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Post by julayla on Sept 25, 2006 22:51:05 GMT -5
Ch 8: Thought to be Insane
The gang charged at him, while the boy weasel dodged each of their attacks.
Chain Member: (throws his chain) I think you'd be the first to die!
He ducked from the chains, headbutting to the man, though it messed with his brushed fur on his head.
Psycho: Sarah, get out of here, now!
Sarah: Justin! (notices) Look out!
The gang members used their knives, trying to kill him. The boy jumped and landed near Sarah, then charged to them.
Pscyho: Leave her alone!
The other members jumped around him, unknowingly bonking their own heads and were knocked out.
Leader: (grabs Sarah's arm) All right, how about a trade? Your life for hers?
He then jumped and did something neither one of them knew: he bit the leader toward where the crotch is, making the weasel cover her eyes and the leader scream.
Leader: (in pain) Come on! They're not worth it!
They ran quickly, away from the two. The girl weasel then looked at the boy weasel.
Psycho: Are you okay?
She nodded, then smiled lightly.
Sarah: Thank you...
The two were about to hold hands until a straight jacket was shot to the child.
Sarah: (gasps) Justin!
The two turned and saw the men in white along with a humanoid cat as their leader.
Cat: This child is clearly too insane to be staying out. I'm afraid, my dear boy, since you did bite him in the crotch, which no normal Toon would actually do, have been deemed to insane.
He gasped and glared.
Pscyho: I'm not insane! I'm normal! What would my dad and siblings think!?
Cat: Now, now. (to the men) Gas him!
They gassed him, knocking him out a little as the cat turned to Sarah.
Sarah: But...he saved me.
Cat: I'm sorry, my dear...
The cat with his men left in an ambulence truck, making the girl weasel worry.
Sarah: Oh no...
Minnie: Oh, that's terrible! Condemned to insanity!?
Donald: That's not right!
Gyro: (notices on the screen) Wait, there's more.
They looked as inside the truck, the evil cat grinned wickedly.
Cat: Stupid boy...there's more than what happened tonight that we're bringing you to the asylum...(to the men) Prepare the experimental jars...it looks like we'll be experimenting with this one for quite a while...
The chipmunks looked worried, then to the unconscious Psycho.
Chip: No wonder he looks like the way he is!
Dale: Those jerks! When we find those guys, we'll show 'em!
Jemadari: Yes...they and their descendants shall pay for the crime they committed.
They all nodded in agreement, continuing to watch the next scene.
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Sept 25, 2006 23:38:19 GMT -5
Aw, now I feel bad for Psycho. Poor him, poor them.
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Post by Veggirl on Sept 26, 2006 22:37:58 GMT -5
Oh no! Poor Smart Guy, Psycho and Sarah! I feel so sorry for them!
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Post by julayla on Oct 6, 2006 16:37:22 GMT -5
Ch 9: The Judge's Recruitment
The next scene showed the pink shirted weasel, Wise Guy, coming home from the last day of school. He then noticed a man in black clothing and tinted glasses (aka Judge Doom).
Doom: Greetings, young one.
Wise Guy: Who the heck are you?
Doom: Oh, just a man wanting to be judge of Toon Town.
Wise Guy: (narrows) Uh...nice to meet you.
He was about to leave the scary looking man until he spoke.
Doom: Well, I guess you don't want to hear my proposal right now.
He looked up as his dumb-looking friend, Stupid, came to him.
Stupid: Duh, hey, Julian, wait up!
The weasel stopped and dumbfoldedly turned as the pink shirted weasel spoke.
Wise Guy: Tell us...what do you want?
Doom: Well...I'm going to need a few patrol men...and I need people with that...quality.
Wise Guy: I see...go on.
Doom: I needed at least six of you weasels. Two of them, I already know, would hopefully join me, though I won't say who one of them is...
Stupid: Duh, what else do you need?
Doom: I'll need a leader, a loyal but not too smart one, hence you two, a loner, and lastly a misunderstood weasel.
Stupid: Oh boy! More friends!
Wise Guy: Shut up, Stupid!
Doom: (grins) Hmmmm...how about that will be your companion's name from now on, Smarty?
Wise Guy: Smarty?
Doom: Smarty, Wise Guy, Smart Guy, they're all the same.
Stupid: Cool!
He then pondered for a moment, then nodded.
Wise Guy: Fine, call us by them.
Doom: Oh, one more thing: I expect you two to call each other by nickname. Also, Smarty, when you find them and give the members the nicknames, I expect them to be called them as well.
Wise Guy: (nods) Fine...we'll do it. Anything to forget Sarah...
Doom's eyebrow rose when Sarah was mentioned. The two left as his keychain, unknown to them, glowed.
Minnie: Well, at least we know how they were recruited.
Daisy: But still...that's very bad.
Mickey: I have to think he must've drove them away from each parent.
Donald: Oh yeah? If he were alive again, I'd show him!
The scene then changed to Wheezy's memory as he was smoking and coughing.
Wheezy: (sighs) Mom...dad...why did they had to move? That stupid new job out of Toon Town cost me my relationship with them...
Then, he walked away as he looked at Wise Guy and Stupid looking around.
Stupid: Duh, how are we going to find our loner, boss?
Wise Guy: That I have no idea...
Wheezy shrugged before he was about to head in the streets. Then, the two noticed him.
Wise Guy: Hey, you!
He glared at them.
Wheezy: (coughs) What do you want?
Wise Guy: Well, we were wondering what a kid like you was doing out in the streets?
Wheezy: What's it to you? I felt like it! Why do you care?
Stupid: Duh, I care.
Wise Guy: Shut it, Stupid! (to Wheezy) What's your name?
Wheezy: It's Michael...I'd like to be alone right now.
Stupid: (pats him) Aww...don't go away. You look pretty cool, Michael.
He looked at him.
Wheezy: You mean...you don't care if I look like I came from a cigar?
Wise Guy: Nah! Besides, we got your back...but from now on, we'll have to give you a nickname.
Wheezy: (glances) As long as it doesn't involve relationships...(wheezing) I'm in.
Stupid: How about Coffee or Smokey or Flammie?
The pink shirted weasel whacked the dumb weasel.
Wise Guy: I'll be the one to name him! (to Wheezy) From what I can tell from you...how about Wheezy?
He looked at him for a moment, then nodded.
Wheezy: Wheezy...I think I'll get use to it.
He coughed a little more.
Wise Guy: You know...you can come stay at my place if you like. Dad and mom wouldn't mind it...but watch out for my bro, Kevin...sometimes he's a monster.
He laughed as they walked to his place, which almost looked like a mansion.
Wheezy: He-he-he, I'll keep that in mind.
Goofy: Will you look at that, they didn't mind Wheezy at all...they became his closest friends.
Gyro: Gee, I never thought that weasels had a different side until now...
Chip: Me neither...
Then, the next scene appeared as they watched.
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Oct 6, 2006 21:34:35 GMT -5
Wow this is cool. Poor Wheezy, I feel bad for him. Hmm, this sounds a bit like my fic eh? ^_^ Good job. ^_^
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Post by Veggirl on Oct 6, 2006 22:12:40 GMT -5
Yeah, poor Wheezy. But this is a very interesting fanfic.
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Post by julayla on Oct 11, 2006 16:10:40 GMT -5
Ch 10: Persuading Family
The next scene showed a dark violet weasel, the same size and what looked like the same clothing as Judge Doom's, except his eyes were slanted like an egyptians and his bangs were bent upward to make it look spikey, knocked on the door. Then a familiar girl weasel, Sarah, opened it.
Sarah: I'm sorry, officer, I don't want myself or my cousin in the-
She looked shocked, gasping as she recognized the adult weasel.
Sarah: D...Domonic? (teary) What happened to you? You're older and-
Domonic: (sighs) I had to make a deal with the lady known as Maleficent...she told me that my pain would be forgotten if I became older...
Then, she noticed her raven haired brown weasel cousin, Greasy in pajamas that were barely fitting sighing.
Greasy: Sarah, if it's Chief O'Hara again, I'll-
He looked shocked, seeing the taller weasel and recognizing him.
Greasy: Cuz? Aye Caramba! What in El Diablo happened to you?
Sarah: He made a deal with Maleficent...
Greasy: That monster!?
Domonic: (narrows) Don't you dare call my mentor that! (to Sarah) Anyway, I need to know something...I'm trying to run for judge of Toon Town, but I'll need your cousin's help.
Greasy: (narrows) What's the catch?
Domonic: Your life and Sarah's...having a better life. (grins) Isn't that what you both wanted?
Greasy looked concerned as Sarah looked very worried about the situation.
Domonic: I already recruited two of them so far, Alexander, and I might want to help you make new friends...especially concerning the ladies.
That made the weasel smile.
Greasy: I'm in.
Domonic: So...from now on, my dear cousin...how would you like to be called Greasy?
Greasy: Hmmm...I'll get use to it.
Domonic: (smiles) Good...and one more thing...make sure that any members of my new "gang" calls you that from now on.
Sarah: Can't I still call him Alex?
Domonic: As long as you remember that his new name is Greasy, Sarah. (narrows) Now, I just want to talk to you about something...
Greasy: (sighs) Fine...
Greasy turned and headed back in as Domonic placed his arm around Sarah, grinning wickedly.
Domonic: Tell no one what I'm about to reveal to you...
He then showed his human mask to her.
Domonic: When I'm around our cousin or anyone else, I'd like to let everyone think that I'm a human, not a toon.
Sarah: (confused) Why would you do that?
Domonic: Simple, my dear cousin, have you ever seen a Toon Judge?
She shook her head.
Domonic: I thought so...anyway, in order for me to win a few things, I'll be needing your help, but tell no one about it, not even Greasy.
Sarah: But why?
Domonic: What's important is this, Sarah: With you secretly helping me and my "Toon Patrol" as I would call them, we'd be unstoppable in bringing justice.
Sarah: (smiles) I'm glad you changed, Domonic.
She hugged him as what looked like an image from the hidden glowing keychain appeared behind Domonic, unknown to her, smiling happily.
Sarah: At first, I thought you were heartless, but I can tell that you're now very sweet.
The image was what looked like Domonic, except he was Sarah's size, lighter fur and without the slants or demon red eyes.
Image: Thank you...
The image faded and the keychain stopped glowing while Domonic looked disgusted.
Domonic: Anyway...I heard rumors that you probably know someone who would like to join my gang.
Sarah: (looks down) Yes...he saved me, but was taken...(sadly) I don't even know where to find him!
Domonic: I'll tell you what. How about you help me find the weasel I need, and I'll consider you as my, what you call it, secret agent!
Sarah looked at him, then stood up and nodded.
Sarah: Okay, I will! I think I know who to go to.
She then headed inside, packing her belongings, then came out with her bag and ran out.
Sarah: Tell Ale-I mean Greasy that I'll be back when I can!
The weasel grinned, chuckling wickedly.
Domonic: That stupid girl...
Mickey and the gang looked worred after what they just saw.
Minnie: Was that a ghost behind that weasel?
Goofy: At least we know what species Judge Doom really is!
Mickey: And Maleficent...I can't believe she converted him to the dark side.
Donald: (glares) When I find her, I'll show her!
Jemadari: Uh, let's continue watching this first...
Shenzi: (worried) Sarah...
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Post by Veggirl on Oct 12, 2006 1:11:50 GMT -5
Uh-oh, I wonder what'll happen next.
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Post by julayla on Oct 12, 2006 9:34:44 GMT -5
Ch 11: Psycho's Escape
The scene showed Psycho now looking as he did now with a muzzle on him and the sleeves around his body. He was struggling, trying to break out of the prison.
Psycho: (thinking) When I get out of here, I'll kill them for putting me here!
Then, he saw the cat in the mustache with a little evil red kitten talking to the scientist about to head in.
Cat: Remember, this latest experimental potion, the Twilightius, as I'd call it, is placed into him immediately.
Scientist: Yes, sir.
The door opened as Psycho glared and saw the needle carrying the formula.
Cat: If this is successful, my son, Katz, we shall have our arch-angel.
Katz: (concerned) What do you think it shall do, father?
Cat: You see, son, two sides of him are to be tamed...his light and his dark side. If the weasel is pure hearted, then he could possibly create or bring back life, no matter how long. But...if his heart is completely tainted with darkness, then he shall bring death...all just by the touch of his bare hands.
Then, Psycho muffled as he screamed from the shot.
Scientist: It is done sir.
Cat: Good...we'll return with the equipment in a few minutes.
The three began to leave as Katz glared wickedly at Psycho, then the door closed as they were gone.
Psycho: (teary/muffles) I want to go home...
Then, a familiar weasel looked from outside his prison. He looked shocked, seeing Sarah, even if she did age a bit.
Sarah: (quietly) I'll get you out...just hang on.
Psycho looked confused as he noticed a human that Mickey and his friends only recognized.
Mickey: It's Marvin Acme!
Goofy: Hey, I didn't know he was helping her out!
Terra: Cool...
Banzai: Probably doing her a favor or something.
Huey: Well, he does care for Toons, especially ones locked in for no reason.
They then saw the scene as the dynamite outside exploded. The two rushed in, untying the muzzle and straightjacket sleeves.
Marvin: Are you all right, young lad?
Psycho: (gasps for air) Yeah...I am. (glares at the door) But those jerks...
That was when the door opened, then the three looked shocked.
Cat: Hey! Give back our experiment!
Sarah: (narrows) No! You can't have someone who saved my life!
Cat: Fine...
He then hit the alarm button as Psycho, glaring at him, jumped to the older cat.
Psycho: You die, now!
The cat screamed as Psycho was brutally biting and punching him hard. Katz looked frightened and traumatized while the scientist ran from the nearly bloody Psycho. When he was done, he glared at where the scientist headed.
Psycho: Those monsters...whatever they did to me, they'll pay!
Marvin: (helps him up) But now is not the time for revenge, please. Your family has been worried sick of you.
Sarah: So was I! Come on before they see us! (to Marvin) Thanks for helping us again.
Marvin: Toons are like family, they're very close to you and would do anything to be together again.
The three then headed to what looked like a van, then, when they were in, they drove off as the scientists looked surprised and Katz, still a bit traumatized, glared angrily as he clenched his fists.
Katz: That monster...he killed my father...he'll pay...they'll all pay!
The little ducks opened their eyes as Louie spoke.
Louie: Is it over, Uncle Donald?
Donald: Yeah, it's over.
Gyro: And from the looks of it, Psycho's free, I believe.
Kijana: Perhaps we were wrong to judge these weasels because of their appearance...
Ed: (nods) Ha-ha-ha-ha!
Banzai: I don't know what happened to that kid, Ed.
They then looked at the next scene that took place.
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Oct 14, 2006 1:03:45 GMT -5
Wow, didn't know that Psycho could be so ferosious! Amazing job Julayla, don't stop. ^_^
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Post by Veggirl on Oct 14, 2006 22:39:20 GMT -5
Aww, I feel sorry for poor Katz. Hope to see more.
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Post by julayla on Oct 22, 2006 0:48:20 GMT -5
Ch 12: Psycho's Test
After examining himself, Psycho looked at Sarah, then hugged her.
Psycho: Don't worry...just because I got rid of that evil cat doesn't mean I'll hurt you.
Then, the door was opened as Judge Doom looked at the two.
Doom: Thank you for finding him.
Psycho: What!? I thought you cared for me, Sarah!
Doom: Oh, you can be sure that things aren't always what they seem...I just need to test you first.
The two walked out as Sarah cautiously followed. Outside, three hyenas with a anthro-wolf trying to hold their chains were waiting.
Wolf: It better be worth it!
The weasel in the straightjacket looked concerned as he spoke.
Psycho: What's with the wolf and hyenas?
Doom: They're your test, young weasel. See if you can find a way to get rid of them.
He nodded to the wolf, then the wolf released the chains as the three hyenas charged to where Psycho was standing. The hyenas growled as Psycho narrowed.
Psycho: What do you hyenas want to prove?
Female Hyena: We're just trying to prove that we have the strength to get rid of you...The name's Savanah, and these two with me are Mumbasa and Edd, though we call him Double D for short.
Mumbasa: Don't think we're doing this for kicks. We're just doing this because this guy paid us and this wolf here to feed our families.
Psycho then looked at the badge on the semi-strong wolf's shirt.
Psycho: Let me guess...he's the current Sherrif of Nottingham, right?
Double D: Ha-ha-ha-ha!
Psycho: Eh? What did he say?
Savanah (Female Hyena): He only speaks ancient hyena language and he says that if he's killed, his own son will probably take over.
Psycho: Just bring on the fighting.
Savanah: (grins) I thought you never asked.
They then charged to the weasel, who dodged quickly.
Psycho: Whoa!
Doom: If you succeed in defeating your opponents, I'll consider you a member of the Toon Patrol!
The weasel sighed as he growled and pounced on Double D, though he was hard to keep down. He was then shoved to the wolf, who nearly dodged him.
Wolf: Hey, watch it, will-
He then looked at Sarah, then somehow found some interest in her.
Wolf: Well, well. Lookie what we've got here.
The hyenas, however, just paid attention to Psycho, who was covered in garbage as they laughed hysterically.
Savanah: Oh man, my daughter, Shenzi, should've seen this.
That was when Shenzi realized who that particular hyena was.
Shenzi: M...Mom? No wonder she didn't come back...
Minnie: Something the matter?
Shenzi: I thought she was murdered, but I can see why she's gone now...
The hyenas in the screen continued laughing as the luckless weasel tried getting up, but kept failing as the three hyenas gasped, clutching to their hearts. And with that, they fell to the ground with their souls coming out of them, making Psycho shocked for the first time.
Psycho: Oh man...I killed a kid's mom...
Shenzi glared angrily at the unconscious weasel with tears in her eyes.
Shenzi: You stupid weasel! Because of that clumsiness, you made my mom laugh herself to death!
Banzai: Shenzi...I don't think he meant to do it...besides, it's not like he did that on purpose.
Shenzi: (angrily) Shut up!
In the screen, Psycho sighed as he looked sadly at the female hyena.
Psycho: I'm sorry about your girl...I know what it's like to lose a family member...
He then looked at the wolf going to Sarah.
Wolf: Why you hanging around this place for? It's not safe.
Sarah: Uh, I can find my way back.
Wolf: (takes her hand) You'll have to make a better excuse than that.
He then tried kissing her, making her shocked.
Sarah: But you're married and I'm a kid.
Wolf: What difference does that make?
Angry, Psycho jumped toward the wolf.
Psycho: Leave her alone!!
He bit the wolf's butt, making him scream as the wolf angrily tried shaking him off.
Wolf: Let go of me!
He shook violently until Psycho was off of him while the evil judge grinned wickedly. The wolf jumped on top of Psycho with anger in his eyes.
Wolf: If you think I'm going to let you live...
He grabbed his throat, making the weasel start to choke anxiously.
Sarah: (gasps) Justin!
She then took out what looked like bottles of Acetone, Benzene, and Turpentine, then opened the bottles and with a tear in her eye, threw the contents at the wolf.
Sarah: (sadly) Forgive me.
The wolf screamed as he felt it on him. He then turned and looked at the female weasel, letting go of Psycho before he started dissolving quickly.
Wolf: You...(narrows) You little wench...my son...my son shall avenge me!
With that, he melted into a puddle of ink, vanished forever.
Sarah: (drops the bottles) I...I didn't mean to kill him...I was trying to get him off of-
Doom: Save it...Justin, was it? Looks like you're in.
Psycho: But...they're dead.
Doom: Of course, getting past your opponents like this is one of the ways to get your way.
He then helped Psycho as he grinned.
Doom: You know, you need a better name than Justin.
Psycho: Yeah...I just hate that name.
Doom: Well, from the looks you have now...how about...Crazy...or Insanity or...
Sarah: Why not Psycho?
Doom: Hmmm...how about it, Psycho?
Psycho: I guess so...at least it's better than Justin.
Doom: (smiles) Good, tomorrow, you'll be meeting the crew...(to Sarah) And tomorrow, you'll start helping me make whatever it is you made that stuff with...
Sarah: I just hope it's constructive purposes...
Shenzi was still on the verge of tears after she watched what happened.
Shenzi: Sarah, I can't believe you would had to do something like that.
Mickey: It's not like she wanted to get rid of him. She just wanted him off of Psycho.
Daisy: But still...why was a wolf attracted to her?
Banzai: Yeah, before she got that weasel out, no wolf was attracted.
Gyro: Unless...I've heard rumors about a potion that makes any male wolf, be it her age or older, attracted to the person who drinks it...maybe when that cat's needle broke, a drop of the syrum must've accidentally got into her.
Goofy: Are you sure?
Dale: But we didn't saw it happen.
Then, Jemadari took out a picture of what looked like Psycho beating up the older cat to death. In the background, broken glass was everywhere as a piece with a drop of a formula was in the female's arm.
Jemadari: Look in the background. I think that would explain it.
Terra: No wonder Psycho hated wolves...
Huey: Maybe we can find a cure for that formula if we try.
Dewey: Yeah, how hard can it be?
Donald: We will, boys, after we finish watching more of this.
Then, the next scene showed up.
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Post by Veggirl on Oct 24, 2006 20:27:41 GMT -5
Aww, poor Shenzi. I hope to see more.
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Oct 24, 2006 22:02:27 GMT -5
Great Chapter Julayla. 'Tis awsome. ^_^
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Post by Cobrawolf on Nov 4, 2006 1:07:22 GMT -5
I can guess who was The Son of that wolf.
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