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Post by psychojr on Jul 14, 2010 18:24:25 GMT -5
besides that song more like classic musice from the 20 two the mid 50
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Post by Syrup on Jul 15, 2010 0:55:39 GMT -5
Nice chapter, Psychojr.
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Post by psychojr on Jul 15, 2010 11:23:44 GMT -5
thanks
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Post by psychojr on Jul 25, 2010 13:47:03 GMT -5
chapter 5
we drove around for a bit till we came up to a odd looking bar. it wasnt like the hotel, it was small but had a big sighn saying Salarie's bar on it. as we pulled up behind it a strange man walked over to us and helped the don out of the truck. the don didnt seem to be injured but from the way he was walking, we new we should at least take a look at him.
smarty. boss, sit your hurt. as he put his arm around the don.
don. its nothing just a scratch..
but just as he said that, i saw blood dripping from his coat. i walked over to him and felt his right side of his chest and found out he was indeed shot. lucky for him i was also a combat medic, i quickly acted and was able to help him out.
don. where you learn to be a doctore?
me. im a liutenant in the army.
smarty. well then we could realy use you in the bussiness.
me. the offer was good but i didnt want to live a life of crime and misury. thanks but no thanks. but if you are in the area and need a docktore, then just stop by and ill see what i can do.
don. thanks and here this should be enough for the repairs to the dameges the the hotel.
psycho took the envalope. thanks.
as we left and headed back my brother couldnt help but ask if i wanted the offer. i told him and he was fine by that. as we pulled up to the hotel we looked in depression, act the fact the hotel was completly destroyed.
psycho. wow, well it could be worse.
me. please brother dont say that, all im worried about is how are we going to use this money to fi this hotel.
psycho. i dont know, but we did it once before and we'll do it agian.
me. yeah. as we stepped out of the truck
Soo. aw, you two ok i heard all the racket out side my door.
psycho. were fine as we started to pick up the debrie and broken glass.
as we were cleaning up i noticed one of my trucks pulling in, as i stood there my brother came up to me and told me he forgot he sent wheezy out for some goods.
wheezy. stepped out of the truck and took his cig out of his mouth. Holy Crap.
me. wheezy we could use your help now.
wheezy came over the bulldozer that was parked behind the builing and ran it around pushing the debrie into a large pile.
it was coming up on 9pm that day when we decided to call it quits and pick up in the mornin. but befor every one left we all had one last thing to do. we all walked up to the upstairs ballroom and opened the doors. as every one turned around and yelled Happy Birth day Wheezy!! he stood there all stunned and surprized, he thought every one had forgotten.
wheezy. i thought you all forgot.
me. no we didnt, and im sorry if it not much now do to what happend today with the don and his deal.
wheezy. the don is he ok.
don. am i ok wheezy. as the don surprisedly walks in.
don. i would never miss a fellow mob member of mines birth day. so lets party.
psycho. ill go and get the bar set up.
me. you do that ill just stay here and admire the buety of friendship. as the night went on.
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Post by Syrup on Jul 25, 2010 15:46:06 GMT -5
Good chapter, aww they're celebrating Wheezy's birthday[:
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Post by psychojr on Jul 25, 2010 15:48:42 GMT -5
thanks.
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Post by Fisi on Jul 25, 2010 19:11:13 GMT -5
HUZZAH!!!
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Post by psychojr on Jul 26, 2010 8:36:51 GMT -5
now whats next? hmm i could do a mouth later when the hotel is back up and running hmm dont know ah ill think of it.
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Post by Fisi on Jul 26, 2010 11:14:13 GMT -5
You could do that or if you want read the ending over, it might give you an idea.
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Post by psychojr on Jul 26, 2010 11:30:56 GMT -5
true
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Post by Fisi on Jul 26, 2010 11:39:52 GMT -5
Glad to help. <3
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Post by PsychoJr on Mar 3, 2011 23:58:44 GMT -5
my god i ned to start working on this one agian.
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Post by The Forgoten One on Mar 3, 2011 23:59:26 GMT -5
take your time PsychoJr don't rush stories
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