Who Framed The Toon Patrol

[Mellow]

Chpt 1 It Happened

It was a bright, sunny day, and riz and her friends the toon patrol were watching a football game on tv. It was the blue team vs the red team. there was shouting in the house.

Riz: Come on!!!! Go blue team, Go!!!!!

Psycho: Yeah! What she said!!!!!

Wheezy: Put your backs into it blue team!!!!!!!!!

Smart Guy: Come on, ya red team GO!!!!!! just as it was down to the last second, a news flash appeared on the screen.

Tv: We interrupt this game for an important news flash! This just in, five crooks were seen robbing the toontown bank only moments ago. here is a sketch of the crooks. when it showed the sketches, they couldn't believe their eye's. it was smart guy, greasy, wheezy, stupid, and psycho.

Tv: If you know anything about these crooks, please call right now.

Greasy: Caramba! we were framed!

Riz: Who could REALLY have done this?! just then they heard loud pounding at the door.

Voice: Open up in the name of the law!! We know your in here toon patrol. riz opened the door and they ran in and hand-cuffed them all, expect riz. they were thrown in the police van and riz ran outside as it drove off.

Riz: Don't worry guys! I'll try to get you out of this mess! I promise.

[psychojr]

not bad. cant wait to read it now.

[Syrup]

Me either. Sounds interesting!

[psychojr]

wowo nice chapter


but i have a question, it looks like your just remaking the movie but with new charater. its ok but i wonder whos playing the toon patrol considering they are the other charaters.

what i mean is greasy gonna be ediie valiant and roger, psycho.

[Syrup]

Yeah, nice... I noticed what Psychojr noticed too...

[Mellow]

Wel ya see, I dream up these idea's. thses come from my thought's and dreams. would have made this one better, but i had to do some stuff. and let me tell ya, the things i do before this, it really effects my melon. If you know what i mean, guys

[Syrup]

I like melons. ;D
But yes, I see what you mean.

[Mellow]

Thank you. I'm glad someone understands. Since its summer, Its a pretty tight schedule. i guess it's tight for all of us , huh guys?

[psychojr]

me two and i see what you mean.

[Mellow]

Summer is Kinda like the busiest season besides the others. I mean after a girl like me gets outta school, you have too many things to do like going swimming, mowing the lawn, cleaning, and all that summer to-do list jazz. And also last night at 3: 05 a.m, as i was finishing the first chapter of this up, i logged on for only a few hours and it logged me out.It took me a long time to type it. I can't remember how long i did it. i lost count. but when it said i wasn't logged in, Man was i mad or what?! I had to yell in my head so that i couldn't wake my mom up. so i didn't get sleep that much.

[Mellow]

Here's how it happened:

3:05 a.m. i went to hit post and it said you are not logged in.

Me: ( Yelling in my head) Well that's just PEACHY!! I was finished and NOW look what happens. Great.! JUST great!! Forget it! I'll finish it up tomorrow

[psychojr]

it does that on me two, but when it does i just hit the back button and somtimes it will say do you want to post still or the messege box will have all what you wrote still and you could hit post agian and see what happens.

[Syrup]

I think that made her feel worse... poor girl.

[psychojr]

sorry... but somtimes when i hit the back button and it takes me back i hit post agian and wel it somtimes double posts it.

[Syrup]

Gasp, you edited the story! Cool.