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Post by Fisi on Jan 13, 2010 14:18:31 GMT -5
HAPPY B-DAY, Oh and good chappie.
Time for b-day punches *giving Usashi b-day punches*.
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Post by Syrup on Jan 13, 2010 14:54:42 GMT -5
Good chapters!!
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Jan 13, 2010 22:22:29 GMT -5
ow ow ow! ( suffering from b-day punches)
YOOHOO 15! I can't wait to have another year of weasely obbsessions!
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Jan 15, 2010 20:23:56 GMT -5
I am commenting because I am being forced.  SAVE ME!!!!! OK, no. Niceeee.  |
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Jan 15, 2010 22:49:12 GMT -5
Hush Riss! I'm not evil!
i've taken a likeing to several slash stories here...I think I'm give it a whack. I haven't desided.....First....who with who? Biscuit said... Greasy and Wise Guy.....oh by whack at it I mean an extra at the end of tainted heart....
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Jan 15, 2010 23:09:23 GMT -5
Jebikun please acccept your enterance! It's a thank you from me for the wheezy art for me. :) I plan to have more people added in.... I lack other cool toons though....
Chap 24
"Yes... thank you, Jebs." Jackie had just gotten off the phone with a good friend. Jebikun was the best known fashion designer Toon Town had. She wondered what faces the guys would make when they finally had clean clothes... and straight jackets. Jackie had by now forgotten the terror of her boyfriend and that river. Hmm... then she thought of something.... "The guys.... they were always... apart from us... that has GOT to stink...where are they anyway?" Jakcie thought.
"Hey Slick. Have you seen any of the guys hanging about?" Jackie asked.
Slick smile deviously.
"Looking for a certain one? Huh Jackie?" She giggled like a school girl.
"Slick... I will punch your face in..." Jackie mumbled.
"Ouch!" Slick winced. "Just joking! JK!" Slick laughed quietly. "I've seen the one with the messed up mind in the halls a couple of times. He's not happy. Check out his hair. It's very... well, see for yourself."
Slick left Jakcie to find him.
Messed up mind. Why do people always take mental deranged people for granted? They're not stupid. They can be dangerously clever.... She knew this personaly...
Jackie finally found him. He wasn't hard to spot. With blood red hair..... definitely Biscuit's work. It looked good on him too.
" Huh. Biscuit got to you didn't she?" Jackie thought she felt sparks fly at her when he looked at her.
He looked at her like he wanted her dead. She felt that he hated her. Giving her glares like he had something planned... He definitely had a creeepy personality... but he looked cute and innocent at the same time. Hooray for being a fuzzy adorable animal! :D
"Hey. Do you know where any of your buddies are? I have something to ask." Jackie smiled sweetly at Psycho.
"Why?" He said with a teasing mocking tone. He imitated her voice.
"Oh Psycho. Don't be so mean..." Greasy seemed to come out of nowhere.
Psycho shut his mouth... guess he never questioned authority.
"I just wanted to let you guys know something. If you want to ask anything we'll be in the basement." Jackie said as she walked off.
"Wonder what they'll be doing?" Greasy pondered.
Psycho could only guess what he was thinking of.
"Probaly talking about what they can do with us. Like hurt us in someway..." Psycho had believed that one of the girls had poisoned Boss. He had his eyes on Jackie.
She had remained calm and silent when he had been mean. That's not how someone is to react at that point......
:P Geez....what a lot of chapters.....and these just come off the top of my head.... I swear!
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Jan 16, 2010 10:22:20 GMT -5
;D Let's take a break form the chapters... and have a little laugh with.... A YAOI EXTRA!!!!  OK, well not totally full yaoi but I got several answers when I asked if should try it... I finally came to a decision and with this if approved I shall make one for real. So comment and let's see how this will go down! Psycho had gone over-the- top nuts. He had gotten a hold of some kinda energy drink with Volt in it. Now he he was screaming and yelling and running around like a banshee. "Psycho sit down! Your being a pain in the ass!" Smarty was beginning to get annoyed. Greasy was as well. Psycho was gonna hurt somebody. Or himself. "I'm a pretty butterfly! I will eat your head!" Psycho ran around in circles waving his arms wildly. A belt hit Wheezy in the face but he just flinched a bit and said nothing. Greasy turned to Boss. "Isn't there a way to shut him up?" Sass just slowly shook his head. You could tie him up in his jacket but he wouldn't stop talking. "IMMA EAT YOU GREASY!!!!!" Psycho yelled and laughed shrilly and fast. "Hey! Ow! Boss, look out!" Psycho had pushed Greasy and now he had lost his balance. He was falling right into... Boss!? Greasy had found that he and Boss had accidentaly.... locked lips..... "GET OFF OF ME!!! OH GOD! You're sick! Sick! SICK!" Boss yelled as he pushed Greasy off of him with force. "I'm sorry! It's Psycho's fault! Psycho admit it!" Greasy was looking anywhere for help in this queer situation. "I didn't know you was gay Greasy. How funny!" Psycho giggled his high stupid giggle. "I AM NOT A QUEER!!!! I"M NOT!!! GRR!" Greasy yelled. Wheezy made shame-shame finger motions. "Boss it was an accident! I swear! I don't like men! I'm not gay!" Greasy turned to Boss but to find the Boss had a plunger in hand and he looked PO-ed. "Tell that to this plunger!!!!" Smarty smack it on top of Greasy's head. And Greasy later had to endure Biscuit's questions. "So you're actually gay? Nice! Gay people are cool! Now I can use you as a character for my boy's love novels!!!" Biscuit smiled with joy. " World.... I hate you......" Greasy just mumbled.... HA HA HA! LOL the end! OMG I loved doing that! It was so funny! Ha ha! and cute too. |
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Post by Fisi on Jan 16, 2010 11:34:30 GMT -5
PSYCHO IS SOO CUTE IN THIS CHAPPIE.
I just made up an OC, can she be in it?
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Post by Syrup on Jan 22, 2010 0:44:47 GMT -5
Hehehe... that was cute ^^ Psycho reminded me of... me . When I'm realllyyy hyper I don't shut up and I'll laugh forever XD teeheee... |
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Jan 25, 2010 11:24:08 GMT -5
PSYCHO IS SOO CUTE IN THIS CHAPPIE. I just made up an OC, can she be in it?  hmm...i am interested....tell me about this OC and I will start sketches and get a spot for her if I like..... |
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Jan 25, 2010 11:57:45 GMT -5
OK another chappy for you guys....
Chap 25
"Jackie, I think keeping these guys around wasn't a good idea. Higher". Biscuit sighed.
The girls were playing a game of Ride the Tide. A game of luck. It is played by having a deck of cards and you are given one. Then you say Higher if you think the next card has a higher value and Lower if you think it will have a lesser value. you can do this up to five times if you make to five correct predictions than you ride the tide. This makes you an automatic winner. If you want to stop and stay where you are then you can Stand. If you make an incorrect guess you Bust and give you bet to the dealer. The dealer also plays. If the dealer makes a bust those standing get the dealers bet.
This was Jackie's favorite game to play and she was good at it too. She had just rode the tide about two times in a row now.
"Why? Lower." Jackie said when she saw the queen of hearts dealed.
"Well... they cause a lot of trouble. Jackie, I think you're turning a blind eye." Biscuit said.
"I have actually. For good reason.... Higher" Jackie smiled to herself.
"Why? They have been slowing down the case. Anyways, why are we down here anyway?" Biscuit spoke quickly.
"Well... It's a bit complicated but why not take a break from this game and I'll explain?" Jackie leaned back in her chair.
Kurumi laid the card in her hand down. "Go on Jacks." Kurumi said.
"OK, I have noticed a chain in their personalities." Jackie started.
"I've been watching them closely. They all seem to have what are called personality disorder types. There are four so far and each show traits in these categories. The first one I noticed and it wasn't that hard...Narcisist disorder people of this type are self center and have a inflated sense of self. They also demand special treatment and show little or no concern for others. They at hide this fact sometimes by pretending to care. Pure narcissists can empathize. They are also obsessed with feelings of love,beauty,success, and power." Jackie spoke as if she was reading right from a book.
" I find oddly both Sass and Greasy share these traits." Jackie smiled.
" Going on....." Jackie suddenly stopped.
" Jackie your not going on..." Biscuit said.
" I can't. Cause we have a bug in here...." Jackie grumbled.
" What?" Slick turned looking around.
" Psycho how long are you going to stand on the stairs" Jackie called out.
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Jan 25, 2010 21:10:54 GMT -5
NO! Why'd it stoooop?  Haha. Verrrrry nice. And..... ME LIKEY YAOI *flyingtacklepounce* |
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Jan 26, 2010 11:46:21 GMT -5
its not over yet!  but I already am itching to start a new one....can't i just slow down.... Chap 26 Psycho was in trouble now....How had Jackie known he was there?! He said nothing when she called out at him. Pretend he wasn't there. But to his embarrassment she popped out from behind the wall that hide the stairs. " I said how long are you going to stand there." Jackie asked her question again. " As long as I feel like it!" Psycho spat. " You think I'm mad at you? Why? I spied on people too. You learn a lot that way don't you?" Jackie smiled sweetly. Psycho wasn't gonna fall for her trick.... " You want to play with us?" Jackie waved her hand at the table with the cards still layed out. " We always have room for more." " No. I just lost my way. This place is so big." Psycho made a pout face. Jackie smiled. Her eyes seemed to go someplace else. Like in a memory long ago." Yeah it sure is....." She sighed quietly. Psycho turned and went up the stairs. At the top he whipped his head a round and stuck his tongue out at Jackie. He quietly moved down the street. He blended in perfectly with the crowd and mayhem of Toon Town. He was unstoppable. His plans were going all according to plan. He was make Jackie Dewey wish she had never been born. He would get her back for what she did. He remembered the blood she spilt and the heart she stopped. His hate for her rose dangerously. He was gonna make her beg for mercy. But would he give it? H*** no. His next target would cause a disaster, a horror in the Toon Patrol. Yes he would enjoy it. Look out Jackie. Here I come...
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Jan 26, 2010 12:02:58 GMT -5
WEEEEEEE!!!!!!! ;D
Chap 27
Biscuit was horribly busy. The air tank had held secrets on it's surface. Fingerprints came up now she was running them through the database. It had been one minute now and it was still going....
"Come on, find a match already!!!!" Biscuit had a lunch to fix. If she was to get it ready in time, this search would have to speed up. She plopped in her chair and sighed. Then the screen presented her with a match. She looked at it closely...
"Oh no......"
Short yes. Cliff hanger most definitely. ;D
HA! >:D
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Post by Fisi on Jan 26, 2010 16:12:40 GMT -5
Nice chappie. *gasp* PSYCHO!!! *smacks him behind the head* SHAME ON YOU!!!
Ok, can you look at fanart that says "MY NEW CHARACTER! YAAY!, it tells you all about her.
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hmm...i am interested....tell me about this OC and I will start sketches and get a spot for her if I like.....
but I already am itching to start a new one....can't i just slow down....