Who Framed The Toon Patrol

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I know, right?! this idea just came. * snap* just like that

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Chpt 2 Suspicion Occurs

Riz could not understand what happened and neither could the other's. how can they steal while watching a game? she went to the toontown police station to visit them. they were all in orange suits.

Police Officer: Toon Patrol, You have a visitor here to see you.

Smart Guy: And i think we know who it is. riz came in and she hugged them all.

RIz: Guys, it couldn't have been you. i just know it! You guys are good weasel's. You couldn't steal anything.

Wheezy:Try telling that to the cops. they won't believe us.

Greasy: Ci. we tried, but they were not convinced.

Smart Guy: And tommorow, we'll have to go through court with this!

Stupid: Duh, yeah, and we don't wanna go to jail. it's scary!

Psycho: Your our only hope left, riz!

Police officer: Time's up!

Riz: Don't worry. I'll find something to try and get you five outta here. i promise. I'll see you all tomorrow. Good luck tonight. she then went up to a officer.

Riz: Sir, you wouldn't happen to have a tape of them robbing the bank by any chance?

Officer: Yes. Sure. Let me go get it. he then handed it to her. she gave him $5.00 as a fee.

Riz: Thank you, officer. she then ran home and watched the tape carefully. she then noticed a ton of things when she watched it a 4th time. She then went to the bank and investigated it herself. she was about to give up when she noticed something. a piece of torn red fur. she placed it in a bag and ran home.

Riz: Yes!!!! I got enough evidence for court tomorrow for sure!! She went into the bed that she and psycho shared and layed there. she then looked up in the sky.

Riz: Please, let my dearest friends and my darling be safe tonight. While at the jail, all the weasel's expect for psycho were sound asleep. he peered through the bars of the window and looked up at the sky.

Psycho: Please let my girl be safe tonight.

[Syrup]

Aw, the ending was sweet. <3
Nice chapter.

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Chpt 3 Court in session

The next morning, riz got up early and got dressed in a grey double-breasted dress jacket with a fushia shirt underneath it, a grey skirt that reached to her knees, and black high-heels. she grabbed her evidence and stuck out her thumb outside.

Riz: Yo Benny!

Benny: You call a cab or what?! Hop in. Where to?

Riz: The Toontown courthouse.

Benny: Hey, that's were i was going too.

Riz: Well let's go. I have the evidence to prove my friends are innocent. they drove off faster than ever. when they got there, they both ran in. Benny sat near the door while riz ran to where the toon patrol were at.

Smart Guy: Do you have evidence?

Riz: Sure do. Let's hope this is enough to prove it all.

Officer: The court room is now in session. ALL RISE! everyone rose. You may be seated. when all the toons in court sat down, the judge came.

Officer; And now judge Mickey Mouse. mickey came up to the judge's stand. he looked at the five nervous weasel's.

Mickey: So your in here today on account of the charge of stealing from our bank, correct?

All: Yes, your honor.

Mickey: Does the defense have any evidence of innocence? that's when riz stood up. Everyone looked at the girl.

Riz; Yes your honor. I have evidence right here.

Mickey: Proceed with what you have, miss.

Riz: With pleasure. Did someone happen to bring a VCR and a TV?! an officer rolled it to her.

Riz: Thank you sir. she put the tape in. but before she played the tape, she spoke to the court.

Riz: Ladies and Gentlemen of the courtroom, they say that lies spred faster than the truth itself. i believe that we first look at the evidence that i brought REALLY closely. You'll all see what i'm talking about when i say that--

Juryer: JUST GET ON WITH IT, LITTLE GIRL!!!!

Riz: OK OK! No need to get snappy, mister. she pressed play, and she paused it when she got a clear view of the weasel imposters. she pointed to the one that looked like stupid.

Riz: Now look at this stupid. Look really closely. his shoes are tied. (Turning to the real stupid) Now look at him. The REAL stupid doesn't know how to tie his shoelaces, so his shoes are always untied. she pointed at the one that looked like psycho.

Riz: Now look at the psycho you see on the screen. His straightjacket is red, his eyes are red, and his hair is isn't spikey. ( Turning to the real psycho) The REAL psycho has a white straightjacket, BLUE eyes with yellow swirls, and his hair is spikey on the top. she then pulled out a zipper bag that had the red fur in it she showed to the judge and jurers.

Riz: And here's another thing. I found this red fur at the bank. None of the weasels even have red fur. their's are all brown, expect for wheezy who has blue fur. I rest my case. she then sat down again.

Mickey: Has the jury reached the verdict?

Jury member: Yes, your honor. We find the toon patrol GULITY of all charges. Riz shot up and ran to the jury.

Riz: WHAT?!!! But i gave you CLEAR evidence. Two cops grabbed her and tried hard to pull her out of the room.

Riz: I'm telling you, MY FRIENDS ARE INNOCENT!! I WON'T GIVE UP ON YOU, GUYS!!! I'LL see you later, i promise! she was thrown out the courtroom. and the toon patrol was lead out of the court and to the Toontown prison house. They were led to cell 180 and sat in there for 15 minutes until a visitor came to see them. it was riz. she ran to where they were and hugged them. she was streaming tears from her eyes.

Riz: (Through tears) I'm sorry i failed you all.

Smart Guy: (hugging her) It's not your fault. You tried your best.

Riz: Well i won't give up just yet.

Wheezy: That's the spirit, riz.

Greasy: Keep on trying. We believe in you, riz..

Stupid: Duh, right. You are the most determined one here.

Psycho: You are still our only hope left.

Riz: Thanks. Your right. I'll try to get some more evidence and bust you guys outta here.

Officer: Times Up!!!

Riz: Gotta am-scray, you guys. Good luck.

Smart Guy: You too. she ran back home and slept on it. the next morning, she got dressed in a purple shirt with only one strap on her right shoulder, leather jacket, black skirt with black tights, black high-heel sneaker skates, black bejeweled bowtie choker necklace, and her black bowler cap with a pink stripe. She put her revolver, switchblade, cigarettes, lighter, camera, voice recorder, cellphone, money, and ID in her purse. she activated her skates and skated down the street thinking.

Riz: (To Herself) Red fur? Who else could have red fur?
she kept thinking. then it hit her. I Got IT!!!!! she then skated far out of the city and to the otherside of toontown. she knew it would be dangerous and risky, but it was to help her dearest friends.

[Syrup]

Curse you, jury. *shakes fist at jury*

[psychojr]

Riz: Now look at the psycho you see on the screen. His straightjacket is red, his eyes are red, and his hair is isn't spikey. ( Turning to the real psycho) The REAL psycho has a white straightjacket, BLUE eyes with yellow swirls, and his hair is spikey on the top. she then pulled out a zipper bag that had the red fur in it she showed to the judge and jurers.


why does this sound formiler (has red eyes )

but either that good chapter.

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No, no, no its NOT you, it's someone else. read what you typed in again and you will hopefully see its not familiar

[Fisi]

Nice chappie.

Sorry, I've been busy and all. >_<.

[Mellow]

No worries : )

[Fisi]

Gracias. .

[psychojr]

yeah i know it was just the red eyes thats all

[Syrup]

Jun 2, 2010 15:01:44 GMT -5 Mellow said:

No worries : )

HAKUNA MATATA! x)

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Chpt 4 The Badside of Toontown

Riz had finally crossed into the badside of toontown after 15 minutes of skating fast. There was dimming lamposts, screams, and tumbleweeds. She was a liitle scared, but she was determined to find proof. she walked to a club for all the devious and bad weasel's. Before she walked in, she thought of something.

Riz: "I have to look devious to get on their good side too, but just in case, i'll use my invisible bullet/knife-proof sheild on me". she made her normal, human teeth razor sharp, tipped her hat to sheild her eyes, and walked in and sat on a stool at the bar counter. all eyes turned and narrowed at the human girl, but riz just took out a cigarette and lighter and blew out three circles. a weasel then came up to her with arrow, angry eyes.

Weasel: (Soft but dangerous) Hey! Aren't you a little too young to come in here or smoke?!, Little girl?!!! Riz showed evil eye's and her razor sharp teeth a him growling.

Riz: ( Calmly and Coldly) So?!! Why?!! You got a problem with that, Weasel-Boy?!!! Cause i can take care of it. no problem. She then pulled out her switchblade out and flinged it open. another weasel spoke up.

Weasel 2: Say, you look familiar.... she must be.........

Everyone in the bar: RIZ OF THE TOON PATROL!!!!!! she then closed her switchblade and stuck her hand in her purse for her revolver just in case and she smiled a devious smile.

Riz: Lucky guess, boys. And yes, more than you know! she then raised up her revolver and her eyes went into a glowing purple color.

Riz: ( Coldly) Now boys, we can do this the easy or hard way or we can do this mine or your way.... which way?!! they all looked at each other.

Voice: How about none of the above?!!! she turned and saw a weasel with red fur exactly the same color that she found at the bank. she look at him with anger in her eye's. he then responsed with a grin and devious eyes.

Weasel: ( Calmly but sinister) Now calm down, doll. Don't make me play rough on ya! no matter though. My boys will have you taken care of! four other weasel's came up behind him, grining sinisterly at the girl.

Riz: So, you guys were the ones who framed my friends that day am i correct?!

Weasel: Yes, my dear. more then you know! allow me to introduce ourselves. I'm Red,( turing to a caramel brown weasel) This is Touchy, (tuining to two white weasels) these two are twin brother's, Mischievious and Pranky, ( turning to a purple weasel) and last but not least, this is Spontaneous!

Riz: Ok i now know who you are, but how did you manage to match the colors of my friends? Did ya paint your fur?!

Red: You are indeed a wisecracker, girl, but we hate wisecrackers. Get her, boys! They ran at her. she punched Touchy in the stomach, sending him flying across the room, she punched Mischievious and Pranky at the same time when they came behind her, and she knocked red in the side and onto a table, but while she did, spontaneous came up behind her and poked her. she turned around and he slapped her in the face, causing her to hit the wall. she was still consicous, but she pretented to be unresponsive. for she had a plan. red came up to her and laughed. he though she was out cold

Red: You see.. Ya never quite know what he'll do next!!! load her up in the car, boys. they threw her in the trunk and drove off into a dark alley.

Riz: ( To herself) Phase one of my plan is going good so far. i can sense it! ( chuckling sinisterly)

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Chpt 5 Sly As A Fox

Riz was still pretending to be knocked out when the trunk opened and red looked at her and poked her. she didn't respond.

Red: You reallly knocked her out good , spontaneous!

Spontaneous: Well what can i say, you'll never know what i'll do next! they then carried her out of the trunk and into their hideout and placed her beside a crate. they then walked over to a table, not knowing that she had her tape recorder out and hit record as they were talking.

Red: Now let's go over the plan, boys.

Touchy: I thought we did it already, boss.

Red: Let me finish! Now, since the night we disguised ourselves as the toon patrol and got away with it, i though of a new place to rob again tonight.

Spontaneous: you don't mean.

Red: Oh yes i do. We'll rob the museum of it's ancient gold. it's worth millions of dollars according to auctioners from all over.
And soon, once we get the gold, we'll trade it in for REAL cold, hard cash, disguise ourselves as home inspectors, and get into homes and steal everyone else's gold from around toontown to the city. it will be easy as pie. it's a great scam too.

Mischievious: Don't worry about the disguises guys.

Pranky: Yeah, we'll make em as soon as we've robbed the museum.

Red: Good, good, good. Now let us continue. she then hit stop on her recorder and took out the casette tape and stuck both back in her purse. and just before anyone looked at her.

Touchy: Yeah well. About the dame.

Spontaneous: Yeah! What should we do with the sleeping beauty, boss?! he then looked at the girl.

Red: We'll see what to do with her later. he then picked up her arm and it was limp. "She's still out cold. so right now, we'll go to the museum and leave her right here until we come back. come on boys, let's get outta here! they all ran out to the car. riz stayed laying on the floor until she heard the car vanish. she then opened her eyes and stood up, grinning her devious smile.

Riz: Phase 2 was sucessful! I got evidence #1, now all i need to do is follow them and get some help from other friends. riz then ran out ofthe building, activated her skates and was off. Riz was a girl who was sly as a fox. she could trick you in anyway she wanted to, especially with her powers. she skated out of the badside and into the goodside of toontown.

[Fisi]

Nice chappie.

This reminds me of my momments when I pretend to be a spy.*puts burglar hat on*