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Post by psychojr on Jun 4, 2010 9:30:35 GMT -5
wow good chapter.
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Post by Mellow on Jun 4, 2010 17:47:36 GMT -5
Chpt 6 A Fight, an injury, and sucess.
Riz finallly caught up to the crooks, but kept her distance. when they walked into the museum, she took out her camera and took a picture of the car and it's license plate. she then went in the museum and used her powers to float above them without being seen. while they were running out, she took a quick, clear picture of them with the gold. but as they started the car, riz had layed down some tacks. when they backed up, they heard four pops. they got out and looked around angrly.
Red: Whoever did this will pay the bill all right!!! they then walked away with the gold. riz had got her phone and called a few friends. Slimy and Flasher came up out of a portable hole.
Riz: Sorry i had to interupted your time off, guys, but the other's were framed and arrested. and just found out who did it. they are headed to their hideout. i know where it is, and i have a plan.
Flasher: Good. I can't believe they got framed.
Riz: Any of ya still have a portable hole with you?
Slimy: Sure. I do. he threw it on the ground and they all jumped in and popped out were they were coming to. she had her plan made perfectly. they get each of them one by one. the weasels kept on walking and the three of them ducked for cover.
Red: We just rob a museum and got away with it.....and I don't hear any weasels singing.
All: " Weasel's are something to fear in toontown, weasel's are something to fear. as touchy was walking and singing , he saw saw his bag go out of his hands and a hand grab his muzzle. no one could hear his muffled cries. then as pranky was walking, riz made a hole and set a rope out of it. then as she planned when pranky stepped on it, the rope wrapped around his ankle and pulled him through the hole and riz grabbed the gold rings he had.
The other three: " Break the window's, get the gold, And run away to HQ, Weasel's are something to fear in toontown. as Mischevious was walking, he saw his necklaces snatched out of his hand and got hit on the head with a frying pan and was dragged behind a tree by flasher.Slimy was up a tree with a rope in his hand and waited for spontaneous to walk under the branch. "Weasel's aresomething to fear in toontown, weasel's are something to fear,
Spontaneous: "Take the cash. he stuck his hand through the rope and was snatched into the air.
Red: Boys. I don't hear-. he saw that they weren't there, and he was shocked at who was in the hq waiting on him. he then took out his switchblade.
Riz: Well, well, well, looks like i found out everthing there is ta know about what you'll all do. she then flung open her switchblade. Oh, and yes, weasel's are something to fear all right. But it's YOUR type mostly to fear.
Red: You little cheat, You will pay for what you've done!!!!!
Riz: what can i say, i'm sly as a fox. i still can't believe you fell for me being passed out. she then saw fire in his eyes. he ran up to her and tried to stab or at least cut her. she poked her switchblade at him some and was about to stab him in the arm, but as she tried to, he cut her across her stomach and she collapsed trying to hold her wound from bleeding too much. he then cut her on her neck. she then held her neck and backed up against the wall. he came to her and ran his finger down her cheek.
Red: You are beautiful in the face mostly, too bad it's gonna be cut up before the day of your funeral. she though it was the end for sure. but just as red was about to stab her, he collapsed on the ground. and when he fell, riz saw slimy with a baseball bat in his hands and flasher ran to her.
Riz: Can we teleport to the hospital, guys?
Flasher; Yes we can, and let's hurry. the blood is coming out fast. he threw the hole on the floor and they arrived at the hospital and riz was to stay there for the next 14 hours. slimy and flasher brought the crooks and the evidence to the police station where the toon patrol was set free.
Greasy: Where is she anyway?
Slimy: At the ER right now.
Smart Guy: Why? What happened to her?!
Flasher: Red had cut her on her neck and on her stomach. she's having her wounds treated right now. they all went back and asked what room she was in.
Doctor: She'll be in room 141, gentlemen. they all waited in the room and after 45 minutes of waiting, the door opened and riz had a bandage wrapped around her stomach and neck. she looked at them and smiled. she picked up a notepad and pen.they were confused until her nurse came in.
Nurse: She can ony write down words right now.
Greasy: Why is that, beautiful senorita? the nurse giggled, but kept explaining.
Nurse: The cut on her neck requires to heal up, and we think it's best if she didn't say anything for the next 15 hours or so. it's for wound safety reasons only. just call if you need me for anything.
Greasy: Don't worry. We will. he winked at her. riz slapped her hand on her face and started writing.
Riz: Way to go, greasy, way to go.
Greasy: Thanks. she slapped her head and began writing again.
Riz: I was being sarcastic!
Wheezy: Burned. Greasy rolled his eyes.
Smart Guy: Where did you find them?
Riz: Badside of toontown at a club. they looked at her in surprise. she wrote again.
Riz:What?!!! It was the only option left. i pretended to be out cold so they would take me to their hideout and so i could listen to their plans, and it worked actually. i took pictures, and recorded what they said at their hq. It was full proof.
All: You did all that?! she nodded yes.
Smart Guy: Well i'll be, riz! you are indeed a clever one.
Riz: Sly as a fox you all might say. They nodded in agreement at what she wrote. The next day they undid the bandage that was on her neck and she could talk again. this incedent was all over toontown. Riz, Slimy, and Flasher were hero's for their bravery, courage, and determination against the crooks. the weasel's who robbed the museum and bank were sentenced to 5 years doing community service. Riz thought thatthe plan was sucessful and it went pretty well for her and the other's too.
The End
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Post by Syrup on Jun 4, 2010 18:57:53 GMT -5
Very nice story. ;D Of course Greasy flirts with a nurse. Which reminds me, HELLOOOOOO NURSE! XD Animaniacs.
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Post by Fisi on Jun 4, 2010 19:43:20 GMT -5
Nice story.
Haha, nice Greasy.
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Post by psychojr on Jun 4, 2010 19:53:10 GMT -5
very funny syrup. but yeah very good story, is there ganna be a part 2?
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Post by Mellow on Jun 4, 2010 20:03:04 GMT -5
Maybe. I'll think about it. good idea
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Post by Syrup on Jun 4, 2010 20:39:32 GMT -5
Yes, the Animaniacs are funny. ^_^ Oh, a part two. That would be cool.
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Post by Mellow on Jun 4, 2010 20:47:51 GMT -5
You mean like this Who framed the toon patrol 2
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Post by Syrup on Jun 4, 2010 20:49:12 GMT -5
Either that or just another event, different title, same stuff. *shrug* I'm confused on what I said but I think you get it.
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Post by Mellow on Jun 4, 2010 20:50:02 GMT -5
Yep. all the same i get it.
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