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Post by The Forgoten One on Nov 12, 2010 23:55:01 GMT -5
welcome
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Post by disneyplease on Nov 13, 2010 8:35:31 GMT -5
oh boy, I can't wait to see more!
heck Im so excited Im jumping up and down, up and down!
DisneyPlease!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Nov 13, 2010 13:12:58 GMT -5
Okay, more coming soon!
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Post by disneyplease on Nov 13, 2010 14:03:38 GMT -5
(clapping my hands like crazy) Yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!
DisneyPlease!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Nov 13, 2010 14:11:52 GMT -5
Chapter 2
One day, the weasels had almost nothing to eat for breakfast, since Smart A** spent almost all the grocery money on a new jacket. "Duh, I'm hungry," said Stupid. "Shut up, Stupid!" shouted Smarty, "Can't ya see I'm thinking?!?" So Smarty started to twiddle his thumbs more until he came up with an idea. "Hey, I got it!" he shouted to his colleagues, "Remember the story of the Three Bears? Well why can't we do the same thing, but we'll be the five weasels! And when Goldilocks comes upstairs to sleep... WHAM!" "Yeah," said Psycho, "Wham! Food, gimee food, gimme food!" And Psycho was jumping up and down for some porridge, but there was one problem, and Greasy said so: "Eh, boss, we don't got no porridge for Goldilocks, just these cans of clam chowder." "Well, make clam chowder!" said Smarty.
To be continued...
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Post by disneyplease on Nov 13, 2010 14:56:40 GMT -5
oh boy, I can't wait for the rest
DisneyPlease!
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Post by The Forgoten One on Nov 13, 2010 14:57:15 GMT -5
nice so far
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Post by theamericanmarten on Nov 13, 2010 15:40:00 GMT -5
Thanks, girls!
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Post by disneyplease on Nov 13, 2010 20:17:43 GMT -5
hope the next chapter comes soon
DisneyPlease!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Nov 13, 2010 20:51:15 GMT -5
It will.
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Post by disneyplease on Nov 13, 2010 21:22:52 GMT -5
okay
(waiting patiently)
DisneyPlease!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Nov 19, 2010 1:28:31 GMT -5
Chapter 3
All the weasels sat down with clam chowder, ready to play "Goldilocks and The Five Weasels." "Well," said Smart A**, "Let's get started." Psycho took a sip from his chowder. "Oh, my chowder, I mean, porridge is too hot." Greasy, Wheezy, and Smarty just stared at their bowls. "My chowder's too hot," said Greasy. "Too hot," said Wheezy. "Eh, my porridge is too hot," said Smarty. Then Stupid took a sip. "Duh, somebody's been sleeping in my bed," he said. But Smarty just hit him on the head with a spoon. "Now, let's all go for... a walk," said Wheezy, "Then the porridge will be just right." So the Toon Patrol went for their "walk."
To be continued...
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Post by disneyplease on Nov 19, 2010 10:44:51 GMT -5
Oooooooooooooooooooooooooh Boy!
I can't wait for what they're gonnah do to Goldilocks, heck Im so excited that Im really jumping up and down, up and down,
DisneyPlease!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Nov 19, 2010 18:30:33 GMT -5
Okay, it'll be coming soon!  |
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Post by The Forgoten One on Nov 25, 2010 14:49:59 GMT -5
keep up the good work
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