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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Aug 11, 2006 3:50:12 GMT -5
O.O I just realized something, there were two chapter eights! I'll ask VG to modify the number of the chapter she posted. But anyways enjoy. ^_^;
Chapter 13. Caught
We all stared up at the factory which was Evillax's temporary hide out.
"I wanna go home!" Wimpy whined. He turned and started to leave. Slimy and Flasher pulled him back with the group. Hester stood in front of the group.
"Alright, here's the plan," he started. "First, Charlie and Itchy will go into the air vents along with Shoey. They sneak around until they find Dr. Evillax's room where he broods over plans of revenge and stuff."
"And how are we going to find this room?" Charlie demanded.
"Don't worry." Hester said. "I have a map for you guys. Now, when they find it, they stay in the air vent until they hear the plan. Then they come back and report to us."
"And what if we get lost?" Itchy asked.
"How about if I go with them?" I suggested. Hester licked his paw.
"Fine," he said getting up. "Just don't forget the map." He led us towards a vent at the side of the building. Smart Guy, Greasy and Psycho opened the vent. Hester handed Charlie the map of the factory. The four of us climbed into the vent.
"Remember the plan." Hester reminded us. We nodded and started down towards the darkness.
About halfway, Charlie snapped. "Would someone shut that shoe up! It's squeaking is getting on my last nerve!" Shoey started squeaking angrily at Charlie.
"Common guys," I said. "Lets not fight right now. Now were are we Charlie?"
"Beats me." he replied.
"Don't you have the map?"
"I misplaced it."
"You what?!"
"Oh no." Itchy whimpered. "Were gonna be trapped here forever!"
"Common lets keep going." I said. "If anyone sees something, then just holler." We continued down the vent until Shoey started squeaking madly.
"What is it?" Itchy asked. I looked to my left and saw what Shoey was squeaking about. There was a bright light coming from the darkness.
"Over there." I said slinking over there. The others followed me. The light showed us a large room, in the room Striker and Zero were talking.
"I think we just hit the jackpot." Charlie whispered. I nodded and we all listened to their conversation.
"We've gotta keep our heads down." Striker told them. "We can't go out there."
"Out where, Boss?" Zero asked.
"Out there in the streets!" Striker snapped back at him. Just then Venom came in through a door.
"Psst, hey Boss." he hissed.
"Yeah, what's the matter?" Striker asked.
"Boss, it's...the little brats. They gave me the slip."
"D'oh boy!" Zero said before giggling. "Is it a pretty pink one?"
"No not that slip you stupid mongrel. They got away man!" Venom started jabbering things in Spanish.
"We gotta get 'em," Striker interrupted. "And once we've got 'em, the weasels and their mutts will fall into our little trap."
"Trap?!" Zero exclaimed. "Duh, I don't see no trap around here boss." Zero got whacked with a chair by Striker.
"Not yet you idiot!" he growled. Zero sat up a bit dazed, and stared at the birds flying around his head.
"Hey," he remarked. "Look boss! Look at the little birdies!" Striker hit him again. "Ye-ouch! And the cute little stars."
"Shut up, ya imbecile!" Striker hissed at him. Flame came into the door with Ripper at his heels.
" Hey, Boss!" Flame wheezed. "Guess what we found hidden near our hideout. It's the Toon Patrol van!"
"Someone must have told them we waz out of the cage!" Ripper said before giving a little giggle.
"This day just keeps getting better and better." Striker groaned burring his face in his hands. He looked up at his gang. "Venom, you and Zero go look for the brats. Flame and Ripper you two go and capture as many of the Toon Patrols you can get. I'll go and tell the Doc that we have to start the plan now."
"Duh...what?" Zero asked. Striker glared at Zero.
"Do you know what we were talking about?!" Striker snapped. Zero blinked at him blankly.
"Mince meat?" he asked. Striker groaned as he explained the plan over again to Zero.
"We better go and warn the others!" Itchy whispered to us. I nodded and started moving until there was a loud creek. I stopped. The vent wasn't going to hold us much longer.
"Hey what's the hold up?" Charlie asked. I looked over at them.
"What ever you guys do," I started. "Don't...move." Shoey didn't seem to have heard me. He gave an annoyed squeak and started hopping up and down impatiently. "Shoey, no!"
It was too late. There was a loud bang and the four of us went falling down to were the weasel clones were. We all stayed where we were, shocked on how sudden that was. Striker walked over to us.
"Well, well, well," he smirked. "Look at what we've got here."
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Post by julayla on Aug 12, 2006 22:01:09 GMT -5
Oh no! Poor guys! This is not good. At least the kids got away. I hope the weasels do something.
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Post by Veggirl on Aug 12, 2006 23:19:44 GMT -5
Okay, here's the next chapter I wrote. It's really sad at the end so be ready.
14. Dr. Evillax
A few hours later, me, Charlie and Itchy had our paws bounded in front of us while Shoey was shoved into a box. “How did we ever get into this mess?” Itchy groaned. “Gee, I don’t know.” Charlie snapped. “Lets ask Mr. Squeaky Shoe!” “Well things could be worse.” I pointed out. “At least they haven’t dumped us in Dip or anything.” “Shut up ya’ mutts!” Striker snapped. “The boss will deal with ya’ soon.” “Oh joy.” Charlie said, rolling his eyes. He then dipped his head and started to gnaw on something I couldn’t make out because his head was in the way. The door suddenly burst open. A squat, potbellied man with a balding head and glasses walked in. He glared at us Toon dogs. “Are these all you could find?” He snarled. Striker shrugged. “We nabbed a Toon shoe with us as well. He’s in the box.” The man nodded and turned to us. “Do you three know who I am?” “Dr. Evillax?” I said. “Correct.” Evillax said. “I see you had met my clones.” “Yeah we did.” Charlie snapped, looking up. “When they attacked us and killed one of our crew members!” “Good, good!” Evillax said, smiling evilly and rubbing his hands. “One less Toon to worry about.” I was appalled. “How could you even say something evil like that?” Before he could reply, the door burst open and in came Venom with Danny and Skyler. “Danny! Skyler!” I barked. Venom threw Danny and Skyler to the floor. “Here are the brats, boss. We found them trying to open a locked door.” Skyler glared up at Evillax. “You have no right to treat us like this! Don’t you know that everyone loves Toons?” “Not me!” Evillax said. “Do you know why? Well let me tell you a little story. A long time ago, I had a dream on becoming an animator. I wanted to show my artistic side to the world, but they refused me because they said I couldn’t even draw stick figures! They laughed and ridiculed me, so I decided to get even. I will destroy the Toons those so called ‘animators’ had created. I will show them pain and suffering until they beg me to stop! Oh I won’t stop then, no I won’t. I will then destroy the mayor of Toontown and then be mayor of the whole city I hate. Then, I shall destroy it and build my own town!” He threw back his head and laughed insanely. Charlie looked up from gnawing. “Oh for crying out loud! He’s just coping the same idea Judge Doom had for the Roger Rabbit incident!” Danny and Skyler looked at him. “Roger Rabbit incident?” “I see you haven’t heard of the Roger Rabbit incident.” Evillax said. “Well your fathers were in it.” Danny and Skyler stared at him. “What?” Evillax nodded. “Yes, they wanted to destroy Toontown as well. So they joined up with Doom.” “You’re a big liar!” Danny said. “Daddy will never do that!” “Oh yes?” Evillax said, smirking. “Well, here is the evidence.” Ripper rolled in a video projector and a little remote control. Dr. Evillax pushed a button and different scenes showed. (A/N: They are the scenes in the Acme Factory in the WFRR movie when they are about to Dip Toontown.) It showed the weasels helping Doom build a Dip mobile and getting ready to dip Roger and Jessica. I watched Danny and Skyler’s faces as they changed from confusion to surprise to upset. Finally the scene ended after the weasels had died laughing and went up to heaven. Dr. Evillax turned off the projector. “You see?” He smirked. “Your fathers were evil as well. Maybe still are deep down. But we can get rid of them. We can get rid of all the evil in the world.” Skyler and Danny looked at each other. “Don’t do it guys!” I said. “It’s a trick! If you join up with him, then he’ll just dip you too!” “Silence, you mongrel!” Evillax shouted. He turned to the weasel kids. “Well, what do you say?” Danny and Skyler looked at each other, then at Evillax and spoke one word. “No.” “What?!” Evillax shouted. “We won’t join.” Skyler said, folding his arms. Evillax started to reach for Skyler, but Flame spoke up. “Leave the kids alone.” Evillax stared at him. “What?” Even me, Charlie and Itchy stared at him. “I said, leave...the kids...alone!” Flame said. My jaw dropped. I couldn’t believe it! An evil clone standing up for two young children! “What the heck’s wrong with you?!” Striker snapped. “Are you suddenly going soft?” Flame glared at his boss. “Maybe I am.” Evillax suddenly swung and struck Flame square under the chin. Flame went flying and slammed into a barrel. The barrel broke and a lavender liquid spilled out. Flame screamed in agony as he began to melt. I was horrified. He...he’s dying! Oh please, no! The rest of the weasel clones started to laugh as they watched one of their comrades dying. Charlie suddenly jerked his head back. “Got it!” He then leaped up on his four paws and jumped on Evillax. The thing he was gnawing on were his ropes bounding his paws. Taking his example, me and Itchy started to gnaw on our rope as a battle raged. Finally we were free and joined the battle. Striker lunged at me, but I leaped out of the way, making him collide with Ripper. I raced over to the box Shoey was held captive and shoved it into the floor. The box broke and Shoey leaped out and started to kick the clones. Itchy dodged and twisted as he raced through between the legs of the clones and Evillax. Charlie bit, snarled and clubbed clones with his paws. Suddenly, the door burst open and I heard a yowl. Hester came racing in with his tail straight up. Behind him were the original Toon Patrol, plus Slimy, Flasher, Blacky, Shiny, Witty and Stinky. They joined into the battle, calling out war cries. We shouted encouragement to one another. “Ripper’s behind you Hester!” I shouted. Hester turned to face Ripper, then leaped on his face, clawing and scratching. Ripper swung and threw Hester off. “Stinky, watch out!” Stinky turned to see Zero coming in closer. Taking a deep breath, Stinky opened his mouth and green fumes came out from his mouth. Zero froze, then fainted on the floor. “Wow!” Stupid said. “Stinky’s breath had defeated my clone!” Witty watched calmly as Venom and Striker raced toward him in different directions. When it was the right moment, Witty leaped up high into the air, making Venom and Striker crash into each other. Suddenly, I heard Danny and Skyler’s voices. “Daddy!” I then heard Smart Guy and Psycho. “Skyler!” “Danny!” I turned my head. The two weasels had their sons in their arms, hugging them closely. “Retreat guys!” Hester shouted. They raced out of the room and into the hallway. The clones and Evillax followed them. “Stop them!” Evillax shouted. “Don’t let them escape!” Nobody noticed me standing over Flame. The bottom part of his body was melted and was melting slowly upward. “Flame,” I said softly. “What you did to those kids...” “Save it mutt.” Flame said. “I know it wasn’t a clone thing to do, but I couldn’t let the boss beat up innocent kids.” I smiled. “You would have made a great friend to them. What is that you’re melting in anyway?” Flame winced. “I don’t know, but I think it melts Evil Clones. Like Dip melts Toons. It might help you stop the other guys.” “You stay put.” I told him. “I’ll get Hester. He’s really smart and might help you.” “Too late for that.” Flame said. “Go on without me.” I stared at him with disbelief. “Flame, no!” “Hey mutt, if you ever find the kids and Ripper’s original, tell them that I’m...I’m sorry. For everything.” Flame’s head then melted into the lavender liquid. I stared at it with grief as I fell silent for an unknown friend that had found his true heart.
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Post by julayla on Aug 13, 2006 0:55:30 GMT -5
Awww...poor Flame. Goodbye, Flame, we'll miss you!
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Post by Veggirl on Aug 13, 2006 1:00:03 GMT -5
Don't worry, there's gonna be a surprise at the end.
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Post by FlameTheCharmander on Sept 10, 2006 2:50:27 GMT -5
Story's back on. Sorry that it took so long.
15. Death is in the air.
After grieving for Flame, I took the barrel of the evil-Toon killer liquid thing and rolled it down the hallway. Checking the scent, I followed it until I heard voices coming from a room. Yup, they were there all right. I rolled the barrel closer to the room. There I saw my team cornered by the weasel clones and Evillax.
"Alright," Evillax growled. "This is it, you guys are history!" Ripper started giggling wildly. Venom started cracking his knuckles. Zero raised his bat with a smug grin on his face. My paws began to prickle with anxiety. I rolled the barrel in to the room and placed my paws on top of it.
"Hey!" I shouted. They turned around and looked at me. I gulped before shouting, "Come and get me, suckers!" They stared at me for a moment before Striker lunged towards me, soon followed by his possey. I looked around franticly and saw a big rock. I ran over to it, picked it up and rushed back to the barrel. By that time the weasel clones were almost up to the barrel.
"NO!" Evillax shouted after them. "Stop! That thing will kill you!"
I lifted the rock and slammed it down on to the barrel. The lavender liquid burst out and hit the weasel clones. Striker, Venom, and Zero yelled in agony. They started melting away in the lavender liquid. Soon there were nothing but a puddle of paint.
"IDIOTS!" Evillax shouted. Psycho growled and started charging towards Evillax. I looked up and saw that Ripper was sitting on a wooden beam not too far off the ground. Danny noticed Ripper as well.
"Daddy!" he shouted. "Look out!" Psycho turned and face his son before Ripper jumped on him. Then clone and original started battling.
Ripper sank his teeth in to Psycho's shoulder. Psycho winced before flipping Ripper off and jumping on top of him and bit into Ripper's neck. Ripper growled and clawed Psycho on his side. Psycho yelped, got off of Ripper and started climbing up a tower of boxes.
"You won't get away form me that easily!" Ripper spat before he started climbing after him. Psycho started struggling trying to keep a hold on the boxes. He let a barrel fall and shatter into very sharp pieces of wood that strangely stood up, the barrel was filled with the lavender liquid. Ripper, avoiding the barrel, started gaining on him, swiftly and quickly climbing over the boxes. Then Ripper caught up to Psycho and sank his claw right on to Psycho's side. Psycho let out a yelp of pain.
"This is just too easy!" Ripper grinned wickedly swinging his other paw and hitting Psycho on his other side. Just then a small box slipped out from under Rippers feet. He lost his balance and fell backwards. He landed on to the sharp pieces of wood, and the liquid. He moaned and shouted in pain as he slowly started melting.
Psycho panted as he watched his clone disappear into nothing but a puddle of paint. He clutch his side and slid down the boxes. He landed safely on top of a long box.
"Daddy!" Danny wailed rushing over to his father. Evillax looked around before starting to inch his way towards the door. Charlie and Itchy jumped in front of Evillax and bared their fangs.
"Not so fast Evillax!" Itchy hissed.
"You just wait until we get the police over here!" Charlie growled. Evillax's face went pale but he didn't move. I went over to Danny's side where Psycho laid motionless. The Toon patrol members came up with Hester and Rodney. Danny looked up at Hester.
"He's not dead is he?" he asked hopefully. Hester looked at Psycho's bloody body.
"I...I don't know." he whispered. Danny's eyes started filling up with water.
"He...he can't be dead. He just can't be." Danny buried his face into Psycho's body.
"Your wasting your breath kid." Evillax said behind us. We turned and glared at him.
"How do you know?" Greasy growled.
"My clones were painted with dip, so if they killed anything it would have ended up like your ridiculous pink suit leader." he said.
"Who you calling ridiculous!?" Smart Guy growled. Danny let out a whimpering moaning sound. He started sobbing.
"Daddy," he cried. "Please don't be dead. I don't want you to go like Nana. Don't leave me please!" Still Psycho didn't move. I lowered my head. 'Maybe Evillax was right.' I thought sadly. 'Maybe...Psycho is dead.' I felt a tear fall down my muzzle.
"Don't worry kid," a soft whisper said. "I'm not leaving for a while." I looked up and saw Psycho looking at his son. Danny looked up and smiled.
"Daddy!" he shouted with joy. He gave Psycho a tight hug. Psycho winced but hugged him back. Rodney yipped with happiness, and Hester started purring.
"Glad your back, Psych." Smart Guy said to him. Psycho smiled.
"It's good to be back." he responded.
I looked over at Evillax. His face was pale with shock. He couldn't believe that one of his own clones wasn't able to kill him. I grinned, threw my head back and let out a short howl of triumph.
"We won!" I howled. "Evillax's clones were destroyed! We won!" Rodney threw his head back and howled with me. Hester started yowling, and Charlie and Itchy howled as well. Good has triumphed over evil, once more.
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Post by julayla on Sept 10, 2006 10:55:45 GMT -5
Yeah, very good indeed. And Psycho's okay! Thank goodness!
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Post by Veggirl on Sept 26, 2006 23:16:21 GMT -5
Okay, last chapter and maybe a epilogue after.
16. A happy ending
The police arrived a few minutes later and took Evillax off to jail. He swore and raged while he was being carried away. "Mark my words, weasels! You will not hear the end of me! I will get my revenge!" He was then carried off to jail. I looked at Hester. "So, everyone is safe, right?" Hester nodded. "I still feel bad that Flame is dead." Skyler said. Danny nodded. Hester, Rodney, Psycho, Smart Guy stared at them. "You feel bad for those evil things?!" Hester said. "Flame wasn't evil!" Skyler said. "He was really nice to us." I nodded. "It's true. I saw him save the kids when Evillax wanted to destroy them." "Same here." Charlie said. Itchy nodded. The weasels had guilty looks on their faces. "Too bad he was killed." Smart Guy said. "We can't bring the dead back to life." Hester then flicked his tail. "Maybe you guys can't, but maybe I can." "How are you going to do that?" Charlie asked. "Simple." Hester said, licking a paw. "I go into Evillax's files, get the files on making the clones, erase the evil part and make them good. That way, we can have the clones back and we don't have to worry about them being evil." "Perfect plan, Hester." I said. Hester then raced into the building. "Is he serious about this?" Charlie asked. "Hester is a really smart cat." I told him. "This will be easy for him." Psycho looked at Danny who was telling Rodney about what happened when they were captured by the evil clones. He sighed. I know I have to be happy to have Danny back, but I'm not for some reason. Is it because of my mom? He sighed as a tear rolled down his cheek. I didn't even say that I loved her, and now she's gone. "I'm not gone, son." Psycho looked up and gasped. "Mom?" Sandy flew down from a pillar of light with beautiful white wings. She embraced her son. "I won't be gone." She said. "I'll always be with you. In your heart, your memories and your dreams." "But mom," Psycho said. "I don't know how I'm going to handle it? I was reunited with you, and now you're dead." "When you love someone, they live on forever." Sandy said softly. "One day when your time comes, then we can be together. I'll be waiting." Tears fell down from Psycho's eyes as he looked up at his mother. "Promise...mommy?" Sandy nodded. "I promise. Meanwhile, you have a son and daughters to take care of. Plus your wife. Always treasure them forever." She then started to float up to the heavens. Psycho watched until she disappeared into the heavens. He nodded. "I will mom. I will keep my promise!" He looked over at his gang. It seemed like nothing happened. Hester then came back with Evillax's files. "All right. Lets go home." Home. Such a beautiful word. We are going home!
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Post by julayla on Sept 27, 2006 0:08:59 GMT -5
Awww...Psycho now knows that his mom will be waiting. I'm glad...I hope the epilogue's pretty good.
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