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Post by theamericanmarten on Nov 8, 2010 20:28:37 GMT -5
This following fanfic is a parody of Goldilocks and the 3 Bears, with our favorite weasels in the place of the three bears. In it, the weasels decide to re-enact the story of the three bears so that they can give Goldilocks what she deserves for sneaking into houses: complete torture. Fanfic coming soon to a Weasel Board near you!
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Post by The Forgoten One on Nov 8, 2010 20:35:16 GMT -5
hope it's not a deep dark story
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Post by theamericanmarten on Nov 8, 2010 20:43:46 GMT -5
Don't worry, it won't be ANYTHING like that.
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Post by The Forgoten One on Nov 8, 2010 20:44:32 GMT -5
ok can't wait ^^
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Post by disneyplease on Nov 8, 2010 21:50:18 GMT -5
(cheering like a little girl) YAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can't wait to read it!!!!
DisneyPlease!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Nov 8, 2010 22:36:50 GMT -5
It'll be coming soon!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Nov 8, 2010 22:44:59 GMT -5
Prologue
Once there was a little girl named Goldilocks. She had short, curly blonde hair, and she was always getting into trouble. She liked to play pranks on people, play ball in her house, and most of all, she liked to sneak into other people's house and trash them. She caused such a ruckus that she was exiled from her home city and sent to ToonTown. Lots of toons liked her, and she liked them. One day, however, Goldilocks was so curious of what was around the town, so she decided to have a long walk and look around, only to cause plenty of trouble...
To be continued...
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Post by disneyplease on Nov 8, 2010 22:50:54 GMT -5
ooh, looks goods!
can't wait to see more!
DisneyPlease!
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Post by disneyplease on Nov 9, 2010 11:22:10 GMT -5
heres an idea of what you can add from this point
as she is walikng towards a certain part of toon town, alot of toons try to warn her Not to go to that part of town because thats where five nasty toon weasels live, but all Goldilocks hears from them is Bla bla bla, so she ignores them
DisneyPlease!
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Post by The Forgoten One on Nov 9, 2010 12:56:19 GMT -5
good so far
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Post by theamericanmarten on Nov 12, 2010 23:07:06 GMT -5
ooh, looks goods! can't wait to see more! DisneyPlease! Cool, I will. |
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Post by theamericanmarten on Nov 12, 2010 23:07:51 GMT -5
EDIT: I MEANT THE POST BEFORE THAT! SORRY! ;D ;D ;D
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Post by theamericanmarten on Nov 12, 2010 23:27:38 GMT -5
Chapter 1
Meanwhile, in a bad part of ToonTown, there were five weasels known as the "Toon Patrol." There was the leader, Smart A**, the second-in-command, Greasy, the security guard, Wheezy, the terror-causer (frightens victims), Psycho, and an large, dim-witted buffoon, Stupid.
To be continued...
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Post by The Forgoten One on Nov 12, 2010 23:28:19 GMT -5
not bad so far
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Post by theamericanmarten on Nov 12, 2010 23:31:58 GMT -5
Thank you.
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