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Post by Greasy on Jan 8, 2009 15:58:58 GMT -5
Very nice! You´re a very good writer. It really makes fun to read your story, and that comes from me, who doesn´t like to read!
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Jan 8, 2009 21:02:38 GMT -5
wow, muchas gracias!
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Kilo the Weasel
Trainee
Self-proclaimed little sister of Wheezy the weasel.
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Post by Kilo the Weasel on Jan 9, 2009 10:08:57 GMT -5
Awesome description on the workplace!! Keep it up! I wants ta read mores! X3
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Post by Greasy on Jan 9, 2009 14:03:11 GMT -5
Same here!
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Jan 9, 2009 22:08:30 GMT -5
thanks! i'll get more up in a few days!
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Post by Greasy on Jan 10, 2009 14:54:51 GMT -5
I will still waiting here!
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Jan 23, 2009 1:10:49 GMT -5
I'm REALLY sorry it's taking so long! My computer got a horrid virus and I've had to use my sister's computer...which does not have my fanfic saved on it. So until I get my computer fixed, I won't be able to post any more. Sorry. Luckily for me, I need my computer to do schoolwork, so it's a priority for my mom to fix it ^_^
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Post by Fatal hilarity on Jan 24, 2009 3:06:03 GMT -5
Wow, I'm very impressed. And I very rarely say that about any work of fiction! (Mostly 'cause I don't read much, admittedly...) But out of all writings I've seen written by someone who doesn't have a professional career yet, it's the best I've ever seen. Don't get me wrong here- that's saying a lot!
My favorite part is the way you get the vibe of an actual 40's movie, what with the newspaper boy, the sick sister, the smart-mouthed, sassy heroine... and I think you did very well writing for Greasy. Trust me- as an adult male, I can safely say that I can sympathize with (although I of course don't approve of) Greasy's reaction to Dizzy.
It's very rare that I see such writing talent. You've obviously gone deeply into first person narration here, and although it's unconventional, the accent gives character to it- it helps that you've created a character with a lot of depth. I can see you just getting better and better! You can do things I can't.
Alrighty then... you've got the set-up. Act one! Next the real adventure begins...
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Jan 24, 2009 15:24:14 GMT -5
Wow...thank you SO, SO much! I can't thank you enough! Thank you SO, SO much for the compliments, and I REALLY, REALLY appreciate you pointing out the best points - knowing what people like help me make my stories better. It makes me feel SO great that you noticed how hard I worked to get it just right, and how much I got into it! Thank you SO much!
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Post by Weasel Freak on Jan 24, 2009 16:58:40 GMT -5
I've noticed all of those things, too. I'm currently working on five different fictions and something like fifteen different original characters, but none of my fics or OC's add up to anything when compared to your single OC Dizzy and this fic. (Pretty sad on my part, actually. -_-'  ) |
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Post by jebikun on Jan 30, 2009 23:36:16 GMT -5
Hiya!!!Just finished reading it. Love luv luv luv it. I'm not usually into original character in the leading role story, But you really know how to balance it out!! Entertaining too^^ Thank you for writing this, waiting for next. Can I do some fan art later?  |
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Feb 4, 2009 17:24:40 GMT -5
hmm...i'll send you a PM!!!
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Feb 21, 2009 15:42:21 GMT -5
okay, i made a VERY small change, but you must know because it's significant in the story. Diz says in the first chapter that she has an autographed portrait of her mother from one of her Broadway shows. Well, i honestly don't know WHAT I was thinking or HOW a Toon weasel would end up on Broadway, and so I changed it so she just has a plain ol' picture of her mama, whose job is currently undecided.
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Post by Fatal hilarity on Feb 21, 2009 19:40:04 GMT -5
Hmm... it'd be a lot more likely if she had been in vaudeville.
Did you know that there was an unfilmed prequel to WFRR called Who Discovered Roger Rabbit? about Roger's early career in Broadway? Seems that Disney thinks it's an okay idea for some reason.
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Feb 21, 2009 22:23:16 GMT -5
I knew about the prequel but not that he was on Broadway! So it WOULD make sense after all?! SWEET! Should I go for it?
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