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Post by Fisi on Feb 6, 2010 12:17:22 GMT -5
Thanx Syrup. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Feb 8, 2010 20:08:02 GMT -5
Chapter: 11
"Is this the right spot?'' Smartguy asked Kenny.
Kenny nodded. They found the place where the kits and Doger were kidnapped. Slaughter jumped right infront of them. "Greetings,'' he said.''Welcome to my magic place.''.
"It's not dark magic, is it? Because, we can't go if Kenny is scared, that and we don't have time.'' said Vanessa.
Dance began growling at him.
Stupid pointed as he said,"Duh, I think your ferret doesn't like him.''.
"You know what Stupid, your slow.''
Kenny narrowed his eyes at him and stuck his tongue out. Juarez looked at him, then at Smartguy.
"I think that's the mean kittie.'' she said.
"OH MY GAWD, HE IS SO ADORABLE!!!'' Bella said.
"Uh...thanks...I think.'' said Slaughter, looking at the corner of his eye.
"See, misunderstanding, he must have been scared of the sign that he must been scared of him.'' said Smartguy.
Dance rolled her eyes, then ran inside. "HEY!!!'' he yelled at the ferret, but she ignored him. She found Clyde, Bonnie, and Doger. "Hey,'' said Doger."Can you set us free?''. She stood there and looked at the tiny bag full of powder. She carried it with her mouth and ran out.
"That ferret is so useless.'' said Clyde.
At the sametime, she came back to Vanessa.
"HEY! DON'T OPEN-'' Slaughter began.
But, Dance threw the bag at Slaughter making the bag open. As soon as the powder was off, he wasn't wearing his disguise anymore, making them gasp.
"IT'S HIM! WE THOUGHT THAT WE KILLED YOU!!!'' Vanessa exclaimed.
Before he growled, he said,"First the names Slaughter and now I'm going to kill you all.''.
"Ok, that's just sound plain disgusting....RUUN!!!'' Juarez shouted, then they began to ran.
He began to chase them. "Your ferret is smart.'' said Wheezy, while he's running.
"Shut up and run.''
At where they were running there was a disguising place. As they run into it, all of them fell at the disguises which were on the ground.
"Boy, they really needto clean this place up.'' said Pepe.
They heard Slaughter's roar and ran into the try out room.
"I know you guys are here.'' he said.
As the door opened, Stupid was the first one to come out, but he was disguised as a nerd.
"Uh, hi.'' Stupid greeted.
Greasy and Pepe came out dressed as mariachie players. "Hola.'' they said. Wheezy came dressed in a black and white shirt and a berret, Psycho came out dressed as a clown, and Juarez both dressed as circus performers with Dance as a tiny poodle. Smartguy was the last to dress like Wheezy. Vanessa came out as a mime.
"Hi there.'' Smartguy greeted.
"IS THERE ANYONE ELSE?!?''
Bella, who was dressed jamaican, came out and said,"What's up man.''.
Slaughter narrowed his eyes at her. Bella corssed her arms. "Hey,'' she said."Don't pretend that you never seen anyone in these.''. Slaughter snarled and left. All of them sighed. Kenny came out and hugged his moms leg.
"Glad he's gone.'' said Smartguy.
"Nice mariachie hat.'' Vanessa teased.
"Nice mime clothes.''
"Too shay.''
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Post by Syrup on Feb 9, 2010 1:48:20 GMT -5
Haha. Good chaptah (Sorry I'm a spell freak but...) They are spelled... "Mariachi, beret, and touche =P
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Post by Fisi on Feb 10, 2010 15:38:23 GMT -5
Spikey: Thanx. ^_^.
Syrup: Thanx. ^_^. Thanx for the spelling too I thought mariachi was spelled like that too but something told me to spell it the other way.
Chapter: 12
"Stop playing around, we have to kill him AGAIN and we need to find Doger and the kits.'' Smartguy suggested.
"AAAAAAANNNDD to change me back.'' said Vanessa.
"Yeah, that too.'' he said. They all nodded, took off their disguises then ran out. As they start running, Vanessa was catching up with Bella.
"You know, why did you choose the Jamaican clothing as a disguise?'' Vanessa asked.
"Because, it looks so cool, but not as cool as your mime disguise.'' Bella replied.
Vanessa rolled her eyes. As they passed two blond ladies with a pink short sleeves shirt and white long pants, Pepe and Greasy stopped and began racing back to them. "So,'' said Greasy to the blond on his left."Single?''
Pepe on the blonde's right said,"Bonita senorita, after looking at you I will never leave you.''
Grabbing the mariachi guitar from their back they began to play it.
"OH LEAH!!!''
Stupid and Vanessa stopped and looked at them. They ran towards them, Stupid grabbed Greasy on the arm while Vanessa grabbed Pepe by his collar shirt, and they ran back.
"C'mon, we're not here for you guys to "flirt".''
"Hey, it would have worked.'' said Pepe.
As they found the maigc place, they entered. They were amazed at the stuff that was on the inside.
"HEY! A LITTLE HELP HERE!!!'' said Doger.
Vanessa came to Doger and untied the ropes that were around him. Wheezy and Psycho did the same with Clyde and Bonnie.
"Finally, what took you guys so long?'' Clyde asked.
"*coughing* We had to get away from that crazy panther.'' said Wheezy.
Dance swished her tail. But then, she ran up to Vanessa's shoulder and she began to lift her fur up. "Dance,'' she said."What's wrong?''
An arm stretched out from behind Juarez back and grabbed Kenny on his shirt collar.
Slaughter laughed and gave Kenny an evil look and sad,"Finally.''
They began to gasped while Smartguy growled. Kenny grabbed one of his whiskers and yanked them out, making him let go. He ran to Juarez. Slaughter hissed.
"YOU LITTLE BRAT!!!''
"Leave him. In a matter of fact leave us alone.'' said Vanessa.
Slaughter raised his paw and took out his claws. He was about to scratch her, but he then thought of something.
"So, still yourself Vanessa?'' he asked.
"Yeah, and nothing changed.'' said Vanessa.
"Really? I see that you have a new pet.''
"Yeah, and I'm not afraid to use her new trick on you.''
Slaughter rolled his eyes and then asked,"Yes, and I believe your twin sister isn't here. I don't remember...was it...Maria?''
She raised her brow.
"Don't let him get the best of you.'' said Juarez.
"Well, if you join me, I can be able to take her back.'' he said, then pointed the mirror.
It showed Maria on a ship looking up at the sky with Zazu on her shoulder. She doesn't look happy.
"That's not all, I can also give you this.'' said Slaughter, passing a terprentine bottle to her.
Vanessa loked at it, then the mirror. "Look, pal,'' said Smartguy.''We ain't taking any offers from you.''
"But Smartguy, why did you have to change your ways?'' Slaughter asked.
Smartguy cocked his brow and aske,"Huh?''
"You and your gang were my star pupil, you did some rotten deeds that interest me, like almost helping-'' he began
"It's not gonna work, I let it behind me and so did the others.''
"Ah, but what about some other stuff like the how you guys steal, lie, and cheat?'' Slaughter asked.
Smartguy and the other gang frowned.
He took out both his hand and said,"So, join me? If you do, i'll make sure everything will be EXACTLY how it is and make your lives better.''
Smartguy and the other gang narrowed their brows at him."Sorry,'' said Smartguy."Already have one.''
Slaughter growled, but quickly turned to Vanessa.
"Well?''
".....No.''
"WHAT?!?'' Slaughter asked.
"You heard me. I SAID NO! EVEN THOUGH I MISS HER, I KNOW SHE'LL SOMEDAY COME BACK! AND PLUS WHY NEED TERPRENTINE FROM YOU IF I CAN JUST LOOK FOR IT IN A STORE!!!'' Vanessa yelled.
He grabbed the bottle and dropped it on the floor, breaking it into a million glass. She began to be mad and then looked at her ferret.
"Dance, kiss kiss.''
Dance then spread her lips back, showing her teeth, and then pounced on Slaughter, biting and scratcing him. Everyone tried looking away.
"Ow, gotta hurt. I think I'm going to have nightmares.'' said Doger.
Before Bella jumped and bit him on his butt, she shouted, "COOL, LOOKS FUN!!!''
"I think I'm in love.'' said Psycho.
As they attacked him, he fell on te black buckle, that once used to belong to Karlata, broke the skull.
"OH NO!!!''
The lights flickered, and then a loud scream came. Two ghostly arms reached out from the mirror and took Slaughter. Dace and Bella ran off. As he was holding onto the side of the mirrors, Stupid and Smartguy came.
"Bye Bye, kitty.'' said Smartguy, then Stupid pushed him to the mirrors.
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Post by Syrup on Feb 10, 2010 21:09:13 GMT -5
Mimes!! Haha. =P Good chapter
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Post by Fisi on Feb 11, 2010 20:31:46 GMT -5
Thanx guys.^_^.
Spikey: Evil will always lose MUWAHAHA, sorry apple juice got me.
Syrup. Mimes...creep me out.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Feb 13, 2010 13:08:54 GMT -5
Mimes. O.o
...I've never seen one in real life....hmm.
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Post by Fisi on Feb 13, 2010 14:36:14 GMT -5
I never seen one too but they still creep me out.
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Post by Syrup on Feb 13, 2010 17:26:01 GMT -5
A mime came to my school once. =P He wasn't wearing the funky mime clothes though.
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Post by Fisi on Feb 15, 2010 16:21:35 GMT -5
Chapter: 13
"Man, what was up with that panther.'' said Vanessa.
They all came back to the Toon Patrol headquarters. Vanessa and the kits were watching The Three Stooges while the others just talking.
"Good thing Vanessa's devil ferret and Psycho's psychotic girlfriend helped us.'' said Wheezy.
Good thing for Wheezy, if Dance would have heard that, he would be dead, but she's sleeping next to Vanessa. Bella was hugging Psycho while rubbing her head on his chest. "He's better than a monster.'' she said.
Psycho giggle than said, "She's better than coffee.''
"Oh gawd.'' said Vanessa, rolling her eyes.
The door knocked. Stupid open it and it was Eddie Valiant."Hey Eddie,'' said Stupid."How's it going?''
Eddie didn't answer. He stepped aside s he can enter. As Eddie did, he looked at Smartguy with a glare.
"So, where's Vanessa?'' he asked.
Vanessa looked up at her father and asked,"Yeah, dad?''
Clyde and Bonnie walked to Greasy while Kenny walked to Juarez.He took out a bottle of Terprentine, opened it, and pour it on Vanessa's head. She changed back into herself again.
"I knew what could have happened so I brought it instead.''
Vanessa stood up and hugged he father. "Dad, I saw Maria.'' she said.
"Really? How is she?''
"She's ok.'' said Vanessa.
"Well, now maybe things will be back to-'' Smartguy began, but an explosion coming from the kitchen.
"EXPLOSION!!!'' Psycho and Bella shouted from the kitchen.
Smartguy groaned as Juarez giggled.
"Don't worry, sweetface,nothing in ToonTown is never normal.'' said Juarez..
The End.
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Post by Fisi on Feb 16, 2010 16:27:19 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey. ^_^.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Feb 18, 2010 0:23:21 GMT -5
:3 yay!
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Post by Syrup on Feb 18, 2010 1:19:33 GMT -5
=D Good story. *dances* =P
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Post by Fisi on Feb 18, 2010 16:28:42 GMT -5
Thanx guys. ^_^.
I'm planning to make another fic, but I don't know what it would be about. I have another new character, her nickname is ZigZag, neice of Acme.
Can you guys give me some ideas?
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Post by Syrup on Feb 18, 2010 22:00:25 GMT -5
It could be about...she part cartoon and... she doesn't know it...? *shrugs*
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