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Post by Fisi on Aug 4, 2010 17:56:47 GMT -5
*gasp* OMG, THE LK HYENAS, YAY!!! ;D *runs to them and hugs them* I LOVE THEM I LOVE THEM I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOKOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THEM!!! ;D
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Post by disneyplease on Aug 4, 2010 19:07:19 GMT -5
Glad y'all liked the chapter! I'll post the next one Tomorrow, or maybe sooner!
DisneyPlease!
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Post by Lola on Aug 4, 2010 19:14:14 GMT -5
sooner please!
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Post by disneyplease on Aug 4, 2010 21:10:17 GMT -5
if you like this story Superfreak, read my post, in the ideas and comments catagory, My Disney Fics to come. there Im posting the Titles and summaries of the Disney Fics Im working on!
Please, you got to see the post!
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Post by Mellow on Aug 4, 2010 21:14:46 GMT -5
YAY!!!! By the way, Nice Chapter, DisneyPlease!!!!!
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Post by Syrup on Aug 4, 2010 21:42:41 GMT -5
Good chapter[:
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Post by disneyplease on Aug 5, 2010 13:13:38 GMT -5
Chapter 9: Attack of the shadows
That night, at the villains lair, Scar scolded at the Hyenas for failing to abduct Lisa, but he stopped when Maleficent appeared.
" Do'nt be so fustraighted my feline friend " she said, " we're not relying on your laughing companions".
"Besides, your not the only one who failed" said Jafar as he turned his attention to the other villains who failed.
Then Dr. Facilier stepped up, " not to worry your highness" he said, " pretty soon we're going to have that girl, I've just sent my friends on the other side to go pick her up!".
Then he walked towards the evil queens magic mirror where the image of Lisa in her room appeared.
Back at the place, Lisa was lying in her bed sound asleep. Then four lively shadows slithered under the balcony doors and crept towards the bed, Just when they about to grab Lisa as she slept, Mama Odie Burst into the room and used her light magic at them. The light burned the shadows. Then Ray flew in and used his light to scare the shadows away.
" An' don' you shadow things com' back!" shouted Ray.
"Heh heh, still not bad fo' a 200 year ol' blind lady" said Mama Odie as she then walked towards the closed balcony doors to cast a protection spell on them, just in case the shadows or the other villains try to come into Lisa's room
" Dat' ougtah keep 'em out".
Then she and Ray went to the bed to check on Lisa, who was still asleep.
" Heh, child's still asleep" said Mama Odie as she pulled the covers up to Lisa's chin and tucked her in.
" yep" said Ray as he yawned and layed down on Lisa's night stand, " good night Mama Odie" he called out.
" Good night, Ray" said Mama Odie as she left.
Back at the villains Lair, after watching what happened on the magic mirror, an angry look grew on Dr. Facilier's face as he clenched his his teeth. Now he Failed the mission.
" Looks Like your friends failed as well" said Scar with a smirk, only to recieve a glare from the witch doctor telling him to shut up.
" Great, I was just about to send my henchmen to that girls room to get her, Now they can't go in there" said Hades.
" Neither can I" called out Oogie Boogie.
" Enough all of you" announced Maleficent, " We do'nt neccessarly need the room to capture the child, for now on we just need to wait til she is outside and alone!"
DisneyPlease!
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Post by Fisi on Aug 5, 2010 13:20:16 GMT -5
SCAR YOU MEANIE, DONT YELL AT MY HYENAS!!! So far, it's awsome
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Post by Lola on Aug 5, 2010 15:03:28 GMT -5
ha hades was going to send pain and panic to get her? Silly hades, i love pain and panic though
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Post by disneyplease on Aug 5, 2010 18:05:16 GMT -5
Thanks for the comments Girls!
DisneyPlease!
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Post by Syrup on Aug 6, 2010 0:56:14 GMT -5
Silly hades, i love pain and panic though Me too "Pain!"/"And Panic!"/"REPORTING FOR DUTY!"/"Yeah, yeah, yeah, move along." Okay, off-topic. Nice chapter, Disneyplease!
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Post by disneyplease on Aug 6, 2010 10:41:13 GMT -5
Thanks Syrup! DisneyPlease!
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Post by disneyplease on Aug 6, 2010 13:04:11 GMT -5
Chapter 10: Breakfast in bed & a day at the beach
In the morning, Lisa woke up as she heard her door open. By the door stood Tiana with a tray of pancakes, syrup, begneits on the side, and juice in a glass.
" Mornin' Lisa" she said as she came in.
Then Ray woke up and spotted Tiana, " heh, good mornin' Chere".
" Good mornin' Ray", Tiana sat on Lisa's bed and passed her the tray.
" Did you sleep okay Sweetheart?" Asked Tiana
" yep" answered Lisa as she ate.
Tiana heared from the others that a few of the villains attempted to get Lisa yesterday, including the shadows of the Shadowman, so she just wanted to check on her. Lisa finished her breakfast, Tiana took the tray and headed out the door as Ray followed behind.
" Becareful when you go outside honey" said Tiana as she and Ray left.
Then just as Lisa got out of her bed, she heard a knock on her door, and when she opened it, there stood Lilo and Stitch.
"HIii" Said Stitch.
"Hey Lisa" said Lilo, " wannah come with us to the beach?".
"Sure, I'll be right there" said Lisa as she closed her door and went into her bathroom to change into a one-piece bathing suit that was light blue with a seashell print on it and blue sandels on her feet.
Once in her swim suit, Lisa ,Lilo, and Stitch made their way down stairs and just before they got outside Donald said " and remember, Do'nt go near the woods".
" We won't" said Lilo as they headed outside and towards the beach.
At the beach, they surfed the the waves as Milo, Kida, and the crew from Atlantis flew by. Lisa and Lilo swam abit, while Stitch stayed on land, still afraid of water. Then as Lisa and Lilo were having fun in the sand, in the bushes was Captain Gantu who was aiming his blaster containing a net at Lisa. Just as he was about to pull the trigger, Stitch jumped and attacked him. The fight was difficult, but Stitch won at the end, as he got Gantu's Blaster and set it to blast and Growled at Gantu, telling him to leave or he fire.
Just as Gantu was about to take off he said with a sneer " this is'nt over you little trog", then he took off.
Mean while, Lisa decided to go swim abit, while Lilo kept Stitch company and praticed some hula steps. When Lisa went swiming, Ariel and her sisters Attina, Aquata, Arista, Allana, Adella, and Andrena came up and joined her along with flounder. But down below the water Ursula was lurking and waiting for the right moment to capture Lisa.
Then just when Ursula was about to Strike, a Light beam shot infront of her, she turned around to see King Triton with Sebastion by his side
" Ursula, Stop right there" shouted Triton.
" Why King Triton, this is a pleasant surprize" said Ursula.
" Leave here now, and I will spare you" said King Triton aiming his triton at her.
" Hmph have it your way" said Ursula as she was leaving , " Im not the only one thats after her", then she was gone.
For the rest of the day Lisa spent time with the mermaids and learned some hula from Lilo. Then as the sun began to set, they headed back to the place just in time for dinner.
At the Villains Lair, Gantu felt humiliated that he Failed the mission.
" So ye failed to catch the Lass as well, Cap'm Gantu" asked John Silver ,from Treasure Planet, mockingly
" Im not suprizsssed " said Silvers crew member , Scroop.
Then Gantu stood up and Yelled " IT WAS'NT MY FAULT, I would've got the girl if it was'nt for experiment 626!".
" SILENCE!" shouted Maleficent.
" I would've had her too, if it were'nt for Triton" said Ursula, not happy about her failed attemt either.
By now for the villains that failed, they swear that when they take over all of Disney, revenge on their enemies is going to be the first thing they do.
DisneyPlease!
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Post by Lola on Aug 6, 2010 13:28:49 GMT -5
stitch! *squeezed him* he is so cute! I bet maleficent will get her, she can lure her like she did with sleeping beauty.
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Post by disneyplease on Aug 6, 2010 14:34:57 GMT -5
that trick is sorta going to used later on in this storie, but not by Maleficent!
Do'nt forget, some of the other villains have the abillity to trick people like that too!
DisneyPlease!
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