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Post by Fisi on Jun 24, 2010 15:46:36 GMT -5
Nice chappie.  . |
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Post by Syrup on Jun 24, 2010 15:51:20 GMT -5
Yeah, very nice chapter.
Aw, poor girl; that's so sweet of Greasy.
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Post by Mellow on Jun 24, 2010 15:53:03 GMT -5
Great Chapters!
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Post by disneyplease on Jun 25, 2010 12:28:22 GMT -5
NICE WORK, Zootychica! I feel bad for that girl, I hope things get better for her as the story continues.I wonder whats gonnah happen next. KEEP TYPING GIRL!
DisneyPlease!
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Post by disneyplease on Jun 25, 2010 13:09:39 GMT -5
if that happened to me, I'd be CRYING the entire time. Normally I hate letting other people see me cry,but in this kind of case I would'nt care if the weasels saw me cry! ( Im a very SENSATIVE person)
Hope you get the next chapter up soon, Zootychica!
DisneyPlease!
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Post by Lola on Jul 21, 2010 20:33:56 GMT -5
oowww that was good!
can't wait for the next chapter
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Post by psychojr on Jul 21, 2010 20:42:56 GMT -5
oh not bad keep going.
and im used to hearing spanish and all so i have no prob with it.
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Post by Lola on Aug 21, 2010 10:15:42 GMT -5
dude, where are you!?  |
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Post by zootychica on Mar 22, 2012 13:36:26 GMT -5
wowww.....its been a madd long time since i been on here! haha. almost 2 years shizzzz. sorry guys for taking so long to get back. I'm a working woman now so i tend to be slow nowadays. haha. Heres chapter 5 i believe? ;D sorry its a bit short  Chapter Five:Greasy carried her back to the house without saying a word to her. It is true he very much wanted to play patty cake with her, he was a weasel after all. But he did not like what those toons did to her once in his life he actually felt some feelings for someone else other than hiself. He liked the ladies alot but this one was growing on him. maybe because she was a permanent addition to the house? maybe. He came back to the house carrying a limp very badly beaten lorita. When he entered the house the other weasels were awake wondering where the two weasels went. All were shocked seeing what Greasy was carrying in. "What happened Greasy!?" Smartass shouted. "The chica took a run for it and i went after her. Some dark toon characters got a hold of her. Shes very badly beaten." Her eyes fluttered every once in a while her breathing was very slow and shallow. Even when your a toon you can inflict damage like this. There is the difference between harmful and unharmful violence. Greasy put her on the couch she was leaking alot of blood. "Call over a doctor. fix er up." Smartass demanded. Wheezy got to the phone and quickly got a doctor to come over. The doctor was over in a couple of minutes and stitched her up. "She should be fine, she just needs rest. she will be unable to move around for a little while so tend to her." with that the doctor left. Smartass snapped for the others to leave the room. He slowly sat down next to her on the couch. He stroked her fur on her face. "I....i didn't want that to happen to you, i should have never yelled at you maybe you wouldn't have tried to make a run for it." He thought she was still out of it. But she was awake and heard his words. He acted all tough in front of his patrol but he did have a heart. he nuzzled her face then set himself slightly on top of her just to keep her warm and fell asleep with her. She felt at ease with him resting with her. She was to weak to think much else, and she drifted off to sleep with him, His fuzzy body keeping her warm. |
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Post by American Marten on Mar 22, 2012 18:53:22 GMT -5
This is a d**n good story. Keep it up!
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Post by zootychica on Oct 7, 2015 17:26:37 GMT -5
Note from author: wowwww...5 years ago i started this story. Well guys im back! Got back into the fandom  ? i shall attempt to make another chapter. Gonna do some brainstorming. Then ill put up chapter 6 is it? Yay! |
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? i shall attempt to make another chapter. Gonna do some brainstorming. Then ill put up chapter 6 is it? Yay!