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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Dec 15, 2008 15:21:06 GMT -5
Please don't attack me for a new thread! (ducks under chair...) xD
Prolouge
"I don't trust you." He said it with true hate.
"Scaring me is useless." Jackie didn't even flinch.
"I still don't care. I will keep my eye on you. Watch your neck. You might lose it very soon." He flipped his razor with his fingers.
"I have little friend who would love to leave a mark. A fatal one at that."
Jackie still didn't move or flinch but on the inside she was pitying him. He no longer trusted anyone. What had Doom done to them?.....
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Post by Weasel Freak on Dec 15, 2008 18:36:57 GMT -5
What did Doom do to Psycho?! D8
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Dec 20, 2008 11:02:48 GMT -5
Yay! Good job Sam!!! ;D I'm ungrounded!!! =D
But.....
*loom* CONTINUE THE JURASSIC PARK THREAD!!!!!!!!!! NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Dec 31, 2008 23:31:02 GMT -5
Well it's just a little preview of what the story's like. ;)
Chap 1
The files...
Kurumi was loaded with 6 fat folders.
"Ughh!!" she grunted.
"Hey Kurumi. Need an extra paw?" Blair asked. Blair was a girl who liked to help people a lot. Her purple hair had...oil in it...
"Sure... you were working on the car again?" Kurumi dropped the folders in Blair's arms.
"Yeah... HEY!!!!" Blair nearly stumbled.
Kurumi took 3 folders back...
"Just playing...no hard feelings? With that extra weight of yours you would have been fine!" Kurumi chuckled an evil little grin. Kurumi wasn't really evil she just loved to play around with people. (Biscuit was the more evil one. Going around videoing embarrassing moments in people's life..... running up to people randomly in a yukata, kicking them and yelling " No Honor!" She was deadly random...)
"Excuse me, did you just say my extra weight?! Well this "extra weight " is about to kill you!!"
Uh-oh.... evil aura overload.... Blair loomed over Kurumi like a ghost (a very angry ghost at that...)
"Would you to stop fighting? Some of us got some problems they need to handle in a few hours!"
"Jackie, she started it!! Ni Ni Ni!" Kurumi again was messing around.
"SHE CALLED ME FAT!!! Do I look fat to you?!?!" Blair screeched.
Kurumi knew Jackie's problem that she needed to handle: Dutch... (No, not the weird people who like pigs and wear wooden shoes, but Jackie's ex boyfriend.... she knew something was still up between them... he NEVER left her alone. Kurumi had also seen angry bruises on Jackie. She was worried for her friend....)
"Ni?! Oh Kurumi, you're back! Look look look! Ni! I found a funny insult!!!" Kurumi turned toward the room in the long hall on her left...
"Later OK? Got stuff for Jackie." Kurumi showed her the fat folders of doom...
"The info on those 1947 Toon Patrol dudes, right? " Biscuit took a folder and opened it.
"Yes, and I went through hell to get it and the criminal files had me going to every f@#$%*& place in Toon Town!"
"I'm still HOLDING THESE!!!!" Blair yelled.
"Whoops, sorry...." Kurumi took back the folders.
"Ohh... This is sad..." Biscuit sighed and her ears drooped back. Being a black footed ferret, body language was a good emotion predictor....
"What? What's sad?" Jackie took the paper Biscuit had in her paws.
"This Charlie guy... he died only 2 weeks before his birthday..."
"That is kinda sad.... not getting to be a year older before you die.... " Jackie tilted her head... she was looking at something else. A picture of the Charlie guy...
"Hey, he looks familiar. Like, I think we may know him...."Jackie bit her lower lip.
"He don't ring a bell in this noggin'." Blair tapped her head.
"Nope. I don't know him either but he LOOKS familiar to me..." Kurumi adjusted her spiky, black and red pig tails.
"Well, let's take a look at the rest..." Jackie said. But only one thing was on her mind..... it kept running through her mind. "I might not come back in one piece this afternoon..."
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Jan 1, 2009 12:24:11 GMT -5
yay!!! I like this one!!!!!! I still like Jurassic Park, but this one seems.... really good!!!! Now!!..... GO TO JURASSIC PARK!!!!!!!
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Post by Just Plain Rydell on Jan 1, 2009 14:24:02 GMT -5
OMG I'M IN THIS ONE!!!!! AND I'M AWESOME!!!!! THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!!!!!!
(KurumixDurza 4ever!! Will Kurumi find her brother? or who is Charlie in relation to her?)
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Jan 1, 2009 21:50:04 GMT -5
well....Charlie IS psycho. They all knew each other in High School so he's a little familar so let's say it's a friend reuion... and I like this one too. Better than Jurrasic Park even!
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Jan 1, 2009 21:57:00 GMT -5
OMG I'M IN THIS ONE!!!!! AND I'M AWESOME!!!!! THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!!!!!! (KurumixDurza 4ever!! Will Kurumi find her brother? or who is Charlie in relation to her?) you are also the nurse on the girl's toon patrol. You have a nose and a brian that can remember the scent and know the scent of a persons blood. And you were in the toon milatary in till( well...the reason is told by you to Psycho so if you want to know why then wait till later) you have a purple heart... ( you know that means you've been injured in the milatary.) |
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Post by Just Plain Rydell on Jan 1, 2009 22:02:13 GMT -5
Woooooooooooow!!!!!
Awesome!!! I love purple. Will I find love?
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Jan 3, 2009 21:31:25 GMT -5
hee hee well... Psycho will love you but....you have to share with Biscuit!!!!
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Jan 3, 2009 21:49:10 GMT -5
Well, she can have Psycho if you make Matt Matt a weasel character and make him permanent!!!! *big hopeful eyes* :3
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Post by Just Plain Rydell on Jan 3, 2009 22:37:53 GMT -5
Psycho can be my brother if Durza can be in it. XD
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Jan 5, 2009 21:46:17 GMT -5
GAHHH! CHaracter overload!!!!! i WAS GONNA HAVE Matt Matt in it and I don't want Durza in it....Matt matt crushes on Biscuit but Psycho doesn't like him at all.....Durza who is he? tell me I 'll rethink it...
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Post by Just Plain Rydell on Jan 5, 2009 23:11:18 GMT -5
XD Durza's mah bf.
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Jan 11, 2009 22:00:53 GMT -5
ohh...hmm...oh next chappy i'll try tomorrow...
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