A New Life

[zootychica]

Okay, so this is just a story i was working on just a little plot bunny kinda. If you guys like it i will keep going with it So far i have a chapter done. Hope ya like ;D

Chapter One:

This is the strangest thing that ever happened to me, i examined my hands that have been rendered into toon body parts. I felt around my body feeling it, i was all furry this was not my body. I was very dizzy and light headed, i could barley see or walk as a stumbled over to a puddle that was left on the ground by the rain. i peered into the small amount of persipitation. I awaited for my vision to clear as everything i saw was all fuzzy. After about a good 5 minutes my vision became clear, i looked around i was in my backyard. i sighed, why was i passed out on the ground? i looked into the puddle to see what i looked like after being out for god knows how long. I gasped when i looked in that puddle. What was in that puddle was shocking, what i was looking at was a toon weasel, with medium chocolate brown fur, and cream colored underbelly leading up to the top of the muzzle. This weasel had long black hair in the same style i had it in when i fell asleep, and was wearing the same blessthefall t-shirt but was a bit ripped looking and really tight to the point where the ladies were about to pop out. Why was i a toon!? A weasel!? What the fudge!? I was a human female! Not a toon! Just turned eighteen and just graduated high school! I wanted to know why i was this toon. I was in my backyard so i stumbled to the backdoor of my house. Locked. Greattttt. I then crawled through my window not knowing of the really annoying old lady i had for a neighbor peering at me crawl through. I got into my house seeing the tv turned on, i walked over to it to turn it off when the news popped on and a newsflash caught my eye. It was reporting something about a girl that got hit by a bus. I kept watching when the girl was...... me. It reported: Today an eighteen year old girl by the name of Desiree Lally was pushed by her ex-boyfriend Justin Willis in front of an on-going public bus. The impact killed her instantly. Then it showed a picture of me after being smashed by the bus and a picture of my ex. I just looked at the screen with my jaw dropped. The time recorded that this happened was about two hours ago. I WAS DEAD!? I could not believe what i was seeing or hearing this. Somehow my spirit flew out of my dead body and took on this toon form. This was not happening. Moments later there were police sirens heard out front of my house. i peered out the window to see what was going on. There was the toon patrol car, the police for toons. I was scared for my life. I knew that creepy old lady probably reported me (a toon) crawling through the window instead of human me walking through the door. The leader of the patrol swaggered out of the patrol car first. Okay criminal! Come out with yer hands up and we might not dip ya! I was not taking chances with this guy. I sped out of the back door heading to the tunnel leading into toon town. That was the only place i could go now, my old life was wiped away like a smudge of dirt on the countertop. Not that i had such a great life to begin with. My mother was dead, my father was my only living known family. And he was a business man so he was never around, but when he was he only insulted me and put me down and that i was a failure. And already i screwed up a new life. I had gotten into toon town ignoring all the blissful happy singing toons that greeted me as i entered. The toon patrol was still hot on my tail though, speeding through the tunnel as well. I ran to sububan area in toon town. Great. i just set myself up for being trapped. This suburban area was the ending part of toon town. I ran to an alley way hiding in the way back of it as the 5 toon weasels got out of the car to search for me. I was terrified. What was going to happen to me?

[psychojr]

not bad its pretty good i say but what do others think though.

[zootychica]

thanks:) yeahh i kinda want to know what the others think before i go further into this fanfic. but i think i will start the 2nd chapter tonight. and in this chapter the toon patrol are gonna be introduced

[zootychica]

Chapter Two:

I was curled up in the tightest ball in the corner of this dirty grungy alley all the way in the back so the darkness could hide me well enough from these other weasels. I saw all five of them pass by the entrence of the alley way one by one. The first to pass by was a male weasel, the one i assumed to be leader because he was the one out front of my house. Her sported a white dress shirt with a light pink suite jacket. I could tell he was higher ranking than the rest of the weasels because he had a large diamond pin on his pink tie. He also wore white spats on his feet and wore a light pink fedora hat with a dark pink band on it and a gold chain hanging out of his pocket jangeling as he walked. He was taller than me by a good three inches from where i was curled up at. The next weasel to pass was a good inch or two taller than the first, he wore green zoot pants hiked all the way up to his chest with a green zoot coat and black and white spectator shoes along with a white dress shirt pink tie and a green fedora hat with a black band. I also noticed he had black hair slicked back, none of the other weasels had this and as he spoke he had a mild spanish accent. Something about him made me feel uneasy. As he passed another weasel was right behind him, about the same size as the second weasel except he had blue fur, which was weird weasels usually have brown fur. He scared me the most he had an eerie look to him. He wore a messy dress shirt that seemed to be white at one time which now was a dirty tanish color. He also had a mess black vest on with a messed up black tie to match it. He also wore a tanned hat with a black band on it littered with cigarettes. This one seemed to have a major smoking problem, he had at least six buts stuck in his muzzle and a massive cloud of smoke followed him wherever he went. The most scariest was the tommy gun he was carrying, guns allways made me nervous. The next weasel to walk after the blue one was a rather fat weasel, he appeared more childlike than dangerous as the first three. He had untied red and white tennis shoes that slowed him down as he walked, and he wore a blue and white striped t-shirt. Seemed not threatening i though, even the red beenie on his head with the little propeller was cute, even his one goldish colored fang that stuck out of his mouth along with tounge was adorable. The only creepy thing about this weasel was his huge bat he carried with a nail jabbed through it. Then after the fat one passed one last weasel trotted by, this one was still taller than me comparing his small size. This one looked the wildest, he wore nothing but an unbuckled straight jacket and his hair was a wild frizzy mess with some teeth sticking out of his muzzle, but what was the most scariest of this one was hes wild spinning eyes of blue, yellow, and white. I sat as quiet than anything. As all of the weasels were away from the ally i heard the leader speak. "Spread out boys! See if we can find this toon." I still sat still as i heard them all scurry away from the leader. The one in the green zoot suite passed by the ally way entrence very slowly which bothered me. He just peered down the ally, thank god he didn't see me. He was about to leave and check somewhere else until a breeze blew and he sniffed the air. His ears flicked up imediately as he got a wiff of my scent. Curse me and wearing victoria secret perfume. He turned around a lustfull look on his face. "Come out, come out wherever you are chica. I can smell your delicioso scent." i rolled my eyes. I can tell this guy was a real pervert. He started creeping down the ally way really slowly. I started to silently panic now. he could obviously smell my femminine scent. He was heading straight in my direction. I was so scared. And i couldn't not fight him away either because he was a cop and i didn't want to get dipped. I knew of that awful stuff they had to terminate toons. I kept on clenching to myself tighter and tighter as he drew closer to my hiding spot. After what seemed like hours of stalking he finally got to me, i looked up at him with terror filled eyes not knowing what was going to happen to me. "comadreja femenina hola hermosa." Was the only thing he said to me when he looked down at my quivering figure. He moved his face closer to mine breathing on my neck. He whispered in my ear "I can get you out of this mess my bastante femme, but there is only one way to do that." He grinned seductivley at me. I shrieked out of disgust, He jumped back startled by my scream. Soon after i yelped the other four weasels came to the alley way. Smartass was first to appear. "Good work Greasy you caught the criminal." He looked at me with the green suited weasel practically on top of me. "Well well..... a dame huh? Maybe we can organize a deal so we don't have ta dip ya? Whada say sweetheart? I just looked at him, to scared of what just happened.

[Syrup]

Nice story so far. ^_^
*gasp* I love BlessTheFall! You are my new best friend.

[disneyplease]

OOOOOOOOOOOOH . . ., I wonder whats gonnah happen next! NICE WORK, Zootychica, KEEP TYPING!

(giving 2 thumbs up)

DisneyPlease!

[psychojr]

wow nice work keep going.

[zootychica]

Thankyou Working on Chapter three now. I was writting the story out on paper got to chapter two, and i got this random idea for three. It just popped in my head and i'm like OMG I KNOW WHAT CHAP THREE IS GONNA BE! xD haha.

[zootychica]

Since you guys like it soo far ima keep going with it Heres chapter three.

Chapter Three:

I was so terrified when all of five of these weasels were looking at me. I was never the brave courageous type. i was didn't respond to anything the lader said to me i just stared with a scared look glazed on my eyes. Then the leader spoke "Alright boys toss her in ta back." The hispanic on grabbed be by my arm, a little rough for my liking. I knew he was probably a little sore at me for yelping when he wanted to get his way with me. I gave a small whimper as he started dragging me to the toon patrol car, i was pulling back putting up a small fight i didn't want to go anywhere with these weasels. But this hispanic weasel was alot stronger than i was so he drug me to the car with no problem. Smartass looked at Greasy and nodded his head to tell him to get in the back with me, The fat one and crazy one went in the front with the leader as the smoker and hispanic climbed in the back with me. I kinda wanted any of the others in the back with me i was not liking this hispanic weasel. The way he was grinning and smirking at me the whole time, creeper much? I thought in my head. The next move he pulled didn't suprise me at all. He scooted really close next to me putting at arm around me. "lamentable mi muchacha atractiva, this is so you don't escape." he said grinning at me. I did not believe his claims one bit. The smoker looked over at me cringing under mr. perverts touches. He took a drag of his cigarette and exhaled out a cloud of smoke while coughing a bit as he said something. "leave the girl along grease, i don't think she wants ya hanging on her. I think all three of us know well that you are not hanging all over her so she won't escape." The hispanic glared at the smoker "oye boca de cigarrillo, nobody asked you." The smoker just shrugged and looked the other way. Was that concern? I don't even know, at least he attempted to get this thing off me. A little bit later we finally reached our destination, which seemed like it took hours of never ending snuggeling. The leader popped open the back two doors "Well we got a little discussin to do." Was the only thing he said. Discussing? What discussing? I was dead sure they were going to dip me for tresspasing and that was it. The hispanic lead me into the house by grabbing my arm again still as rough as ever, Heading into a kinda beat down house looking building with the other weasels. He sat me down on a love seat couch sitting right next to me putting his arm around my waist. I pushed away his arm a couple times but he just came back again, a gave his arm one last good push when he grabbed me around the waist fiercly 'Is that any way to treat your law enforcement? Hmm chica?" I only looked away from his face almost tearing at my situation. I saw him grinning with delight out of the corner of my eye. The leader walked over to me looking at me tracing my figure with his eyes. "Well sweetheart, we aint gonna dip ya. We decided that this patrol could use a dame around this joint. So you don't have a choice to say yes or no. Its either yes or you get cha self dipped, got it?" I just nodded very slowly showing him i understood him. Greatttttt.... now i have to stay with these guys for god knows how long i thought. i sighed. The leader was still continuing looking at me. "Well i think we outta introduce ourselves first huh? I'm Smartass the leader of this lil operation we got goin on here. And that over there is stupid." As he pointed to the fat weasel with the baseball bat. Thats an interesting name i thought. "Duhh... hi" "Next over there is Psycho." He pointed to the crazy looking weasel in a staright jacket. "Hehehehehehe hii!!" he shouted ecstatically. "Over dere we have Wheezy." He was pointing to the blue furred smoking weasel as he coughed a bit looking me over as well. "hi." "Then last we have Greasy right next ta ya." "hola chica." He grinned seductivley at me. Hmm the name fits he perfectly i thought. "Now you knows us Toon patrol i will show you your room then you can get settled in and we will discuss your jobs tomorrow mornin." He started walking to show me my room i followed slowly, we got to the room it really was quite nice. The settled in the bed and silently cried myself to sleep.

[Syrup]

Good chapter. I like your story lots.

[Fisi]

It's good so far.

[zootychica]

Thankyou Chapter Four should be tomorrow

[zootychica]

blessthefall = UH-MAZING! we be blessthefall fan friends xD

[Syrup]

HOORAY FOR FAN FRIENDS! ^_^

[zootychica]

Chapter Four:

I cried for a good long time before i actually fell asleep. I had a feeling i wouldn't be getting much sleep tonight. 7:30 AM; i woke up on my own thankfully, my eyelids droopily fluttered open, but when i got full eyesight of what was staring at me for who knows how long? Psycho, one of the patrolers was staring right at me two inches away from my face. I jumped and shrieked as he startled me. I was never a morning person and me waking to that doesn't help much. I fell off the bed backwards from the startle of my morning messenger boy. Psycho laughed at me in his high-pitched giggles for a good ten minutes. "Are you quite finished?" i asked getting a little annoyed. "Hehehe. boss wants to see pretty female weasel! Hehehehe. Come when your ready!" and soon after staring at me strangley for a little while he left. Well i'm going to have to learn to put up with these guys until they decide to let me leave i thought. I promised myself i was not going to be submissive but not to fiesty either, i didn't want to piss them off. I looked over to the dresser in my room and saw some cloths, hair supplies, and hygeine products. Well i guess thats what he meant by get ready? i thought. I grabbed the stuff off the dresser and headed to the bathroom connected in my room. The soothing hot water felt good as in soaked my fur, the shampoo was even soothing the smell of violet sweet pea shampoo was very relaxing. I hopped out of the shower fur soaking wet with a pink towel wrapped around my body. I quickly dried myself off and brushed my frizzy fur. I looked at the cloths i was given, it was gangster styled cloths. Great i thought, now i have to look like them? I slowly took my time putting the outfit on, i was not used to wearing something like this. I wore something like this one time, i was at a Halloween party when i was seventeen and i was in a mobster costume. I put on the white dress shirt first, it was very tight but it wasn't a regular gangster shirt this was more fitting for a female. Next i put on the black vest given to me. This was deffinately female cloths. It came all the up to just below my chest and had short sleeves and showed way to much clevage, it was like wearing a t-shirt push up bra. Next within the outfit selection there was a studded belt that i placed around my hips, it was a little loose but just tight enough to stay on my hips. That was all i had for my outfit, i felt soo naked. After that i fixed my hair letting it down but taking my bangs and making a poof on my head fixing it with clips. And lastly i did my makeup which only i did the eyes, i had to admit my hair and makeup looked way better when i was a toon. For the finishing touch i sparyed myself with some light perfume and i headed out my door going to go see smartass i think his name was? I peered out the door seeing all five of the weasels sitting in the living room waiting around...... for me i guess? I slowly walked out taking my time getting to them. I walked into the door way smartass turned at looked at me noticing me first. "Ahh sweetheart ya finally got out! Nice outfit..." He said with a smirk, looking me up and down. If i didn't have self control i would have sooo slapped him right now. Greasy ran over grabbing my paw with his and kissed the top of my paw "buenos días señorita, you look very lovely this morning." He said while licking his lips with a hungry lustfull grin on his face. "ehh.." was my only reply to him. He gave me a disaprooving look to my noise i made at him. Smartass looked at me "Ya know we gave ya our names, but neva got yours. You gotta name doll?" i faced him and answered "Its Desiree..... but don't call me that. Its just Dez." He looked at me approving my name i think? "Hmm... the name Dez.... you need a more fitting name. Do you boys agree?" He said looking around to the others. The others nodded in agreement. Ohh god they were nicknaming me. "How about something spanish?" Greasy offered. Smartass looked at him "Well she kinda does look kinda of spanish decent." I didn't tell them but i was of spanish decent. Greasy's eyes glittered with joy. I just stood there with the saddest look my face. He looked at me. "I have one boss. I Think Lorita is good. She is so sorrowful. Thats what the name means." Smartass looked at him. "Hmmm i like it! Lorita it is!" Greasy was happy i could tell my the look on his face. Hmm Lorita..... didn't sound that bad, i kinda liked it. Smartass then looked at me "Okay sweetheart this is the deal, we would have to dip ya for tresspassin on human property. Buttt.... we have something else in mind. It gets pretty crummy around here as you can tell. And we are too busy to clean it up and stuff and we never have time to make ourrselves food or go shopping. So thats what we have planned for you. Our lil house work maid, thats whats in store fo you." He grinned at me. I was speechless, i had no choice to say yes or no. Smartass handed me the list for today it was so long. "This is the stuff fo ya ta do today doll." There ws cleaning to do, shopping and fufilling cleaning needs for each of the guys. I was almost sickened by it. Soon after they gave me the list they left. Greasy blew me a kiss before he left, that only made me want to run away. So the whole day i cleaned and did what the list said. It was awful but i managed. It was 11:38 at night now when they came back, i was halfway off the couch in the living room so tired i couldn't move. They all came in suprised by the shinning of the house. They seemed pleased, they inspected all of their stuff. Wheezy was happy i got him a couple new packs of cigarettes getting on his good side i could tell. I thought psycho and stupid would enjoy some candy, i knew that was a bad idea but they loved it. Smartass i really didn't do much except polish his chains and tie pin jewels, he didn't praise me for it or anything. And for Greasy well.... i hated doing it but anything to get him in a good mood, i gave him a note promised ONE back massage. I was as tired as anything barley able to move and smartass obviously had a bad day and started snapping at me "Ya dumb broad get offa my couch!" i snarled at him as a response which was a bad idea, i knew i was tired but he was in a really pissy mood. He asked one more time "GET OFFA MY COUCH!" i hissed at him. He didn't like that one bit. He raised his hand and slapped me sending me off the couch and hitting the wall. I got to my feet shaking my head from being sent back so fast. My eyes started tearing as i ran to my room. Greasy looked at smartass "Ehh boss i don't think you needed to be so harsh?" Smartass just growled. After all of the weasels fell asleep i snuck out of my room heading for the front door, i was going to run so far away from here. I was out the front door un-noticed in seconds. I was going good so far it was the ded of night and what comes out in the dead of night was dangerous, even in toontown. I was walking past the alley when a couple of shady charcters popped out on me. "Well, well, well look at this pretty little girly we have here huh?" I was cornered. They drug me to the back of the alley. I screamed so hard like i never screamed before. Back at the house Greasy woke up to get a drink when he noticed my door open. He looked around the house he couldn't find any signs of me. He then noticed the front door wide open. He ran out not telling any of the others. He ran around the area screaming my name. "Lorita! Lorita! Senorita where are you!" He heard screaming not far away and ran to the sound. He found me and the sight horrified him. He chased them away from me. "You chicos better get lost" As he flicked out his switch blade. They fled from the scene noticing his weapon and he was part of the toon patrol. He didn't care they got away he just ran to me. He picked my beaten small body up as i was barley alive. "Lorita.....chica." I was trembeling in his grip i spoke softley "Greasy....." i put im paws on his shoulders and my head over his shoulder slighty crying, and trying to hold crying back. I never wanted to be this close to him ever. We sat in the alley just huggin for a while, until he carried me back to the toon patrol headquarters.