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Post by weaselsrock on May 5, 2007 15:12:52 GMT -5
And now, the sequel to They're alive!!!
Chapter 1
After apoligizing to all of Toon Town, the Toon Patrol decided to fight against evil.Sadly, they didn't have any business.Vile had been in the basement for 4 days straight.Finally, she came out.Her fur was ratty and sweaty, and her eyes were red with fatigue.
"What did you do down there for so long?" asked Smartguy.
"I'll tell you later.I'm going to bed." said Vile, going to her bedroom.Over come with curiousity, Smartguy, Greasy, Wheezy, Tito, Stupid, Reva, and Psycho wen to the basement.In there was a wide screen T.V. with a swirling purple screen.On top of it was a remote.
"She invented a T.V.?Oh, well.What channels does it get?" asked Smartguy, grabbing the remote.Everyone stood in front of the screen.Smartguy typed in random numbers at a fast pace.Suddenly, the T.V. started to suck them in.
"AAAHHHH!!!!!WE ARE GOING TO GET SUCKED IN THE T.V. LIKE IN THAT MOVIE, THE POLTERGIEST!!!!!!!!!!" yelled Tito.Reva got sucked in first, then Tito, Psycho, Stupid, Wheezy, Greasy, and Smartguy.They all screamed before they got sucked in, which alerted everyone in the house.They all came downstairs.
"Oh god!!!They got sucked in the Time Machine!!!!" yelled Vile.
"You mean the T.V.?" said Rose.
"No, it's a Time Machine.You type the date in the remote.The T.V. sucks you in to that time.I haven't put in a way to get back yet, and it looks like they typed in a lot of dates in the remote.They are going to keep skipping in time.This sucks!!" explained Vile.
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Post by weaselsrock on May 6, 2007 5:46:18 GMT -5
I wonder who the pirates are based off?
Chapter 2
On a black ship, called the 'Black diamond', the captain of the ship was a weasel with a pink bandana, a white undershirt, a pink coat, and some black, scuffy boots.His name was Zach Frankiln, but most commonly called Zach Sparrow.He looked at his crew mates, one with the same clothes as him, but green, one who had a red and blue striped shirt and, oddly enough, an eyepatch on each eye, another crew member just wore a blue vest, and the last member looked quite insane, swirly eyes, spiky hair, and shackles still on his wrists, with a white undershirt on.Suddenly, in a flash of bright, white light, 5 weasels and 2 chuhuahuas found themselves face to face to the pirates.They screamed at the same time.
"WITCHES!!!!VOODOO WITCHES!!!!" sceamed the pirates.
"WEIRD CRAZY PEOPLE IN WEIRD CLOTHES!!!!!!" yelled the misplaced travelers.After they screamed at each other, they looked at each other closely.
"Whoa!!That dumb weasel over there looks like you, Ryan Dodo!!" shouted Zach, taking the dumbwitted pirate and pointed accusingly at Stupid.Smartguy also noticed the similarities between the pirates and the time travlers.
"I guess that T.V. was a T.M." said Smartguy.
"What does T.M. stand for?" asked Greasy.
"Time machine." said Smartguy.Suddenly, an earpiercing yell rang out through the air.
"ZACH SPARROW!!!!!!WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!!!!" yelled a girl weasel with a blue jacket with an undershirt.Smartguy looked with amazment at the weasel that resembeled his sister.
"Um..this is Lizzie Hummingbird.This is Ryan Dodo.This is Darren Peacock.This is Vince Kookoobara.This is Edgar Raven." Zach said, intruducing the pirates to the Toon Patrol.
"What is with the bird names?" asked Greasy.
"This is the Black Diamond and we are the infamous Bird pirates.There are 2 more members, but they are making out, a lot like those chihuahuas are." said Zach, pointing to Tito and Reva, who were smooching, or eating each others face off.Even I don't know which.In just a matter of seconds, a girl tan chihuahua with a green bandana and a boy brown chihuahua with a red vandana walked out on the deck.
"Yo, they look like us!!" said Tito, attempting to flirt with the girl.Reva snagged his tail and her face glowed with a rage that would frighten a demon.Ignoring the yells and pleading of Tito, the weasels continued talking.
"This is Cheech and Chong, the Lovebirds." said Zach.Reva came back to the chihuahuas and looked innocent.
"I like your bandana!!" Reva said to Chong.Tito came limping back to the group.Cheech helped him up.
"Women are so vicious.Chong is like a siren, and I am truly under her spell." Cheech said, also having a spanish accent, staring longingly at the Chong.Tito rolled his eyes.
"Ay, carumba!" said Tito.Psycho looked at Vince, feeling a weird deja' vu feeling.Ryan, who couldn't see which way he was going, fell right on top of Stupid, both laughing stupidly.Greasy and Darren gave each other pick up lines that they planned to use on other girls.Edgar gave Wheezy some cigars and Wheezy gave Edgar cigarettes.Cheech and Reva gave each other tips on fashion, and Smartguy and Zach were getting aquainted.
"So, in the future, there is something called a 'television'?And you have 'automobiles'?What about ships?" asked Zach, as Smartguy told him of the things of the future.
"Oh, we still use ships on criuses." said Smartguy.This confused Zach even more.
"What is a 'cruise'?Does it hurt?" Zach asked, awkwardly.Without warning, another bright light shone, and disappeared,just as before, taking the Time travelers with it.
"..............Let's forget this happened and don't tell anyone.Plus, I am not to keen to go to the future." said Zach, horrified at a ship being used on a 'cruise', whatever that was.
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Post by weaselsrock on May 6, 2007 15:59:09 GMT -5
Some of the chapters will take place in the present, with them trying to create another part of the T.M. to have the Toon Patrol come back to the present.I really don't know what a Time-Flux capacitor is, it just sounds cool and I heard it on Back to the Future.
Chapter 3
Vile was inspecting the T.M. as the others got help.So far, the Toon Patrol had gone to 1772.The door opened and Gadget, the Negaverse Megavolt, Dexter, Double D, Tucker, Sheldon, and Wile E. Coyote walked in.
"You made a Time Machine wothout putting in a way to get back?!" scolded the Negaverse Megavolt.
"I didn't know they would go in!! I wasn't finished!!" said Vile, defensively.
"You should never leave your inventions till they are finished!" said Dexter.Wile E. held a sign that read: Go easy on the weasel.This is her first Time Machine.
"We should stop fighting and get to work on the other part of the Time Machine." Gadget said, getting supplies.Megavolt looked at her with a dreamy look.
"You know that Mice and rats aren't so different, right?" asked Megavolt.Gadget didn't notice that he was trying to flirt with her.
"Yeah, we are both mammals, and rodents." she replied in a scientific tone.Megavolt smacked his forehead.
"But, it wouldn't be wrong for a rat to like a mouse, right?"
"I don't see anything wrong with that.This is going to take a while." answered Gadget.Megavolt was seeing hearts.Vile punched his arm.
"Come on, Casanoduh." she teased.Magevolt stuck his tongue out at her, and grabbed a Time-flux capacitor.
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Post by julayla on May 6, 2007 18:44:51 GMT -5
Wow, so much read and so little to speak about. Great job so far. Keep it up.
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Post by weaselsrock on May 11, 2007 20:57:15 GMT -5
Chapter 4
In a roman colloseum, a group of 5 weasels and 2 chihuahuas warriors were about to battle lions, a punishment for treason against an evil roman king.The king was a fat cat named Peticus.The weasels about to battle the lions were Henry the Valiant, a weasel with pink armor, Julio the Loyal, a weasel with green armor, Fred the Dull, a weasel with a tiny brain and light blue armor, Allen the Smoky, a weasel with dark blue armor that had an addiction to tobacco, and Charles the Insane, a weasel with swirly eyes, spiky hair, and white armor.The chihuahuas were Rosemaria the Affectionate, a tan chihuahua with a green helmet, and Juan the Fierce, a brown chihuahua with a red helmet.The guards were about to release the lions, when a bright white flash shone and the Toon Patrol appeared.
"I am tired of this whole lookalikes in the past thing." said Smartguy.Peticus rolled his eyes.
"Unleash the lions!!!" he yelled.The weasel guards obeyed and the lions leapt at the weasels and chihuahuas.Henry, Fred, Julio, Allen, Charles, Rosemaria, and Juan took out their swords, Rosemaria and Juan held their swords in their mouth.Psycho, Greasy, and Smartguy took out their knives, Wheezy took out his gun, and Stupid took out his bat.
"Bad kitty kitty!!!" yelled Stupid, hitting the lion on the head with his bat.
"He-he, good kitty, want some catnip?!!" sid Psycho nervously, as he was surrounded by the lions.Charles slashed the lions with his sword.
"He-he, be careful, weird weasel that looks like me." Charles said to Psycho.
"Viva -cough cough- La Toon Patrol!!!!" yelled Wheezy, firing his gun at the lions.
"You -cough cough- have a way with words." said Allen.A lion was about to bite Reva, when Tito stabbed the lion.
"No one TOUCHES my woman but me!!!!!!" yelled Tito.Reva nuzzled against him.
"Si, my bueno hero!!!" said Reva, rubbing against Tito's cheek.Tito blushed.All of the lions were dead, and Peticus had no choice, but to release the prisoners.As they walked through the roman city, the Toon Patrol explained everything to their ancestors.
"....................The future??This is officially the weirdest day of my life." sighed Henry.Another bright white light shined out and the Toon Patrol disappeared.
"Duh, those future guys looked really weird." said Fred.
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Post by weaselsrock on May 20, 2007 11:12:05 GMT -5
The plot thickens!!!!!!!
Chapter 5
Back in the present, everyone was hard at work, making a different time machine.However, Megavolt (the bad one) was looking for his nega self and found the house where they were trying to make a time machine andhe heard all of what they were doing.
"Negaduck will be glad to hear this!!!" said Megavolt, running off to the warehouse.
"Megavolt, did you find your Negaverse self or what?" asked Negaduck angrily.Megavolt smiled wickedly.
"I found him alright.Turns out those losers that apoligized about the Roger Rabbit incident are lost in Time!!!!" Megavolt laughed.
"Well, we have nothing else to do.Knobs, you get rid of those science geeks.The 'Toon Patrol' will stay lost in Time.They could be a future thorn in our evil side." Negaduck sad with a sneer.
"You're talking in Metaphors like Darkwing duck, you know.It's kinda creepy." 'said' Mr. Banana Brain.Quackerjack laughed.
"JUST MOVE IT!!!!!!" yelled Negaduck.Liquidator, Bushroot, Quackerjack, and Megavolt ran out of the warehouse before Negaduck could take out his trusty Chainsaw.
AT THE BASEMENT
"We will need more time to fix this thing.What would happen if the Toon Patrol runs out of dates to go through?" asked Gadget.
"They would stay in the last date typed by them, unless we get another time machine running.Then we could go to the Time that they are at and bring them back." said Vile.Suddenly, evil chuckling rang throughout the basement.
"That is pretty fortunate for us!!" said Megavolt, electricity flowing on the edge of his hands.He grabbed Wile E Coyote and Vile and shocked them.Bushroot manipulated some vines and grabbed Gadget, Nega Megavolt, Kira, Bailey, and Tucker.Quackerjack chased Sheldon, Ginger, Sarah, and Double D with his evil toy teeth.Liquidator half-drowned Dexter and Rose.
"Annoyed with know-it all geeks?The Fearsome 5 will get rid of them for you!!!!" Liquidator said triumphantly.They dragged and forced them to their Warehouse.
"You won't get away with this!!" yelled Bailey.Megavolt smirked at her.
"Your boyfriends won't be able to save you from another Time zone and a different place!!" said Megavolt, laughing evilly.
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Post by julayla on May 23, 2007 0:31:53 GMT -5
Yipes, I know. Hurry, Toon Patrol! Find a way to save your future wives!
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Post by netske on Jun 2, 2007 7:59:54 GMT -5
I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Post by weaselsrock on Jun 20, 2007 11:01:49 GMT -5
Sorry this chapter's so short.The Toon Patrol are gonna be stuck here for a while.
Chapter 6
In the Amazon Rainforest, 5 girl weasels were riding on horses carrying bows and arrows.One of the girl weasels had a pink toga on, another had a green toga on, one had swirly eyes and a white toga, one had a stupid grin on her face and a blue and grey toga, and one had a blue toga on and an addiction to tobacco.There was also a girl brown chihuahua with red hair and green cloth around her hair.A bright white light surrounded them and the Toon Patrol appeared, along with Tito and Reva.The group of girl weasels aimed their arrows at Smartguy, Stupid, Psycho, Wheezy, Tito, and Greasy.The Leader weasel grabbed Reva.
"Don't worry, we will save you from these men!" the Leader weasel said.The Leader weasel went back to the village while the rest of the weasels led the Toon Patrol and Tito to the cages, where other men were.Unknown to anyone, a boy weasels with blue toga and a boy tan chihuahua with blond hair watched as the guys were dragged to the cages.
"Your sister has gone too far.We have to save them." said the Tan chihuahua.The boy weasel nodded.
"I know.Let's move." he said, as they sneaked over to the prisoners.
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Post by netske on Jun 20, 2007 13:09:18 GMT -5
COOL!!!!! The Contuning!!!
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Post by weaselsrock on Aug 7, 2007 22:10:20 GMT -5
Chapter 7
Smartguy tapped his cage, to see how flimsy it was.Unfortunately, it was very strong.
"What do we do now, boss?" asked Greasy.Smartguy smiled.
"We wait for that stupid light, which should come right..........about...........NOW!!!" yelled Smartguy, waiting for the light to suck them in.However, no light came."Maybe............NOW!!!" Smartguy yelled again, and still no light.The others looked at him boredly.
"Duh, I think we are stuck here, but I'm not sure." Stupid said.Smartguy glared at Stupid.
"What makes you say that!?!" Smartguy asked sarcastically.
"PSST!!!!" said someone the Toon Patrol could not see.
"Did you guys here that?" asked Tito.The others nodded.
"PSST!" the voice said again.The Toon Patrol looked around confused."OVER HERE STUPIDS!!!!!" the voice yelled from the other side of the cage.The Toon Patrol jumped, looking at the young boy weasel and the young chihuahua.The boy grinned."Looks like we have a group of geniuses, right Jose?" the boy weasel said sarcastically.
"Oh, I'd say they could be the smartest things ever, Troy!!!" said Jose.
"Hey!! WE aren't the ones wearing a dress!!" yelled Smartguy.Troy smirked.
"Calm down, dude.We are here to help." said Troy.He barely touched the cage and it fell apart.The Time travelers gaped at Troy.Before they could say anything, he brought his finger to his lips in a typical 'shush' manner."Not here." he whispered.He pointed to the forest.They carefully tiptoed to the forest, going deep in it, until they finally saw what looked like a primitive treehouse.They climbed up and sat down on the tree.
"Okay, now, tell us.What is up with all the girls?Where are we?Why were we locked up?" asked Smartguy.
"AND WHY DID THEY TAKE MY LADY!?!" Tito asked, on the brink of tears.
"The weasel in pink is my older sister.Her name is Zoe.Her friend in green is Claire, her friend in white with swirly eyes is Amber, her dimwitted friend in the blue and grey is Hannah, her tobacco obsessed friend in blue is Vanessa, and her chihuahua friend Kara.They think men are evil.Kara and Jose used to date, but she was brainwashed by Zoe into thinking he was evil.Me and Jose are the only guys who got away from Zoe.This is the Amazon rainforest.My sister and her friends call themselves the Amazons.She has gone too far though.I think she took your 'lady' because she thought you guys were gonna hurt her or something.I don't know HOW she thinks, it's weird." Troy said all in one breath.Afterwards, he panted and tried to stop his burning lungs.
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Post by netske on Aug 8, 2007 2:06:30 GMT -5
Very coooool chapter!=)
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Post by Veggirl on Aug 8, 2007 22:18:00 GMT -5
This is getting good!
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Post by julayla on Aug 11, 2007 23:18:08 GMT -5
Yep. Looks good so far.
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Post by weaselsrock on Aug 20, 2007 20:34:40 GMT -5
Chapter 8
Back at Vile's basement, a yellow Taxi cab was driving around the basement, looking at the damage.
"This looks like the work of the Fearsome Five!!They will pay, but I can't do it alone.I know who can though!!" said Benny, driving off down the road.Finally, he reached the warehouse of the Friendly Four.He burst through the door, scaring the Nega versions of Liquidator, Bushroot, and Quackerjack.
"I need your help!!The Fearsome Five are at it again!They kidnapped Vile and the people who were helping her make a Time Machine, because the Toon Patrol got sent back in time!!Hey, where's NegaSparky?" Benny said, looking around the warehouse for the rat.
"He went to Vile's to make the Time Machine.We won't be able to fight the Fearsome 5 by ourselves, we are outnumbered!!" NegaQuackerjack said, tugging at the ends of his hat.
"Don't you have a TimeTop, Quacky?We could go get the Toon Patrol to help us!!!" NegaBushroot said with a grin.
"You are right, but I have to adjust some things on the TimeTop.It will probably be 2 more chapters before we can travel through time and get them."
"Aaahhh!!!You are breaking the 4th wall, QuackerJack!!" screeched NegaBushroot.
"2 out of 3 heros advise against it, least we anger the author!!" said NegaLiquidator. NegaBushroot leaped over to NegaQuackerjack and NegaBushroot' and covered their mouths.
"Shut up, both of you!!!You are spoiling the future chapters!!!!Aaahhh!! I did it too!!! I gotta get the tape!!" NegaBushroot said, running off to find the tape.NegaQuacky and NegaLiquidator shrugged and NegaBushy came back, his bill covered with tape.
"You are a dork, Bushroot." said NegaQuackerjack.
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