Kilo the Weasel
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Self-proclaimed little sister of Wheezy the weasel.
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Post by Kilo the Weasel on Dec 15, 2008 21:35:30 GMT -5
This is gettin' epic-er by the second! The detailed descriptions of their actions are something worth drawin'! Please, I can't wait for the next one!
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Dec 15, 2008 21:37:04 GMT -5
drawin'? r u an artist? and r u imitating Dizzy? SWEET!
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Kilo the Weasel
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Self-proclaimed little sister of Wheezy the weasel.
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Post by Kilo the Weasel on Dec 15, 2008 22:16:54 GMT -5
I guess I could say I'm an artist ^w^''
And am I imitating Dizzy? We've got some similarities but instead of being Smartass' GF, I'd like to say that Kilo is Wheezy's slightly younger, and slightly hyper-er sister!
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Post by Eternity on Dec 16, 2008 11:32:50 GMT -5
I love the way you write. I could just feel the tension between Smart Guy and Diz. And you captured the weasels' personalities perfectly.
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Dec 16, 2008 13:08:34 GMT -5
that's what i was going for! *turns around and pumps fist* WOOO HOOOOOOO!
*turns back around* ahem, thank you.
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Dec 16, 2008 13:34:02 GMT -5
i gotta ask, 'cause i LOVE putting inside jokes and such in my stories - did anyone get the joke about the little yellow flower named Susan having two 'shiners'?
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Kilo the Weasel
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Self-proclaimed little sister of Wheezy the weasel.
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Post by Kilo the Weasel on Dec 16, 2008 18:53:49 GMT -5
I think I got it...Uhh...
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Post by Weasel Freak on Dec 16, 2008 19:00:33 GMT -5
Nup. Not me.
Great new chapter! I think that this piece of fiction is one of the best so far. =)
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Dec 16, 2008 21:10:34 GMT -5
thanks! ok, it's a pretty nerdy joke, but there's a flower called a 'Black-eyed Susan'. thus, the flower named Susan is always getting 'shiners' - black eyes. it's dumb, but it keeps me outta the woods (the streets are too far away from my house to be roaming ^_^)
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Kilo the Weasel
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Self-proclaimed little sister of Wheezy the weasel.
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Post by Kilo the Weasel on Dec 16, 2008 22:52:34 GMT -5
Oh...that's what you meant? I was thinkin' somethin' else... >.> *ahem*
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Blooper
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Wheezy Wheezy he's our man!! If he can't blow your head off, no one can!!!
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Post by Blooper on Dec 16, 2008 23:05:50 GMT -5
Well done! Nice setting, good plot, your OC is very original, and you describe some things very- uh, descriptively. I couldn't have done this. Nice work.
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Dec 17, 2008 0:43:37 GMT -5
thanks! wow, been awhile since u've been on, matey! ^_^
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Dec 17, 2008 0:44:49 GMT -5
Oh...that's what you meant? I was thinkin' somethin' else... >.> *ahem* uh-oh...did i, the 'homeschooled recluse', accidentally put something inappropriate in here?!?! *panics* |
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Kilo the Weasel
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Self-proclaimed little sister of Wheezy the weasel.
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Post by Kilo the Weasel on Dec 17, 2008 9:06:29 GMT -5
Nah, I got some perverted friends at school who ALWAYS make wierd jokes about 'things' . I guess my mind was just used to all of 'em xD
It's only NOT appropriate when someone decides to think its not appropriate
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Dec 17, 2008 9:51:02 GMT -5
oh, ok. good! *whew!*
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