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Post by Mellow on Jun 26, 2010 23:27:22 GMT -5
Chpt 1 Girls Night
Riz invited her friends over for a slumber party. she and her friends were talking and the other's were in the dining room when they heard them go.
Riz: Blah bla bla bla bla?
Terry: Blaaaaa!
:Jenny: blah, blah BLAAAHH!!!! they all fell over laughing. wheezy spoke up.
Wheezy; what the heck are you all saying?!
Riz: Never question our own version of language, wheezy.
Jenny: Or we might make you join us.
Wheezy: Uh..i'm good! Carry on! they all chuckled happily. wheezy rolled his eyes. he shook his head.
Wheezy: Girls. sometimes i'll never understand them. riz cocked a brow and rolled her eyes. then they were doing dares now.
Terry: Now let's play Truth or Dare! the toon patrol eyes went wide.
Riz: Yeah! Great idea, terry! who goes first?
Jenny: ME! Megan truth or dare?
Riz: Dare!
Jenny: I dare you to drink a whole bottle of rootbeer in under one minute. she handed riz a bottle of cold, rootbeer. she opened it and drank it in 20 seconds. she hiccuped.
Riz; Satisfied?
Jenny: Very!
Riz: ok loa truth or dare?
Loa: Dare!
Riz: I dare ya to put whip cream on your face. she handed her the bottle and loa made a beard on her face. she wiped it off.
Loa; Happy?
Riz: Yeah!
Loa: ok, Michelle. Truth or Dare?
Michelle; Dare!
Loa: I dare you to stand on your head for 5 minutes! she stood on her head for 5 straight minutes.
Michelle; There. its time for.... Makeovers!
All: Yay! they gave each other makeovers. Loa had curls in her hair, riz had a facial, terry had a manicure, jenny had a pedicure, and michelle had her hair done. after that, they all went to sleep. riz was sleeping and was dreaming a normal dream about tonight.
Now i know this isn't mysterious sounding, my friends, but later on it will. i promise.
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Post by Mellow on Jun 27, 2010 12:52:45 GMT -5
Chpt 2 An Accident Happens
The next morning when they all got to school, the girls went to their favorite class club. you see, since they were so goood at math, the teacher's agreed that the students who were good enough at it could be in a teacher's club. the girls liked it. as they were heading to their lockers, they were talkig.
Riz; Aren't you excited?!
Loa: Who wouldn't be?!
Terry: i'm really excited about the new radio they have in there! it can play music in better quality.
Jenny: Not to mention karaoke!
Michelle: We love karaoke!
All: Totally! they all high-fived and shut their lockers and headed to the club, but when they left their lockers, their was one open, and when it shut, it revieled a toon weasel who had red fur, black, spikey hair, grey eyes, wearing a midnight blue jacket, and a black feroda with a dark blue band on it. . His name was Lewis. he was gentle around people, but they didn't know that he was really sinister. he heard about riz and the toon patrol. he couldn't stand her or anyone she hung out with. he wanted to get revenge on her and her friends. he wanted her days to end of locking up his family and cousins.
Lewis: i know what to do, Exacly! He chuckled sinisterly. when school ended, he followed her friend michelle home. he waited until she went outside to swim. he followed her into the backyard and when she wasn't looking, he pushed her body underwater by her shoulders and she was panicking trying to get up out of the water, but then she stopped and he pulled her out the water and left her on the deck and kncked on the door and ran fast. her mom saw the child and ran for help. riz was comng over for a visit when she saw the ambulance at her house. she got scared and ran there. her mom said she found her on the deck and she wasn't responding. riz understood and ran back home worried. she entered the door panicking.
Smart Guy: What's the matter?
Riz: It's michelle! She's going to the ER!
Smart Guy: What's wrong?!
Riz: her mom said she found her on the deck of the pool unresponsive and she was soaking wet. i'm thinking that was no accident at all, Smart Guy!
Greasy; Don't worrry, we'll investigate on it.
Wheezy; Yeah. just go and rest some to calm yourself down. she nodded and went to take what was supossed to be a short nap, but she ended up falling souns asleep. she was wondering about her accident.
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Post by Syrup on Jun 27, 2010 13:04:56 GMT -5
Nice story so far. Oh no. Evil Lewis!
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Post by Fisi on Jun 27, 2010 13:58:26 GMT -5
OMG!!!
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Post by Mellow on Jun 27, 2010 14:33:20 GMT -5
Chpt 3 Jenny's Accident
The next morning, she met with her friends at the school yard even though its was a friday and there was no school .
Riz; i think it's weird that she drowned, but her body was on land. do you guys think so too?!
Terry: Yeah!
Jenny: That's impossible!
Riz; Well we have to keep an eye on anything suspicious, girls!
loa: Right! they slapped their hands and ran off in directions. jenny ran off home, but unknown to her, she was next on lewis's list. she went to her room and got on her computer to look up the accident, but while she was, a shadow of a gun appeared through her window. she saw the shadow turning to her, but before she could duck, BANG! she got shot in the chest two times and collapsed on the floor. her father heard the noise and ran to her room. he saw the child and carried her to the hospital. riz and the other's heard about it.
Riz; This is so odd!
Terry; First michelle, then jenny.
Loa: Tell me about it!
Riz; well we can't give up just yet. we gotta track this fiend down once and for all!
Loa: Let's Go! they all ran off.
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Post by Fisi on Jun 27, 2010 17:18:45 GMT -5
*gasp* Good chappie. .
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Post by Mellow on Jun 27, 2010 18:55:34 GMT -5
Chpt 4 Terry's Accident
The following saturday, riz met up withe rest of her friends.
Riz; ok, let's not take any chances, and keep our traps shut while were talking about our plan to catch this person.
Terry: Right.
Riz; i'll look in the alleys around town, terry look anywhere you think, and loa, you do the samething. do we all get the plan?
Both: Yes!
Riz: Let's go! they all hurried off in diferent directions. terry was roller skating on the streets and sidewalks, it was now night time when she finally decided to give up. she was about to cross the street when she saw a car coming she was about to stop, but little did she know lewis was right behind her. he pushed her into the road and just before the car could stop, it was too late. she was hit pretty hard. lewis smiled sinisterly and grinned.
Lewis: Three down, and two to go! he ran off. riz snd lo heard about terry.
Loa; what will we do, megan?!
Riz: don't worry. i'll think of something. i promise. that person won't keep hurting friends that we care about. this i swear! i'll meet you later. i gotta run home. she hurried home and she was exhausted.
Smart Guy; Who got hurt this time?
Riz: Terry. got pushed out in front of a car. but we won't give up.
Stupid: That's the spirit!
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Post by Mellow on Jun 27, 2010 19:12:20 GMT -5
Chpt 5 Loa's Accident
The next morning, riz got up early and headed to loa's house. her parents were away on a weeks vacation still, but her grandmother was watching her. she met up with loa and they went to her room and talked. Loa had opened the window to her room up to let in some fresh air.
Riz; Well, now what? do we have to search convient stores?
Loa: Good idea, megan. i wish i could help but i can't. my grandmother wants me to stay here for today. maybe i'll help you on monday.
Riz; Don't worry. i understand. you too have fun! she then ran downstairs and out the door. loa was leaving her room when lewis slowly entered through the window. he followed her and as she was about to walk downstairs, he pushed her and she fell down tumbling on the staircase. her grandmother immediately called 911 while lewis escaped without geting caught.
Lewis: i think for the leader of the girl gang, i have something special for her tomorrow at school. he chuckled sinisterly and ran away. riz was in the dining room eating when she heard the tv.
Riz: turn it up, psycho. he did.
TV: In other news, a 13 year old girl named loa was sent to the ER when she fell down a staircase at her home. her grandmother found the girl unresponsive. there'sno word on her condition tonight. riz looked at the other's who looked at her.
Riz: Ok, this is starting to freak me out, guys!
Wheezy: Ditto. just relax. we'll handle it tomorrow while your at school. she nodded and went to bed.
Riz; Something's going on. i can feel it.
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Post by psychojr on Jun 27, 2010 19:27:29 GMT -5
nice story.
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Post by Syrup on Jun 27, 2010 20:19:29 GMT -5
Dude, this guy needs to be caught for, what? 4 counts of assault or something.
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Post by Mellow on Jun 27, 2010 22:34:20 GMT -5
Chpt 5 Riz's Accident
Riz got up for school. she got dressed in a hot pink t-shirt, blue jeans, and sneakers with blue and pink tie-died laces. she put on her bue jean jacket and headed to school. she was worried about her friends dearly. they all suffered majorly. she then went to her reading class. meanwhile, lewis was in the science lab. he wanted to start something to kill her and he was. He poured gasoline on the floor and he accidently (on purpose) flung it on a computer. it shorted out and lit the fumes and liquid on fire immediatly. riz was nextdoor to the room. she was still busy reading when she heard the fire alarm. everyone ran out but her. she was starting to get out when someone locked the door. it was lewis. she strugled to get out. smoke was already filling the room up. she got down low and panicked with tears in her eyes.
Riz: HELP!!! Someone...Please.. HELP ME!!!!! she was crawling trying to find a window, but she forgot. there were no windows in the room. she was three feet away from the door when she collapsed on the floor, and passed out unconsicious from the heat and fumes. the teacher was taking roll when she realized she was trapped inside. the teacher told a firefighter and he ran inside. after 5 minutes, he walked outside, carrying the unresponsive girl in his arms. they put her in an ambulance and she was off to the hospital. smart guy and the other's were around town looking when smart guy's phone went off.
Smart Guy: Hello?....WHAT?!!!!... We'll be right there! they hopped in the car and drove to the hospital. they all hopped out and ran in. they asked where she was.
Woman: She hasn't arrived yet, sir. they waited until they saw an ambulance. they then saw a stretcher with a familiar body on it. it was her. they ran to the room they put her in and she was couching, had black marks on her body, and she smelled like smoke. she then blinked a few times and saw them.
Riz: W...ww....What happened? Where am i?
Wheezy; You're in the hospital.
Smart Guy: What do you remember?
Riz: i recall hearing the alarm go off. i tried to get out, but somehow the door closed and locked on me when i tried to get out. i crawled and looked for a window, but their weren't any. i was crawling to the door and passed out from the smoke. You guys are gonna have to investigate this without me. i have to let some pure, clean air into my lungs before i can go. I believe in you guys.
Stupid: Bye bye! they went to investigate.
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Post by Fisi on Jun 28, 2010 13:10:10 GMT -5
*gasp*
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Post by Syrup on Jun 28, 2010 23:02:32 GMT -5
Gah, wow. Nice chapter.
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Post by Mellow on Jun 30, 2010 19:55:02 GMT -5
Chpt 7 Captured By The Enemy.
The toon patrol drove off into town looking for this no good scoundrel. so far they found nothing.
Psycho: how can you find someone who murders, but vanishes like a ghost?!
Wheezy: (Wheezing) we have to figure it out ourselves. they kept driving unaware that lewis was behind them in his car. they stopped near an alley.
Smart Guy: let's search over here, boys! Lave no stone unturned. they were searching when someone threw a cylinder and it shot out knockout gas. all the weasels fell over. when the gas vanished, lewis stood infront of them, grinning. he picked them up one by one and threw in the trun of his car and drove of to a old warehouse bulding in town.
Lewis; Now I have something in store for them, too! He chuckled sinisterly and threw them in the building and tied them up seperately.
lewis: I'll surprise them when they wake up. he laughed menacely and starteed mixing up dip.
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Post by Fisi on Jun 30, 2010 20:03:00 GMT -5
Good. <3.
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