Clone attack

[Veggirl]

Okay, this is a story that me and FlameTheCharmander thought of and she'll be "co-director" while I write the chapters down. Enjoy the prologue that Flame wrote. P.S. Sorry about the dumb title but that was all we could think of.

Prologue

It was a dark, and stormy night. A mouse scurried around a
dark room looking for half a cookie he saw a man dropped
earlier. The mouse twitched his whiskers as lightning
flashed. He spotted the cookie near a lighted booth. The
mouse stared at the booth. He could have sworn it was dark.
He went near the booth and stared at a black-haired, balding
man with plastic glasses and rubber gloves. The mouse
tilted it’s head, listening to the man rant and rave.
“Soon, my clones will be finished, and once those idiotic weasels are out of the way, I’ll create more clones and end all of Toontown!”
Lightning flashed and thunder roared as the man cackled evilly into the night. The mouse shuddered, more than anything he wanted to go back to his hole and take a good long sleep, but he couldn’t. He was too interested on what the man was talking about. Toontown, weasels, clones! The mouse took a few steps closer. The man started to rant and rave again.
“I’ll show them, I’ll show them all! No more will they call me the idiotic weirdo that can’t even draw stick figures! No. They will soon be down on their hands and feet, begging not to let my clones ruin their little cartoons.I’ll show them!”
The man cackled louder as thunder and lightning struck. The mouse slowly backed away.
‘The guy’s a lunatic!’ The mouse thought while he started to shake in fear. ‘A complete psycho!’
The lights went out and a pair of blood red eyes were glowing in the darkness.
“THEY ARE READY!” The man shrieked with joy. There were suddenly four more pairs of eyes. The eye’s let out a terrible roar, that made the poor mouse shake even harder. The man cackled as thunder and lightning flashed and thundered. Forgetting all about the half cookie, the mouse dashed into the hole, getting away from the crazed evil man.

[julayla]

Interesting prologue...that clone, whoever he is, really is crazy. Let's hope it gets more interesting.

[FlameTheCharmander]

It will. ^_^

[Veggirl]

All right, here's the first chapter after a few adjustments.

1. To catch a bug

Hello. My name’s Rocky. I’m a Toon dog that is part Alaskan Husky, part German Shepherds. This is the most gruesome story I had ever written, but with a message about good overcoming evil. It all started one day when me and a
Toon puppy named Rodney were out in Toontown with
Smart Guy, Greasy, Wheezy and Stupid, our best friends.
“We gotta go and pick up old Psych.” Smart Guy said. “He’s
visiting his mom again.”
We went down Gingerbread lane and up one block where a small building stood. Smart Guy knocked on the door.
“Who is it?” A high-pitched voice called from the inside.
Smart Guy rolled his eyes. “It’s the pizza man.” He said sarcastically. “Come on Psycho, lets go!”
Psycho opened the door and giggled.
“Heeheehee! Sorry boss, I just can’t help it.”
“Just tell your mom where we are going, and lets go.”
Psycho went inside his mother's home.
“Mom, we’re gonna go and find a few bugs for my bug
collection.”
“All right Charlie,” Sandy’s beautiful voice said. “Try to be home before dark.”
“I will.” Psycho said.
I smiled to myself. Ever since the gang had found Psycho’s
birth mother, mother and son had formed a close bond that
could never be broken. He then came out and shut the door
behind him. We went off toward the Toontown park,
searching for bugs for Psycho’s bug collection. You see,
dear reader, Psycho had started bug collecting by catching
bugs, taking photographs of them and letting them go so no
bugs will be harmed.
“Duh...Where’s Hester?” Stupid asked.
“He said that he wasn’t going to waste his time searching for bugs.” I told him.
Hester was my other friend who is an orange Toon cat and lives in the alleyway.
“What kind of bug are we looking for?” Rodney asked.
“I’m missing a green caterpillar.” Psycho said. I looked up and noticed a green bug crawling up a pipe line.
“Is that it?” I asked.
Psycho jumped and grabbed his butterfly net.
“That’s it!”
The caterpillar looked behind him and squeaked. He then went inside the pipe. Smart Guy raced over and looked in.
“Stupid, you stand near here and when I give the signal, you
beat the pipe-line with your club. Got it?”
“Duh...what’s the signal?” Stupid asked.
“You’ll know when I tell you.” Smart Guy said, crawling up the pipe line. At the top, he looked in.
“There he is! All right Stupid, let him have it!”
Stupid banged his baseball bat with a nail in it on the pipe
line.
“Don’t kill it!” Psycho said. “Just get it out!”
Smart Guy jumped two feet in the air as the metal rings met his
ears. The caterpillar shot out and began crawling up a
telephone pole. Psycho and Wheezy started to climb up.
“You guys be careful!” Rodney yipped.
The caterpillar crawled in a glass case.
“We got him cornered now!” Wheezy coughed.
Psycho tapped the glass case. There was a flash of light and a bang. I watched with surprise as the two weasels flew high into the air, fur bristling with electricity. They both landed in a tree, all shook up.
Psycho lifted his head, head-fur more spiked up then ever.
“H-Holy—” He squeaked.
“Sm-okes.” Wheezy coughed, fur blacker than the night. The caterpillar crawled out and went off, blinking like a firefly. Me, Rodney and the weasels stared at it.
“Hey,” Stupid said. “How did he do that boss? How did he
do that?”

[julayla]

Oh man, I love the Fox and Hound reference with the glowing caterpillar! Very nice work here.

[Veggirl]

All right, here's the next chapter. Guess which movie Shenzi's story is parodying! ;D

2. Story conflict.

Walking back into Toontown, we noticed the hyena, Shenzi,
talking to the daughter of Smart Guy, Greasy’s three daughters,
Psycho’s two daughters, Wheezy’s two sons and Stupid’s
two sons.
“What is she doing?” Smart Guy mumbled.
We crept in closer as Shenzi said, “And so the magic horse
finally knew that not all humans were evil and so he and his
burro, along with the wolves went to find a new home for
them, but before they left, the magical horse erased the
human’s memories and everybody lived happily ever after.”
Shenzi sat with a proud look on her face, waiting for
applause. She received none.
“How can they live happily ever after if the magic horsey
erased the human’s memories?” Greasy’s four year old
daughter named Abril asked.
Shenzi paused. “Well...if the humans blabbed out about the
magic horse, then greedy humans will try to capture it.”
“What is it with the magic burro?” Stupid’s eight year old
son, Toby asked.
“The magic burro is an important part of the story so the
audience, which are you kids, will know that fighting is
wrong and it isn’t right to fight to see who is the more
strongest.” Shenzi explained.
Smart Guy’s three year old daughter, Kimberly, thought for a
moment and finally said, “Isn’t a burro also called an ass?”
“Fine!” Shenzi said, rolling her eyes. “The magical horse and
his ass went to find a new home.”
Shenzi paused and her eyes widened when she realized what
she said. Every little kid started giggling.
“You see?!” Shenzi snapped. “That’s why I use the word
burro!!!!”
Smart Guy stepped up. “All right kids, that’s enough. Give
Shenzi a break.”
“Sorry Daddy.” Kimberly said. “But it’s really confusing
about a magical horse who can mind read and fly.”
“Hey!” Greasy said. “Isn’t that like Poke—”
I felt something slam into my leg. I looked down and stared
at Hester who was panting.
“Hester! What is it?”
Hester looked at the weasels. “I just want to tell you that...the
stork has arrived! I repeat! The stork has arrived!”
The eyes of Smart Guy and Psycho widened. They raced off.
“What stork, Dad?” Rodney asked. For some reason,
Rodney calls Hester “Dad” and me “Uncle Rocky”.
“The stork that brings babies!” Hester said. “Come on! I
believe it’s time!”

[julayla]

Hey, I know that one! She was referencing Pokemon The First Movie with Mewtwo! Cool job on parodying it! And it looks like in Toon Town, babies really do come from storks. Nice job.

[Veggirl]

All right, next chapter up and a surprising ending to the chapter.

3. The babies had arrived!

We finally got to the hospital and found Smart Guy standing
in front of a door while a stork was opening a small little
book.
“Is Samantha in there?” I asked Smart Guy. He nodded. The
stork cleared his throat and began to read.
“Here is a baby with eyes of blue. Straight from heaven,
brought to you.”
Smart Guy smiled and started to open the door when the
stork interrupted.
“Or...straight from heaven up above, here is a baby for you
to love.”
Smart Guy nodded furiously and was about to open the door
when the stork held up a piece of paper.
“Sign here please.”
Smart Guy rolled his eyes, grabbed a pencil and signed his
name. I looked over at Psycho who was shifting from foot to
foot nervously.
“What’s wrong?” I asked him.
“Rocky, I have a few questions.”
“What?”
“Well...do you think my kid will like me?”
“Of course he will! Your daughters love you.”
“Do you think I’ll make a great father?”
“Sure! You’re a great father already.”
Smart Guy handed Psycho the slip. Psycho signed his name.
Finally, we were allowed to go in. Samantha and Sarah were
in their beds holding beautiful newborn baby weasel boys.
“Awww,” Rodney said.
“Aww, look at them.” Greasy said, smiling.
“Aren’t they darlings?” I said.
“Did you see anything so cute?” Wheezy said.
“Aren’t they darlings?” Hester said.
Smart Guy smiled proudly at the praise. Psycho stared at his
son for a long time, then fainted at the thought of being a
father to a boy.
“Do you want to hold your son?” Samantha said to Smart
Guy. Smart Guy nodded and was about to hold his son when
the stork said, “One moment please.”
“NOW WHAT?!” Smart Guy snapped.
“This is still part of the service.” The stork explained.
Getting out a kazoo, he blew in it and began to sing.

Happy birthday to you.
Happy birthday to you.
Happy birthday dear...dear...

“Oh dear,” The stork said. “What are their names?”
Smart Guy and Samantha looked at each other.
“Ours is named Daniel.” Sarah said.
“Ours is Skyler.” Samantha said.
“Oh,” The stork said. “Daniel and Skyler, huh? Daniel and
Skyler.” He blew on the kazoo again and began to sing.

Happy birthday dear Daniel and Skyler.
Happy Birthday...

He leaped on the open window and sang,

To-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o—

The wind blew making the stork be blown away.

You!!!!

Psycho shakily stood up. “What happened?”
Smart Guy walked over with Skyler in his arms.
“Nothing much. Just hold Daniel, your new kid.”
Psycho looked at his new child and reached for him. Taking
him in his arms, he stared at him for a moment. Daniel
wrinkled his tiny nose and sneezed.
“Ah-choo!”
His head-fur suddenly became spiky. Psycho stared wide-
eyed at his newborn son. Daniel looked up at his father and
giggled.
“Hee-hee.”

[julayla]

Waii!! Psycho's kid must be really cute! I'm loving it so far. And I'm sure the two sons will love their fathers. Nice work.

[FlameTheCharmander]

Aww, how cute! ^_^

[FlameTheCharmander]

Here's the next chapter, that both me and VG took turns writing.

4. The teasing and the arrest

It was four years later when Psycho took his now four year
old son to the park. Rodney and I accompanied them. Psycho
placed Daniel near the playground.

“Alright bud,” he said. “Go and have some fun, but stay
close to the swings. Ok?”

“Ok, daddy.” Daniel said before taking off toward the jungle
gym. Psycho watched as his son started climbing the ladder.
I turned my head and noticed Mortimer with a few other
Toons walking toward the playground.

“I wonder what they want?” I mumbled to myself.
Mortimer waved a hand at Daniel. “You see ladies and gents,
you’ve heard the term, ‘like father like son’, right? Well just
look at this little freak here and his bigger freak dad.”

He then called up to Daniel, “Hey you, get down here!”

Daniel looked down at Mortimer. Without a word, he
climbed down and walked toward Mortimer. Psycho
watched in silence. Mortimer nudged Daniel so the Toons
will see. He then forced Daniel’s mouth open.

“You see ladies and gents, just look at these sharp little teeth.
Soon to grow to huge fangs.”
He then pinched Daniel’s spiky head-fur.
“And look at this hair! It is what you call fun-ny! Ha-cha—”

SLAP!

Mortimer found himself on the ground with Psycho standing
over him, baring his fangs. The other Toons gasped.
“Oh my what a temper!”
“What did Mortimer do? It was just a comment.”
“A perfectly harmless remark.”
“Well the kid is funny looking.”
“Certainly is.”
“After all, who cares about weasels?”
Everybody laughed.

Psycho got off of Mortimer, picked Daniel up and carried
him back over to us.

“Daddy, what were they talking about?” Daniel asked.

“Um, son” Psycho said. “You need to understand something,
not all Toons like us weasels.”

“How come?” Psycho swallowed hard. I knew what he was
thinking. He was thinking about the Roger Rabbit incident.

“Hey Danny,” Rodney yipped. “You want to play tag?”

Daniel smiled. “Can I daddy?” Psycho nodded and placed
him down. Rodney ran up to him and touched him with his
nose.

“Tag, your it!” he said before running off. Daniel raced after
him. I looked at Psycho.

“That was a close one.” I said to him.

“He almost found out about the Roger Rabbit incident.” he
groaned.

“Your gonna have to tell him sooner or later.”

“Your right, but every time I have to tell someone about it,
then I get very nervous about it.”

“Well, just don’t rush your self.”

We waited until Rodney and Daniel were tired of playing
tag, then we walked home with them. Psycho carried Daniel
on his shoulders.

“Can we go to the park every day?” Daniel asked. Psycho
smiled.

“Maybe.” he said. We turned on Hide-and-Seek street, when
we saw Smart Guy slinking out of a store. There was
something wrong about Smart Guy, he wasn’t dressed as he
usually dressed. His suit was ink black, the band around his
hat was blood red, and his fur was darker then usual.

“Something’s not right.” I said to Psycho. “He doesn’t look
normal.”

“Maybe he decided to change his look.” Rodney said.

As we got closer Psycho called, “Hey boss, what are you
doing?” Smart Guy jumped and looked over at Psycho. He
then grinned in a evil sort of way. Smart Guy walked over to
Psycho and handed him a gun.

“Hold this.” he said. Psycho took the gun a bit confused.
Then Smart Guy took off. We looked at each other.

“What was that about?” I asked. Psycho shrugged and
continued walking. A police car suddenly, screeched to a
stop besides us. Chief O’Hara jumped out and pointed his
gun at Psycho.

“Stop, you’re under arrest!” he shouted.

“What?” Psycho asked confused. Horace Horsecollar got
out of the car and also pulled out his gun.

“Put the child down sir!” Horace said in alarm. Psycho
obeyed and took Daniel off of his shoulders. Horace rushed
over to Daniel and took him over near the police car.

“What the heck is going on?” I asked them.

“That weasel had just committed a crime.” Chief O’Hara
said. “Sir put the gun down!” Psycho placed the gun down.
Chief O’Hara rushed over to Psycho and placed Psycho’s
arms behind his back.

“We’re taking you downtown.” he said. He pushed Psycho
into the police car.

“I didn’t do anything!” Psycho said before Chief O’Hara
closed the door. Horace brought Daniel over to Rodney and
I. Then both police officers got in and drove off. Daniel
started whimpering.

“Where are they taking daddy?” he whimpered.

“Their taking him down town.” I said. I picked Daniel up by
the scruff of the neck and placed him on my back. “Hang on,
we’re taking you home and telling your mother.” Daniel
grabbed on to my neck. Rodney and I raced down to
Psycho’s home.

[julayla]

Oh no...this isn't good! Poor Psycho! The other weasels are probably caught as well! And I bet that was the weasel that was cloned! This isn't good...not good at all...and if they're all in prison, who will help them besides Rodney and Rocky?

[Veggirl]

OK, here's the next chapter. I wrote the first half, Flame wrote the second half.

(Quick note by Flame: We decided to shorten Psycho's son's name from Daniel to Danny sort of like a nick name. Back to the story.)

5. Timmy the mouse

We arrived at the weasel’s house ten minutes later. We
would have gotten there sooner if Rodney didn’t stopped and
smelled a fire hydrant. Hester was outside with the other
weasel kids, slinking across the yard. I raced over to him.
“Hester! Where’s Sarah?”

“Out looking for Psycho with the others.” Hester mumbled.
“So I’m stuck baby-sitting.”

“Hester is teaching us how to detect a mouse!” Greasy’s five
year old son, Juanito said.
Hester then crouched and pounced.

“YEOW!!!” A voice cried. “Let me go!”
Hester lifted a paw just an inch to reveal a small little Toon
mouse.

“Go easy on me!” The mouse cried. “I just want to escape all
the madness!”

“What madness?” Hester said. “Sure Toontown may be a bit
wild, but not that wild.”

“It wasn’t in Toontown!” The mouse said. “It was in the
human world.” Well that certainly got Hester’s attention.

“What? What happened?”

“Let me go and I’ll tell you.” The mouse said. Hester let the
mouse go as it scurried on top of a stump. He cleared his
throat.

“My name is Timmy C. Mouse.”

“What does the C stand for?” Psycho’s middle daughter,
Heather, asked.

“Cheese.” Timmy said. “It stands for Cheese Mouse. Okay,
anyway, it was about four years ago I was in the human
world looking for some snacks. I went into this human studio
where they do movies and cartoons and stuff. Well, it was
late at night, and I was searching for half a cookie. It was
dark and raining with thunder and lightning. There was this
booth and it was glowing, so I decided to take a look. This
almost bald guy was tinkering around with something,
mumbling about Toontown and weasels and clones.”

“What did he mean by that?” I asked out of curiosity.

“I have no idea.” Timmy said. “But it didn’t sound good. To
continue on, he suddenly shouted, ‘They are ready’ and five
pairs of red eyes shone out of the darkness. Quick as a wink,
I raced out of there as fast as I could and went back to
Toontown. Well, after four years, I thought that my
nightmarish encounter would be finished. But no-o-o-o-o! I
just saw an evil looking weasel come out of the store with an
ink colored suit and a hat band blood red.”

My eyes widened. “That’s the same weasel we saw!”

“Saw what?” We turn around and see the others coming out
of the van. Sarah picked Danny up from my back.

“Timmy was just explaining to us about the crazy, baldy,
man.” Skyler reported.

“What crazy, baldy, man?” Greasy asked. Timmy sighed and
explained his whole story again. Smart Guy gave him a
confused look.

“Weasel clones?” he asked. Danny started whimpering.

“What’s wrong with Danny?” Heather asked.

“They took daddy down town.” he whimpered. I suddenly
remembered the reason why we rushed over here in the first
place.

“That’s right,” I barked. “Chief O’ hara took Psycho down to
the police station!” Sarah gasped.

“Why they take dad away?” Psycho’s eldest daughter, Jessie
asked.

“We don’t know,” Rodney pipped up. “All we know is that
they said that he committed a crime.” Smart Guy looked a
bit upset.

“I’ve known Psych for a long time,” he said. “And I
defiantly know that he wouldn’t commit a crime. We’re
gonna bust him out of jail.”

“We should come too, so we could explain what happened.”
I said. Smart Guy nodded.

“I’ll stay here and watch over the kids.” Sarah said. Smart
Guy, Greasy, Wheezy, Stupid, Rodney, Hester, and I got in
the Toon Patrol van.

“Move over I’m driving!” Smart Guy said to Stupid who got
behind the wheel.

“Aw, I never get to drive.” he muttered. After every one was
in, Smart Guy turned the car on and headed down town.

[julayla]

Oh, very exciting. And I thank you for giving Timmy from Dumbo a cameo. Let's hope they bust Psycho out before they get arrested.

[Veggirl]

Okay, here's the next chapter I wrote down.

6. Explanations

Arriving at the police station, we saw Sandy talking to
Psycho who was in a cell.
“It’s all right, Charlie. I know you are innocent.”
“Thanks mom. But try telling that to the cops.”
I raced over to the cell.
“Psycho! Don’t worry, we’re gonna get you out of here. Hester is explaining everything to the police right now.”
Hester then came over with Chief O’Hara. O’Hara got the keys and unlocked Psycho’s cell.
“Well, you’re free to go. Sorry about the misunderstanding.”
“What misunderstanding?” Psycho said as his mom
hugged him.
“About the clones.” Hester said.
“Clones?” Psycho said. “What clones?”
Timmy scurried on top of Hester’s head and told Psycho the
whole story. Psycho listened in silence until Timmy got to
the end of the story. He then looked up at us.
“So this weirdo human created some weasel clones.” He
said. “For what?”
“We don’t really know.” I said. “I am guessing he is this
really bad cartoonists who wants to destroy Toontown for
some reason.”
“I suppose you are talking about Greg Taylor.” Chief O’Hara
said. “Or Doctor Evillax as he likes to call himself.”
“Evillax?!” Smart Guy said. “What kind of guy calls himself
Evillax? That’s stupid!”
“Duh...who? What? Where?” Stupid said, looking around.
Chief O’Hara continued. “All right, well, he tried out for a
job at the background department, but they turned him down
because he couldn’t even draw anything. He was a horrible
drawer. When he saw that Toons were praised and well-
loved, he grew into a terrible fit of jealousy. So he decided to
destroy all Toons. But he found out about you weasels and
how you can stop any danger that threatens Toontown.”
The weasels nodded. Ever since they had been resurrected
from the dead, they decided to stop any evil that threatens to
destroy their hometown.
“So,” Chief O’Hara continued. “I suppose he wants you all
destroyed so he can destroy Toontown with his clones.”
“Well we’re not gonna let him!” Smart Guy said.
I looked at him and saw a fierce glint in his eyes.
“Mark my words!” He said. “We’re gonna defeat those
clones even if it cost us our lives again!”