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Post by Nova on May 24, 2010 19:44:41 GMT -5
Chapter 1. Happy wedding day...almost
In Toontown memorial hall, a great thing was about to happen. Mickey and Minnie were getting Married! Hey doc, do ya take minnie mouse here yer bride? Said bugs bunny. Ha, Ha, I do! And you minne, do you take doc here as yer husband? Why of cour- started minnie. But at that very moment the lights went out, and an evil cackle was heard. Then a high pitched scream rent the night, followed by the toony punching sound and a man grunting in pain. 1 minute later the lights went back on. the entire hall was ransacked. The cake was everywhere, the plates were smashed, and the dinner destroyed. But most importantly, minnie was gone!
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Post by Nova on May 24, 2010 19:45:28 GMT -5
so, did you like it?
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Post by disneyplease on May 24, 2010 20:05:45 GMT -5
oooooooooooooohhh, I wonder whats gonnah happen, keep writing Brother!
DisneyPlease!
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Post by psychojr on May 24, 2010 20:20:42 GMT -5
nice chapter.
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Post by Fisi on May 24, 2010 20:34:44 GMT -5
Like it. ^_^.
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Post by Nova on May 24, 2010 20:48:19 GMT -5
Chapter 2 meatloaf mayhem smartguy, greasy, psycho, and stupid were sitting at the table. duh what are we having for dinner? said stupid. meatloaf said a wheezy voice from the kitchen. everyone groaned. you dont like my meatloaf? said wheezy. its not dat, its just we have had it like 6 nights in a row now. but then, a horribly familiar sound rent their ears www.youtube.com/watch?v=4W_F6DxJtKM they all ran for the door glad they didnt have to eat meatloaf again. |
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Post by Syrup on May 24, 2010 22:03:40 GMT -5
Nice start.
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Post by psychojr on May 25, 2010 10:40:28 GMT -5
thats good chapter
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Post by Nova on May 26, 2010 10:08:13 GMT -5
chapter 3 heartless hastles
Smartguy and the rest of the gang were in hot pursiut of the kidnappers. mickey had called smarty's cell and explained everything. the thieves had tried every manuver in the book to try to shake off the weasels. but at that very moment a human stuck a squirt rifle out of the window. DIP DUCK!!! then another car joined the chase but this one was different. it had a heart with an X through it for a hood ornement. THE HEARTLESS!!!!!!!!!!!! the weasels yelled. the heartless car smashed the old and flimsy pattywagon off the road and into a tree!! the nappers car turned around and sprayed smarty's feet. Have Fun!!!! the man with the rifle shouted. WWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yelled smartguy as his feet began to smoke. then Wee Ohh Wee Ohh! an ambulance was aprouching!!!!!
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Post by psychojr on May 26, 2010 10:25:31 GMT -5
wow good chapter.
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Post by Nova on May 26, 2010 17:07:26 GMT -5
Chapter 4 code toon ergent
at the toontown hospital, smarty's legs were melted off. they were trying to redraw them, but with little success. there was too much dip on the wound. he was moaning as steam came from the wound. psycho, tell your brother, i admire him for his bravery he said. you can tell him that in person amigo said greasy. YES! we finally found a detailed picture of smarty's legs! excaimed the doctor. WHAT!? yelled smartguy. where did you get that!? ohh, um... anyway we've made a copy and are going to paint it on.
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Post by Nova on May 26, 2010 17:17:52 GMT -5
chapter 5 everyone tries to rescue minnie
smarty was admiring his new legs in the waiting room. not dat bad he said. just the the hospital door was broken down and a whole bunch of toons ran in. apparently, they had tried to dress like soldiers, but had failed dismally. there was roger rabbit, jessica, bugs, roadrunner, wile e coyete, daffy duck, donald duck, porky pig, goofy, animated batman and robin, and mickey mouse. what are yall doin here?! exclaimed smartguy.
we've come to rescue minnie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! they all yelled. LETS GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! everyone shouted. they all ran to cars and army jeeps.
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Post by psychojr on May 29, 2010 13:32:29 GMT -5
oh wow nice job, sorry iv been reading others
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Post by Fisi on May 29, 2010 13:35:00 GMT -5
Nice.
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Post by Cooper on May 29, 2010 17:15:30 GMT -5
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