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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Jul 7, 2006 0:30:39 GMT -5
DUN, DUN, DUN! ;D
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Post by julayla on Jul 7, 2006 12:09:49 GMT -5
Uh oh! Looks like the clones are coming closer and closer. This ain't good...keep it up.
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Jul 12, 2006 2:29:15 GMT -5
Since Veggirl is at camp, I wrote the next chapter.
Chapter 9. Kidnaped!
“One more time,” Hester groaned at his recruits.“Ready...aim...fire.” Charlie, Itchy and the weasels launched their arrows. Hester ducked behind a tree before a arrow landed on his head. After all the arrows landed in different odd places, Hester poked his head out from behind the tree.
“Ok! I think we’ve done enough training for today. Every one could go home now.” Charlie, Itchy, and the weasels from Weasel Town dropped their bows and walked off towards their home. Hester stalked over to where Rodney and I were sitting.
“This is the last time I train anybody, or anything!” he grumbled to us. Rodney grinned at him. I walked over to the other weasels who were picking up the bows.
“I don’t know about you guys buy my fingers are gonna be sore for a week.” Wheezy groaned.
“Duh, mines too,” Stupid agreed. “Hey, where’s Psycho?”
“He told me that he was going to go visit his mom.” Smart Guy said. He turned to me. “Hey Rocky, could you take Skyler home? I need to go do something.” I nodded.
“Sure, I’ll even bring Hester and Rodney along.” I said. Smart Guy smiled.
“Cool, I think Danny should be with him.” I nodded and walked over to Rodney and Hester.
Hester and I were jogging after Danny, Skyler and Rodney. We were near a deserted ware house in Hopscotch lane.
“Who knew these guys had so much energy.” I said to Hester. He nodded. We ran up to them and stopped in front of them. They all stopped in front of us.
“Ok...no more running ahead of...Hester or Rocky.” Hester panted a bit. They lowered their heads but nodded. Hester flicked his tail with satisfaction. “Alright then, lets go.” We were walking closer to the ware house when Danny and Skyler stopped.
“Hester,” Danny said. Hester looked over his shoulder. “Why is there writing on this building?” Danny was pointing at graffiti on a wall. We walked over to the graffiti Hester squinted at it.
“That’s not graffiti,” Rodney said. Hester and I looked at him. “It looks like, a message of some kind.” We looked at it again, indeed it was a message.
“I think I can make it out,” I said. I looked more closely at it. “It says:
You think your so clever, you think your so smart. Well how would you feel if we tore you apart? —DEC ”
My stomach did a flip when I read the last part. Danny and Skyler shuddered. Rodney stared in confusion at the message. Hester tilled his head to one side.
“DEC? What’s that’s supposed to mean?” he muttered. He started to wash his tail. “Sounds like voodoo if you ask me.”
“Who is that message for?” Rodney asked me. I shrugged. I re-read the message to my self. A sudden thought came to me, and it made chill go up my spine.
“I think I know who the message is for.” I said quietly. Rodney and Hester looked at me with interest.
“Who do you think?” Hester asked. I swallowed.
“I think it was for us and...the weasels!” A scream shot out from the other side of the ware house. We spun around and saw that Danny and Skyler were gone! As the sun started to set, the three of us ran over to where the scream came from.
On the other side, there was Danny and Skyler, but they weren’t alone. The weasel clones were there as well.
One clone that looked a lot like Psycho, but was wearing black straight suit, had Danny by the scruff of the neck. Skyler was throwing punches at the Greasy clone (wearing a much darker green than the original Greasy). The Greasy clone had his paw on top of Skyler’s head so he wouldn’t get any closer to him.
“Danny,” Skyler exclaimed. “I think I’m wearing him down!”
“Yeah, I’m exhausted.” the Greasy clone said annoyed. He pushed Skyler down. The Greasy clone pulled out two burlap sacks. “Ripper, put the kid in one of the sacks and lets go.”
That’s when we attacked. Hester yowled like mad as he pounced on the Psycho clone named Ripper. Ripper dropped Danny and started battling Hester, who was sinking his claws in Rippers face. I jumped on to the Greasy clone and knocked him down.
“Rodney,” I barked. “Take Danny and Skyler away from here, now!” Rodney yipped at Danny and Skyler to follow him.
“Oh no you don’t.” Ripper growled. He bit Hester on the stomach that caused him to yowl and let go of Ripper’s face. Ripper dashed over on all fours over to the kids and blocked their path.
I felt a pain go through my back left leg. I jumped off of the clone Greasy and looked at my leg. There was a dagger deep in my leg. I fell on to my side. The clone Greasy pulled the dagger out painfully, got up and grabbed the burlap sacks.
“Common Ripper, grab em’ before...” There was a gun shot. I turned and saw the five original weasels.
“Leave them alone,” Smart Guy growled with his gun pointed at the clone Greasy. “Your out numbered.” The clone Greasy chuckled.
“That’s what you think.” he said. The Greasy clone pulled out his gun and shot it three times in the air. A black van crashed through the wall and screeched to a stop. Three weasels got out of the van, the other weasel clones no doubt, and joined the clone Greasy’s side. The sun had set and darkness was starting to creep in. The clones eyes had turned from normal Toon looking eyes, into blood red eyes.
“Your move.” the Smart Guy clone smirked. Smart Guy ran forward and knocked down the Smart Guy clone.
Then, both originals and clones started battling each other. Ripper growled and jumped on to Psycho. Wheezy punched his clone on the face, and received a similar punch on the stomach. The two Stupid’s were having a sword like battle with their bats. The Greasy clone had Greasy in a head lock. Both Smart Guy’s were rolling on the dirt throwing punches.
I limped over to Rodney and the others. Hester also limped over.
“We gotta jet.” I said to them. A yelp came from the battle. Ripper had a scar running down from his eye to the tip of his nose. Ripper grabbed Psycho by the arm and swung him right in to some garbage cans. The clone Greasy tossed Greasy on the wall.
The two of them ran over to us, knocked us down, grabbed Danny and Skyler, and shoved them in the burlap sacks.
“Hey Boss! We got the loot let’s go!” the clone Greasy shouted. The clone Smart Guy pushed Smart Guy off.
“Shake em’ off boys and lets go.” he said. The clones fought off the originals and ran into the van. The two kids were screaming their heads off. The van started and the drove into the street.
“SKYLER!” Smart Guy shouted. He got up and ran after the van. I followed him just running on three legs. I ran near the side of the van. On the door it said: DEC. The Smart Guy clone growled and pushed on the gas petal. I fell back with the original Smart Guy. Ripper stuck his head out the window and smirked.
“Bye, bye.” he said before giggling.
“DADDY!” Skyler screamed. Smart Guy and I slowed down and stopped. I looked at Smart Guy. He had a sad look on his face as he watched the van disappear in the distance.
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Post by julayla on Jul 12, 2006 12:32:16 GMT -5
Oh no! Poor kids! This is not good...not good at all. I hope the kids get rescued.
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Jul 12, 2006 20:45:04 GMT -5
Aw, this fan fic is really good, let's see what happens next: (BTW, is the character called Itchy in this fic the violent blue mouse from The Simpsons?) Er, no. It's Itchy from "All dogs go to heaven." *shuders* Itchy and Sratchy show, that thing haunted my every waking moment when I was younger.
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Jul 14, 2006 2:16:49 GMT -5
Yep. Here's a pic, just incase. Pic isn't working anymore.
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Jul 22, 2006 4:12:32 GMT -5
Bleah, it's 3:02 in the morning, but I had to post it up.
Chapter 10. DEC and Revenge
Smart Guy and I went back with the others. Wheezy was helping Psycho up, while Stupid helped Greasy up. Hester was licking his wound that Ripper gave him. Rodney looked at us and stood up.
"Did you get them?" he asked hopefully. I shook my head. Rodney's eyes filled with sadness as he sat down again. Smart Guy sat on a tipped over garbage can.
"Their gone, we couldn't save them." he muttered rubbing his neck. Psycho looked at the tire marks left from the van. Both weasels had regret in their eyes. I laid down and rested my chin on my paws.
'Poor Danny, and Skyler.' I thought closing my eyes. 'Those weasel clones were more powerful then I thought. What are they gonna do to them, their just little kids. They wouldn't kill them...would they. This wouldn't have happened if I had just watched over them, I had let both Smart Guy and Psycho down. All because of a stupid message.' I muttered the message to my self again. 'It was signed from DEC, but what does it mean.' I lifted my head up and opened my eyes. 'DEC, I read it somewhere before. Wasn't it on the Weasel crew van.' I watched as Rodney stood up and walked over to Smart Guy, who had his face buried in his paws.
"Hey Smart Guy," Rodney said. Smart Guy didn't move. "There's something I want to show you all." He lifted his head. The weasels stared at Rodney.
"Where?" he asked. Rodney motioned the weasels to the front of the building. Hester and I followed them. When we got there the weasels stared up at the message on the side of the building.
" 'How would you feel if we tore you apart?!' What's that supposed to mean." Greasy growled. Smart Guy stared at the signature, then looked at us.
"I think I know what the D and E stands for." he said. "It stands for Dr. Evillax." I perked my ears up.
"Crew, I think the C stands for crew!" I barked.
"Dr. Evillax's Crew." Psycho muttered. We stared up at the message again. "What are they going to do with Skyler and Danny." Smart Guy looked over a Psycho.
"I don't know." he said. "But we're not gonna let them have a chance to do things to them. Common, lets go get cleaned up and meet back at my place."
Miles away in a abandoned barn, the DEC van was parked outside. Inside the barn were the five clones with the two crying children. Ripper stood in front of them and bared his fangs.
"Don't they ever shut up!?" he growled. Skyler and Danny started to cry louder. Ripper turned to Venom (the Greasy clone), who was leaning on a chair, filing his sharp claw like nails. "Why can't I just kill them and get it over with?!"
"The boss said no killing...yet." Venom said. "Besides, we need them alive if we want the plan to work." Ripper growled and walked over to a bail of old hay. He sat there glaring at the two kids.
"Wha...what are y-you g-g-going to do with u-us." Skyler sniffled. Ripper got up and went over to them.
"I'll tell you what we're going to do, we're gonna skin you clean if you two don't shut up!" Ripper growled.
"Your a Meany!" Danny cried. "You may look like my daddy, but your not! My daddy's nicer then any of you!" Ripper grabbed Danny by his shirt collar.
"DO YOU SEE THAT SCAR?!!" he shouted, showing Danny his scared sided face. "Do you know who gave that to me! Your own daddy! That's who!" He dropped Danny on the ground and went back to the bail of hay. Just then the other three weasel clones came in with a laptop. Zero (Stupid clone) looked at the two terrified, sniffling kids.
"What's with them?" he asked.
"Nothing that concerns you." Ripper snapped. Striker (Smart Guy clone) placed the laptop on the bail of hay, opened it and started typing on it. "So what did the boss say Flame?" Flame (Wheezy clone) turned his gaze away from Skyler and Danny to Ripper.
"Same thing as always," he muttered dragging his two cigarettes. "Review the plan, blab about revenge, let us say what evil we did, blab about revenge, tell us what we need to do next, and blab about revenge. Nothing new." Ripper chuckled. Venom sat up and walked over to Striker.
"Profile on the originals?" he asked.
"Yep." Striker muttered. There was a little sound, and then a grin appeared on Striker's face. "Got it, guy's check this out." The weasel crew went over to the laptop. Skyler and Danny walked over as well. Both were surprised when Flame let them go in front of him. "It says here that when the original Psycho was four he was separated from his mother in a flood, then they were reunited." Striker looked at his gang with a smirk.
"How 'bout we, separate them for good?" he said.
"Your gonna kill my Nana?" Danny asked sounding upset. Striker looked at Danny with a evil smile.
"Yeah, kid we're gonna kill, your Nana." he said. Danny stared up in terror at him.
"Why?"
"Why, because we're made that way! And there's nothing you can do about it." Danny's eyes started to fill with water. "Aw, is the little baby gonna start crying?" Striker rubbed Danny's head. "Poor little..."
SWAT!
The others gasped in surprise at what they just saw. Striker glared at Flame. "Did you just swat me?!" Striker growled. Flame stood paralyzed to the spot, he couldn't believe that he had just slapped his boss's paw away...from the enemies kid!
"I...I...don't..." Flame started. Striker grabbed Flame by the shirt collar.
"Did you, or did you not just swat me?!!" Striker growled more threatening. Flame nodded slowly. "Why?!"
"I don't know what came over me." Flame forced out of his mouth. "It just...just sort of happened."
"Did Flame go soft?" Zero teased. Flame glared at Zero.
"I did not go soft!" he snapped. Striker let go of Flame's shirt.
"That's what they all say, before they go extra soft." Venom smirked. Flame clenched his fists.
"I didn't go soft!" Flame growled.
"Oh, yeah? Well then prove it. Both you and Ripper are gonna be the ones who kill the enemies mother, got it?" Striker said. Ripper grinned wickedly.
"Gladly." Ripper said. "Flame?" Danny stared up into Flame's cold eyes. Flame didn't know what was going on, there was some kind of feeling that was very confusing when ever he looked into the kids eyes. He sighed.
"I'm in."
I'm gonna let VG change a few parts if she wants to, mostly the clone names because their pathetic (except for Ripper and Venom, I think those names are cool). Well post what you guys think. I'm gonna go catch some Z's.
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Post by julayla on Jul 22, 2006 11:51:23 GMT -5
Oh my...it did look like Flame was going kind of soft, and poor kids. I hope Psycho's mom doesn't get killed.
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Jul 22, 2006 13:46:22 GMT -5
Sorry for the pathetic names, but it was two in the morning when I started writing the chapter. My brain was like half asleep, so I couldn't think of anything else.
What do you guys think of the names?
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Post by Veggirl on Jul 23, 2006 4:56:20 GMT -5
Yeah, I changed Cobra's name into Striker though. Still have no idea what Flame or Zero's names should be changed into.
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Post by Veggirl on Jul 27, 2006 23:54:55 GMT -5
All right, sorry this took so long, but I had writers block for a little while.
Chapter 11. The warning
“So tell me again, why we’re going over there?” Hester asked. “Merlin can see into the future.” I explained. “Maybe he can help us in some way.” “I’ll do anything just to get Skyler back.” Smart Guy mumbled. “Same here.” Psycho said. “With Danny I mean.” We were back in the Toon Patrol’s hideout, discussing a plan. The plan was, me, Hester, Rodney and the five weasels will go to Merlin’s house and ask for suggestions on rescuing the kids, and we go from there. I looked over at Psycho’s mother, who was with us. “Sandy, do you think you can take a patrol around Ollie- Ollie-Oxford street?” Sandy nodded. “Who do you want me to take?” “Charlie and Itchy will go with you.” I said. “Dumbo and Timothy will fly up in the air.” “Flasher and Slimy will go down Hopscotch Lane.” Hester said. “The rest will patrol different streets and all. Okay then, we’re ready to go!” Sandy went over to Psycho and kissed. “Be safe.” “Don’t worry.” Psycho said. “If these clones mess with us, once I’m through with them, they’ll be bawling like a bunch of babies!” “All right, all right.” Hester said. “Come on guys, lets go.”
Going down Toontown at night was a lot more scarier when you think that clones will attack you at any moment. “Psst, Hester!” I whispered. “What?” Hester hissed. “I can’t see!” “I can. But I can’t see any clones.” There was a crash from the alleyway. Rodney jumped and raced under me. He poked his head out and gave me a sheepish look. The weasels froze, drawing their weapons out. Hester flattened himself on the ground. We waited. Nothing. “Probably just a stray cat?” I suggested. “Possibly.” Hester said. “Now come on, lets go on.”
We arrived at Merlin’s house a few minutes later. He welcomed us in and invited us for a cup of tea. After some tea and explaining the whole story to him, he puffed on his pipe while in thought. “Ah yes, the clones I have heard about.” Merlin said. “I can tell you what will happen.” “You mean you can see things before they happen?” Rodney said, amazed. Rodney has never met Merlin before. “That’s right dear boy.” Merlin said. “I can see anything into the future!” “Everything?” Rodney said. “Yes, everything!” Merlin nodded. Merlin’s owl, Archimedes, poked his head out from his little owl house. “Uh-uh-uh-uh! Everything Merlin?” “Eh...no, not everything.” Merlin admitted. “I don’t know who will stop by for a cup of tea, and here you eight are!” “Do you know what the clones and the crazed scientists are doing now?” Smart Guy asked. Merlin sat back on his chair, closed his eyes and puffed on his pipe. “Hmm, I see...I see two clones stalking a patrol.” “Patrol?” I said. “We sent out patrols a little while ago!” “Who are in the patrols?” Wheezy asked. Merlin was silent then spoke. “Um...two dogs, a skinny one and a tall one. Also, a sandy- colored female weasel.” Psycho gasped. “That’s mom!”
After saying good-bye to Merlin, we raced out of his home and down into Toontown. Hester looked up. “There’s Dumbo!” The little elephant with big ears flew down and waved his trunk. Timothy came out from Dumbo’s hat. “We were flying around, looking for the clones and we saw them attacking one of the patrols! We couldn’t see who they were, but we searched everywhere until we found you!” “Take us there!” Hester said. Dumbo went into the sky and flew off with us following. “Oh please let it not be too late!” I pleaded silently. Hester raced up ahead of us and raced up a hill. When we caught up to him, we stared down. Charlie and Itchy were standing in the middle of the road, eyes widened, shaking with fright and with wounds on their body. “What type of clones are these?!” I heard Hester hiss to himself. “Being able to make wounds on Toons!” We raced down toward Charlie and Itchy. “Are you guys okay?” I asked. Charlie nodded. “We were attacked without warning! The clones came out of nowhere and attacked! Geez! You don’t know how terrible it was!” “Where’s mom?!” Psycho cried. “Th-th-th-they dragged her away!” Itchy cried. “We saw the Psycho clone dragging her away toward Alley Cat alley with big huge claws on his paws! Ugh! It was horrible!” Psycho raced off toward the direction Itchy indicated. I raced after him and found him staring at a body. “No,” He whispered. He then threw back his head and shouted, “NO!!” I went over to his side and stopped, staring with horror at the body. Psycho fell to the ground, sobbing uncontrollably. “Why Rocky? Why?” He sobbed. I knew why, but anger and grief made it hard for me to speak. “Because...Evillax made these clones for one thing. To kill!” The lifeless body, was Sandy.
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Post by julayla on Jul 28, 2006 0:19:05 GMT -5
Oh no...poor Psycho. Now he's an orphan too! Aww...*hugs Psycho* There, there, Psycho...vengeance shall be yours! And they will pay for what they did...keep it coming.
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Post by Veggirl on Jul 28, 2006 0:36:19 GMT -5
Okay then, here's the other chapter.
Chapter 12. A bold plan
We took Sandy's body back to the hideout and laid her on the couch, draping a white sheet over her. "I'm gonna kill those dang clones!" Psycho snarled. "I'll rip their evil hearts out one by one! You guys stay away from them, they're mine!" "And don't forget," Hester said, "when you're under my command, you obey my rules!" Rodney came into the living room. "The other weasels are outside, Dad." "Thanks Rodney." Hester said. We followed Hester outside where the other weasels stood. Hester leaped on a stump. "Weasels of Weasel Town!" He announced. "We had a terrible loss. These clones had attacked a patrol and killed one of our dear weasels. Sandy, Psycho's mother." There were gasps of horror. I looked around. Psycho was nowhere to be found, probably still with his mother's body. I wondered if Hester will allow Psycho to miss this one meeting. "So now, we must take action!" Hester said. "We can't stay here and wait for the clones to attack again. We must go in there." "In where?" Stupid asked. Hester looked at him with squinted eyes. "Into Evillax's hideout." There were gasps of horror. "But Hester!" I said. "Evillax will find us and probably kill us with Dip!" "It's too dangerous!" Wimpy moaned. "I'm not going in!" Slimy said. Everyone began to shout complaints and moans. "QUIET!!!!" Hester yowled. We stopped. Hester looked at us. "Now, let me tell you guys something. If the clones continue this way, then they'll kill anyone you hold dear. They might kill your mother, father, sisters, brothers, friends, wives, children!!" "Or husbands." Greasy's wife, Alejandra, spoke up. Hester nodded. "Or husbands. If we don't stop them, then the clones will continue killing and torturing for Evillax. Now if you guys don't want to save your family or friends, then I'll go on by myself!" There was silence. Then Smart Guy took a step forward. "I'm with you Hester. You're right. If we don't stop the clones, they'll do something far more evil than what they have done." I nodded. "Hester is my best friend. Wherever he goes, I'm going." "Me too!" Rodney barked. "The weasels are my pals, and I'm going to help them anyway I can." "I guess you can count us in too." Greasy said. "Yeah." Wheezy coughed. "Where boss goes, we're going too." "Count me and Itch in." Charlie said. "We gotta pay those clones a little visit!" Slimy and Flasher looked at each other. Slimy spoke. "Touching speech, Hester. And you're right. We're not gonna let those clones bother us anymore. We're gonna stop them!" "Count me and Dumbo in!" Timothy said. Pretty soon, everyone was in with the plan. Psycho suddenly came out from the house and looked at Hester. "I'm going too. I gotta get revenge on those clones for the death of my mom." Hester purred with satisfaction. "When we get there, you can rip out all the clones you want." Psycho grinned with wicked delight. "All right, lets do it!"
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Post by julayla on Jul 28, 2006 11:40:20 GMT -5
So now they're planning to stop the clones once and for all. Good! That-a-girl! Keep it up!
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Jul 28, 2006 22:46:13 GMT -5
Ahem!
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