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Post by Mellow on Jun 11, 2010 0:06:13 GMT -5
Chpt.1 The Message
It was a bright, sunny day. Riz and the toon patrol were outside relaxing. riz was walking around and stepped on a lid that drained water when it rained. when she stepped on it, they all heard a rumbling sound.
Smart Guy: What tha! when riz covered her ears, the lid exploded off, shooting her into the air.
Riz: (Going up) WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!! they all looked up in surprise.
Wheezy: There she goes!!
Riz: (Coming down) DAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!! She got out her cellphone and dialed a number.
Phone; Da ha ha, FALLING OUT OF THE SKY HOTLINE!! She was interupted when she hit a branch. she then hit all the branches coming down.
Riz: Landing on the ground) AAAAAHH! OW!!! she looked bruised, had limbs,twigs, and leaves in her hair and outfit.
Greasy: You ok? she tried standing up. she was dizzy.
Riz: Huh? She was mostly dizzy in the head. Stupid went inside and returned with a chocolate milkshake and handed it to her.
Greasy: Come on, stupid! How's that gonna help?
Riz: Thanks, buddy, i needed that! she regained her self.
Stupid: Duh, what do you think of my ideas now, greasy?! he then stuck his tongue at him. greasy growled at him and went to punch him, but riz showed her sharp teeth at him, meaning he'd better back off. and he did. They looked at the drain and suddently, a note shot out of it. Riz picked it up and read it.
Toon Patrol,
You are needed for an important secret mission. meet me at an area down here. i'll be waiting.
Dot
P.S. sorry about the geyser and shooting you in the air.
Riz: Dot? Hmmmmm. i've got a theory, but lets get our stuff, guys!
Smart guy: Yeah. She's right. come on, guys, lets hurry and get there before soeone notices. they all jumped in one by one. riz jumped in last and closed the lid, and they were off.
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Post by Fisi on Jun 11, 2010 15:56:26 GMT -5
Ah, poor Riz.
I always wonder how life would be with her and Vanessa...
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Post by Mellow on Jun 11, 2010 20:29:39 GMT -5
Chpt 2 A Secret Revealed.
Riz and them started down the water tunnel. it was dark.
Smart Guy: We need light.
Riz: No problem, fella's. her eyes went glowing purple and she had purple rays around her hands whick was bright enough to see.
Smart Guy: Thank's. she nodded and they went on. after 15 minutes of walking, they heard a female voice.
Voice: Over here. they walked to the spot and saw a toon female penguin who was purple, had short, blonde hair, and was wearing a purple jacket.
Riz: Dot, is that you?
Dot: Hey riz. It's good to see you again. they both hugged each other and did high-fives.
Greasy: Howdo you too know each other?
Riz: We'll explain when we get there, greasy. they nooded and followed dot to a room. There was a penguin who was red, wearing black sunglasses, a jetpack over his dress shirt and jacket, and there was another penguin who was green, had a propeller cap, red sunglasses, and a red sports jacket.
Riz: Jet-Pack Guy, Rookie. Good to see ya again. they did knuckle-punches.
Riz: Guy's. These are my friends, Dot, Jet-Pack Guy, and Rookie. We worked with the Elite Penguin Force.
Rookie: Correct. We haven't seen you since that last mission.
Jet-Pack Guy: Where have ya been?
Riz: They sent me into an asylum. they nodded understandidly.
Smart Guy: So let me get this straight, before you met us and were thrown in an asylum, you used to work for the Elite Penguin Force to protect Club Penguin?! he then gasped for breath.
Riz: Yep. Pretty much. But wait i have more friends. she whistled, and 7 puffles came to her.
Riz:( Picking up a blue puffle) The blue one is Bouncer. (Picking up a red puffle) This is Blast. (Picking up a pink puffle) This is Loop. ( Picking up a black puffle) This is Flare.
Smart Guy: This one doesn't look.....as cheerful like the other's.
Riz: He's not grumpy. Black puffles are the strong and silent type, but watch this. she took out a puffle-o berry and gave it to him. he swallowed it and his eyes widened and then he went up in flames smiling. he then went back to normal, and he went to riz smiling and hopped on her shoulder.
Riz: (Picking up a green puffle) This is Flit. (Picking up a yellow puffle) this is Chirp. (picking up a purple puffle) and this is Pop. Just then a shawdow appeared on a big moniter.
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Post by Fisi on Jun 11, 2010 20:45:03 GMT -5
Omg, a penguin squad, that's suber kewl.
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Post by Mellow on Jun 11, 2010 20:49:43 GMT -5
ik right?!
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Post by Fisi on Jun 11, 2010 20:51:46 GMT -5
Their like an adorable thing that can kick your a**.
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Post by Mellow on Jun 11, 2010 21:22:10 GMT -5
You'd better believe it, sister. lol
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Post by Mellow on Jun 12, 2010 0:29:15 GMT -5
Chpt 3 The Mission
Director: Hello, Protectors. it's good to see you again, agent Extreme.
Riz: Good to see you again too, director. What's our mission?
Director: Well, Its a weasel who goes by the name devious. He's been sneaking from toontown and into club penguin and stealing furniture, pizza,puffles, and coins. we've been trying to capture him for monthes now, but we can't get him. we've heard a ton about you guys. You are our only hope left.
Riz: Ok, director. We'll do it. Where is he right now?
Director: He's at the mine. he might surf a track.
Riz: I know where that is. but we need to get there now. I know. i can use a portable hole. she pulled one out and they all jumped in.
Director: Good luck, agent. they made it to the mine. they saw a weasel with a burlap bag full of money. he saw the cops.
Riz: Drop it, dirtbag!
Devious: You'll never get me alive, coppers! He hopped into a minecart and went off.
Riz; come on, guys hop in. i'm trained at this. just follow my lead. she hopped in one and went off. the other's followed her one by one.
Riz: WOO-HOOOOOOO!!!!! she made a sharp right turn. the other's did it too.
Wheezy: How can you even do this stuff?!
Riz: You get better at times. she leaned down and did a backflip. the other's stared at her. she then leaned sharply to the left. and then they saw light.
Riz: Ok, fella's its over. hop out. they did and they saw the crook. he then pulled out a portable hole.
Devious: So long suckers! I'll be in vegas enjoying myself! He jumped in and was gone.
Greasy: Great! Now what will we do now?!
Riz: We'll go to vegas, guys.
Greasy: You've got to be kidding me. Ive got better things to do.
Riz: You mean like chasing girls?
Wheezy: Burned. he glared at them.
Riz: Look guys, i know its long, but we've got to stop him before he hurts or even kills someone.
Smart Guy:She's right boys.
Stupid and Psycho: YAAAAAAYYY!!!!
Wheezy: City that never sleeps, here we come.
Greasy: Oh boy , your telling me.
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Post by Fisi on Jun 12, 2010 9:26:55 GMT -5
VIVA LAS VEGAS!!! =D.
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Post by psychojr on Jun 12, 2010 11:58:33 GMT -5
City that never sleeps, here we come.
thats beyond true iv been there on duty last couple of months ago. but i love it even agfter dark when the lights come on. but good story so far.
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Post by Mellow on Jun 12, 2010 15:56:56 GMT -5
Chpt 3 On Our Way
Riz: that was kind of them to let us use a spy car, huh guys?
Wheezy: Yeah. we're sure to get there faster to Las Vegas for sure. wheezy was driving and riz was the passenger.
Wheezy: Hmmm....I wonder what this button does.
Riz: Wheezy..NO!!!! They both hit a button. the other's were freaked out, but nothing happeed.
Smart Guy: Well what do ya know, nothing happened. but all of a sudden, robotic arms reached out to wheezy and riz and the other's looked up to see what was going on.
Stupid: Duh, whats going on, boss?
Smart Guy: Well, i can't see through a cloud can i, stupid? when the cloud dissapeared, wheezy was dressed up in a dress shirt, a fancy black jacket, and a bowtie while riz was in a silver dress that wrapped around her neck.
Psycho: So that's what that button does?!
Wheezy: Itdressed you up pretty nice, kid.
Riz: What tha?! She noticed her bra wasn't on her. Ok, where's our the clothes that we had on earlier. they were in bags on their laps. She sighed.
Riz: (She sighed to herself)World, why do you do this to me for?! They continued driving. Psycho kept staring into the sky, stupid examined the carseat closely, greasy was reading a playtoon magazine he brought with him, smart guy kept looking at his watch.
Wheezy: I hope this will be easy.
Riz: Ditto wheezy, Ditto.
Stupid: Can someone tell me what ditto means?
Riz: It means me too.
Stupid: Oh. Hey let's sing a song.
Riz: Ok. I got one....."IT'S A SMALL WORLD AFTER ALL"-
Wheezy: NO!, No! Anything but that!
Riz: Ok.....umm... "99 bottles of pop on the wall, (Psycho joining in) 99 bottles of pop, (Stupid joining in) "Take one and pass it down, there's 98 bottle of pop on the wall"
Wheezy: Ok, that's just ridiculous.
Riz: well.......MAKE UP YOUR MIND ALREADY!!!!!
Greasy: "Ay Yie Yie-
Smart Guy; No, No. not that one, greasy!
Riz: We're Here!!!!
Wheezy: Finally! Now i can stop hearing you chuckle heads! She banged his head and he sawstars and was out cold.
Smart Guy: That shuts him up.
Stupid: Yeah, but ummm.. who's driving.
Riz: Yikes! she grabbed the steering wheel and was driving normal. she was a good driver for a girl who was 13. they parked in a parking lot and got out. luckly wheezy woke up.
Wheezy:Who?, What?, Where?, Sometimes Why?! she snickered at him and they walked off.
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Post by Fisi on Jun 12, 2010 16:30:08 GMT -5
Yay. ^_^.
They shouldn't have sing "Viva Las Vegas".
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Post by Mellow on Jun 12, 2010 16:32:08 GMT -5
i agree
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Post by Mellow on Jun 12, 2010 17:43:28 GMT -5
Chpt 4 Love-Struck Wheezy
They were walking around las vegas when riz saw a nightclub.
Riz: Ok guys, let's take a quick break. just as they were walking out, a group of vegas waitresses walked out. this got greasy excited.
Greasy: (Whistling) No one told me that they're were hot women here, man.
Smart Guy: Be my guest, greasy. Go try to score one.
Greasy:Thank you. (Running) HOLD ON GIRLS, DADDY"S COMING!!!! He ran off, leaving a trail of hearts along. they rolled their eyes and walked in and found a seat. they saw something that surprised them. it was donald and daffy on the piano. riz ran to the stage and watched the fight.
Daffy: You are even worse here than at the club!
Donald: Oh Yeah?! He grabbed him and slammed the piano cover on him.
Riz: WHOOAAA!!! What are guys doing here?
Donald: We were such a big hit, that they sent us here to get these people laughing.
Riz: Makes perfect sense. after watching them fight, she pointed to a cannon that donald had at the club and watched it fire at daffy. she busted out laughing do hard, she almost fell out her seat.
Wheezy: This is boring.
Announcer: Ladies and Gentlemen, introducing angel. the room darken and on stage there was a tube that had a pink tube whick was really an anti-gravity field. a toon woman appeared. She had long hair which was a combination of auburn and brown with blue on the ends, and violet eyes, wearing a sleeveless white vegas outfit that went to her lower thigh wearing white high-heel ankle boots and and silver gloves.
Angel: "Space Angel...sigh..singing,winging, way up high. Wheezy then went into an instant stare at her.
Angel: "Space Angel...sigh...Cosmic sugar flutterby... Wheezy then took ten cigarettes and lit them all up and sucked them up in 2 seconds.he then blew out a heart cloud.
Angel: (Turning and floating upsidedown)"Floating freak-out upsidedown, come with me, and you will see, i can kick it hyper drive, hanging zero gravity..Space Angel.. Singing, winging way up high.. Wheezy then sighed romanticly at her.
Angel: "Space Angel..sigh..Cosmic sugar flutterby...she then lowered back down the tube. the music stoppd. wheezy applauded with hearts as eyes and his heart beating fast out his chest. the other's saw this.
Riz: Yep. He's is officially lovestruck.
Psycho: Yep. He's in love.
Smart Guy: I've never seen him smile like that before. wheezy then left to find angel. he never felt this way before in his life before.
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Post by Fisi on Jun 13, 2010 17:13:54 GMT -5
Oooh, Wheezy is in love.
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