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Post by Lola on Jul 26, 2010 20:50:46 GMT -5
ahh your comment makes me so happy! don't worry they will have their revenege!!! sort of, you'll see
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Post by Fisi on Jul 26, 2010 21:07:14 GMT -5
XD This is so funny.
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Post by Lola on Jul 26, 2010 21:07:57 GMT -5
thank you ^-^ i try
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Post by Lola on Jul 27, 2010 20:49:10 GMT -5
yay I hope you like. Can't wait to show the rest I just need to put them in order and then WHA-LAH! ~~~~ “Oh goody-goody! I hope it’s cute and cuddly and squishy and lovable and….” She began “Sí, it’s all that” Greasy interrupted “You stay with her” Smartass commanded with a grin “Sí, I will__Oh no! I refuse!” Greasy protested with his accent. “Why not, you always have a way with the ladies” Smartass commented “This is no time for jokes my friend” Greasy replied “Look at her!” Elmyra smiled giving an innocent wave. “Look, look at that face it’s evil!” Greasy warned Smartass slapped him outside the head “Get a hold of ya’self” Smartass snapped “Hey I’m not staying here!” Elmyra said reaching for psycho. “I’m not letting you out of my sight!” “Hey” she said taking the razor out of his pocket. “What’s this anyways” She asked tossing it. “Noooo!” Psycho yelled, snatching it out of the air. “My precious” He said while caressing it. “Here let me show you” Psycho said, razor pointed to her throat, eyes swirling. “Psy!” Smartass snapped “She asked for it” Psycho replied “That’s not how we treat our guests” He commented with his grin “Duh, yes we do!” Stupid stated The weasels gave him a “Shut-up-you-idiot!” look. “Wheezy…” Smartass commanded “I got it” Wheezy answered bopping Stupid over the head with his own bat. “Duh…pretty stars” Stupid said “Hey that wasn’t nice” Elmyra commented “Don’t worry I’ll hug you back to health” She said picking him up and squeezing him “I’m fine!” Stupid said getting back up, jumping into wheezy's arms.
Meanwhile back in Acme Acres: “Something’s missing” Babs bunny commented “Eh, probably not that big of a deal” Buster replied “Yeah I guess you’re right” She said “But still what is it?” She added “Well let’s rewind shall we?” Buster asked pulling back a few scenes. “She’s in toontown?! How did she get there?” Babs asked while Buster brought them back to their original scene. “Hey why is she the first to make a cameo in toontown?! What gives Steve?!” She added “Well then c’mon let’s where it is” Buster said grabbing another scene. Buster and Babs entered the tunnel. “Does this thing ever end?” Babs asked as they turned a corner. “Hey what’s that red thing?” Buster asked “Is that a curtain?” Babs asked as they got closer. Soon the curtain opened up followed by the toontown song. ”Gahhh!” Babs screamed pulling her ears “Smile darn just smile” They sang “I’m smiling see? Now can you please stop?!” Babs pleaded “I’m surprised elmyra didn’t squeeze all these things” Buster commented After all the singing, Babs and Buster finally make it into toontown.
Oh whats gonna happened next? Will they find elmyra? Will the weasels's insides be crushed?! WILL I EVER FIND MY SOCKS THAT KEEP GETTING LOST IN THE DRYER!? Hey this didn't end with the weasels grinning
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Post by Mellow on Jul 27, 2010 21:07:20 GMT -5
XD HAAAA HA HA HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! HA ha ha HA HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! GOOD ONE!!!!
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Post by Lola on Jul 27, 2010 21:20:59 GMT -5
*gives cookeis*
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Post by Mellow on Jul 27, 2010 21:27:54 GMT -5
Me: YUMMY!!! (Singing) If you're blue and you don't where to go to, why don't you go to place where fashion sit's..PUTTIN ON THE RITZ!!!
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Post by Lola on Jul 27, 2010 21:38:53 GMT -5
I don't know thats song so i'll just sing a song that pops into my head......wait.....ZOOM ZOOM MAKE MY HEART GO BOOM BOOM BOOM MY SUPERNOVA GIRL!!
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Post by Fisi on Jul 27, 2010 21:43:46 GMT -5
Omg XD!!! Psycho's precious razor? GOD THAT'S FUNNY!!! Hmm, I KNOW, I LIKE TO MOVE IT MOVE IT, I LIKE TO MOVE IT MOVE, I LIKE TO MOVE IT MOVE IT, YOU LIKE TO, MOVE IT!!!
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Post by Lola on Jul 27, 2010 21:45:08 GMT -5
EVRYBODY MAKES MISTAKES! jk i won;t go there...how about IT GOES AROUND THE WORLD JUST LA LA LA LA LA
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Post by Lola on Jul 28, 2010 11:46:16 GMT -5
“Where could she be?” Buster asked “Somewhere with lots of cute things” Babs remarked That’s when Babs noticed a wanted poster with whom else but the toonpatrol. {Now why would they be wanted if they are in law enforcement? Feel free to answer} “Yep that’s Elmyra’s type, as long as their furry” Babs commented “Now, where to find them?” They asked around for the weasels but had no luck. Finally they spotted an abandoned warehouse. “This looks like the place” Babs said opening the door a pinch to see the weasels and elmyra who was still holding psycho. “Looks like elmyras got this let’s go” Buster said walking away “Hey!” Babs said pulling him back. “We’re not leaving without her” Said stated “C’mon Babs remember what she does to us” Buster said “Yeah I guess your right. Let’s go” She said Wheezy turned his head in the direction of their voices, he nudged Smartass. “We have company” Wheezy said. “Well how do we get out, we’re too far from the door” Babs asked “Well, well, well, look what we’ve got here boys” Smartass announced, startling the bunnies. “We were just leaving” Buster said “Yeah sorry, continue” Babs said as they began to run but it was too late. Smartass grabbed them by the ears and Wheezy blew smoke in their faces. “EWW cigarettes are gross!” Babs commented. “Who are you mugs anyways?” Smartass added “I’m Buster Bunny” Buster introduced “And I’m Babs Bunny” She added “No relation” They both said “Well” Greasy said pushing buster out of the way. “I’m greasy” He said kissing Babs’s hand. “Charmed” She said in one of her many impressions “So what are you doin’ here?” Smartass asked “We came to take back Elmyra” Babs said turning her attention to her who was now chasing Psycho and Stupid. “Don’t run away, I love you” Elmyra said chasing them. “Get away shoo!” Psycho said swatting with one of his hands while the other was wrapped around a pole. {Not like that} “On second thought you can have her” Babs said as they tried to run away. “And just where do ya think your goin’ huh?” Smartass asked pulling them back. Suddenly the Warner siblings came running through the scene running from Hello Nurse. There was a pause. “Who was that?” Wheezy asked and Smartass released the bunnies. The Warners came back to introduce themselves. “I’m Yakko” Yakko announced “I’m Wakko” Wakko added “And I’m Princess Angelina Contessa Louisa Francesca Banana Fana Bo Besca the Third.” She said, the weasels blinked at her {you know people get confused and they just blink} But you can call me dot” Dot said “We’re the Warner Brothers” The boys said “And the Warner sister” Dot added “Hello Nurse!” The brothers said to hello nurse when she ran back to catch them. Greasy’s jaw dropped. “Let’s go follow them boss please? We’ll switch!” Greasy begged. There was a knock at the door and then it opened revealing Jessica Rabbit. “Hello Nurse!” The Warner Brothers and Buster said “I’m Buster Bunny!” Buster said running to her. “I’m Jessica Rabbit” She said “We’re not related are we?” He added, raising his eyebrows to the audience. “Goodnight everybody” Yakko said blowing a kiss to the audience. “Boys go fig.” Dot commented “Buster!” Babs screamed “It’s a deal we’ll switch” Yakko said as they drooled over her “So, you wanna go out sometime?” Wakko asked “I’m sorry but I’m married” Jessica stated “Still?” The weasels asked in unison {*I love that!*} “He makes me laugh” She said “I can make you laugh” Wakko commented before dot hit him outside the head. “Boys” Dot said “No control” Jessica added “So what are ya here for doll?” Smartass asked “My darling Roger, something happened to him! Today when I got back from work he was all tangled! I didn’t know what to do so I came here!” She said “Why didn’t you go to Valiant?” Smartass asked “He’s out with Dolores somewhere” She said “Any thing else?” Greasy asked “I asked him about what had happened and he said some girl came out and squeezed him” She continued. They all turned to Elmyra.
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Post by Mellow on Jul 28, 2010 11:52:02 GMT -5
XD. I could picture greasy's jaw dropping when the nure came in. GREAT CHAPTER!!!
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Post by Fisi on Jul 28, 2010 12:07:23 GMT -5
X3 This is the funniest fic's ever.
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Post by Lola on Jul 28, 2010 12:50:03 GMT -5
thank you lol i love portraying Greasy as the dumb one, someone had to ;p oh wait thats why theyre's stupid! oh well he'll get his part
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Post by psychojr on Jul 28, 2010 13:45:16 GMT -5
yeah i some times see greasy as the dumb one but i also forget about stupid at some areas but nice work.
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