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Post by Fisi on Aug 6, 2010 16:11:31 GMT -5
Nice.
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Post by disneyplease on Aug 12, 2010 15:31:49 GMT -5
sorry the next chapter is taking so long guy's, I just got stuck on what to type at this point of the story, but I promise that I will type the next chapter tomorrow or sooner! And the Villains will be there!
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Post by disneyplease on Aug 13, 2010 12:41:06 GMT -5
Chapter 11: Pirates and Princesses
The next day, Lisa, who was wearing a pale ligt blue short sleeved dress shirt, a blue plaided skirt, and white socks with perrywinkle maryjanes, was just walking about outside, waving and having a small chat with every character she past by.
Then she heard familiar Hi's and cheers adressing to her, she turned to her right and saw the Lost boys, Foxy, Rabbit, Cubby, Twins, and Tootles.
" Hey Lisa!" said the Twins.
" yeah, Come play with us Lisa!" said Cubby.
"Okay" said Lisa as she joined them in a game of tag.
Though as they were playing, they failed to notice that a familiar pirate was lurking in a nearby bush.
" Ah, there she be, Mr. Smee" claimed Captain Hook,
" with them scurvy rats, if we aim correctly,we might be able to capture them as well, light the cannon Mr. Smee".
" Aye cap'm" said Mr. Smee as lighted a cannon containing a net aiming at Lisa and the Lost boys.
But just when the cannon was about to fire, something turned it and, instead of Lisa and the boys, the net was fired at Hook, then a familiar crow was heard.
" What was that" asked Lisa as she heard the sound of the cannon and the crow.
" Thats Peter fighting Hook again" claimed Rabbit as they all rushed near to watch the fight.
" Always that Cursed Peter Pan" said Hook as the net was still on him.
" Did ya miss me Cap'm" called out Peter as he was in the air.
" Come down Boy, if you'd taste for cold steel!" claimed Hook as he untangled himself from the net and got out his sword.
Peter flew straight down with his dagger in his hand, and the fight was on.
For some amount of time the sword fight continued, Peter was winning though. Then just when Hook was about to make a huge swing with his sword, he lost his balance and fell in the river where the row boat that he and Mr. Smee traveled in was parked.
" I'll get you for this, Pan, even if it's the Last thing I do" shouted Hook.
" Say Hook, do ya hear somethin" said Peter as a tick tock sound was heard.
Hook grew nervous, he turned around and in the water was the crocadile.
" SMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE" screamed Hook as he franticly swam away as the crocadile followed behind.
" I'll save ya captain" said Mr. Smee as he hopped in the row boat and rowed as fast as he can.
As they went far away in the water, Peter, the Lost boys, and Lisa all laughed.
After having fun with the boys, Lisa waved good bye and made her way. Lisa continued on her walk , then as she was walking by a long small fence, she saw all the Disney princesses, Snow White, Cinderella, Aurora, Ariel, Belle, Jasmine, Giselle, and even Tiana and Charlotte La Bouff, all having a little garden party. They soon noticed Lisa walking by, waved and yelled hi's to her as she did the same.
" Why do'nt you come 'ere an' join us Suga', we got plenty o' room for ya" said Charlotte as the other princesses agreed and encouraged Lisa to do so.
Lisa gave in, opened the gate of the the fence, and joined the Princesses.
For a long enjoyable amount of time Lisa had fun with the princesses, just talking about random stuff, then when Tiana claimed it was almost Dinner Time, they all decided to walk back home and Lisa walked with them. The Princesses were already one of Lisa's favorite characters to be with, they were like mothers and big sisters to her.
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Post by Lola on Aug 14, 2010 12:56:28 GMT -5
yay i love peter pan!!! aww that was so cute
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Post by disneyplease on Aug 14, 2010 15:53:39 GMT -5
yeah I know, Peter Pan has Always been one of my favorites, really, when I was a little kid I begged my family to get it for me, then when I was 7 both my mom and my grandma got it for me (at the time they both worked in the city so they came home together)!
I think the next chapter will have you at the edge of your seat, cause were finally going to get to see a sucessful stunt by you know who's * Dun-Dun, DUNNNNN* the very point of this story that Ive been wanting to type!
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Post by Fisi on Aug 14, 2010 20:19:10 GMT -5
OMG, PETER PAN!!!
Here's another character I like and it's Peter Pan. Omg, when I was like 12 and went there until night time, they have this parade and I went gaga when he kissed my hand. <3
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Post by Lola on Aug 14, 2010 21:29:51 GMT -5
ahhh your so lucky! i would of gone gaga too lol i probably still would
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Post by disneyplease on Aug 14, 2010 22:45:50 GMT -5
yeah I hear ya sisters!
and like I said before, in the next chapter y'all may need to brace yourselfs!
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Post by disneyplease on Aug 16, 2010 13:46:23 GMT -5
Chapter 12: unfortunate sucess
At the Villains Lair, Captain Hook fumed at his failed attempt.
" I've just about Had it with that Blasted Peter Pan, I swear once we take over the first thing I'll do is fight til I run him through" he yelled.
" If that big bad crocadile does'nt chomp at'cha first!" joked OogieBoogie as he chuckled to himself.
"SHUT UP!!" shouted the pirate captain.
"SILENCE" yelled Maleficent, who was just as fustraighted as the villains who failed because of their enemies were, but she managed to keep her cool,
" were all are just going to have to wait til the girl is completely alone".
Then as Iago sat on Jafar's shoulder, an idea popped in his head, " hey, I think I have an idea".
" what are you going on about?" asked Jafar with a suspicious glare.
As iago whispered the idea in Jafar's ear, a sly smile grew on Jafar's face, What Iago had in mind was worth a try. Jafar cleared his throat as he approuched the others,
" If I may, Mistress, I believe my little friend here has given a solution that might be sufficiant".
" Does it involve marrying princesses?!!" asked Captain Hook mockingly, but a quick glare from Maleficent silenced him
" do go on" she said, curious about what the idea was herself.
"Well . . ." he began while turning to the other villains, " I assume you all remember the spell that was cast to prevent us from going near the childs room?".
"Yeah, all thanks to the ShadowMan here" said Hades, only to recieve a glare from Dr. Facilier.
" Well this is where MY idea comes in" said Iago as Jafar now continued
" if we ca'nt get the child from her room . . . , perhaps we can get the child to come to us!".
This now caught the attention of every single villain that was there.
Back at the place, Lisa was inside her room on her bed reading a book, still in the clothes that she was wearing today. She was all at ease, suddenly she heard something being thrown at her balcony doors. Lisa got off of her bed, opened her doors, and looked out to see what was there.
" Lisa! Lisa!" she heard Donald's voice call out from outside.
" Donald is that you" she asked
"yep, come outside I want to show ya something" the voice responded.
" Um okay" called out Lisa, abit confused of why Donald would want her outside at this time of night.
She closed the door, put on a greyish dark red button up sweater, and made her way outside.
"follow my voice Lisa" said Donald's voice.
For some amount of time Lisa kept going where she heard Donalds voice, then it was in front of the Dark Woods that Lisa heard Donalds voice screaming.
" Donald, whats wrong!" yelled Lisa.
" Im stuck, Im stuck" yelled the Ducks voice, " come help me Lisa!!".
" But Donald this is the DarkWoods, you told me to never go in here" said Lisa.
" It's okay Lisa, You're with me! You'll be safe, Now come in and help me, follow my voice" called out the voice.
Lisa gulped, took a deep breath, and she slowly walked into the woods. She followed the Ducks voice calling out for her, making her go further into the woods, turning her head while walking, the enterance looked as though it was closing as she walked further. Lisa grew abit frightenedwhile walking, but if Donald was in trouble, she was willing to suck it up. Then she felt someone tap on her shoulder, she turned around, and saw Donald standing there with a smile on his bill.
" Donald, I thought you were stuck" said Lisa.
" oh some ones gonnah be stuck alright" said Donald with a voice that was certainly NOT his.
Then Donald shape shifted, and there Stood Pain and Panic, Hades hench men.
" Yeah, and thats gonnah be YOU!" said Pain.
Lisa Now realized that she had been tricked, then she ran as much as she could.
Lisa was running so much, she failed to realize that she was only going farther and farther into the woods. Then she fell in a lake, where she saw foam forming in a spot not to far away, she screamed as she saw what looked like tentacles coming out. Lisa franticly tried to get far away from whatever it was , and ran up to shore and continued to run, still going Farther in the woods. Then she felt what felt like a hook grab the collar of her sweater, she had a bad feeling of what or who that hook was attached to.
" Ah, pleasure to see you again miss Lisa" said Captain Hook.
Lisa thinked fast, and tapped a stick to a tree behind her back and made the sound of the Pirate captains phobia, then said " Look out, the crocadile!!".
"What-WHERE?!!" cried Hook, turning his head as his hook released Lisa, as she Took off before he could realize that he had been Dooped.
Lisa ran, and looked back to see if he was still behind her, only to bump into something soft yet rough. She looked up and saw that it was Oogie Boogie.
"SURPRIZE!!" he yelled before cackling. Lisa Screamed as she continued to run, but then she felt someone grab her and hoist her up.
That someone was no other then Peg leg Pete, who chuckled and said " Whats your hurry my dear, the others, especially Maleficent, are expecting you".
Pete laughed at what he said, then he stuffed Lisa in a sack, and called out " alright guy's, mission accomplished!".
Then they started to head Back to the Lair, this time they Finally captured Lisa.
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Post by disneyplease on Aug 16, 2010 18:09:24 GMT -5
Uh Guy's? HELLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOO, I got a new chapter up and it has been here for some amount of time, anybody going to make a comment or something!!!!!!
cuz Im not going to post the next one til someone responds!
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Post by Lola on Aug 16, 2010 18:28:38 GMT -5
yay pain and panic!!!
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Post by Lola on Aug 16, 2010 18:31:59 GMT -5
ahh yay point for the villains!!!! are there gonna be more cameos?! what are they gonna do next?!
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Post by Fisi on Aug 16, 2010 20:52:49 GMT -5
OH NOZ!!!
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Post by disneyplease on Aug 16, 2010 21:13:28 GMT -5
FINALLY, THANK YOU'S!
and do'nt worry the villains arent gonnah get away with this, from this point things turn out okay when you least expect it!
after all lets not forget what happened in just about every Disney Film, Good always Triumphs over Evil!!!
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Post by Lola on Aug 17, 2010 18:22:56 GMT -5
but they haven't even started
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