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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Dec 18, 2009 14:09:34 GMT -5
I am sooo addicted! Chap 19 "The tank was full of Laughing Gas." Jackie said looking at the report. She was abnormally giddy. Dutch hadn't called in the past week. Jackie felt relieved. "But then that means..." Biscuit said, looking at the report. "Yes. Someone has found a third way to kill a toon." Jackie said. Jackie's joy over being Dutch-free was stopped right after she said that. She answered her phone without checking the caller ID. "Hello?" Jackie said happily. "Where the f*** are you? " Dutch was on the phone. "I'm at work! What do you want?" She barked. "I want to know why you didn't come last week!" Dutch said angrily. "I didn't have to." Jackie said angry as well. "Fine, whatever. Will you meet me in the park this afternoon? You forgot something. " He said with a growl. "Whatever." She shut her phone. Noon was in 2 hours. Could she slip out of here without being caught by Biscuit or Kurumi?
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Dec 18, 2009 14:17:09 GMT -5
As a mega warning. Gore, Blood, Near Death, and .......oh should I put it.... mating? Are involved in this story. Please stop now if any of this stuff bothers you while you haves the chance! for all of you who do not...thank you for being so nice!
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Post by Fisi on Dec 19, 2009 11:04:19 GMT -5
Don't worry the chappies were great.
Greasy got some nasty things in his mind.
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Post by Syrup on Dec 19, 2009 13:19:41 GMT -5
Nice story ^:^ Syrup (as Sunraye calls me) likey!!
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Dec 28, 2009 17:10:23 GMT -5
SAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yay. Good job. I am officially addicted. ADEN IS IN THE STORY HOLY CRAP OH MY GOD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH. <3
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Dec 31, 2009 21:23:40 GMT -5
Yeah I think all the Smarty fans paniced when he was posioned and had heart attacks.....
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Post by Syrup on Dec 31, 2009 23:43:42 GMT -5
Yes, yes we were. q=
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Dec 31, 2009 23:47:52 GMT -5
oh goody. Sorry....I had to. Its been a master plan of mine. Don't worry. It won't happen again....in this story....to him....
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Jan 1, 2010 0:29:56 GMT -5
Next chappie coming up ;D Chap 20
Sass noticed Jackie was acting strange. She acted a little afraid. She had a t-shirt on with vibrant lettering that read "I'm not short. I'm fun-sized." It amused him. She ran around grabbing things, but she avoided her coharts. Does she have something to hide? What got him totally interested was that she grabbed her pistol, stuffed it in her belt loop, and ran out the door. "Hey. Where's your little friend going?" He asked Kurumi as she walked by him, carrying some files. "Who?" She asked, straining her neck to see. "Jackie. She left with her pistol." He pointed to the window. "Oh s***." Kurumi ran past him, dropping the files in his arms on her way past. She watched as Jackie got in her lime green Convertable Beetle. "Damnit! She sneaked off! That witch!" Kurumi ran back past him to Biscuit's lab. "Biscuit! Check Jackie's last calls!" She yelled in Biscuit's doorway. "Whoa! Why?" Biscuit said shocked to see Kurumi materalize at her door. "She left with her gun. The one in the drawer." Kurumi stomped her knee high combat boots hard on the tiled floor. "Oh God. I'm on it stat!" Biscuit spun in her office chair back to her purple Tangarine Laptop. "Ok, her last call was... (gulp)... Dutch.... " Biscuit reached down and grabbed a bag and gently stuffed her laptop in. "This is gonna probaly end with a little bloodshed." Biscuit stood up and slowly turned to face Kurumi. Her purple eyes shone with a deadly fire........ "Kurumi. Get what you think you'll need..." Biscuit swiftly left the lab.
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Post by Syrup on Jan 1, 2010 2:00:52 GMT -5
...Oh gosh o.o
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Jan 1, 2010 2:26:30 GMT -5
;D Ok, last one tonight or morning? Dunno lack of sleep.
Chap 21
"Come to the park. Noon" Biscuit replayed the sound off Jackie's phone data. "How did you do that? Hee hee." Psycho coudn't believe people could steal stuff on these wierd flat bright thingies. "Easy. But I can't show you now. Jackie could be in danger...." Biscuit bit her claw. "Why? He gonna propose? What's dangerous 'bout that?" Smarty mumbled. "Ugh! You can be so flipping rude!" Slick jumped up in anger. "Slick sit down.... please." Blair tugged at Slick's long jacket. "NO! I won't Blair! When willl you stop being such a f***ing wimp!?" Slick turned and yelled at Blair, making her cover her ears in hurt. "SLICK! DON'T TAKE YOUR ANGER OUT ON OTHERS!!!" Biscuit screeched. Sass had now realized something. Everything falls apart without Jackie here. "Jeez.... let's just find her and make sure she's OK." Biscuit sighed. "Why not call her on that tiny phone thing?" Greasy pointed to the black and red phone in Kurumi's hand. "She turned it off...." Kurumi sighed with a low growl. "Dutch may know we are onto him... So I think we need help. We need to go in differnt directions. This park is so big." Biscuit said, thinking hard. "YOU!" Biscuit pointed at Smarty with a demonic manga glare. "What? And don't look at me like that. It doesn't help your face none!" Smarty barked. "OK, shut up, get yourself and your friends to help us, and watch what you say." She grabbed his shirt and held him inches from her snout. "Oh fine... You really need to learn to control yourself...." Sass mumbled.
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Post by Fisi on Jan 1, 2010 8:48:03 GMT -5
X3 funny chappies.
Omg in chapter: 20 I say "I'm not small, I'm funsized." but sometimes I say this "Fool I am the HYENA!!!"
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Jan 1, 2010 13:24:11 GMT -5
yeah. i did more t-shirt ideas in my sketch book. jackie had a im with dingle nose shirt. Sass was not happy.
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Jan 6, 2010 12:03:24 GMT -5
;D Yeah I am so proud of myself!
Chap 22
Jackie arrived at the park on time, thanks to her reckless driving. She tried to calm down... It's hard to face someone who beat you but said they loved you.... Jackie walked over to that bridge. The same bridge she fell in love at.... she hated it now. It was a sacred place before. Now it was a curse. She spat on the stone walkway. She felt slightly better. "Jackie." She turned to face the voice. The voice of a painful past. "Dutch. I just want whatever it is I forgot and be on my way. I have a job you know." She tried to stand her ground. Yet her heart screamed "YOU FOOL!" "I lied about that. I knew you wouldn't come any other way... I had to talk to you...." Dutch sounded depressed. " Dutch, I'm leaving. I don't want to hear your bull****." Jackie turned to go. " Let me talk damnit!!" Dutch grabbed her arm. It felt like knives were being stabbed into it when he used his claws. "Dutch! Let me go!" Jackie tried to twist and turn her arm anyway she could to get free from him. "I just wanted to give this to you!" Dutch pointed to a small blue velvet box. He released her arm. Jackie opened it. To her horror... In that box....was... a wedding ring.... "Dutch....." Jackie didn't know what to do.... "I'm sorry for what I did to you. I was stupid. I was just angry with myself that I couldn't get the courage to ask you to marry me. I was an idiot and took it out on you. I changed. I just want you back...." Dutch looked at Jackie. Her head hung low. Then suddenly she moved. She raised her arm and...threw the ring and box with as much power she had. " What?! The f*** woman?!" "Dutch. I was stupid for even thinking you cared about me! You came home drunk. You came home from "business trips". What trips? Trips to see your company sluts?" Jackie was mad now. She had the right to be. "You think this is funny, Jackie? Jackie, you fake everything. You are dangerous! Who would love you? I do. Even if you threw away your whole life!" Dutch grabbed her. "I SAID LET ME GO!" Jackie pulled away but she stumbled. She fell over the crumbling bridge. The surging water engulfed her.
I love doing this.....am I doing well....? ;D
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Jan 13, 2010 12:03:39 GMT -5
;D My b-day whoo hoo! I got my first b-day art from a member! ( thanks jebikun!) And I am currently now 15 years of awsome age! But now let's keep up this story! Chap 23 The noon had become hot. The weather in Toon Town hadn't changed much. But everything else had. And being forced to stay in that huge house never bothered Wheezy much. Places he could hide and enjoy some alone time where littered about the place. He found the old park he was walking about in now brought a flood of memories. Some made him smile a bit, others brought him back to his quite self. psycho had been left in the SUV on Biscuit's saying. She didn't want people to freak when they saw a nutcase out and about. He thought now she had a good reason. People where giving him glares and whispering about him no doubt....Wheezy then heard an arguement when he stopped at a familar weeping willow. He had the acidental talent to hide in shadows. Curse his dark colors. It made use now. He could stand still and not be seen or heard until he touched you or he coughed to show his existence. The arguement he heard seemed like a lover quarrel. He heard the name Dutch. Wasn't that the name of Jackie's boyfriend? Then he heard the name Jackie. He peeked through the long branches of the willow and saw the telltale blond hair. Jackie yelled something. Then Wheezy saw her stumble and fall over the brige rails. He watched in slight horror as she was swallowed by the churning river below. Jackie's head broke the surface of the water. Jackie was a diver, but not a very strong swimmer. She couldn't dive here. The spring rain had made the river an angry brown and also highly powerful. She could be hit by rocks or stabbed inthe eye by stuck twigs. Was she gonna die drowning? Maybe she should give up now and let the river have it's way. But she felt someone grab her arm and someone grunting as they tried to pull her out of the water. Soon she was out of the water and back on the river's bank. She looked at her rescuer. "Wheezy!" She smiled at the joy of not drowning to death. " Your heavier than you look..." was all he said as he lit a ciggarette. " Excuse me?" Jackie think he was basicly calling her fat. " Your boyfriend ran off like death was at his back...." Wheezy 's bottm half was wet and his fur was starting to mat. Jackie was soaked and dispite the heat she shivered. Something black and soft hit her in the face. " Use it. I don't care." Wheezy said as he turned around maybe looking for someone. Jackie did. It smelt like a lot of things. Smoke and some other leatherish scent. " He's not that good to you is he?" D*** he was straight forward! " Well not so much. He's fine." Jackie said. Not telling him the truth. " So why did he run? I'm pretty sure the boyfriend is supposed to freak out.' He inhaled then exhaled somke. Jackie threw the wet vest back at him. It landed on his shoulder. Jacie aimed for the head but she was more of shooter than a thrower. " Why are you so interested? Can we just find your friends and mine and get going/" Jackie was fuming a bit. How could he be like that? Ask such rude questions?! " Yeah. I think I'm gonna be with out a vest for a few days." " What do you mean?" jackie said a little angry. " This outfit is all I have.' He wrung out the vest. " Well then I think I have to make a call..." Jackie smiled. She knew just who.
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