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Post by Syrup on May 29, 2010 17:21:38 GMT -5
Nice. Eh, if you're gonna use exclamation points please don't overuse them...
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Post by Nova on Jun 10, 2010 10:10:12 GMT -5
Chapter 6 Car chase with big kabooms They all set out toward Joshua Tree. the weasels led the convoy. all of a sudden even more heartless came. smarty knocked one off the road. then some humans came by in regular cars. benny knocked one into another and they both smashed into a tree. wile coyote wasnt so lucky. he drove right into a cactus while he was looking back. benny's brother kenny smashed into a human van. the van barely budged. a human open a hatch on the top of the van and yelled how bout a little dip to end your trip. he pulled out a hand grenade and pulled the pin. he through it into kenny the cab's driver seat. dip filled grenades, what a wonderful invention. NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO!!!! yelled kenny. but before he said anything more than fu- the grenade went off. when the smoke cleared, all that was left of kenny was a little yellow mush on the ground.
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Post by Syrup on Jun 10, 2010 19:17:27 GMT -5
Mush. Little yellow mush. Uh oh.
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Post by Nova on Jun 14, 2010 18:05:40 GMT -5
chapter 7 The march of DEATH! Oh my god, they killed kenny!!! yelled benny. Eventually, they managed to shake off or bump off the bad guys. but, when everything looked good for the good guys, they all ran out of gas. well, ain't have feets fer nothin. said smartguy. all the toons eagerly put on there pots and pans army helmuts and pulled out trumpets, bugles, drums, and in the weasels and a few other toons case, guns. they played their bugles and trumpets and started a loud and steady beat on their drums. stop whistling said smartguy. duh i can't whistle said stupid. BOOM! a dip filled cannon ball blew up right in front of them. run and spread out. don't retreat! yelled smartguy. but just then, another ball blew up right next to the toon patrol. stupid went down.
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Post by Syrup on Jun 14, 2010 22:27:45 GMT -5
NO! Stupid.
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Post by Nova on Jun 15, 2010 10:57:19 GMT -5
chapter 8 charge NO!!!! yelled the rest of the toon patrol. CHARGE!!! yelled smartguy. Fire! yelled the humans BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! AAHHH!!!! roared the toons as they charged. They reached the cannons in no time and destroyed them. March! ordered smarty. but, but, but what about stupid? spluttered psycho. we can't do anything for him choked smartguy.
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Post by psychojr on Jun 15, 2010 12:04:06 GMT -5
dang not bad its getting better.
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Post by Fisi on Jun 15, 2010 13:12:43 GMT -5
Good chappie. .
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Post by Syrup on Jun 15, 2010 18:10:29 GMT -5
Nice.
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Post by Nova on Jun 15, 2010 21:58:42 GMT -5
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Post by psychojr on Jun 16, 2010 5:49:56 GMT -5
wow good one nice i kinda feel sorry for samrty now.
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Post by Syrup on Jun 16, 2010 18:21:31 GMT -5
Anti-toon-death-machine. Interesting.
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Post by Nova on Jul 20, 2010 21:30:17 GMT -5
epilouge: stupid and smarty were brought back. mickey married minnie. the only thing that went wrong was they ren out of anti-dip and lost the recipe weasels were brought back. "well, it ain't gonna work now" said smarty. "well at least everything turned out ok hee he" giggled psycho. THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Syrup on Jul 20, 2010 23:26:32 GMT -5
Yay! Ending! Everyone lives happily ever after.
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