ARE GOING YOU, wait, Jose!!??" Kara said, recognizing the chihuahua she bumped into.She hugged him tightly, close to tears."Oh Jose, I am so sorry!!I never should have listened to Zoe!!She is an idiot, she was wrong, and I will never leave you again!!" she yelled, squeezing him tighter.Jose's face started to change into unatural colors.
"Uh, Kara?You might wanna let him breath." Reva said, looking at the purple faced dog with concern.Kara dropped him immediatly.
"Oh honey, I am sooo sorry!For give me please!" she said, about to hug him again.He backed up nervously.
"I forgive you, just don't hug me again, please.I really wanna live." Jose said.Kara and Jose kissed, along with Reva and Tito, until a voice ruined the romance.
"It looks like we have a traitor on our hands, girls!" said Zoe, glaring at the chihuahuas.Jose stood in front of Kara defensively.
"Leave her alone, you stupid weasel!!" Jose yelled.Zoe growled and smacked him across the face, sending him into a rock.Kara ran to his side.
"You guys cannot escape this time.We are going to cook you in a pot this time." Zoe said, laughing manically.Claire, Amber, and Vanessa through a net at them and rounded them up.Hannah was jumping up and down excitedly.
"Is there gonna be cake Zoe, huh?" Hannah said happily.Zoe rolled her eyes as she helped drag the prisoners to the pot.
AT THE FRIENDLY 4 WAREHOUSE
"Well, the Time Top is fixed.Just as I said." Nega-Quackerjack said happily.He, along with Nega-Bushroot, Nega-Liquidator, and Benny jumped in the Time Top.
"And now, we go to the Amazon jungle.Er.....what year WAS that, any way." Benny asked.Nega-Quackerjack shrugged.
"What do I look like, a history book?" he said, annoyed.Benny slapped his forehead in frustration.
"Greeeeaaaaatt." he said angrily.
"Why don't we use my history doll?" Nega-Quackerjack said, holding up said doll.Everyone backed away.
"That isn't like the other Quackerjack's doll, is it?" Asked Nega-Bushroot.Nega-Quackerjack scoffed.
"Of course not!!" He said, pulling the string.
"1696 is the year when Amazons were running rampant in the Amazon rainforest." it said with a bored voice.
"Off to the past we go!" said Nega-Liquidator.After fiddling with the buttons and levers,the Time Top began spinning and finally disappeared, into the past, into the year 1696.
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Post by netske on Sept 9, 2007 3:22:40 GMT -5
Very cool chapter.
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Post by weaselsrock on Sept 13, 2007 21:24:38 GMT -5
Chapter 11
"Where are Jose and Tito?" asked Smartguy.Troy shrugged.
"I think they went ahead of us."Troy answered.Suddenly, Tito and Reva ran back to the Toon Patrol.
"Zoe captured Jose and Kara!!!We gotta save them!!" Tito yelled.
"They didn't capture us because we were hiding!!Kara helped me escape!!" Reva said worriedly.Smartguy smacked his forehead in frustration.
"First we have to stop Zoe, then save Jose and Kara, THEN WE HAVE TO GO BACK TO OUR TIME!!!!WHAT NEXT???!!!" Smartguy said angrily.No sooner had he said this, when a big Top appeared out of nowhere Troy hid behind a bush.
"WHAT is THAT thing?!" Troy yelled in fear.The top of the Top opened, and a plant-like duck came out, followed by a dog made completely out of water, a duck dressed like a Jester, and a yellow Taxi cab.
"Benny?Nega-Quackerjack?Nega-Bushroot?Nega-Liquidator?What are you guys doing in this Time Zone?!" Smartguy asked.Benny crushed him in a hug, then hugged the rest of the weasels.
"Thank heavens we found you guys!I thought we NEVER would!!" Benny yelled.
"Benny, you are choking us!!" choked Psycho.Benny let them go quickly.
"The Fearsome 5 kidnapped Vile, Bailey, Kira, Ginger, Sarah, and Rose, along with Nega-Megavolt, and others!!!!" The Toon Patrol gasped.
"As soon as we are done helping this Time Zone, we have got to save them!!" declared Stupid.Everyone stared at him in shock.
"........Did you just say something smart?!?" Smartguy said, shocked.
"NOTHING MAKES SENSE ANYMORE!!!!!" Greasy yelled to the skies, dramatically.
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Post by netske on Sept 14, 2007 4:16:44 GMT -5
Nice contuning
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Post by netske on Sept 14, 2007 13:35:52 GMT -5
And I also liked this fact that Stupid became smarter.
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Post by weaselsrock on Sept 22, 2007 22:12:38 GMT -5
Chapter 12
Kara and Jose were being carried back to the village by Claire and Amber, with Hannah and Vanessa close behind, Zoe was already at the village.Kara looked at Claire, who was carrying her, with doe-like eyes.
"Come on Claire.Remember the good times we had together?Before that woman in a black robe convinced Zoe that men were evil?How we would all hang out, no matter what our gender was?I am still the same person as before, and so is Jose, but you, Amber, Hannah, Vanessa, and mostly Zoe, have changed a lot." Kara said.Jose nodded to Amber.The four female weasels stopped in their tracks and thought about what they said.
"You are right, I guess.But Troy didn't have to dump Priestess Trouble in her voodoo solution that was meant for the toon men." Claire said with a grin.
"Troy only did that because she was gonna dunk you guys in it!!" Jose yelled.The four weasels stopped in a shocked silence.
"Well, why should we believe you guys?" stammered Amber nervously.Jose and Kara looked at her, Hannah, Claire, and Vanessa seriously.
"You don't have to believe us, just look inside and think." Kara said.Claire was about to say something, until Zoe rode up to them on her white horse.
"What is taking so long?!We have to cook these two in a pot.The voodoo pot!!" cackled Zoe.Hannah, Amber, Claire, and Vanessa looked at each other nervously as they followed Zoe in silence.
Meanwhile, with the Time Travelers
"I still cannot get used to you talking without a 'duh' or a 'der' in the sentence." Smartguy said, as they all walked silently to the village.
"I know." Stupid said simply.
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Post by netske on Sept 23, 2007 2:24:57 GMT -5
Wow, Stupid has ideas=) Its becoming more and more interesting.
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Post by netske on Oct 9, 2007 9:12:29 GMT -5
And when will be contuning?
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Post by weaselsrock on Oct 14, 2007 20:25:23 GMT -5
Here is the continueing. Chapter 13 "Sssooooo......what are we doing?I am kinda tired of crouching in these bushes.WHEN are we gonna do anything, we've been here for HOURS!!!!" Nega-Bushroot complained to Stupid and Nega-Quackerjack. "Firs of all, the authoress, or whatever you call a girl author, is lazy and wants to wait three weeks to make a chapter.Secondly, we are waiting for the girl weasels to be distracted." Stupid said.They watched as Zoe mixed up the voodoo pot, as she laughed insanely. "Girls, bring the prisoners!!!!!!!" Zoe yelled to her weasel followers.They hesitated, while Zoe tapped her foot impatiently.They sighed sadly as they carried the chihuahuas up to Zoe. "Here you go, Zoe." Amber said sadly.She and the other girl weasels looked at the ground sadly.Zoe grinned evilly. "I can't wait to watch them melt."She said evilly and insanely.Amber and Claire exchanged glances with Hannah and Vanessa, and they smiled at each other.Claire snatched Kara and Jose from Zoe.Zoe's eyes widened with surprise, but narrowed with anger."WHAT ARE YOU TRAITORS DOING!!! " "We can't let you melt them!They are our friends!Just like you...........used to be." Claire said sadly.Zoe growled with anger.She was about to hit Claire, when Troy smacked Zoe's arm away.All the girls gasped wit surprise and relief. "MEN!!!!!" Zoe yelled with surprise.She glared at Troy, before grabbing him and carrying him to the Voodoo pot.Everyone gasped.Greasy, Smartguy, Reva, Tito, Benny, Nega-Bushroot, Nega-Quackerjack, Psycho, and Wheezy ran to stop Zoe, but Stupid stopped them. "We must let them sort it out between themselves." Stupid said solemly.Smartguy looked at Stupid in surprise. "She is GOING to KILL him!" Smartguy yelled angrily. "I know some Psychology.She won't kill him." Stupid said with a smug grin. Funny, it sure LOOKS like she is gonna KILL HIM!!!!" Smartguy said, pointing to Zoe, with Troy over her head, squirming with fear. "Zoe!!!!Put me down please!!!!!!!" Troy said, close to tears of fear.Zoe just sneered at him. "You are an evil man.Like all men!" Zoe said.Troy looked her right in the eyes, sadness and fear, along with tears in his eyes. "Please don't kill me, Zo-zo!!" Troy said with immense fear.Zoe's eyes widened with realization.Her eyes watered as she set her brother down before hugging him and sobbing in his chest. "I am so sorry Troy.I can't beleive I was gonna kill my own brother!!Please forgive me Troy!" Zoe said between sobs.Troy smiled. "I forgive you.......Zo-zo." Troy said, as he whispered 'Thank you' to the Toon Patrol.Smartguy looked at Stupid in surprise. "What just happened?" Smartguy asked Stupid.Stupid grinned. "Troy called Zoe by a name he would call her in their younger years, Zo-zo.It snapped her out of the brainwashing the Priestess gave Zoe." Stupid said with a grin.
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Post by netske on Oct 15, 2007 4:50:29 GMT -5
Good work at this fic.
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