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Post by Syrup on Jul 16, 2010 13:37:06 GMT -5
YES ALICE IN WONDERLAND! Why must I feel I have to announce a character every chapter? ^^"" Oh well. ANYWAYS. Nice chapter, Disneyplease.
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Post by Fisi on Jul 16, 2010 13:59:49 GMT -5
CUZ WE LOVE THOSE CHARACTERS SO MUCH!!! =D
Good chappie. ;D
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Post by disneyplease on Jul 16, 2010 15:13:05 GMT -5
Thanks girls! ^_^
DisneyPlease!
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Post by disneyplease on Jul 21, 2010 10:07:48 GMT -5
sorry that it's taking so long for the next chapter guy's, I know what Im going to type LATER, but to this part of the story I got a case of WRITTERS BLOCK, but once I figure an idea out for the next chapter I'll type it!
DisneyPlease!
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Post by disneyplease on Jul 22, 2010 11:57:59 GMT -5
(While thinking) What do you guy's think of the story so far?
DisneyPlease!
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Post by psychojr on Jul 22, 2010 15:22:59 GMT -5
i like it very muckh and i cant wiat till you get the next started.
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Post by Lola on Aug 1, 2010 10:11:38 GMT -5
ahhhh!!!! i love this!
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Post by Lola on Aug 1, 2010 10:35:49 GMT -5
i knew maleficent was the leader {sorry i'm typing thsi as i read, its really good} THIS IS AMAZING!!!
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Post by Lola on Aug 1, 2010 10:36:57 GMT -5
more villians!!!!!!
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Post by disneyplease on Aug 1, 2010 11:00:09 GMT -5
Thanks Superfreak! and do'nt, worry in this fic along with my other Disney fics to come you'll be seeing MORE of the Disney Villains, and that means EVERY single Disney Villain in Disney History!
DisneyPlease!
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Post by Lola on Aug 1, 2010 11:04:02 GMT -5
AHHH I CAN'T WAIT *squeezes you* wait will the toon patrol be there too?
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Post by Lola on Aug 1, 2010 11:05:23 GMT -5
don't forget the evil sidekicks, they're like the comic relief
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Post by disneyplease on Aug 1, 2010 11:27:36 GMT -5
Yes the weasels are with the Disney Villains Too!
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Post by disneyplease on Aug 4, 2010 13:38:06 GMT -5
Chapter 8: Failed attempts
Unknown to the ducks and Lisa, three certain Predators were following behind. Those predators being three familiar Hyena's.
" Well whaddya know, the butler guessed the location right" said Banzi as Ed Laughed.
" Shhh, keep it down" snapped Shenzi.
The Hyena's secretly followed the ducks and Lisa til they reached a river where Louis the aligator and ray the fire fly were. Louis and Ray greeted the kids.
" Now remember what the boss said" said Shenzi
" just get the girl, and ignore any other's".
" Man, this is definately gonnah please Scar, it might even make up for our last screw up's" claimed Banzi, while Ed laughed and nodded.
Hewy, Dewy, Louie, and Lisa climbed on Louis's back and were getting ready for another tour.
Then just when the Hyenas were about run and pounce, all grown Simba jumped infront of them and attacked. All secretly, mickey knew the villains would be lurking around the area to try to get Lisa, so he told all the good characters to be on the look out and protect Lisa. Simba now had the Hyenas, who were quivering for their lives, cornered.
" You three go back to where you belong" said Simba fiercely.
" uh, heh, now we can ex-" Shenzi nervously tried to say, but was interuppted when Simba roared.
That was when the Hyena's ran for their lives all the way back to the Dark woods.
" Man that was close" said Banzi as they caught their breath, Only to find Scar standing infront of them, with a disaproving look on his face.
Meanwhile, riding on the water on Louis's back with Ray leading the way, the kids were having a great time. They past by Pocahantas riding her canoe, Baloo as he was floating on his back relaxing, and they slowed down when they got where all the critters from Song of the South were. But they Failed to see Brer Fox and Brer Bear upon a tree limb from above with a burlap sack in hand.
" Okay, Brer Bear, were right 'bove 'em, now remember what 't do" said Brer Fox, as Brer Bear tried to think, but was interupted by Brer Fox again,
" You lower me down, I'll nab the girl, then we got 'er, heh-heh, Im sure not willin' to fail Maleficent this time".
As Brer Fox went on, he failed to see Brer Rabbit on his back and make a funny face at Brer Bear. Brer Bear noticed, got mad and raised his club. Brer Rabbit jumped off just in time as Brer Bear hit Brer Fox hard on the head. Then the limb they were on snapped, and just as the aligator and the kids took off, Brer Fox and Brer Bear fell in the river.
The ride for the ducks and Lisa ended when they re encountered the Little Patch of Heaven dairy farm, where Buck the Horse awaited them.
" I always wanted to ride a horse!" claimed Lisa as she was the first to climb on Buck's back.
" Yes, all aboard the Buck Express" said Buck as Hewy Dewy and Louie climbed on his back.
" So where to" asked Buck
" well the sun is setting, so it's probably almost dinner Time" said Hewy
" so take us home Buck" said Dewy.
" You Ducks got it" said Buck as he took off.
Though as they were riding through a trench, Alameda Slim and the Willies were above on a cliff.
" They're gettin' Closer uncle Slim" said one of the Willies
" Perfect, Now you boy's know what ta do" said Slim
" Right uncle Slim!" the Willies said in Unision as they took out a net and got ready.
Just as they were about to drop the net on target, Maggie, Grace, and Ms. Caloway ran toward them and bud their heads against them, pushing Slim and the Willies off the Cliff as Buck and the kids made it out of the trench.
" Hmph, the nerve of Slim and those other Villains" claimed Ms. Caloway
" heh, ya got that right ms. C" said Maggie as the they headed back to the farm.
Meanwhile, Buck and the kids made it back to the place, safe and sound.
" Thanks for the ride, Buck" said Louie.
" Anytime Ducks" said buck as he began to take off, " come by the farm sometime, Lisa!".
" I sure will " called out Lisa as she and the ducks waved good bye.
" Well if it's dinner time let's head inside already" said Hewy.
" yeah im hungry" said Dewy
" me too" said Louie
"me three" said Lisa as they all began to laugh.
Then they went inside, just in tme for dinner.
DisneyPlease!
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Post by Lola on Aug 4, 2010 16:14:18 GMT -5
Loved it! More please, the villains must get their turn lol
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