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Post by julayla on Sept 13, 2006 0:10:09 GMT -5
A/N: I know I haven't finished the other fic, but this one will take place during 1990, okay? Just letting you know.
Chapter 1: The Accident
In Mickey's House, Mickey was about to head to a car, where Minnie, Daisy, Donald, Goofy, and Pluto were waiting.
Goofy: Hey, Mick! Come on! We don't wanna miss that picnic, do we?
Mickey: (laughing his usual laugh) Coming, Goofy! Our other friends should be there at Toon Town Park by now.
They then noticed the ambulence sirens heading to where they were going.
Minnie: Oh my, what's going on?
Donald: That doesn't look good.
Then, Mickey got in the car, then the group in the car drove off to where the ambulence was going: Close to Toon Town Park. At the park, Mickey and his friends noticed a familiar black van in the ground, wrecked to pieces.
Daisy: Oh no! That's not good!
Goofy: Hey, isn't that the Toon Patrol's van?
They parked and got out, noticing six hyenas looking at the wreck.
Minnie: Oh my goodness, what happened here?
Banzai: The big truck thing came out of nowhere, man! We managed to be protected by them.
Daisy: By who?
Minnie gasped as she looked at six familiar bodies, seriously wounded.
Minnie: Oh no...Sarah and her friends....
They looked surprised as Pluto barked. Then, many people were gathering as Goofy spoke.
Goofy: Uh, these fellas are all right! (points to the hyenas) See? No harm done. Ah-hyuck.
Mickey realized what Goofy was doing.
Mickey: Minnie, Daisy, Donald, get them to a safe place.
Donald: Don't worry, I'm gonna make sure they're all right.
Daisy: Us too.
The three got the weasels out of the van before the crowd noticed any of them while Mickey, Goofy, and Pluto made sure their attention was at the hyenas.
Jemadari: I can assure you all, we're all okay.
Kijana: There's nothing to worry about!
The crowd finally left as the nine headed to where Minnie, Daisy, and Donald were heading.
Daisy: So, where are we suppose to go to anyway?
Mickey: The only place that can help recover them without spreading the word out.
At Gyro Gearloose's place, Gyro finished bandaging the six, now stripped to only their undergarments while Daisy noticed something.
Daisy: Psycho and Greasy have tails? I thought they were born tailless.
Minnie: No, Daisy. Weasels are all born with tails...it's just that three of them looked like they had their tails docked.
Donald: No wonder I kept seeing a bulge on the back of Psycho's straight-jacket!
Goofy: His tail must've been sticking up all the time, which was pretty much why we never saw his tail out.
Mickey: And Greasy's tail has a good reason: that coat of his keeps his tail hidden most likely.
He sighed as he looked at the six weasels.
Gyro: Well, I'm glad Donald told me and Mr. McDuck about them...they must really want to be redeemed so much.
Donald: Yeah, especially that girl weasel.
Gyro: I'm still not understanding the full story here...
He then had an idea.
Gyro: That just gives me time to try my latest invention.
He pulled out what looked like a machine and attacked to it were six helmets.
Gyro: The Memory Watcher! It lets you see the lives of all six of these people.
Shenzi: What does that mean?
Gyro: That means while they're here recovering from the wound, we might have to peek into their memories to understand why they're doing all of this in the first place.
Goofy: Oh, now I get it!
Mickey: Come on, let's get these things on them.
Terra: Still...I hope they didn't suffer any real major damage...
A bit later, they placed the helmets on, then watched the screen as they saw what was going to be their own lives.
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Sept 16, 2006 0:31:33 GMT -5
Oooh, wonder what will their memories show. Poor weasels. This is really good Julayla.
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Post by Veggirl on Sept 16, 2006 13:39:34 GMT -5
Sorry I didn't reviewed this sooner, but pretty good Julayla! I'm really looking forward to see their pasts.
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Post by julayla on Sept 17, 2006 0:08:30 GMT -5
Ch 2: Parents' Seperation
As the group watched, they didn't realize Huey, Dewey, Louie, Chip, or Dale coming in as they looked curious.
Huey: Uncle Donald? Why weren't you in the picnic? You said that we were gonna meet those secret friends of yours.
Dewey: (notices) Hey, look! It's those weasels!
Louie: (shocked) Hey, I recognize them! They're those weasels that worked for Judge Doom! But I thought they were gone.
Dale: (notices) Hey, what are they watching?
Chip: I don't know, but it looks like that weasel's a teenager along with that girl and those twins.
On the screen, it showed a worried hispanic Toon weasel and a weasel ironically dressed like a samurai, holding the baby girl.
Girl: Senor Miyazaki, are you sure you do not want to live with me in Toon Town? They won't know that you're not a Toon. I mean you practically look like one.
Miyazaki: No, Rosa...(sighs) Alex and Alexandria need protection. They must never know they're half-breeds. Besides, you know the Toon Laws that only allow Toons to marry Toons.
Rosa (Girl): But...
Miyazaki: (narrows) No...if they find you with me, they'll kill us all...we have to do this...
He looked sadly at the twins.
Miyazaki: For our children...
He then left the recently born twin son and her mother, holding his daughter in her arms, crying.
Rosa: (sniffs) It looks like we're on our own then...
She was in tears as she headed to the town. Her baby son started to awaken, smiling to her.
Rosa: (smiles sadly) Si, I am your mother...and you shall always be my son...
She hugged him while passing four group of parents with their own baby weasels of different ages, one of them crying. The group was sniffing as well.
Minnie: Poor her. How awful to never learn about his own father.
Daisy: Yeah...
Terra: I never knew...poor him.
They continued watching on to the next memory.
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Post by Veggirl on Sept 18, 2006 21:05:47 GMT -5
Oh poor Greasy! Never knowing his father! *reaches for 50 boxes of tissues* Keep it up!
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Post by julayla on Sept 19, 2006 0:07:39 GMT -5
Ch 3: More of the Past
It now showed the five male weasels when they were toddlers at a nursery.
Jackson: Now, Michael, stay here and don't get hurt, okay?
He giggled lightly as the dumb weasel was trying to spell something out of the blocks. A weasel couple, Psycho's parents, smiled as Wise Guy's parents looked happily at their child while two children weasels, Kevin and Andrew, clutched onto their moms.
Arnold: Look how happy our children are, Howard.
Howard: Yeah...maybe they'll have something in common.
He just chuckled lightly as he looked at the blonde weasel, rubbing her small belly.
Arnold: Especially since my love will have another child born here in Toon Town someday...
Daisy, watching, looked happy at the weasel toddlers.
Daisy: Awww, they look so cute.
Mickey: Who would've thought that they had happier lives.
Then, the image changed to twin weasels, both violet, born and crying.
Goofy: Gawrsh! That must be Sarah's memories now. It looks like they're just born.
Donald: And that must be her brother.
Gyro: Wow, I never knew weasels would look this adorable when so young.
Minnie: (smiles) Their families must've been nice before what happened.
In the screen Rosa and a five-to-six year old Greasy came up to the twins.
Rosa: They are adorable, Alexander. Just look at your beautiful cousins.
He looked curiously at them, then baby Sarah giggled happily.
Dale: Awww, they're so cute when they're kids!
Chip: Yeah, it must've been hard between when they were recruited and 1947...
Shenzi: I don't believe it! Why didn't Sarah tell me she looked that cute?
Banzai: Just be glad there aren't any photographs being taken.
Gyro: Actually, while it does look through memories, this invention of mine is also a camera. So any special memories seen have their picture taken automatically.
Banzai: (groans) Now you tell us...
The nephews smiled in amazement, not making a peep while watching the next image coming up.
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Sept 21, 2006 21:37:14 GMT -5
Aw, that nursery scene is sooo cute!! ;D
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Post by julayla on Sept 22, 2006 11:51:47 GMT -5
Ch 4: First Love, Death, and Accusion
They then saw Sarah as a little girl, about to fall from a tree.
Sarah: Ahh! I can't hold on, big brother!
Though they were twins, she was a minute younger than Domonic. The twin male, hiding what looked like a keychain with an eye, looked at where she was and gasped.
Domonic: Sarah! Hang on!
He ran to her, but she fell and screamed.
Sarah: Ahhhh!!!
Then, she landed on an older weasel's arms. She looked confused, then looked at him.
Sarah: Huh?
It was the leader weasel, except he was younger and was wearing a pink colored shirt, due to it being mixed with a red cloth.
Sarah: Uh, thank you.
Wise Guy: Don't mention it.
She began to blush a little, turning away a bit and blushing.
Domonic: (sighs) Thank goodness you're all right. What were you doing there in the first place?
Sarah: (pointing up) That cat was in trouble and I managed to get him down. But I nearly lost my balance and...
Domonic: Please, don't scare me like that ever again.
The twins hugged, then she turned to the pink shirted weasel.
Sarah: Thanks for saving me, Mister.
Wise Guy: The name's Julian.
The twins headed home after waving the young pink shirted weasel goodbye. Later, the female went in first to her home.
Sarah: Mommy? Daddy? I'm home! (looks around) Guys?
Then, she gasped and saw what looked like corpses of her own parents.
Sarah: (gasps) Mommy! Daddy!
She then noticed the bottles of turpentine, acetone, and benzene with labels of "beer" falling off of them. She headed to her parents, starting to cry.
Sarah: Mommy...Daddy...get up, please!
Then, her twin came in, looking shocked.
Sarah: (sniffs) It's awful, Domonic...they're...they're...
Domonic: Ahhh! Why???!!!!
The twins cried for a while, then her twin glared angrily at her.
Domonic: It's your fault...it's your fault our parents are dead!
She looked frightened, backing away.
Sarah: But...but...
Domonic: (throwing the bottle) Get out! Now!
The bottle broke, making the female weasel run out of the house.
Sarah: (crying) Why...why do you hate me, Domonic?
As she was out, a green skinned woman passed by her, glaring at her. The group watching it recognized her.
All: (gasps) Maleficent!
That was when Donald noticed his nephews and the chipmunks inside.
Donald: Boys, Chip, Dale, what are you doing here?
Huey: We were wondering why you weren't at the picnic, but we could tell that you're all watching their memories.
Louie: Yeah, it's getting interesting by the minute too.
Dewey: Poor girl...she was accused of something she didn't even do!
Daisy: Yeah...it's starting to make me feel more of their pain now...
Minnie: (nods) I know...Maleficent had something to do with this too.
The group then noticed the scene changing to Sarah banging on the door as rain poured down.
Sarah: Please, Mama Rosa! Alex! Let me in, please!
The door opened as Rosa gasped.
Rosa: Ay Caramba! What are you doing out in the rain?
The boy in the green shirt, jeans, and sneakers (aka a young Greasy) looked shocked as well.
Greasy: Que? Sarah?
He took her in quickly, then the door closed. Inside, Sarah buried her head on her aunt's chest as she spoke.
Sarah: (teary) It's awful! My brother...he thinks...
Rosa sighed as she looked at the crying child.
Rosa: (pats her) There, there, child...you can explain it all to me and your cousin when you calmed down.
She continued crying as the boy weasel sighed to her while Goofy sniffed.
Goofy: Poor her, that's not very good to lose their own mom and dad.
Mickey: I know, Goofy...I know.
Gyro: Wow, I didn't think her childhood was that tragic...
The group sighed sadly as they continued watching the next scene.
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Post by julayla on Sept 23, 2006 22:02:57 GMT -5
Ch 5: A Mom's in Heaven and a Funeral
The next scene showed a little Psycho (who looked like a cute weasel with his bangs brushed neatly crying with his older teen brother and little sister as his father explained to them.
Arnold: (sighs) I'm sorry, children...your mother...she's gone and now in heaven. I'm sorry...
Then, the middle child glared angrily as his father continued.
Arnold: I hope you and your siblings can understand, Justin.
Psycho then glared angrily, letting go of his siblings.
Psycho: Don't call me that...tell me...why didn't you save her!?
Arnold: I wanted to make sure she'd stay, but she...
Psycho: (angrily) I hate you!
He then ran out of the house as the father weasel looked sadly.
Arnold: Justin...
The girls, minus Shenzi, though tears were coming out of her eyes as well, started crying.
Minnie: Poor Psycho...he lost his own mother...
Terra: I know...(sniffs) How sad.
Then, the next scene showed the funeral of Sarah's parents as she, Greasy, and Rosa were there, mourning over them.
Sarah: Mommy...Daddy...why did you both have to go?
She then ran out of the cemetary as her cousin noticed.
Greasy: Huh? Sarah? Where are you going?
She didn't listen as she was out of the cemetary, still running as she cried. Then, both she and the young crying Psycho ran into each other.
Both: Oof!
Psycho: Hey, watch it!
Sarah: (sadly) I'm sorry.
He then looked at the crying female weasel.
Psycho: What's wrong with you?
Sarah: (crying) I lost my parents...I just ran from the funeral and...and...
He then hugged her, trying to comfort her.
Psycho: There, there...don't worry, I'm here.
A little later, they came to the building where she and her relatives lived as she spoke.
Sarah: By the way, my name's Sarah. What's yours?
Psycho: (sighs) Justin...I don't like it too much anymore since...well...
Sarah: I understand. I won't call you Justin if you don't like it.
Psycho: Well...thanks, cute weasel.
He covered his mouth as Sarah smiled a bit, giggling to him.
Sarah: You're funny, Mister.
She hugged, then waved goodbye to him.
Sarah: Thanks for cheering me up, Justin.
She closed the door as Psycho blushed a bit. He them smiled happily while the ones watching looked at the scene.
Minnie: Awww, how romantic.
Dale: When do we get to the funny parts of the cartoon?
Chip: (bonks him) Dale! It's their memories, not a cartoon!
Donald: Poor guys...they had to go through all of this, huh? That's not good at all.
The next scene showed a shocking memory.
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Sept 23, 2006 22:20:29 GMT -5
Shocking? Doesn't sound good. I like the part when Sarah and Psycho first meet, it's cute. ^_^
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Post by julayla on Sept 23, 2006 22:51:08 GMT -5
Ch 6: The Missing Twin and Aunt's Death
It showed Sarah in 1938 with her aunt, Rosa, coming back from the store until they heard sirens. They looked and saw a figure approach them. Then, the figure bumped into Sarah.
Figure: Watch it!
Sarah: I'm sorry, sir, I-
She then gasped at the weasel whom she recognized.
Sarah: Dominic? But you're older and...
Figure: (glares) The name is Doom now! (as his voice gets higher) Now get out of the way or you (high squeaky voice) will SUFFER!!
Rosa: (gasps) Sarah!
He shoved the weasel girl to her aunt as she saw the keychain on his wrist (up close that is) glowing.
Sarah: (thinking) Was that what made my brother grow twice as fast?
Her aunt then hugged her neice.
Rosa: Senorita Sarah. Are you all right?
She nodded as she saw two humans, Eddie and Teddy, getting out of the car. Mickey instantly recognized them.
Mickey: I remember them, that's Eddie and Teddy Valiant! I think this is before his brother was killed!
Banzai: What!? Those guys?
Ed: Ha-ha-ha-ha!
Louie: (narrows) It's not that funny.
Jemadari: No, it's the way he usually talks...native hyena language.
They looked back as they continued watching where Sarah saw Teddy and Eddie coming to the two weasels.
Teddy: Excuse me, but did you see someone running with a bunch of simolians?
Sarah: I'm not sure, but I did see my brother pass me by and-
They then noticed an X labeled on the ground as a huge realistic piano was hurled above the building. On it was the benzene, acetone, and turpentine mixed at the bottom of the piano. Doom grinned wickedly as he spoke in his high squeaky voice.
Doom (Figure): (high squeaky voice) Die!
He let the rope go as Rosa gasped, quickly shoving Sarah out of the way.
Rosa: Look out!
Then, she, Teddy, and Eddie were caught as the piano dropped on Eddie's arm, Teddy, and Rosa's backside. The girl gasped, looking teary. Then, she saw the weasel coming to Eddie, glaring in the shadows.
Sarah: No...no...
She was in tears as she tried pullng Rosa out.
Rosa: No...(coughs) please...live on. (gives her a chain) Give this to Alejandro...it'll help him remember that...I'll always be with you two...
Sarah: Please...don't go! I can make you get better! Then we can be together again! (crying) Please, don't leave me!
Rosa: (smiles weakly) Sarah...some things...are better...this...w..way...
Then, she died as the girl teared up and looked at the weasel running off.
Sarah: Why, Domonic...why...
She then ran to where a teen Greasy, looking at what happened, saw what happened to his mother.
Greasy: No...Mama...
She then ran to her cousin's arms, crying.
Sarah: She's gone...it's all my fault...I'm cursed!
Greasy: (hugs tightly) There there, Sarah...I'm here for you...
The group watched the sad and shocking moment.
Minnie: How awful to lose their own family!
Dale: Yeah, it's so sad.
Chip: Not even Monty, Gadget, or Zipper would believe it.
Gyro: (teary) I know...it's all so sad.
Then, Mickey looked at the weasels, sighing.
Mickey: I promise you guys, when you wake up, my friends and I will make sure to abolish that dumb law against you weasels and hyenas...hopefully.
The group then watched the next image that appeared.
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Sept 23, 2006 23:42:12 GMT -5
Aw, poor Sarah. I feel so bad for her, and Greasy.
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Post by Veggirl on Sept 24, 2006 20:03:41 GMT -5
Oh I'm so sorry I didn't reviewed sooner! Wow! Nice work on it! Aww, baby weasels are so cute! ;D But it's sad how they are loosing their families. Keep up the good work!
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Post by julayla on Sept 25, 2006 19:36:01 GMT -5
Ch 7: The Leader's Cowardice?
The next scene showed Sarah and a young pink shirted weasel dating a few months later.
Goofy: So that's what she meant when she called the leader weasel her ex-boyfriend. They must've been real close together.
Banzai: Yeah, tell me about it.
The two were nearing the alley close to the human world. Then, three chuckling gangsters glanced at the two, jumping out.
Leader: Hey, where do you rats think you're going?
Wise Guy: We're not rats!
Chain Member: (chuckles) How about we make sure we take what you got?
They laughed wickedly, whacking the pink shirted weasel away from Sarah.
Sarah: (gasps) Julian!
He looked frightened at the ones about to near him, then to the ones who were closing in on Sarah. Neither of them knew that the boy, Psycho, gasped as he saw the two in trouble.
Wise Guy: (teary) Leave us alone!
Then, he ran off quickly as the other members tried to go after him.
Leader: Now...for the pretty weasel.
Sarah: (teary) Please...don't hurt me.
Leader: Oh, I won't hurt you...much.
They laughed wickedly as they prepared to jump to her. She screamed, then one of the gang members was bitten by the butt.
Member 1: Ahhh!!
He looked and saw Psycho growling, clenching his small teeth to his butt.
Member 2: A stupid weasel! That guy's insane!
Leader: Get him!
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Sept 25, 2006 21:31:35 GMT -5
Ow, that must be painful. I feel sorry for Smart Guy, poor him. Nice chapter though.
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