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Post by Fisi on Feb 2, 2010 18:50:37 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey.^_^.
This is a short chappie. I'll do some more on Thursday since tommorow I have a game.
Chapter: 7
"Yeah, we did, but he made himself back. But we don't know how.'' Smartguy explained.
Vanessa groaned at his answer.
"Wait, why did you made her father a pig head?'' Pepe asked.
"Long story, but to make it short we were order to take him into ToonTown and we made his head a pig.'' he said to Pepe.
"Then why can't you ask Eddie?'' Juarez asked.
"Uh, maybe it's better if I don't.'' Smartguy said.
Juarez nodded, and then waited.
"Hello...hi Eddie do you remember when Smartguy made you into a pig head? Do you rember how you became back to yourself?......thank you.'' she said then hung up.
"So?'' Smartguy asked.
"He said he took a shower then put Terprentine on his head.''Juarez said.
"That's great. We just need to find some Terprentine.''
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Post by Syrup on Feb 3, 2010 0:06:46 GMT -5
Pig headed! Hehe. =P. Can't wait for more! ^^
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Feb 3, 2010 3:17:34 GMT -5
yay~
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Post by Fisi on Feb 3, 2010 15:40:36 GMT -5
Thanx guys.^_^.
I checked. it was actually Terprentine.
I'll modify the chappie.
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Post by Fisi on Feb 3, 2010 16:08:32 GMT -5
Chapter: 8
As Smartguy came downstairs from the batheroom, he shook his head.
"There's no Terprentine. I think we used it all up on the DIP.'' Smartguy said.
Pepe jumped from the sofa as he said,"DIP?!?''. Dance fur became a little higher than it was before. Vanessa crossed her arms. "Great,'' she said."Just when things did got better.''.
"We need to think of where we can find Terpretine.'' Smartguy said, putting his finger on his chin.
"Well, before I came to you guys back at the carnival, there was a stand that sell those kind of stuff.'' said Bella.
"Good idea, let's go.'' he said.
"Nah ah, we don't go until you give me something.''
"Like what?'' Wheezy asked.
"I think Juarez know...'' she said.
Juarez sighed and ran to the kitchen. As she ran back, she brought back a cup of coffee. "Enjoy.'' said Juarez, passing the cup to her.
Licking her upper lips, she took a huge sip of coffee. After she was done, she began to shake on her seats, fell on the floor, and then started rolling.
"YAAAAAAAAYYY!!!!''
Pepe looked up while Vanessa cocked a brow and crossed her arms.
Psycho walked up to her and whispered, "I'm glad I'm not related to her.''.
"Hey, it could be a possibility. You might not know.'' said Vanessa.
Meanwhile, Doger was resting on a bench as Clyde was holding a stuf monkey he won and chased both Bonnie and Kenny.
"Whew, I thought I'll never stop walking.'' he said.
Kenny giggled, but he then stopped and stood there causing them to bump eachother. "Kenny," said Clyde."Why did you stop?''. Kenny pointed at the green gas coming from his direction.
Doger smelled it and said,"Man, that is stinky.''.
"Can we go and check it out?'' Bonnie asked.
"Oh no,no more walking.'' he said.
"PLEASE, OH PLEASE!!!'' Clyde and Bonnie said, looking up at him with puppy eyes. Kenny give them the same look as well.
Doger tried looking away, but their look was to much. Doger sighed.
"Fine, we'll go.''
The kits cheered. They began walking to it. Kenny looked up at the green gas again. He stopped and whimpered. Bonnie pulled his arm.
"C'mon, it looks so interesting and weird at the sametime.'' she said.
Then they both ran back to Doger.
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Post by Syrup on Feb 4, 2010 1:53:40 GMT -5
Good chaptah =}
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Post by Fisi on Feb 4, 2010 16:57:32 GMT -5
Thanx guys. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Feb 4, 2010 19:34:45 GMT -5
Chapter: 9
as they stop, they see a huge sign that says "THE PURFECT TOUCH''. "Well,'' said Doger."We're here.''. He gulped at how creepy it must bee on the inside. Just then, a red panther jumped right infront of them, making him yelped.
"Hello my good friends, I am Mr. Sorcers.'' said the red panther.
He wore a purple top hat, with a purple jacket, and balck pants.
"My, what adorable children you have, wife taking a break while your stuck with them, huh?'' he asked.
"WHAT?! No, actually these are one of my friends kids.'' Doger answered.
He took out his hand at the kits. Clyde and Bonnie looked at eachother, then shook the panthers hand. Kenny, however, just stood there.
He wrapped his arms around Dogers shoulder as he said,"Come in, theres nothing to be afraid of, well, except for echoe noises, but that's just a carnie thing.''.
As they entered, they see lots of voodoo dolls, magic potions, rugs on the ceilings, and a table with a magic crystal ball. There was two mirrors behind the first chari across and the other chair. Mr. Sorcers pulled out the second chair for Doger to sit. The kits just stood.
"So, what magic do you want?''
"Do you do future stuff?'' he asked.
"Why, yes. As a matter of fact I do.'' Mr.Sorcers replied, turning his body around, moving his chair to move out the way. "Now,'' he said."What do you see?''.
"I see...some pretty colors.''
"Go on.'' he said, then looked at the kits.
Mr.Sorcers put his finger on his chin. Clyde and Bonnie stared at him. The panther knew he saw the kits before, but he was never sure.
"What?'' Clyde asked.
"I swear, I know you guys somehow.'' said Mr.Sorcers.
They shrugged. He then take a quick look at Kenny. Kenny stuck his tongue out, annoyed of him. He narrowed his eyes to take a closer look at the kit. The kits fur and his hair. Still nothing. Then, he looked at his eyes. Mr.Sorcers stared at his hazel eyes. THAT'S IT! How can he've been so stupid? Those hazel eyes are not ordinary hazel eyes. The hazel eyes that Kenny have is the one that Juarez has. It show only a twinkle when you look deeply.
"Beautiful.'' he snickered.
"Huh?'' Doger asked.
Mr.sorcers turned and said,"That kit, with the hazel eyes, is he the son of Smartguy and Juarez Landers?'' he asked.
Doger nodded. He began to laugh low."I KNEW IT!'' he shouted. He then pulled out a rope behind him and soon threw it at the kits. Clyde and Bonnie was caught.
"Hey-'' Doger began, but was then tied up to a chair, as the red panther threw his other rope.
"I knew someday that I find you. Now, come here you little brat.'' he said to Kenny.
He began shaking, but he bit his finger making him scream. As fast as he can, Kenny ran out.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Feb 4, 2010 21:40:46 GMT -5
OMG WHAT'S GOING ON WHAT'S GOING ON WHAT'S GOING ON!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!!
...is he based off of the guy on Princess and the Frog (never saw it but remember a guy like that.....................the, um, voodoo guy?)
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Post by Cooper on Feb 4, 2010 23:29:48 GMT -5
You mean Dr. Facilier?
I kinda noticed the heavy referencing too.
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Post by Syrup on Feb 4, 2010 23:30:32 GMT -5
RUN KENNY RUN!!!! =P Good chapter.
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Post by Fisi on Feb 5, 2010 16:02:44 GMT -5
Thanx guys. ^_^.
No. It's one of my old evil OC's, um Gato Devil. I know the names not that creative. He's just disguise himself like that. He just wears a blue ripped long sleeve jacket.
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Post by Fisi on Feb 5, 2010 16:48:32 GMT -5
Chapter: 10
The Toon Patrol and the others came to the carnival. Psycho try to enter, but the boar security pushed him on the floor.
Psycho groaned and asked,"Is this guy always here?''.
Smartguy, again, brought the tickets and showed him. He stepped aside. Smartguy looked at Psycho. "I know'' he said, then slapped himself. As they enter, Juarez twitched her ear.
"Kenny?'' she asked.
Kenny ran towards his mom and hugged her leg as he whimpered and sobbed tears. She picked him up.
"Kenny, why are you crying? And where's Doger?'' she asked.
"Big, scary, red, cat.'' said Kenny.
"Cat?'' Pepe asked.
He nodded. Vanessa began to wonder what red cat would harm them?
Smartguy growled, and then asked,''Where's the cat?''.
Kenny pointed the direction where he ran. Smartguy straighten his hat, then walks toward his direction. Juarez grabbed him by the arm. "Are you mad?'' she asked."We don't know what kind of cat it is? Besides it's red.''.
"Forget that. No kitty, kitty will treat my kit like that.''
"YEAH TELL HER BOSS!!!'' said Stupid and Psycho in unison.
She growled under her breath and looked at them with narrowed eyes. They did an innocent giggle, getting the point to shut up. Meanwhile, the red panther tied the kits up to a chari as well.
"WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS?! YOU JUST MET US!!!'' Bonnie shouted.
"Ah, but my dear kit, I think you already have met me.'' he said.
"What? We never met you.'' said Clyde.
"Uh, can you let me go. I was just taking them to the carnival...please don't kill me.'' Doger begged.
"I think you have.'' he replied to the kits, then he green powder came. They began coughing. As the powder went away, it showed the red panther but with a riped long-sleeve jacket. His eyes are red as for the entire eye was green. He had big claws. Clyde and Bonnie gasped at what they just realized.
"GATO DEVIL!!!'' they shouted.
Doger cocked a brow and said,"Who? Ok, I should really get to know alot of Juarez's friends.''.
"He's not a friend,'' said Clyde.''He's our enemy.''. Doger ducked his head at the sound of that and began to shake like Kenny did.
"Right you are brat. I should change my name though, my name is now on SCAR!!!''
"Taken.'' they said.
"JAFAR!!!''
"Been taken.''
"Uh, Shere Khan?'' he asked.
"Boy, you really are late.'' said Clyde.
"Dr. Facilier..''
"Wasn't that the voodoo guy that died?'' Bonnie asked.
"FORGET IT! I'll just call myself Slaughter.'' said Slaughter.
They look at eachother then at him. "That's just sound plain disgusting.'' they said. Slaughter rolled his eyes. He then made a squeazed fist, making the rope really tight. He dropped powder on him to disguise himself again. This time he was wearing a red and white stripe jacket and a carnie hat, with a stick pole.
"I'll see you later.'' he said, then left.
"YOUR GOING TO BE SORRY WHEN KENNY TELLS HIS DAD!!!'' Bonnie yelled.
When he heard her, he had an evil look on his face."That's right,'' he said to himself. He then had an idea. Slaughter snickered in his breath.
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Post by Fisi on Feb 5, 2010 20:01:59 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey. ^_^.
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Post by Syrup on Feb 5, 2010 20:12:56 GMT -5
Good chapter =D
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