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Post by Syrup on Jun 30, 2010 20:31:29 GMT -5
Oh em jeez its dip. *dramatic gasp*
Okay I'm done. Short, but good.
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Post by Mellow on Jul 1, 2010 20:54:23 GMT -5
Chpt 8 Lookin for Friends
Riz was still recieving fresh air in herlungs. it had been at least an hour since she arrived. then the doctor came in to tell her the news.
Doctor: Good news. it seems your lungs are in good condition after all thanks to quick response. i think you can leave now. there's no other harm done to you.
Riz: Thank's doc. she got out of bed and ran out the door and was starting down the street looking for there car. after 15 minutes of looking, she found they're car. she was delighted.
Riz: oh guys! no answer. she was confused. she looked in the car, but no one was there. that's when she found tire tracks and a gas cylinder. she figured.
Riz: Good thing i can track them with my cellphone. she hoppede in the driver seat and drove off. she wasn't the best, but she was good. she tracked them to a building and she cut off thesirens and parked the car near it. she hopped out, pulled out her gun with her switchblade in her pocket and ran to the building unheard.
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Post by Fisi on Jul 1, 2010 21:09:17 GMT -5
AWSOME SHE LIVED!!!
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Post by Mellow on Jul 1, 2010 21:48:34 GMT -5
Chpt 9 An Unexpected Visitor
Riz was looking through a window and saw her friends tied up seperately on the floor. that's when she saw lewis. she was shocked.
Riz: (thinking to herself) Lewis?! What would he want with my friends. she crept in quiet as a mouse. she went to the door and listened. the toon patrol woke up and looked around.
Smart Guy: where are we?
Lewis; Well, well, well. look who woke up from there nap. he walked to them, grinning.
Greasy: Who are you?
Lewis; Who do you think?
Wheezy; You're the one who tried to murder the five girls, aren't you?!
Lewis: Oh yes. More than you know! And since they're all out of order now, i can get to you guys too! That way you'll never arrest any of my dear friends again.
Stupid; So that's why you wanted them gone? Duh, i don't get it!
Lewis: No. i wanted revenge on ms.megan and ALL the people she hangs with! So NOW Toon Patrol, You're as good as..(Pulling a cylinder of dip out) DIP!! HA HA HA HA HAAAAA!!! just then someone kicked the door in. it was riz. she held her gun up.
Riz: Ok, FREEZE, You FIEND!!!! he gave her you gotta be kidding me look.
Lewis: WHAT?! You lived?!
Riz: i guess you're not good at murdering a girl too well are you?! I know everything! So GIVE UP!!!!
Lewis: NEVER!!!!! He punched her, she kicked him and shot at him. he then grabbed her legs and spun her around, making her drop her gun and he threw her in the air. she never came back down. he looked around confused, but didn't see her. he then looked backed at them.
Lewis: Well, she can't help you now. I bet the real word hits you ike a ton of bricks. then a ton of bricks fell on top of him. the toon patrol look confused until they heard a female voice chuckling slyly and sinisterly. they looked up and saw riz, waving her switchblad around, holding on to the rope. it turns out she came back down and grabbed the rope. she then waited until lewis was underneath. she then flicked her switchblade open and started cutting the rope. she then jumped in the air, did multiple flips in the air and handed on both feet. she caught her switchblade in the mouth by her teeth. she then went around and cut her friends free. lewis was still knocked out cold. riz dragged him and threw him in the back and they drove off to the police station and turned him in. the police would handle him. riz's friends survived all the horrific accident's luckily. that's was good news for everybody, but mostly riz. the girl gang as back together, ready for more adventures ahead of them.
The End
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Post by Syrup on Jul 1, 2010 22:01:54 GMT -5
Hooray! Great story!  |
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Post by Fisi on Jul 2, 2010 9:18:41 GMT -5
HUZZAH, VICTORY!!!!
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Post by disneyplease on Jul 2, 2010 9:41:16 GMT -5
NICE ONE, Psychogirl96!  DisneyPlease! |
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